This was probably just shy of a 3.5 for me. West says you need to have read either the Watchers Trilogy or the Watcher Chronicles Trilogy before reading this one. I have read both, and this one fell a little short for me. I think it was because there was about 80% love story and 20% action, and I prefer more of an equal state.
Plot:
Those people who read the Watcher Chronicles will remember that in the last (?) book, Lilly and Brand’s daughter Caylin was on her first date when she saw Aiden and was immediately love struck. Lilly and Brand stipulated that even though Aiden might be Caylin’s soul mate, Aiden could not date her until she was 18. In Timeless, Caylin is 17 and desperate to go out with Aiden, who she hasn’t seen since that first time. When she is attacked by Baal, one of the Princes of Hell (that Jess and the other vessels defeated in Watcher Chronicles), Aiden comes to her rescue. Along with Caylin’s family, Malcolm, and Jess and Mason, the two try to figure out what Baal plans for Caylin in the future. At the same time, Caylin tries to determine the role Aiden will play in her life.
Characters:
I’ll be honest. I just didn’t like Caylin that much. For most of the book, all she did was whine about not being able to see Aiden. Then, when they finally are together, she just whines about him not kissing her. I will say she did get a little more pleasant by the end of the book, so hopefully, she won’t be as irritating in the next one.
Aiden is a little bland, but that’s probably because he’s trying to make up for a horrendous past. We learned in the Watcher Chronicles that he had given into bloodlust, and once he got that under control, he replaced his addiction to blood with an addiction to sex. In Timeless, we learn about what he has been doing to try to get his addictions under control and become a better person for Caylin.
Malcolm also played a pretty big part in Timeless, and I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised. I couldn’t stand him in the Watchers Trilogy, but he’s much more bearable in this one. Apparently, if the book is any indication, there is an interesting storyline coming his way.
The majority of the book focuses on Caylin and Aiden, but we do get to see what’s going on with Lilly and Brand, Jess and Mason, Tara and Malik, the vessels, Faison, and all the other characters from Watcher Chronicles. We also get to know Lilly and Brand’s children, Will and Mae.
Writing:
There were several spelling/punctuation/grammatical errors. Lots of homophones (an example of one is they’re instead of their), possessives without apostrophes, and plurals with apostrophes. They could be distracting at times.
The Bottom Line:
The book was good, just not great. I will keep reading because the action picked up so much at the end that I am compelled to find out what happens. I remember when I was reading Watchers Trilogy, a lot of the reviewers said that they books were too lovey-dovey. I defended those books, but I don’t think I can do that with this one. Everything just happens too quickly and easily for Caylin and Aiden. If you like that kind of thing, you’ll like this one. I am more of a fan of the “can they overcome the obstacles” kind of love story.