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208 pages, Hardcover
First published January 1, 2014
At the level of the sentence, this works; Dyer is a very good writer. His meandering, flâneuring style is suited to the setting, and his phrases wobble in glib self-negation, wavelike in their motion. There’s a stochastic element, too. Though by the end you realize that Dyer retains very firm control over where exactly his sentences wander, your first read feels like being caught in a storm of Brownian particles, buffeted back and forth and back again. […]But the glibness gets old, quickly, and without cover of humor, Dyer’s extreme solipsism becomes overwhelming, even annoying.I didn’t get too annoyed because this book was over before it struck me. And I agree he might not be the best fit for the subject. But when you read Dyer you get glibness. It’s like turning to non-sailor John McPhee to read about life in the merchant marine – I’m reading for the voice and the great writing as much as for the facts.
poor memory, poor note-taking, and indifferent attitude toward details like names and rankscould be. which is to say, entirely in the eye of the beholder, and to this beholder, mostly disappointing.
My untrained ear was having trouble keeping up with Dicola's explanation of what the various parts of the cat[apult] were called. These, let's say, were failures at the level of the noun. They were exceeded by systematic failures at the level of the verb: what these nouns--these various parts--did. (35)Superb turn of phrase, to be sure, but do not pass go and do not collect £200; it's a dodge, and I frankly don't buy it. Try harder. Ask questions. Use your words. Give me an analogy, or describe what it evokes.
Dessert arrived--a chocolate thingy--and then everyone signed the menus and posed for pictures. (175)'chocolate thingy' here, especially in the context of the final chapter (homesickness & eagerness to leave) all but screams "I'm throwing in the towel".
Living on a subsistence diet, I alternated between manageable diarrhea, and stringy little turds. The sailors who were tucking daily into their burgers and hot dogs, meanwhile, were sitting there solidly, feet planted on the ground, straining away like weightlifters, and depositing swollen bicep-turds that put the vacuum system through its paces.
We were not taxiing but a noisy increase in power had taken place and the noise was deafening. I'd thought the noise was deafening when we'd first boarded but back then I didn't know anything about noise or deafeningness.
'Wow,' I said during a brief lull in Couch's litany. 'This is the most A-I-E I've ever been in."
'Excuse me?'
'Acronym Intensive Environment,' I said, feeling both smart and stupid at having risked a first joke in a new place.
'That's a good one,' said Couch in a tone suggesting that there are only bad ones.
Hungry for gossip, for anecdote, I asked Petty Office Young if she could give me examples of serious stuff that had happened.
'With all due respect I have no authority to describe or discuss particular cases.'
I felt like I'd been told off, like I'd taken a tentative step towards trouble, towards the brig (in which I was already standing). I've always hated getting told off. If you're not going to tell me then what the bad word am I doing here? I thought to myself . Petty Officer Young, meanwhile, was telling me about another category of inmate: enemy prisoners of war. I'd like to have seen some of them, maybe even poked at them with a stick from behind the safety of the cell bars, but the brig, today, was devoid of all prisoners, friendly or hostile (pronounced American-style, as in 'youth hostel')...
From my point of view it would have been much better if the jail had been occupied, by sailors in the process of being punished, or, ideally, an Al-Qaida suspect, one of those guys with a gleaming black beard and a gentle expression whose eyes burned darkly with some implacable faith and who—for all we knew—was a just a devout Muslim and a caring father.
'You see some planes have washers on them,' said Ron. 'Which means...?'
My hand shot up—Me sir! Me sir!—and I called out the answer before the snapper [photographer] had a chance to even open his mouth. 'It means the plane needs a wash!'
'That's right.' Oh, the bliss of getting answers right, of doing so publicly and being seen to be the cleverest boy in class...
'Now, what about these planes with a wing nut on them?'
'Something to do with the wing?' snapped the snapper. 'Fold up the wings maybe?'
'You got it,' said Ron. The snapper had equalized, but here's the thing that marks me out as a leader, as SEAL material. I didn't sit there glowering, sulking or licking my wounds. Before Ron asked his next question, before I even knew there was going to be another question, I was looking round the board to see what other symbolic cargo the planes were carrying. So by the time Ron asked the question, about the planes with a little jack on them, I had already—repeat: Alpha, Lima, Romeo, Echo, Alpha, Delta, Yankee, already—worked out the answer by reference to intel gained just hours before, and was able to sing it out before he'd even finished his sentence.
'The aircraft's been jarred on landing and needs to be put on jacks, sir!' I didn't wait for Ron to say, 'Affirmative' or 'Correct', I just held my arms aloft, fists clenched, basking in it. In what? In that raising-the-flag-on-Iwo-Jima, watching-the-Zulus-slink-away-from-Rorke's-Drift glow otherwise known as V for victory in a Q for quiz.