I loved the story the author came up with, but there's a lot of issues with this book. It was poorly delivered, the sentences were beyond awkward and came off as elementary writing. Someone said it was 'robotic' and I agree. I'm not going to go into detail, but the other 1-2-3 star ratings do, so I highly suggest you look at those. I usually overlook them, but- and i mean literally -the WHOLE thing was arranged poorly. I don't normally let the editing effect my rating, but such work does count towards it, especially when the entire book is nothing but run-on sentences and exceedingly long paragraphs. That might just be a personal peeve of mine, but when the paragraphs are pages long, one's mind tends to start wandering off. And the details- O.O There were either not enough to see inside the character or TOO MUCh that reiterated the same theme in every chapter.
I liked the general story because I love dragons and the thought of a dragon prince falling for a human is always fun to read about, but I didn't like the scenes (almost the whole book, basically). Cess was annoying and a hypocrite in what she thought was "right" and her actions, and she constantly thought about how HOT or SEXY the guys were. That's all she ever thought about, and when she did think of the brothers' own personalities, the detail was short-lived and shallow. And she's a college student! So why did she come off as such an immature whiner? Same goes for Draken. I liked him in the beginning but it quickly went downhill when all he did was have sex with one woman while lusting after Cess the human, have sex WITH Cess, "fall" for her, and then attempt suicide when she wasn't going to accept him. I didn't believe their "love" because to me, it came off as him only liking her because she was a challenge and a rare breed of peple who actually cocked him any kind of attitude. And most of their relationship was about sex! Can that really turn an anti-human prince all mushy? Don't answer that.
I wasn't endeared to them, and it bugs me that I'll never know if it's because the story wasn't delivered properly or because they were just annoying. It's free on Amazon so if you want to read it and don't care about how things are edited or presented, then go and read it. There's hot sex scenes (it started to get a little robotic though) and some reviewers actually said that it was almost insulting to women. I like dominating alphas, and all I have to say is that the guys weren't exactly delivering lovey-dovey advice. The dragon king basically told his son to do whatever she said and please her senseless, and then in the next scene, the prince is like "I'll love her, hearty love romantic stuff, blah blah." How the heck did he get all that sentimental stuff from the talk with his dad about 'physically pleasing his future girl'? Some transitions just didn't make sense to me.