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Little Bits #3
A Little Bit of Trouble
It's safe to say I've loved a lot. It's safe to say I've lost a lot. How do you move on from what you've lost, when what you've lost is such a big part of you it takes that part with it?
I lost my wife and my first born three years ago. Since then I've existed, but now I'm trying to live. I have a new family and new friends who actually love my daughter Amelia and I unconditionally.
They think I should move on, I disagree. Sure I'm all for meeting a nice female and having a little bit of fun but I can't give away a part of me that I lost three years ago.
And then I meet Loryn.
She brings color to my life, color I need but don't want. She frustrates me to no end and makes me as possessive as a caveman. But how do you keep someone who deserves to be loved when you know you can't love them yourself? She wants something from me that I can't give.
This is our story. Mine and Loryn's, with a lot of everyone else and just a little bit of trouble.
*Recommended for readers aged 17+ due to some sexual content and strong language*
Approx: 110,000 words.
I lost my wife and my first born three years ago. Since then I've existed, but now I'm trying to live. I have a new family and new friends who actually love my daughter Amelia and I unconditionally.
They think I should move on, I disagree. Sure I'm all for meeting a nice female and having a little bit of fun but I can't give away a part of me that I lost three years ago.
And then I meet Loryn.
She brings color to my life, color I need but don't want. She frustrates me to no end and makes me as possessive as a caveman. But how do you keep someone who deserves to be loved when you know you can't love them yourself? She wants something from me that I can't give.
This is our story. Mine and Loryn's, with a lot of everyone else and just a little bit of trouble.
*Recommended for readers aged 17+ due to some sexual content and strong language*
Approx: 110,000 words.
391 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 25, 2013
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About the author
A.E. Murphy
32 books1,074 followersA. E. Murphy is the Queen of sarcasm and satire, she likes long walks in the park, as much as ice cubes like to chill in a roasting oven.
She’s effortlessly independent and so good at adulting it’s unfair on the rest of the world. She only napped twice today and has only avoided the dishes for three days before making the child slaves do them this morning.
Winning!
Her favourite hobby is writing, her worst hobby is reading through that writing.
Also she has two cats that carry toys to the top of the stairs and drop them down so they can chase them. They do this repeatedly in the middle of the night.
Who cares if she has work the next morning?
Not the cats, that’s for sure.
And if it’s not the cats doing the waking, it’s the toddler crawling into bed with her and pulling individual hairs from her scalp with pudgy little fingers for comfort.
This is likely why she’s in a constant state of grump unless there’s chocolate and coffee.
P.S. Please leave feedback, if not on the book then on this ridiculous bio she wrote herself. It’s the least you can do seeing as she’ll forever talk in the third person now.
Alex loves her readers. Alex says thank you. Alex smiles.
She’s effortlessly independent and so good at adulting it’s unfair on the rest of the world. She only napped twice today and has only avoided the dishes for three days before making the child slaves do them this morning.
Winning!
Her favourite hobby is writing, her worst hobby is reading through that writing.
Also she has two cats that carry toys to the top of the stairs and drop them down so they can chase them. They do this repeatedly in the middle of the night.
Who cares if she has work the next morning?
Not the cats, that’s for sure.
And if it’s not the cats doing the waking, it’s the toddler crawling into bed with her and pulling individual hairs from her scalp with pudgy little fingers for comfort.
This is likely why she’s in a constant state of grump unless there’s chocolate and coffee.
P.S. Please leave feedback, if not on the book then on this ridiculous bio she wrote herself. It’s the least you can do seeing as she’ll forever talk in the third person now.
Alex loves her readers. Alex says thank you. Alex smiles.
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August 27, 2013
I have to start by saying I really love A E Murphy's quirky style of writing, and I thoroughly loved her first two books, Maya and James are so my favourites so I was glad to catch up with little bits ( get it ??) of their story in this book about Lucas and Loryn.
My only criticism of this book was maybe it had too much humour in it, which sometimes didn't come across as humorous to me ! And I didn't really bond aswell with Lucas and Loryn as I did with Maya and James, but I think that's just me!!
My only criticism of this book was maybe it had too much humour in it, which sometimes didn't come across as humorous to me ! And I didn't really bond aswell with Lucas and Loryn as I did with Maya and James, but I think that's just me!!
August 27, 2013
Deffo the best book so far of the series. So many ups & downs to keep you interested. Loved Lucas possessive ways with Loryn (me!! LOL!!) but sometimes wanted to throttle him too, which I'm pretty sure Loryn (me) did a few times lol.!! Can't wait for Marie's story. Love her feisty personality.
September 16, 2013
I've been awaiting Lucas' story and it does not disappoint. This is a Series of books and this one can be read as a standalone although it helps to read the other two in the series (A little Bit of Crazy and A Little Bit of Us).
Lucas featured in the previous two books about James and Maya. I liked him from the get go. He was much more 'manly' than his brother James. As we know Lucas' wife and eldest child died a few years ago in a car accident. He is now bringing up his daughter Amelia. He has been reunited with his brother James and has gained good friends in Maya, Marie, Summer etc. His life is looking up and he realises it's time to move on and meet a woman.
When Lucas meets Loryn it turns out he knew her in high school but unfortunately he wasn't too kind to her so she is standoffish when he first meets her. She is also the cousin of Dana who brings a little bit of trouble into Lucas' life. When Lucas finally persuades Loryn to go on a date with him, things don't go too well when she sees he still wears his wedding ring even though he has let her believe he is just separated rather than widowed. Misunderstandings continue throughout their relationship. Lucas is alpha male and although he can't commit to Loryn or give her what she wants, he doesn't want to lose her either. He spends a fair amount of time hurting Loryn and I felt sorry for her as he gives her so many mixed signals but I forgave him because he's having to cope with the guilt he still feels at moving on from his wife. When Loryn really needs him, Lucas mans up and lets those walls he built around his broken heart finally come crashing down.
The author has given herself a challenge writing the book entirely from Lucas' POV but she does an excellent job writing the male voice and I will admit I fell a 'little bit' in love with Lucas myself! The sex scenes are a lot hotter in this book than the previous books. I love an alpha male and Lucas definitely has those traits but he's also a little arrogant and cocky but comes out with some great one liners and thoughts that are laugh out loud funny! I liked Loryn but she's not as feisty as Maya or Marie and I would have liked her POV to be able to get to know her more but this is essentially Lucas' story and so it needs to be told from his POV. I was pleased that we do get to hear from Loryn in the epilogue.
I'm so impressed with A E Murphy's writing. Her writing is witty and I love all her characters and it's great that James, Maya, Marie, Summer etc from the first two books also feature again in this book with some amusing scenes! The banter is still really strong between James and Maya and in this book we see that Lucas and Marie have developed a good friendship. I loved their interactions. This is a big progression from book one and whilst I have always liked the authors style of writing, it is now more polished and the storyline flows better, yet she has retained the originality in her writing style and although the book has some sad moments concerning grief and loss, it also has a lot of laughter which makes a great combination and keeps you enthralled from start to finish.
I loved this story, it's now my favourite in the series. The next book will feature Marie and Jacob. I can't wait for that one!
Well done Alex, I wish you continued success, you deserve it!
Lucas featured in the previous two books about James and Maya. I liked him from the get go. He was much more 'manly' than his brother James. As we know Lucas' wife and eldest child died a few years ago in a car accident. He is now bringing up his daughter Amelia. He has been reunited with his brother James and has gained good friends in Maya, Marie, Summer etc. His life is looking up and he realises it's time to move on and meet a woman.
When Lucas meets Loryn it turns out he knew her in high school but unfortunately he wasn't too kind to her so she is standoffish when he first meets her. She is also the cousin of Dana who brings a little bit of trouble into Lucas' life. When Lucas finally persuades Loryn to go on a date with him, things don't go too well when she sees he still wears his wedding ring even though he has let her believe he is just separated rather than widowed. Misunderstandings continue throughout their relationship. Lucas is alpha male and although he can't commit to Loryn or give her what she wants, he doesn't want to lose her either. He spends a fair amount of time hurting Loryn and I felt sorry for her as he gives her so many mixed signals but I forgave him because he's having to cope with the guilt he still feels at moving on from his wife. When Loryn really needs him, Lucas mans up and lets those walls he built around his broken heart finally come crashing down.
The author has given herself a challenge writing the book entirely from Lucas' POV but she does an excellent job writing the male voice and I will admit I fell a 'little bit' in love with Lucas myself! The sex scenes are a lot hotter in this book than the previous books. I love an alpha male and Lucas definitely has those traits but he's also a little arrogant and cocky but comes out with some great one liners and thoughts that are laugh out loud funny! I liked Loryn but she's not as feisty as Maya or Marie and I would have liked her POV to be able to get to know her more but this is essentially Lucas' story and so it needs to be told from his POV. I was pleased that we do get to hear from Loryn in the epilogue.
I'm so impressed with A E Murphy's writing. Her writing is witty and I love all her characters and it's great that James, Maya, Marie, Summer etc from the first two books also feature again in this book with some amusing scenes! The banter is still really strong between James and Maya and in this book we see that Lucas and Marie have developed a good friendship. I loved their interactions. This is a big progression from book one and whilst I have always liked the authors style of writing, it is now more polished and the storyline flows better, yet she has retained the originality in her writing style and although the book has some sad moments concerning grief and loss, it also has a lot of laughter which makes a great combination and keeps you enthralled from start to finish.
I loved this story, it's now my favourite in the series. The next book will feature Marie and Jacob. I can't wait for that one!
Well done Alex, I wish you continued success, you deserve it!
June 15, 2014
In “A Little Bit Of Trouble” Murphy improves her writing style and storytelling abilities. While I had my difficulties with Maya´s narration - I enjoyed the funny scenes but couldn’t feel her sad moments - I connected with Lucas´ story, felt the character´s emotions and couldn’t put the book away. The story is written in his first-person narrative. Only the epilogue is in Loryn´s first-person perspective. He addresses the readers directly and interrupts his narration with thoughts and comments. With his narration I laughed out loud, teared up and cried a little. Murphy balances the story´s emotionalism with his manly point of view very well. Even with his grief and guilt he is through and through an alpha. Another improvement is Murphy´s arc of suspense. She uses more and more methods to increase the story´s suspense and for a short time I was afraid of the ending. The contribution of other storylines besides the love, sex and relationship of Loryn and Lucas is a great thing. I really liked the length of the book and the wide range of the topics.
I really excited about the continuation of Maya´s and James´ story and the hints about Marie and Jacob. I´m only a little bit disappointed that Maya´s and James´ relationship is reduced to their immature pranks at the beginning of the story. It is funny for a while but gets boring at the middle of the book. I can´t wait for Marie´s and Jacob´s story. They are my favorite characters in the series.
9. Juni 2014
I really excited about the continuation of Maya´s and James´ story and the hints about Marie and Jacob. I´m only a little bit disappointed that Maya´s and James´ relationship is reduced to their immature pranks at the beginning of the story. It is funny for a while but gets boring at the middle of the book. I can´t wait for Marie´s and Jacob´s story. They are my favorite characters in the series.
9. Juni 2014
September 8, 2013
I was so glad when I saw this was finally released. I read the prologue and stopped. I realised just how good these books were that I went back and read the first 2 again. Trouble didn't disappoint once again. James and maya were just as funny, lucus was gorgeous I couldn't put him down. loyrn didn't quite do it for me at the beginning she seemed a bit insipid but by the end she really came into her own and was a much stronger character. I liked her as much as maya and could see us being friends. Always a sign of a good character! It was just as funny and had me laughing out loud on the school run. Not because I was reading it but what I remembered. Loved this book and cannot wait until the next one!
September 10, 2013
Lucas has had a hard time in life. He is trying to rebuild his life after being tracked down by his sister in law, and has now got his brother along with a tight circle of friends to help him. He bumps into an old acquaintance and instantly feels a sexual attraction to her. She fights him every step of the way and he seems to love the chase. Lucas will not let himself get too involved as he feels he is cheating on the ghosts that still haunt him. Will he let himself fall for Loryn or will it all get too much for him?
I absolutely love this author! She has a way with words that i think is fantastic. The book has a lot of humour in it to lighten the mood at every step and i think it is so refreshing. I can't wait to read more books from this author.
I absolutely love this author! She has a way with words that i think is fantastic. The book has a lot of humour in it to lighten the mood at every step and i think it is so refreshing. I can't wait to read more books from this author.
September 22, 2014
4 stars
There were a few funny scenes, which I love... I just had to say it...
Anyways, it took me awhile, probably a few months since I've read book 1 & 2 coz, well, an 'errand boy's story ain't really that promising or exciting. I actually thought he would end up with Dana the addict so it just threw me off.
There's no boring moment in this story!
It's weird that I still remember the story of Maya and James... I usually forget a novel after a few days or a few weeks after reading it...
I love the characters, the story flow and the writing style.
I love the push and pull and I love it when the two main characters banter.. ;)
There were a few funny scenes, which I love... I just had to say it...
Anyways, it took me awhile, probably a few months since I've read book 1 & 2 coz, well, an 'errand boy's story ain't really that promising or exciting. I actually thought he would end up with Dana the addict so it just threw me off.
There's no boring moment in this story!
It's weird that I still remember the story of Maya and James... I usually forget a novel after a few days or a few weeks after reading it...
I love the characters, the story flow and the writing style.
I love the push and pull and I love it when the two main characters banter.. ;)
October 3, 2013
Simply The Best. Better than all the rest - Well better than the first two. Seriously this author has some slick skills. How she's managed to portray herself as a man in such intricate detail is beyond me. Really enjoyed it and sadly I am now hooked. I might as well set up a direct debit (is this possible) to have all the books delivered to me.
Funny, witty, engaging and believable. I could feel Lucas' anguish and lust for Loryn. In fact if anyone is like Loryn and wants to give me a call?
Funny, witty, engaging and believable. I could feel Lucas' anguish and lust for Loryn. In fact if anyone is like Loryn and wants to give me a call?
October 13, 2013
i waited until i read all 3 books that are currently out to write a review...and all i have to say is WOW!! this series has love, angst, family, friendships, humour and so much more. it's a nice change to read up on strong female characters and equally lovable and loyal male characters. i loved the main characters as well as the secondary ones. i can't wait for marie's book!! please write faster A.E!!!
June 14, 2014
Great book. Loves Lucas and Loryn. Glad they didn't give up on each other.
Can't believe how much the author has yet again improved. I really enjoyed the angsty bits but also enjoyed the funny parts. Took us on a right roller coaster of emotions!
Very much looking forward in the continuation of this book with Marie.
Can't believe how much the author has yet again improved. I really enjoyed the angsty bits but also enjoyed the funny parts. Took us on a right roller coaster of emotions!
Very much looking forward in the continuation of this book with Marie.
October 25, 2013
Oh I did enjoy the 2 other books , so couldn't wait to start this and it didn't disappoint .
So many good laughs , and a roller coaster romance thrown in .It kept me entertained throughout ,hoping for the HEA .I won't spoil it for you though !!!
So many good laughs , and a roller coaster romance thrown in .It kept me entertained throughout ,hoping for the HEA .I won't spoil it for you though !!!
November 24, 2013
I'm undecided on my rating...
** ARC provided by author for an honest review **
I hated Loryn...her type of heroine is not my favorite. How many times could she just accept Lucas' flip floppy ways? I didn't like her whiny attitude, but he did treat her awful sometimes.
While I liked Lucas for the most part, there were moments when I was like... Seriously?!
In the beginning, Lucas' early thought processes were so much to follow. I had a bad case of ADD.
I wanted to see more of a relationship develop that included Amelia and instead it was more focused on the sex and drama happening in their relationship. I think the book could have been better developed without other characters' roles so it focused more on them.
My last thing is just grammar and editing. With the book being set in the US I think it would be best to have an American editor to help bridge the language difference. Whilst stuck out to me like crazy and boot instead of trunk. It's minor, but was enough to make me get pulled from the story.
** ARC provided by author for an honest review **
I hated Loryn...her type of heroine is not my favorite. How many times could she just accept Lucas' flip floppy ways? I didn't like her whiny attitude, but he did treat her awful sometimes.
While I liked Lucas for the most part, there were moments when I was like... Seriously?!
In the beginning, Lucas' early thought processes were so much to follow. I had a bad case of ADD.
I wanted to see more of a relationship develop that included Amelia and instead it was more focused on the sex and drama happening in their relationship. I think the book could have been better developed without other characters' roles so it focused more on them.
My last thing is just grammar and editing. With the book being set in the US I think it would be best to have an American editor to help bridge the language difference. Whilst stuck out to me like crazy and boot instead of trunk. It's minor, but was enough to make me get pulled from the story.
May 8, 2014
I honestly have to say, I really didn't like Lucas too much. I understand he was in mourning and couldn't let go of the idea of his wife and child. But, to be that much of an ass to someone else about it; he was just awful. I'm actually thinking of a worse word, but I'm trying to keep it clean.
I like how this series makes you see actual human emotions and reactions. It's almost like you can feel their turmoil and sympathize with them...and yes Lucas did redeem himself to me towards the end after his soul searching moment and wised up.
Now, onto Marie and Jacob.
I like how this series makes you see actual human emotions and reactions. It's almost like you can feel their turmoil and sympathize with them...and yes Lucas did redeem himself to me towards the end after his soul searching moment and wised up.
Now, onto Marie and Jacob.
October 9, 2013
Best one so far, they get better and better!!, I loved Lucas from the first book, eagerly awaited his own story, this did not disappoint, it was so emotional, heartbreaking, but so full of hope, you cannot fail to be enthralled by it, I was totally hooked, the writing & dialogue (as always), brilliant, very funny in parts, but so sad in others, cannot wait to hear Marie's story next, please read this series, one of the best I've read this year.
December 28, 2013
It was great to catch up with all the characters from the previous books especially Maya.
I have enjoyed the book but not loved it like the first two, it had a great storyline and love Lucas & Loryn.
I personally found that some parts of the story were repeated too many times which unfortunately left me feeling a little bored at times :( .
I have enjoyed the book but not loved it like the first two, it had a great storyline and love Lucas & Loryn.
I personally found that some parts of the story were repeated too many times which unfortunately left me feeling a little bored at times :( .
December 11, 2013
Haha! Lucas!! Damn!! I'm addicted!! Totally love this series..
Now I can't wait for Jacob and Marie!! I love the both of them! They're are crazy!!lol
Actually they are all crazy!! But I like them all..
Maya is great also!!haha
When I finished the book I was like "what now?"haha
I want some moreeeeeeee!!!!
I want JACOB and Marie's POV's next! Please?! Gaaaaaaaahhhh!! I can't wait..
Now I can't wait for Jacob and Marie!! I love the both of them! They're are crazy!!lol
Actually they are all crazy!! But I like them all..
Maya is great also!!haha
When I finished the book I was like "what now?"haha
I want some moreeeeeeee!!!!
I want JACOB and Marie's POV's next! Please?! Gaaaaaaaahhhh!! I can't wait..
December 29, 2013
This is Lucas' story. He's suffered so much loss. Raised in foster care he loses his wife, one child and parts if his memory 2 years ago. By luck he finds a brother he didn't know he had and becomes a real family with his brothers family and his one remaining child. This is his love story and his inability to move on. I laughed, cried and everything in between. It was so good
April 16, 2016
My feeling about this book ?
I hated Lucas so badly I rooted for the heroine / doormat to cheat on him & have some fun. I could sum up all of it with one "UGH !!" ...
The End
cheers xo
I hated Lucas so badly I rooted for the heroine / doormat to cheat on him & have some fun. I could sum up all of it with one "UGH !!" ...
The End
cheers xo
October 22, 2013
I'm telling everyone to read this series thank you my book club is on it
March 18, 2014
I loved this book, Lucus is so yummy! I have loved Lucus since Maya found him. Now I'm anxious to read about Marie and Jacob(I love him)
December 4, 2013
Still loving the crazy pranks and laughing out loud
November 4, 2013
Really enjoyed this series sooo much well done :)
March 21, 2023
1.25⭐️
There were positive things, of course, but mostly, I disliked the characters.
The hero was horrible. JP in a terrible way. He did nice things for the h but he was aggressive and mean deliberately. Calling her a bitch just because, asking if she was acting this ir that way because she was hormonal.. I mean, horrible.
His quote? “I love you, crazy b!t€h!” I mean… really? That’s the love confession?
Besides, he was allegedly in love with Maya, the sister-in-law (I didn’t read the previous books) and it seemed that he treated her good. Not like the heroine…
The zeroine apologized constantly for things that she was right about. Asking where were they heading? He acted pissed and she ended up asking for forgiveness. All the time. She felt, not second best, but zero best.
And when he remembered her late wife and their dynamic he was also aggressive, and she was also toxic. Both of them terrible.
I never felt the connection, neither the love. And lots of very random scenes and de rioting that had me skimming though the pages… like when all of them went paintballing for heroine’s bday? The Helen character… it just felt pointless
There were positive things, of course, but mostly, I disliked the characters.
The hero was horrible. JP in a terrible way. He did nice things for the h but he was aggressive and mean deliberately. Calling her a bitch just because, asking if she was acting this ir that way because she was hormonal.. I mean, horrible.
His quote? “I love you, crazy b!t€h!” I mean… really? That’s the love confession?
Besides, he was allegedly in love with Maya, the sister-in-law (I didn’t read the previous books) and it seemed that he treated her good. Not like the heroine…
The zeroine apologized constantly for things that she was right about. Asking where were they heading? He acted pissed and she ended up asking for forgiveness. All the time. She felt, not second best, but zero best.
And when he remembered her late wife and their dynamic he was also aggressive, and she was also toxic. Both of them terrible.
I never felt the connection, neither the love. And lots of very random scenes and de rioting that had me skimming though the pages… like when all of them went paintballing for heroine’s bday? The Helen character… it just felt pointless
June 9, 2020
I read the first two books in this series a month or so ago so forgot how being around this group of friends made you feel!
The group gets crazier and crazier the more you read but that's just what makes you fall for the characters even more in my opinion.
This time it was the turn for Lucas story.. after meeting him before we knew his story would be emotional and difficult for him to move on after what hes been through in life so when he bumps into Loryn one day and he gets his spark back you just feel so happy for him.
Although this isnt an easy for either of them with many many bumps and issues along the way one minute making you smile the next you wanna scream at them to communicate and fight for each other.
Will it be worth it in the end?
Loved the banter and carry on with the whole group and seeing where they all are now.
Cant wait to jump into book 4!
The group gets crazier and crazier the more you read but that's just what makes you fall for the characters even more in my opinion.
This time it was the turn for Lucas story.. after meeting him before we knew his story would be emotional and difficult for him to move on after what hes been through in life so when he bumps into Loryn one day and he gets his spark back you just feel so happy for him.
Although this isnt an easy for either of them with many many bumps and issues along the way one minute making you smile the next you wanna scream at them to communicate and fight for each other.
Will it be worth it in the end?
Loved the banter and carry on with the whole group and seeing where they all are now.
Cant wait to jump into book 4!
November 12, 2021
Childish characters.
Too much back and forth. The hero is still pining for his dead ex. He does not want to fall in love or have any more children since the death of his first born. Almost losing the heroine and losing their unborn child does wake him up but its late IMO. There is a decent amount of grovel and decent amount of heroine not letting him in stand up.
I feel the first two books should be read to really grasp the depth of his feelings but this can be read alone. The heroine is a good character who didn't grow on to me for some reason. His family and friends are really nice but again childish characters. There is humor in this book. I didnt understand the evil OW character but then maybe I had to read the first two books to understand it.
Too much back and forth. The hero is still pining for his dead ex. He does not want to fall in love or have any more children since the death of his first born. Almost losing the heroine and losing their unborn child does wake him up but its late IMO. There is a decent amount of grovel and decent amount of heroine not letting him in stand up.
I feel the first two books should be read to really grasp the depth of his feelings but this can be read alone. The heroine is a good character who didn't grow on to me for some reason. His family and friends are really nice but again childish characters. There is humor in this book. I didnt understand the evil OW character but then maybe I had to read the first two books to understand it.
March 17, 2024
Probably the worst Hero I’ve ever read in a book. Completely awful! The writing is pretty bad as well. There were alot of inconsistencies in the story and writing. I don’t believe I’ve ever read anything by this author before but I may try another book in the future because the writing and storylines may be better in other series.
June 18, 2019
Another fantastic book
I absolutely love this book and the first two in the series. I laughed I cried its just great. I highly recommend you check this author out. I'm glad I stumbled across murphy, these books are becoming one of my favorite thank you.
I absolutely love this book and the first two in the series. I laughed I cried its just great. I highly recommend you check this author out. I'm glad I stumbled across murphy, these books are becoming one of my favorite thank you.
August 24, 2013
The moment is finally here, after long torturous days screaming at my laptop I've finally finished and for once with a book I've written, I'm actually happy!! I'm officially in love with my own character Lucas!
I really hope everyone who enjoyed the first two enjoy this one just as much or better yet, even more. I've spent a lot longer on this one than the first two. Hopefully you'll notice an improvement.
Thank you so much for taking your time and spending your money on this book! Feel free to slap me if you hate it. :D xx
Much love guys xx
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I really hope everyone who enjoyed the first two enjoy this one just as much or better yet, even more. I've spent a lot longer on this one than the first two. Hopefully you'll notice an improvement.
Thank you so much for taking your time and spending your money on this book! Feel free to slap me if you hate it. :D xx
Much love guys xx
Please add me, email me,follow me, or even like my page for updates on book 4 which yep, I've already started! xx
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August 31, 2016
A Little bit of Us book 3; Lucas and Loryn story. 2.5 to 3 stars
Book 3 was not as good as books 1 & 2
The problem with Book 3 was that it layered the quirky eccentric inner voice of Maya (from Book 1 & 2) onto the confused overbearing personality of Lucas, and it did not work as well. The result was a whiny scattered Lucas who lacked finesse and likeability. Also, the romance train was so rushed, falling in love felt forced. There was little time to climb on board and settle in.
Book 3 was not as good as books 1 & 2
The problem with Book 3 was that it layered the quirky eccentric inner voice of Maya (from Book 1 & 2) onto the confused overbearing personality of Lucas, and it did not work as well. The result was a whiny scattered Lucas who lacked finesse and likeability. Also, the romance train was so rushed, falling in love felt forced. There was little time to climb on board and settle in.
April 18, 2017
Still loving this group of friends. Wasn't to happy in the beginning with games Lucas and Loryn were playing but glad they worked it out. Beautiful story of heartache, forgiveness, love and strength to move on
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