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The Witch Prophecy
The Prophecy:
A witch from an ancient bloodline will soothe the soul of a savage beast
The savage beast will win her love as he opens her heart that had been dead
The savage beast will be put to the test, as one will return to him
The witch of an ancient bloodline will step aside for his happiness
His happiness will depend on the choice he makes...
Abella Deans may seem like your ordinary young woman, but once you get to know her you realize there is more to her than meets the eye. Abella is a witch and she is just trying to finish high school so she could move on with her life. Not so easy especially once she meets Caden Brody the brother of her partner, Jessa, from her history class. Caden and Jessa are not what they seem either...Caden has his own issues he is dealing with but for some unexplainable reason just a look from Abella's eyes calms him down and he doesn't know why. It seems fate is playing its own game, but will Caden and Abella be the ultimate winners?
A witch from an ancient bloodline will soothe the soul of a savage beast
The savage beast will win her love as he opens her heart that had been dead
The savage beast will be put to the test, as one will return to him
The witch of an ancient bloodline will step aside for his happiness
His happiness will depend on the choice he makes...
Abella Deans may seem like your ordinary young woman, but once you get to know her you realize there is more to her than meets the eye. Abella is a witch and she is just trying to finish high school so she could move on with her life. Not so easy especially once she meets Caden Brody the brother of her partner, Jessa, from her history class. Caden and Jessa are not what they seem either...Caden has his own issues he is dealing with but for some unexplainable reason just a look from Abella's eyes calms him down and he doesn't know why. It seems fate is playing its own game, but will Caden and Abella be the ultimate winners?
583 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 24, 2013
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September 22, 2015
Good Story.....
An excellent and refreshing story. I liked the way Caden and Abella's relationship grew and her friendships with the pack. The characters were interesting and original. The witches were wicked, the wolves sexy, what more could you ask for?
But....... Editing. Not just for grammar (which made me set it down a few times with frustration) but consistent timeline. While it eventually got fixed somewhat, it felt forced. Also secondary storylines (What was the point of her taking the tests at night school? Did Leanna decide to give up the baby?) kinda got left by the wayside. Hence a 3 star instead of 4 or 5. I'm glad I got it on kindle unlimited.
An excellent and refreshing story. I liked the way Caden and Abella's relationship grew and her friendships with the pack. The characters were interesting and original. The witches were wicked, the wolves sexy, what more could you ask for?
But....... Editing. Not just for grammar (which made me set it down a few times with frustration) but consistent timeline. While it eventually got fixed somewhat, it felt forced. Also secondary storylines (What was the point of her taking the tests at night school? Did Leanna decide to give up the baby?) kinda got left by the wayside. Hence a 3 star instead of 4 or 5. I'm glad I got it on kindle unlimited.
May 19, 2017
Mary Goldberger please get an Editor. I mean seriously, I usually don’t have a problem with a missed word here and there but this book couldn’t go one page without having several grammar errors. It was so bad that I almost didn’t finish the book but the story line intrigued me so, I put my big girl pants on and pushed through. Not only did it have horrible grammar errors but it had repeating lines that make you say “Yes, I get it, can you please MOVE on!” and inconsistent timelines and conversations (like you already told her you were a witch but she is surprised when you were called a witch, #soconfusing). Oh, and I can’t forget the narrative of how the story is being told. You go from one POV to another that leaves you wondering who is talking and what the hell is going on. But really, if those issues were fixed, this book has the potential of be great. The concept is there, build off it and they will come.
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May 23, 2024
Witch Prophecy…
Nicely written, decent characters, and a storyline that’s pretty interesting.
First off, there are multiple characters that are supposed to be mates but reject because the women want more status, power, and money so they go after the alphas. There are also council members who can be targeted. There are humans, witches, and werewolves involved, and there are also witch hunters that are mean and evil people.
Lots of intrigue going on with all those manipulative females, and believe me they are seriously mean girls to the max.
Interesting story as it becomes more fleshed out. And of course the prophecy needs fulfillment.
Desperately needs editing, as do all of this author’s books. Her imagination is great but it’s clear that English was not her major. There’s a pretty big difference between wonder and wander…
KU read, won’t read again.
Nicely written, decent characters, and a storyline that’s pretty interesting.
First off, there are multiple characters that are supposed to be mates but reject because the women want more status, power, and money so they go after the alphas. There are also council members who can be targeted. There are humans, witches, and werewolves involved, and there are also witch hunters that are mean and evil people.
Lots of intrigue going on with all those manipulative females, and believe me they are seriously mean girls to the max.
Interesting story as it becomes more fleshed out. And of course the prophecy needs fulfillment.
Desperately needs editing, as do all of this author’s books. Her imagination is great but it’s clear that English was not her major. There’s a pretty big difference between wonder and wander…
KU read, won’t read again.
September 16, 2018
Sweet but flawed
The premise of the story is a good one however execution of it wasn’t totally there. The author is on a good path but needs help with editing in content, continuity and grammar. There are thing that could have been expanded upon and others that could be cut out entirely for they add little to the tale. I wanted to give it more stars then I did but with the amount errors through out the book I couldn’t. As a whole I found it a sweet and simple love story but very flawed.
The premise of the story is a good one however execution of it wasn’t totally there. The author is on a good path but needs help with editing in content, continuity and grammar. There are thing that could have been expanded upon and others that could be cut out entirely for they add little to the tale. I wanted to give it more stars then I did but with the amount errors through out the book I couldn’t. As a whole I found it a sweet and simple love story but very flawed.
November 20, 2021
not good.
I wanted so badly to like this. It started off good but got so hard to follow along. So many secrets and dumb drama that carried on for so long. All for which could’ve easily been dealt with if they communicated. The characters change perspective so much you don’t know when they stop or start. Disappointed I tried so hard to like this but I just couldn’t do it. Also as the book gets further and further the grammar gets worse.
I wanted so badly to like this. It started off good but got so hard to follow along. So many secrets and dumb drama that carried on for so long. All for which could’ve easily been dealt with if they communicated. The characters change perspective so much you don’t know when they stop or start. Disappointed I tried so hard to like this but I just couldn’t do it. Also as the book gets further and further the grammar gets worse.
August 9, 2025
3.5 stars
Plot and characters were good. I just feel it was longer than it should have been. Also, writting was choppy at times with thoughts/sentences left unfinished. I did a lot of guesswork while reading. I would recomend a strong revision by an editor to fix this and some of the grammar issues.
Also, whatever happened to Devin and Trixie? They just fell out of the storyline without explanatiin nor punishment formtheir misdeeds.
Plot and characters were good. I just feel it was longer than it should have been. Also, writting was choppy at times with thoughts/sentences left unfinished. I did a lot of guesswork while reading. I would recomend a strong revision by an editor to fix this and some of the grammar issues.
Also, whatever happened to Devin and Trixie? They just fell out of the storyline without explanatiin nor punishment formtheir misdeeds.
May 11, 2020
I would totally recommend this book.
This was a great book. This is the third book I have read from this author, I must say it was also the best editing from her as well. Now don’t get me wrong there was still mistakes but way better than the first one I read. I would totally recommend this book.
This was a great book. This is the third book I have read from this author, I must say it was also the best editing from her as well. Now don’t get me wrong there was still mistakes but way better than the first one I read. I would totally recommend this book.
March 25, 2020
Could have been 2 books
I liked the story but it was incredibly long. I was annoyed with typographical errors throughout the book. If the writer paid someone they should request a refund.
I liked the story but it was incredibly long. I was annoyed with typographical errors throughout the book. If the writer paid someone they should request a refund.
July 3, 2017
Amazing
I loved this book
The story line the plot twists the love affairs
The action and how they made the which a bad a**
I would definitely recommend this book
I loved this book
The story line the plot twists the love affairs
The action and how they made the which a bad a**
I would definitely recommend this book
April 18, 2019
Great Book
It would be a 5 star for me if the book was edited. It has so many mistakes in it. Many times I had to guess what it meant to say.
It would be a 5 star for me if the book was edited. It has so many mistakes in it. Many times I had to guess what it meant to say.
February 24, 2020
Great story
There may be editing issues, however this girl can write!!
I now have sleep deprivation but well worth it:) You are talented Ms. GOLDBERGER
There may be editing issues, however this girl can write!!
I now have sleep deprivation but well worth it:) You are talented Ms. GOLDBERGER
October 15, 2020
Awesome
Some editing issues, but overall a phenomenal book. It was in-depth enough to hook you, and entertaining enough to keep you hooked. Totally worth the read
Some editing issues, but overall a phenomenal book. It was in-depth enough to hook you, and entertaining enough to keep you hooked. Totally worth the read
November 6, 2021
Good story
There were a lot of grammar and syntax errors. The author's word choice was often redundant. This is a good story overall.
There were a lot of grammar and syntax errors. The author's word choice was often redundant. This is a good story overall.
May 17, 2015
3Stars
There was really formal language and some misspelled words, and during the book when it changed from one characters POV to the others POV it was confusing. Other then that it had a good plot summery and I really enjoyed reading.
There was really formal language and some misspelled words, and during the book when it changed from one characters POV to the others POV it was confusing. Other then that it had a good plot summery and I really enjoyed reading.
August 11, 2016
Great book, just need to look past the mistakes. Overall it is a good book, loved the story!
September 1, 2015
Great book
It was a wonderful and amazing story, although there was a lot of grammar that needs to be corrected. Overall, it was a book I think many people would enjoy.
It was a wonderful and amazing story, although there was a lot of grammar that needs to be corrected. Overall, it was a book I think many people would enjoy.
January 2, 2021
NIce story. Could've been better with better grammar and editing.
2 and 1/2 stars
2 and 1/2 stars
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