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Stones: Data
Alexander the Great. Genghis Kahn. Julius Caesar. Attila the Hun. Mao. Stalin.
For thousands of years, the Stones have been hidden among us, giving a privileged few the power to rule over masses, destroy old empires and create new ones.
Now it's near the end of the 21st century. On the eve of a trip to Japan, Matt Newmark finds a dark rock in the shape of a claw, and it changes everything. With the help of a Shinto priest, he discovers it’s a Stone, a piece of ancient alien technology that gives him a sweeping view of history and control over time, matter and energy.
But Matt is not alone.
Mikal Ryzaard, a survivor of the Nazi death camps, has a Stone of his own and a burning vision to eliminate suffering and bring back Paradise. With all the resources of the world's largest multinational corporation behind him, he tracks down Matt and makes him an offer.
Join me or die.
This is the first book in the Stones series, a new techno-thriller quadriligy by Jacob Whaler.
For thousands of years, the Stones have been hidden among us, giving a privileged few the power to rule over masses, destroy old empires and create new ones.
Now it's near the end of the 21st century. On the eve of a trip to Japan, Matt Newmark finds a dark rock in the shape of a claw, and it changes everything. With the help of a Shinto priest, he discovers it’s a Stone, a piece of ancient alien technology that gives him a sweeping view of history and control over time, matter and energy.
But Matt is not alone.
Mikal Ryzaard, a survivor of the Nazi death camps, has a Stone of his own and a burning vision to eliminate suffering and bring back Paradise. With all the resources of the world's largest multinational corporation behind him, he tracks down Matt and makes him an offer.
Join me or die.
This is the first book in the Stones series, a new techno-thriller quadriligy by Jacob Whaler.
553 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 22, 2013
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About the author
Jacob Whaler
8 books235 followersI first learned about the power of words when, at the age of 14, I picked up a torn copy of The Illustrated Man by Ray Bradbury. It blew me away. I devoured his other books in quick succession: Something Wicked This Way Comes, The Martian Chronicles, Fahrenheit 451. I didn't just read his books; I lived them. His novels and short stories were my secret world, not just a place of escape, but a universe where my imagination could soar beyond the limits of time and space. In high school I discovered other writers like J.R.R. Tolkien and Edgar Rice Burroughs. I fancied myself to be Strider or John Carter and made a sword from a machete, complete with a leather sheath.
My English teacher insisted that we try creative writing ourselves. To my surprise, I enjoyed it immensely. From time to time, there were fleeting thoughts about writing my own novels. By the time I went to college to study economics and philosophy, reading and writing were an essential part of my life. Along the way, I spent time in Japan and learned to read Japanese. Then came law school and work in international law firms. I still made time to read, but my writing consisted of drafting corporate documentation. It taught me once again the power of words, not only to stimulate our imaginations, but also to control the flow of money around the globe.
As time passed, I felt the urge to write my own novels. My inner voice said it couldn't be done, that novel writing was for other, loftier minds. Then one day, I got tired of the inner voice telling me what I could and couldn't do. With it screaming in my ears, I grabbed my laptop and began to write the kind of books I wanted to read. The rest is, well, history.
My English teacher insisted that we try creative writing ourselves. To my surprise, I enjoyed it immensely. From time to time, there were fleeting thoughts about writing my own novels. By the time I went to college to study economics and philosophy, reading and writing were an essential part of my life. Along the way, I spent time in Japan and learned to read Japanese. Then came law school and work in international law firms. I still made time to read, but my writing consisted of drafting corporate documentation. It taught me once again the power of words, not only to stimulate our imaginations, but also to control the flow of money around the globe.
As time passed, I felt the urge to write my own novels. My inner voice said it couldn't be done, that novel writing was for other, loftier minds. Then one day, I got tired of the inner voice telling me what I could and couldn't do. With it screaming in my ears, I grabbed my laptop and began to write the kind of books I wanted to read. The rest is, well, history.
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October 22, 2013
I love the cover.
The story is brilliant and solid. The world building extraordinary but.... and this is a big but the characters are too developed and burdened with filler
In fact the entire book is simply way too detailed. I love epic fantasy and I know this is almost the norm but with this book the author managed to make me skip page after page and that is never a good thing.
I think though that a true staunch lover of the genre will differ from me in this regard.
Do not get me wrong, this is not a bad read, simply far too long.
WaAr
The story is brilliant and solid. The world building extraordinary but.... and this is a big but the characters are too developed and burdened with filler
In fact the entire book is simply way too detailed. I love epic fantasy and I know this is almost the norm but with this book the author managed to make me skip page after page and that is never a good thing.
I think though that a true staunch lover of the genre will differ from me in this regard.
Do not get me wrong, this is not a bad read, simply far too long.
WaAr
September 1, 2025
A chance find, an engaging and creative story. Looking forward to the next instalment
March 25, 2014
The author starts the chapter off with suspense, instantly chucking the reader into the plot. Ryzaard faces a dilemma for something incredibly valuable – a stone, willing to kill for it.
The reader is then taken to another time where you discover Matt, a man that has encountered an unusual object – a stone, in the distant future. A world made up of floating messages from jaxs instead of phones or ipads, and other creative devices.
The characters and plot are multi-dimensional. The characters have their own sense of voice. The author regularly takes the reader back to the main character’s past and how they got to where they are. Although there are some unexpected developments, the author gives the reader a clear idea to where the story is heading.
As you learn more about the characters you get a sense of what is driving them. Their ambitions, their experiences, emotions and weaknesses.
The author is very creative with the development of technology into the future. It is quite easy to get immersed into this completely different world.
This book makes for an addictive read, as the story takes you to Tokyo, where Matt took a job as a research assistant for an old friend of his dad’s. But Ryzaard and the others are hot on his trail, knowing what he has and the power that it yields. The stone causing him to have hellish visions, very real and descriptive beasts, and other dark forces trying to close in.
Another element is brought in, as Matt’s father Kent is on the track for revenge because of the death of his wife. His path brings him closer to the company responsible and why they did the things they did.
The more the plot progresses, the more immersed I become in this whole other world. There are quite a few subplots to the story which is what makes this story all the more fascinating and intriguing. The groups that live on the outskirts want to rid the world of the abomination of technology, fanatics that believe they will save the world.
Unfortunately, it is about a hundred pages too long. I struggled to keep focus closer to the end. I felt it could have been shorter so I could be more invested in the outcome. Although the elements are interesting, there definitely was things that could have been done without to make it go a bit faster.
An explosive end to a complex tale. But of course it is not really the end, as this book is only the beginning.
4/5 stars
The reader is then taken to another time where you discover Matt, a man that has encountered an unusual object – a stone, in the distant future. A world made up of floating messages from jaxs instead of phones or ipads, and other creative devices.
The characters and plot are multi-dimensional. The characters have their own sense of voice. The author regularly takes the reader back to the main character’s past and how they got to where they are. Although there are some unexpected developments, the author gives the reader a clear idea to where the story is heading.
As you learn more about the characters you get a sense of what is driving them. Their ambitions, their experiences, emotions and weaknesses.
The author is very creative with the development of technology into the future. It is quite easy to get immersed into this completely different world.
This book makes for an addictive read, as the story takes you to Tokyo, where Matt took a job as a research assistant for an old friend of his dad’s. But Ryzaard and the others are hot on his trail, knowing what he has and the power that it yields. The stone causing him to have hellish visions, very real and descriptive beasts, and other dark forces trying to close in.
Another element is brought in, as Matt’s father Kent is on the track for revenge because of the death of his wife. His path brings him closer to the company responsible and why they did the things they did.
The more the plot progresses, the more immersed I become in this whole other world. There are quite a few subplots to the story which is what makes this story all the more fascinating and intriguing. The groups that live on the outskirts want to rid the world of the abomination of technology, fanatics that believe they will save the world.
Unfortunately, it is about a hundred pages too long. I struggled to keep focus closer to the end. I felt it could have been shorter so I could be more invested in the outcome. Although the elements are interesting, there definitely was things that could have been done without to make it go a bit faster.
An explosive end to a complex tale. But of course it is not really the end, as this book is only the beginning.
4/5 stars
February 7, 2014
Stones (Data) by Jacob Whaler is an epic fantasy about a young man, Matt Newmark, and his adventures after finding a magic stone on a skiing trip.
Matt is in so many ways a typical twenty-something guy with a love of skiing, an all-encompassing adoration for his girlfriend Jessica, and a sometimes strained relationship with his dad. Ever since Matt’s mother died in a horrible accident, his father Kent had both of them live vigilant lives. Father and son daily outfox their world’s intrusive technology that would expose them to the corporate thugs that also want Kent and his son dead.
Matt’s newfound stone is no simple souvenir of a spectacular wipeout on the ski slopes. It is one of a handful of keys that powerful people have used over the centuries to shape the future of mankind. Another stone holder, Mikal Ryzaard, has transformed from a bookish professor to the head of the most powerful technology and financial corporation on Earth. Ryzaard is desperate to consolidate the power of the stones, and this mega-egoist magician will stop at nothing to get Matt’s cooperation.
Stones (Data) is a delight of a story about a likable young man thrust into the dual shadowy worlds of counter-technology and mysticism. After Matt leaves Colorado for a summer internship in Japan, Whaler’s excellent plot swings between Matt and Kent as they battle Ryzaard’s relentless killer of a corporation. Tension crackles between the magician newbie Matt and the corrupt Ryzaard, leading to a satisfying conclusion that balances power and matters of the heart.
Matt is in so many ways a typical twenty-something guy with a love of skiing, an all-encompassing adoration for his girlfriend Jessica, and a sometimes strained relationship with his dad. Ever since Matt’s mother died in a horrible accident, his father Kent had both of them live vigilant lives. Father and son daily outfox their world’s intrusive technology that would expose them to the corporate thugs that also want Kent and his son dead.
Matt’s newfound stone is no simple souvenir of a spectacular wipeout on the ski slopes. It is one of a handful of keys that powerful people have used over the centuries to shape the future of mankind. Another stone holder, Mikal Ryzaard, has transformed from a bookish professor to the head of the most powerful technology and financial corporation on Earth. Ryzaard is desperate to consolidate the power of the stones, and this mega-egoist magician will stop at nothing to get Matt’s cooperation.
Stones (Data) is a delight of a story about a likable young man thrust into the dual shadowy worlds of counter-technology and mysticism. After Matt leaves Colorado for a summer internship in Japan, Whaler’s excellent plot swings between Matt and Kent as they battle Ryzaard’s relentless killer of a corporation. Tension crackles between the magician newbie Matt and the corrupt Ryzaard, leading to a satisfying conclusion that balances power and matters of the heart.
February 4, 2014
Gotta say I really enjoyed this one. It's very well written. The world he created was fantastic and well described. Well developed characters and an action packed plot kept me turning the pages long after I should have gone to bed. I even resorted to the text to speech so I could get farther into the story while driving. Not quite an audio book, but when you've gotta keep going, it'll do in a pinch. Loved the concept behind the stones and the inevitable clash between those with differing ideas of how that power should be harnessed. I'll be sure to continue on reading this series. Great sci-fi thriller.
March 31, 2014
This book has a interesting premise but it was a hard read. I couldn't enjoy it or get into it. I would start to get into the story then I would get bogged down with the description. Too much description not enough just letting the story flow. I will not be reading the rest of the series.
August 10, 2016
Definitely for fans of sci-fi, this entertaining and credible universe, although at times very dark, is quite gripping. For those who don't like sagas this is a 4-book story.
March 9, 2025
Couldn't read it
After a reading a whole section with a conversation where father and son are eating, I just couldn't handle it. The description of each bite after each sentence made me want to throw the book across the room, but I couldn't because it was my Kindle. Then, an unbelievable plot line started. That was it.
After a reading a whole section with a conversation where father and son are eating, I just couldn't handle it. The description of each bite after each sentence made me want to throw the book across the room, but I couldn't because it was my Kindle. Then, an unbelievable plot line started. That was it.
September 18, 2013
Jacob Whaler’s STONES (DATA) is the first book in a planned series focusing on an epic battle between good and evil set decades in the future. With a compelling blend of mystery, fantasy, techno sci-fi, romance, and adventure, STONES is an engaging, fast-paced thriller that should appeal to a wide range of readers. Twenty-two-year-old Matt Newmark is a fearless skier who always manages to come out of a stunt alive, in spite of his father Kent’s constant worry. Matt and Kent have been living off the grid for years, ever since Matt’s mother, Yoshiko, was killed in a suspicious auto accident. Kent is convinced that shady corporate bad guys were behind Yoshiko’s death, and he believes they will come after Matt, too. So when Matt insists on spending the summer in Japan working as a research assistant to a prominent Japanese professor, Kent isn’t pleased. But Matt longs for freedom, even though it will mean saying good-bye to his beloved girlfriend, Jessica. When he finds a mysterious rock at the end of his final ski run, he has no clue what lies ahead for all of them. The rock, called a “Stone,” is more than a crystal, and there are people and forces in the world that are determined possess it. By the end of the novel, Kent, Matt, and Jessica will find their lives forever changed.
STONES is set about seventy years in the future, and the world Whaler creates for his story is quite believable. The Web, as we know it now, has become “the Mesh,” and everyone keeps in touch with each other through something called a “jax” (sort of a glorified iPhone). Politically, the world has shifted in believable ways as well. Japan no longer trusts the United States, but has aligned itself with China. Multi-national corporations have assumed power positions placing them above government. And insidious bad guys with nefarious corporate ties are plotting world domination.
At its core, STONES is about the clash between good and evil, or the forces of Light and the forces of Darkness. There is a connection here to the Christian Bible – Jessica is a devout believer, and even though Matt has trouble with her concept of faith, he admires the peace her beliefs bring her. The mysterious Stone that Matt finds on the ski slope connects him to an enigmatic Woman in white, and to amazing abilities that challenge his conception of the world (I was reminded of the “Sorcerer’s Stone” from the HARRY POTTER novels). On the other side is Dr. Mikal Ryzaard, head of a corporation called MX Sci-Fin, whose religion is all about control – as he puts it, “The only thing in the world that matters is power.” Ryzaard, too, is in possession of a Stone, and he intends to use it to “bring Paradise back to the world.” Of course, his vision of “paradise” might not be the same as Matt’s. While Matt tries to figure out what the Stone means and how he can use it, Ryzaard is determined to get his hands on all of the Stones that exist, including Matt’s. The only way Ryzaard can grab ultimate power is to control the Stones.
Oddly, what I liked most about STONES is how beautifully Whaler incorporates elements of Japanese culture and folklore into his story. Food, especially, plays a central role here, and Whaler treats us to delightful descriptions of fragrant dumplings, miso soup, noodles with scallions and ginger, and sticky rice. There’s no better way for a writer to immerse his readers in a new culture than through the senses, and Whaler is expert at getting his readers to smell and taste their new surroundings. I loved Matt’s delight, when first arriving in Japan, in trying exotic sushi and sampling ramen noodles with 500-year-old broth. I often found myself losing track of the story as I lost myself in this intriguing culture.
On a more critical note, I found STONES to be a bit long – it’s more than 500 pages, many of them laden with lengthy conversations between characters explaining detailed and complicated things the reader needs to know. Additionally, the novel is written totally in present tense (a style particularly popular with YA fiction these days), but I found it to be distracting, especially considering the novel’s length and subject matter. Finally, as part of a planned series, this first volume (DATA) does not have a real resolution. There is an ending, but the bigger themes and plot strands are left hanging for future books. That’s not necessarily a problem, and series are all the rage these days. But I have to admit I’m a bit tired of open-ended stories that seem too focused on selling the next book (Whaler provides three chapters of the sequel at the end of this one).
Overall, I enjoyed STONES (DATA). I liked Matt, and I found his romance with Jessica to be sweet and endearing. I appreciated Matt’s complex and believable relationship with his father. The good-vs.-evil plot, while not new, does develop in original ways. Whaler is a good writer, and this is a well-edited book. And who knows, I might just pick up the next one!
[Please note: I was provided a copy of this book for review; the opinions expressed here are my own.]
STONES is set about seventy years in the future, and the world Whaler creates for his story is quite believable. The Web, as we know it now, has become “the Mesh,” and everyone keeps in touch with each other through something called a “jax” (sort of a glorified iPhone). Politically, the world has shifted in believable ways as well. Japan no longer trusts the United States, but has aligned itself with China. Multi-national corporations have assumed power positions placing them above government. And insidious bad guys with nefarious corporate ties are plotting world domination.
At its core, STONES is about the clash between good and evil, or the forces of Light and the forces of Darkness. There is a connection here to the Christian Bible – Jessica is a devout believer, and even though Matt has trouble with her concept of faith, he admires the peace her beliefs bring her. The mysterious Stone that Matt finds on the ski slope connects him to an enigmatic Woman in white, and to amazing abilities that challenge his conception of the world (I was reminded of the “Sorcerer’s Stone” from the HARRY POTTER novels). On the other side is Dr. Mikal Ryzaard, head of a corporation called MX Sci-Fin, whose religion is all about control – as he puts it, “The only thing in the world that matters is power.” Ryzaard, too, is in possession of a Stone, and he intends to use it to “bring Paradise back to the world.” Of course, his vision of “paradise” might not be the same as Matt’s. While Matt tries to figure out what the Stone means and how he can use it, Ryzaard is determined to get his hands on all of the Stones that exist, including Matt’s. The only way Ryzaard can grab ultimate power is to control the Stones.
Oddly, what I liked most about STONES is how beautifully Whaler incorporates elements of Japanese culture and folklore into his story. Food, especially, plays a central role here, and Whaler treats us to delightful descriptions of fragrant dumplings, miso soup, noodles with scallions and ginger, and sticky rice. There’s no better way for a writer to immerse his readers in a new culture than through the senses, and Whaler is expert at getting his readers to smell and taste their new surroundings. I loved Matt’s delight, when first arriving in Japan, in trying exotic sushi and sampling ramen noodles with 500-year-old broth. I often found myself losing track of the story as I lost myself in this intriguing culture.
On a more critical note, I found STONES to be a bit long – it’s more than 500 pages, many of them laden with lengthy conversations between characters explaining detailed and complicated things the reader needs to know. Additionally, the novel is written totally in present tense (a style particularly popular with YA fiction these days), but I found it to be distracting, especially considering the novel’s length and subject matter. Finally, as part of a planned series, this first volume (DATA) does not have a real resolution. There is an ending, but the bigger themes and plot strands are left hanging for future books. That’s not necessarily a problem, and series are all the rage these days. But I have to admit I’m a bit tired of open-ended stories that seem too focused on selling the next book (Whaler provides three chapters of the sequel at the end of this one).
Overall, I enjoyed STONES (DATA). I liked Matt, and I found his romance with Jessica to be sweet and endearing. I appreciated Matt’s complex and believable relationship with his father. The good-vs.-evil plot, while not new, does develop in original ways. Whaler is a good writer, and this is a well-edited book. And who knows, I might just pick up the next one!
[Please note: I was provided a copy of this book for review; the opinions expressed here are my own.]
May 26, 2018
This jewel of a story laid in my Kindle Fire for a very long time. How foolish of me. I wish I could give it more than five stars.
February 15, 2019
It was a decent read. I seemed to get stuck in a quagmire in the middle of the book, but then it picked up at the end.
January 29, 2023
What a great read.
This reads like a collaboration between Barry Eisler, James Rollins, and Daniel Arenson.
This reads like a collaboration between Barry Eisler, James Rollins, and Daniel Arenson.
October 26, 2023
Great book
I truly enjoyed this book! At first I didn't think I would, but by the end of the second chapter I was hooked. Now off to get book 2.
I truly enjoyed this book! At first I didn't think I would, but by the end of the second chapter I was hooked. Now off to get book 2.
October 4, 2013
Stones is the first book of a new, exciting futuristic series. The beginning setting is within the late twenty first century. Matt and Jennifer have been close friends for years. Matt’s feelings are so strong for Jessica and he wants to take their relationship to the next level. Jessica seems to feel the same, yet, she has allowed him any intimacies.
The story opens with Jessica and Matt texting. He is on the slopes for the last ski trip for the season. Jessica warns him not to do anything crazy. They had a date that night. She is going on to bike race and afterwards she wants him to share their special evening together after the race. Jessica, also, reminds Matt of his father’s insistence on wearing head gear and all the other safety equipment. Matt feels his father, Kent, is over protective. He doesn’t wear the safety gear and makes a careless choice. Miraculously, he survived but fell on a strange looking rock… one he decided to keep – at least for now.
In a few days Matt will be going to Japan to the university. He is anxious for this opportunity to go back to the land where he was born and happily lived for a few years with both his parents…Before his mother was killed. His father had quickly packed up necessities then fled Japan with him from the airport. Matt wanted to know where his mother was. It was much later when his dad explained her death and his son’s life was threatened as well. They had moved quickly and frequently during the following years. His dad was a high profile lawyer and worked with the government agency. He was also trained in combat.
It is extremely difficult for Kent to let Matt go into the world. The people still want his son dead. Matt is twenty-two now so Kent cannot make him stay with him. He has spent ten years constantly looking out for him and protecting him. He has taken every precaution to make sure Matt is safe on this venture and cannot be traced…but only if Matt obeys his detailed instructions. Matt agrees to follow through on everything.., everything except one.
The adventure truly begins. Matt has been asked by his mother’s old professor to join him and assist him in searching out ancient history and legends. The relationships between the United States and Japan have been very strained for years. Matt is from the United States. Strange things had been happening the past several days. As the days pass, stranger things occur, increasingly life-threatening. Soon Matt has to make serious choices and is forced to face dangerous situations. Which path does he choose? Who can he trust? Is there any hope? Will he lose all?
Except for some typographical errors, this was very well written. It smoothly flowed from one scene to the next, except at one point, where Jessica was suddenly "dropped". Although she was brought back in later, it left a ”hitch”. I,aso, felt a couple of interactions with Matt and Ryzaard were excessive and needed to be eliminated.
The imagination of the author, though incredulous, was still feasible. He was very creative in his thinking of what some future possibilities might be. His characters were all very interesting and strongly created. There were various personality types which increased interest. Various situations were implemented well, giving a detailed description encompassing each one.
The cover was simple but good. Increased images may have deflected from the title.
The novel deserves a solid four stars rating and with a few revisions would be a solid five stars rating, in my estimation..
The story opens with Jessica and Matt texting. He is on the slopes for the last ski trip for the season. Jessica warns him not to do anything crazy. They had a date that night. She is going on to bike race and afterwards she wants him to share their special evening together after the race. Jessica, also, reminds Matt of his father’s insistence on wearing head gear and all the other safety equipment. Matt feels his father, Kent, is over protective. He doesn’t wear the safety gear and makes a careless choice. Miraculously, he survived but fell on a strange looking rock… one he decided to keep – at least for now.
In a few days Matt will be going to Japan to the university. He is anxious for this opportunity to go back to the land where he was born and happily lived for a few years with both his parents…Before his mother was killed. His father had quickly packed up necessities then fled Japan with him from the airport. Matt wanted to know where his mother was. It was much later when his dad explained her death and his son’s life was threatened as well. They had moved quickly and frequently during the following years. His dad was a high profile lawyer and worked with the government agency. He was also trained in combat.
It is extremely difficult for Kent to let Matt go into the world. The people still want his son dead. Matt is twenty-two now so Kent cannot make him stay with him. He has spent ten years constantly looking out for him and protecting him. He has taken every precaution to make sure Matt is safe on this venture and cannot be traced…but only if Matt obeys his detailed instructions. Matt agrees to follow through on everything.., everything except one.
The adventure truly begins. Matt has been asked by his mother’s old professor to join him and assist him in searching out ancient history and legends. The relationships between the United States and Japan have been very strained for years. Matt is from the United States. Strange things had been happening the past several days. As the days pass, stranger things occur, increasingly life-threatening. Soon Matt has to make serious choices and is forced to face dangerous situations. Which path does he choose? Who can he trust? Is there any hope? Will he lose all?
Except for some typographical errors, this was very well written. It smoothly flowed from one scene to the next, except at one point, where Jessica was suddenly "dropped". Although she was brought back in later, it left a ”hitch”. I,aso, felt a couple of interactions with Matt and Ryzaard were excessive and needed to be eliminated.
The imagination of the author, though incredulous, was still feasible. He was very creative in his thinking of what some future possibilities might be. His characters were all very interesting and strongly created. There were various personality types which increased interest. Various situations were implemented well, giving a detailed description encompassing each one.
The cover was simple but good. Increased images may have deflected from the title.
The novel deserves a solid four stars rating and with a few revisions would be a solid five stars rating, in my estimation..
October 23, 2013
It’s a techno-dystopian time in which the world runs by innovative gadgets like the Mesh, a more secretive version of the Internet; a Jax phone which can be protected from any intruder and which can track every user; and more. But the world isn’t a better place and there are those who not only realize it but also are attempting to do something about it. If intentions were worth money, the antagonists in this novel would be millionaires. But what good would that do when money and technology are seen as the enemy. Mikhal Ryzaard is one such do-gooder. An enigma of a man, he is over 120 years old, the possessor of a specific stone which is part of his non-aging process. The stone when combined with meditation enables him to predict stock trading prices and outcomes. He has managed to not only combine two companies into one that he now runs but also knows how to appeal to listeners and viewers. Yes he wishes to entrap as many as he can for training on how to live in his perfect world he is planning to create. But now an enemy appears on the scene with another stone and Ryzaard’s plans will come to naught unless he is able to capture this stone and eliminate the enemy – not so easy though as each stone quickly bonds with its owner!
Matt and Kent Newmark are a close team. Kent is constantly protecting his son, an automatic reflex after his wife and Matt’s mother was cruelly assassinated for being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Now Matt and Kent are the object of a huge manhunt but they are far too smart and too laden with innovative gadgets that protect them. Yes, they have to change identities constantly but they always keep one step ahead of the hoods who really aren’t as smart as they think.
The stones have special qualities such as time jumping, freezing time, and more. Matt’s stone has a special quality which involves a woman, energy and more. Ryzaard wants his stone and will destroy Matt to get it. But Matt is a lot more savvy than even his father imagined. He learns more about the stone than Ryzaard has with his own stone for years. A professor helps him in the process and warns him to be alert to the danger lurking so close to them both. Matt’s stone protects him but that doesn’t mean that fierce battles occur many, many times. For Ryzaard’s goal is to “save” mankind from its own evil and destruction; one small scene in which he shares his goal is a flip back to Orwell’s 1984, hardly appealing to say the least.
Matt and his girlfriend Jen are in the middle of this battle and the reader will not be one iota disappointed because new features of this ancient technology are featured at pivotal, tense moments.
Stones Data is a technological thriller rich with ancient lore, paranormal feats, and a terrific plot about how contemporary, highly sophisticated data is merged with ancient powers. Grand read and exciting as well, especially knowing that more will follow about this strange but exhilarating plot and dynamic characters. Very nicely done, Jacob Whaler! Highly recommended!
Matt and Kent Newmark are a close team. Kent is constantly protecting his son, an automatic reflex after his wife and Matt’s mother was cruelly assassinated for being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Now Matt and Kent are the object of a huge manhunt but they are far too smart and too laden with innovative gadgets that protect them. Yes, they have to change identities constantly but they always keep one step ahead of the hoods who really aren’t as smart as they think.
The stones have special qualities such as time jumping, freezing time, and more. Matt’s stone has a special quality which involves a woman, energy and more. Ryzaard wants his stone and will destroy Matt to get it. But Matt is a lot more savvy than even his father imagined. He learns more about the stone than Ryzaard has with his own stone for years. A professor helps him in the process and warns him to be alert to the danger lurking so close to them both. Matt’s stone protects him but that doesn’t mean that fierce battles occur many, many times. For Ryzaard’s goal is to “save” mankind from its own evil and destruction; one small scene in which he shares his goal is a flip back to Orwell’s 1984, hardly appealing to say the least.
Matt and his girlfriend Jen are in the middle of this battle and the reader will not be one iota disappointed because new features of this ancient technology are featured at pivotal, tense moments.
Stones Data is a technological thriller rich with ancient lore, paranormal feats, and a terrific plot about how contemporary, highly sophisticated data is merged with ancient powers. Grand read and exciting as well, especially knowing that more will follow about this strange but exhilarating plot and dynamic characters. Very nicely done, Jacob Whaler! Highly recommended!
October 29, 2013
While skiing one day, teenage Matt Newmark finds a stone that changes everything. A history professor focused on mythology and a Shinto priest offer answers while corporate mogul Dr. Ryzaard will do anything to acquire the stone.
This book started out promising with exciting life threatening situations. Short chapters detailed crisp, exquisite scenes. The author’s vision of the story is clear. Touching on topics of freedom, creation, power, individuality, conformity, with some religious discussions enriched the story and gives some food for thought later.
The setting was difficult to figure out. Setting clues point out old gasoline cars, jaxing as a way of texting on something called “the Mesh” and gadgets like slates. We are told all cultures have and have had a stone. One character survived Auschwitz. Somehow, I thought this would be taking place sometime in the past, but amazingly it is in the future. This version of the future displayed a realistic mix of present-day and futuristic elements. I loved it!
This is a great story with the potential for growing beyond a book. This is one I would like to see made into a movie. There were hints of real danger in the background, characters unknowingly followed, surveillance equipment and tricks of detection which someone on the run for years would have to have. These elements together build that delightful kind of internal strife that should keep you on the edge of your seat. It is the sort of suspense thriller where you just might find yourself screaming at the main character "Look behind you! Behind you!"
The problem is I would prefer a movie version. My chief complaint here (and it’s a big one) is the length. It. Is. So. Long. At some point, I could not take it anymore. I had to walk away for a while. This took forever and a day to read.
Something definitely did not work. Standing at over 550 pages, something needs to be cut. What should have been a brilliant thriller was slowed down by descriptions, different points of view and mundane actions that all added nothing to the plot. Towards the end, around 80% in the ebook or in some chapter in the upper 90’s, the book took off. Really took off. Why? That should be examined.
After reading a beast of a book, I would expect a payoff that made it worthwhile. The ending was ridiculous. The choices made were completely unrealistic. Given the powers at hand and everything we are told, I just do not see how the events occurred in that way. It was just plain bizarre.
With some light violence, this is generally a clean read. I would recommend this for young adult readers.
This book started out promising with exciting life threatening situations. Short chapters detailed crisp, exquisite scenes. The author’s vision of the story is clear. Touching on topics of freedom, creation, power, individuality, conformity, with some religious discussions enriched the story and gives some food for thought later.
The setting was difficult to figure out. Setting clues point out old gasoline cars, jaxing as a way of texting on something called “the Mesh” and gadgets like slates. We are told all cultures have and have had a stone. One character survived Auschwitz. Somehow, I thought this would be taking place sometime in the past, but amazingly it is in the future. This version of the future displayed a realistic mix of present-day and futuristic elements. I loved it!
This is a great story with the potential for growing beyond a book. This is one I would like to see made into a movie. There were hints of real danger in the background, characters unknowingly followed, surveillance equipment and tricks of detection which someone on the run for years would have to have. These elements together build that delightful kind of internal strife that should keep you on the edge of your seat. It is the sort of suspense thriller where you just might find yourself screaming at the main character "Look behind you! Behind you!"
The problem is I would prefer a movie version. My chief complaint here (and it’s a big one) is the length. It. Is. So. Long. At some point, I could not take it anymore. I had to walk away for a while. This took forever and a day to read.
Something definitely did not work. Standing at over 550 pages, something needs to be cut. What should have been a brilliant thriller was slowed down by descriptions, different points of view and mundane actions that all added nothing to the plot. Towards the end, around 80% in the ebook or in some chapter in the upper 90’s, the book took off. Really took off. Why? That should be examined.
After reading a beast of a book, I would expect a payoff that made it worthwhile. The ending was ridiculous. The choices made were completely unrealistic. Given the powers at hand and everything we are told, I just do not see how the events occurred in that way. It was just plain bizarre.
With some light violence, this is generally a clean read. I would recommend this for young adult readers.
October 7, 2013
Leaving little to the imagination, Author Jacob Whaler takes you on a journey years into the future. At first I was able to put the book down easily but my mind kept drifting back to the story. Then I found myself growing curious about Matt's mother and the mystery of the stones. Finally it was impossible for me to set the book aside because I had to know more about the characters, Matt, Ryzaard and even Kent.
When Matt's mother is murdered, his father, Kent has no choice but to run, going completely off grid. Years later, Matt's grown to resent his father for always looking over their shoulder and cannot wait to move out. While looking forward to his new found freedom, Matt enjoys one last ride down the ski slopes. Missing a turn on the slope he ends up face planting it in the snow and that's when he sees it. An unusual rock that fits perfectly into the palm of his hand. Unknowingly Matt decides to keep the rock, altering not only his life but his loved ones as well.
Ryzaard, a powerful business man, has learned of the stones history and their mysterious power. He wouldn't hold one of the highest positions with MX Global, the company he works for, without that knowledge. While his youth is nothing to speak of, his need for more power corrupts him and his judgment of others. He must have the stone holders full cooperation to build a future, his all powerful future as he sees it... And that means he needs Matt...
I never would have guessed what the book was about based on the books cover. Once I finished the book every detail on the mysterious cover stands out perfectly. With all the details in the beginning of the story it doesn't start to pick up till you get into it a little. Very few grammar errors were found but nothing that takes away from the storyline or flow. Overall I am glad I picked up this book and look forward to reading Jacob's next installment, Stones (Hypothesis) - Book 2 of The Stones Series.
When Matt's mother is murdered, his father, Kent has no choice but to run, going completely off grid. Years later, Matt's grown to resent his father for always looking over their shoulder and cannot wait to move out. While looking forward to his new found freedom, Matt enjoys one last ride down the ski slopes. Missing a turn on the slope he ends up face planting it in the snow and that's when he sees it. An unusual rock that fits perfectly into the palm of his hand. Unknowingly Matt decides to keep the rock, altering not only his life but his loved ones as well.
Ryzaard, a powerful business man, has learned of the stones history and their mysterious power. He wouldn't hold one of the highest positions with MX Global, the company he works for, without that knowledge. While his youth is nothing to speak of, his need for more power corrupts him and his judgment of others. He must have the stone holders full cooperation to build a future, his all powerful future as he sees it... And that means he needs Matt...
I never would have guessed what the book was about based on the books cover. Once I finished the book every detail on the mysterious cover stands out perfectly. With all the details in the beginning of the story it doesn't start to pick up till you get into it a little. Very few grammar errors were found but nothing that takes away from the storyline or flow. Overall I am glad I picked up this book and look forward to reading Jacob's next installment, Stones (Hypothesis) - Book 2 of The Stones Series.
November 13, 2013
Ater reading Stones Data by Jacob Whaler it is my opinion that the book deserves 4 of 5 stars. When you look at the cover you are greeted by a futuristic night sky over a well lit city. This is not only releveant to the story, but very visually appealing as well. Once you open the cover and begin to read you are immediately pulled into a story that is wonderfully written, structurally sound, and well researched. I quite enjoyed being made to feel like a part of the story thanks to the author's use of powerful descriptive language. In the beginning of the book I found myself slightly confused by the way the story change time period and location, but this was merely the author's way of introducing the reader to all of the characters and presenting the reader with necessary information that all ties together quite nicely as the story progresses. The characters were very well developed and likeable. I often found myself feeling sorry for Matt and admiring his strength as I learned of his plight. He is a character that is very easy to symphetize with, and his relationship with is father is sure to strike a chord with even the most cynical reader. The antagonist in the story is a very powerful, manipulative man made even more powerful by the use of a Stone. He is a formidable foe as he will go to any length to get what he wants; the remaining Stones and the power that they hold. The better aquanted I became with his character the more I loved to hate him, so to speak. His mere presence in the story made my heart race as if were me he was after. This book was adequately labled a Techno-Thriller, and it certainly demonstrates the dangers of becoming drunk on power and trying to claim it all for yourself.
February 19, 2014
Jacob Whaler’s book Stones Data Book One eases in and out of the world of fantasy and transports you through time and space in a manner so clear it’s easy to visualize. The book occurs a few decades into the future. It tells the story of how Matthew Newmark is in hiding with his father after his mother’s death. Matthew comes upon an unusual “rock” that glows various colors. Unbeknownst to him, his discovery is momentous. At first he tries to get rid of the “rock,” but he discovers it always comes back to him. The Stone bonds with its owner, only when the owner is dead can the Stone be taken away. Matthew begins to uncover the powers of the Stone at the same time he notices hitmen following him.
Matthew is not the only one with a Stone. Dr. Mikal Ryzaard, a ruthless archaeologist and CEO of MX Global, is an owner of the Stone. He has intensely studied the Stone putting it through lab test and practicing its powers. He realizes he gains more power if he’s able to locate the remaining Stones. Dr. Ryzaard is willing to do whatever is needed to get them. Once he learns that a Stone has been found and has bonded with its new owner he goes on a relentless hunt to steal it.
Jacob Whaler’s book is well-structured, organized and well-written. Although, the book is lengthy and its development is cautious rather than slow. It’s as though the author takes the time to develop the characters and the plot in effort to prepare you for a journey that defies the laws of physics. The book’s chapters are designed like television episodes often leaving off at the climax of an event.
Ultimately, Whaler’s book leaves you with the feeling of an exhilarating roller coaster ride. It grasps your attention and leaves you intrigued.
Matthew is not the only one with a Stone. Dr. Mikal Ryzaard, a ruthless archaeologist and CEO of MX Global, is an owner of the Stone. He has intensely studied the Stone putting it through lab test and practicing its powers. He realizes he gains more power if he’s able to locate the remaining Stones. Dr. Ryzaard is willing to do whatever is needed to get them. Once he learns that a Stone has been found and has bonded with its new owner he goes on a relentless hunt to steal it.
Jacob Whaler’s book is well-structured, organized and well-written. Although, the book is lengthy and its development is cautious rather than slow. It’s as though the author takes the time to develop the characters and the plot in effort to prepare you for a journey that defies the laws of physics. The book’s chapters are designed like television episodes often leaving off at the climax of an event.
Ultimately, Whaler’s book leaves you with the feeling of an exhilarating roller coaster ride. It grasps your attention and leaves you intrigued.
October 21, 2013
Stones (Data), by Jacob Whaler, is an excellent action and adventure book, with plenty of examples of futuristic technology.
After his mother’s death by corporate assassination, Matt and his attorney father Kent go underground. Several years later, Matt finds a mysterious rock in the snow.
Matt is excited about his new job at Hokkaido University as research assistant to Professor Yamamoto, the leading authority on Japanese folk legends.
Dr. Mikal Ryzaard, corporate predator and head of MX Global with his office on the 175th floor of his towering aerie, learns a signal has been received from a newly awakened Stone.
Call me a geek, but I liked the ability to download a motor tone on vehicles. Kent had driven through some freedom camps. Someone downloaded the freedom camp theme on his car com, with an American Indian chant. When Kent says he couldn’t hear it, he’s told old guys can’t hear it. I thought it was a great example of symbolism as well.
The writing style was vaguely reminiscent of Arthur C. Clarke and Isaac Asimov. The dynamics between Matt and his father were thoroughly explored, as well as the growth and development of a 22-year-old man spreading his wings in a very dangerous situation.
It’s an exciting story which keeps the attention. The first three chapters of the second book in the series are included. Of course, I had to read those as well!
After his mother’s death by corporate assassination, Matt and his attorney father Kent go underground. Several years later, Matt finds a mysterious rock in the snow.
Matt is excited about his new job at Hokkaido University as research assistant to Professor Yamamoto, the leading authority on Japanese folk legends.
Dr. Mikal Ryzaard, corporate predator and head of MX Global with his office on the 175th floor of his towering aerie, learns a signal has been received from a newly awakened Stone.
Call me a geek, but I liked the ability to download a motor tone on vehicles. Kent had driven through some freedom camps. Someone downloaded the freedom camp theme on his car com, with an American Indian chant. When Kent says he couldn’t hear it, he’s told old guys can’t hear it. I thought it was a great example of symbolism as well.
The writing style was vaguely reminiscent of Arthur C. Clarke and Isaac Asimov. The dynamics between Matt and his father were thoroughly explored, as well as the growth and development of a 22-year-old man spreading his wings in a very dangerous situation.
It’s an exciting story which keeps the attention. The first three chapters of the second book in the series are included. Of course, I had to read those as well!
October 23, 2013
This story is solid. It is well written, and attention capturing.
The early movements between flashbacks were confusing at first, but only for a moment.
In an attempt to not give away any spoilers, I’ll only go so far as to say Matt finds a stone. The stone is far more than any ordinary rock. Mikal has a strong desire to play God, and this Matt’s stone is essential to reaching this goal.
The plot and character development happen very quickly in this story, and the reader isn’t left to wonder what is happening. At least not for very long. This story is longer than most, but is split into very short chapters, which works wonderfully for those whose reading times are often interrupted.
I was far more impressed by the content and story than I was with this cover. While it was interesting, and very good artwork, it isn’t eye catching. Rather, exactly what you would typically expect to see on a shelf with other books of the genre. The cover looks good, but doesn’t stand out.
The story was great! After reading, I even found myself stopping to think on many powerful leaders of history, and present day. Any work of fiction that can, even for a moment, give me pause to consider its plausibility in everyday life, has accomplished quite a feat, and is worthy of recommendation.
This author will not leave you disappointed. I’m very much looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
The early movements between flashbacks were confusing at first, but only for a moment.
In an attempt to not give away any spoilers, I’ll only go so far as to say Matt finds a stone. The stone is far more than any ordinary rock. Mikal has a strong desire to play God, and this Matt’s stone is essential to reaching this goal.
The plot and character development happen very quickly in this story, and the reader isn’t left to wonder what is happening. At least not for very long. This story is longer than most, but is split into very short chapters, which works wonderfully for those whose reading times are often interrupted.
I was far more impressed by the content and story than I was with this cover. While it was interesting, and very good artwork, it isn’t eye catching. Rather, exactly what you would typically expect to see on a shelf with other books of the genre. The cover looks good, but doesn’t stand out.
The story was great! After reading, I even found myself stopping to think on many powerful leaders of history, and present day. Any work of fiction that can, even for a moment, give me pause to consider its plausibility in everyday life, has accomplished quite a feat, and is worthy of recommendation.
This author will not leave you disappointed. I’m very much looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
October 1, 2013
Stones Data by Jacob Whaler is a sci-fi, action, and adventure story all rolled into one. It is a classic good vs. evil story although it isn’t immediately evident. The character development is very well developed and makes you feel for each character and their plight, including the bad ones. We have Matt, a young adult itching to have his freedom from his dad and be on his own, who gets an internship at a school in Japan. We have Jessica his girlfriend, who is in love with him and believes in him no matter what. Kent, Matt’s dad, who is worried for his sons well being as any parent would be, and a host of other characters. Where will Matt’s adventure take him, and what will we find?
I enjoyed this book very much. The book cover is good, although I feel that if the font of the title were smaller you would be able to see and enjoy the cover art more. I didn’t note any real editing or grammatical errors while reading it either. From chapter one to the very last page I found myself absorbed into the story and wanting more. I loved the attention to detail, because it made me feel like I was there. The imagination of Whaler to write this story is great. I would recommend this book to any of my friends who like Sci-fi or adventure stories. I would love to read any future books to this series as well!
I enjoyed this book very much. The book cover is good, although I feel that if the font of the title were smaller you would be able to see and enjoy the cover art more. I didn’t note any real editing or grammatical errors while reading it either. From chapter one to the very last page I found myself absorbed into the story and wanting more. I loved the attention to detail, because it made me feel like I was there. The imagination of Whaler to write this story is great. I would recommend this book to any of my friends who like Sci-fi or adventure stories. I would love to read any future books to this series as well!
September 30, 2013
Stones (Data) by Jacob Whaler is a great Sci-Fi thriller which really took me by surprise. It had a good mix of both "old" and "new" technology that is utilized together to really make for some exciting ideas/scenes. The author also implemented a strong American-Japanese culture feel to the book which really adds to the overall plot rather than leaving a reader confused.
The stones, their potential powers and holders made for a lot of very cool possibilities. The author has been able to piece together some history, philosophy, religion, fantasy and other exciting topics to create a world which is easily manipulated so as to keep the reader guessing. Often when I thought I had something figured out, I quickly realized that I couldn't have been more wrong in my guesses.
The editing, story line, characters, foreshadowing, everything was just great and expertly achieved. I think I found two errors throughout the entire thing which is almost unheard of with indy authors and is very much appreciated. This is a book which you would expect to be published by a large publishing house as it definitely has potential to have a strong following. I couldn't contain my excitement once I found out there were THREE more books to come in this series. I will be anxiously waiting. I highly recommend you check this one out!
5/5
The stones, their potential powers and holders made for a lot of very cool possibilities. The author has been able to piece together some history, philosophy, religion, fantasy and other exciting topics to create a world which is easily manipulated so as to keep the reader guessing. Often when I thought I had something figured out, I quickly realized that I couldn't have been more wrong in my guesses.
The editing, story line, characters, foreshadowing, everything was just great and expertly achieved. I think I found two errors throughout the entire thing which is almost unheard of with indy authors and is very much appreciated. This is a book which you would expect to be published by a large publishing house as it definitely has potential to have a strong following. I couldn't contain my excitement once I found out there were THREE more books to come in this series. I will be anxiously waiting. I highly recommend you check this one out!
5/5
October 3, 2013
Intense Cover, Intense Story.
I found the book cover to be eye catching and vivid; and in retrospect, very descriptive.
Stones Data is well written and overall, has been well edited with only two errors that I noted.
It's an easy read from the first page to the last. I was always excited to get back to where I'd left off...
Stones Data is a techno, sci-fi, fantasy, with a heavy asian influence, and will "bend" how you view the universe; in a new and intriguing way.
It jumped a bit, but then so did the characters...a colorful, eclectic and memorable cast, the majority of which I grew to understand and warm to...still there were one or two characters that have yet to be developed and remain a bit of a mystery...
Jacob Whaler entwines and interplays very human characters with alien concepts, to weave a story which is explosive and challenging; as it takes you into new frontiers to wage the age old battle, of good vs. evil.
I enjoyed this book, however, I was left with many unanswered questions! I suppose this was intended as it's only book one of a series...but I am a bit annoyed at finding myself obliged to read the next one in order to get the answers to those questions! It's been a few days since I finished reading the book, and I'm still wanting for answers...so I will be looking out for book two!
I found the book cover to be eye catching and vivid; and in retrospect, very descriptive.
Stones Data is well written and overall, has been well edited with only two errors that I noted.
It's an easy read from the first page to the last. I was always excited to get back to where I'd left off...
Stones Data is a techno, sci-fi, fantasy, with a heavy asian influence, and will "bend" how you view the universe; in a new and intriguing way.
It jumped a bit, but then so did the characters...a colorful, eclectic and memorable cast, the majority of which I grew to understand and warm to...still there were one or two characters that have yet to be developed and remain a bit of a mystery...
Jacob Whaler entwines and interplays very human characters with alien concepts, to weave a story which is explosive and challenging; as it takes you into new frontiers to wage the age old battle, of good vs. evil.
I enjoyed this book, however, I was left with many unanswered questions! I suppose this was intended as it's only book one of a series...but I am a bit annoyed at finding myself obliged to read the next one in order to get the answers to those questions! It's been a few days since I finished reading the book, and I'm still wanting for answers...so I will be looking out for book two!
July 23, 2016
I love scifi and alternative history, I have a thing for snow and I'm particularly partial to Japan and its food - even more so because I've spent time there. How could I not pick up this book?
Yes, it's a long one. Good thing, too. I would have been mightily annoyed if it had finished any sooner than it did.
This book is very descriptive - not overly so, but very precise for those who have never been in some of the places and situations described. The only time I felt the description was too much was in the detailed accounts of how the Japanese food is prepared and where the best restaurants are - I'm familiar with both of these things, so for me it was overkill. For any reader who hasn't spent a fair bit of time in Japan and frequented the ramen bars...after reading this book, believe me, you'll want to.
Unusually, this isn't a dystopian scifi - whilst set in the near future, the society seems to be muddling along about as well as we are now. That doesn't make it a perfect world - but not one that's impossible to live in, either.
The action flows effortlessly - from scene to scene, though there are two split plot lines here, as Matt and his dad are in different places, living out different stories in the same timeline.
I'm very interested to see where Whaler takes this story next, for I'll definitely be looking out for the sequel.
Yes, it's a long one. Good thing, too. I would have been mightily annoyed if it had finished any sooner than it did.
This book is very descriptive - not overly so, but very precise for those who have never been in some of the places and situations described. The only time I felt the description was too much was in the detailed accounts of how the Japanese food is prepared and where the best restaurants are - I'm familiar with both of these things, so for me it was overkill. For any reader who hasn't spent a fair bit of time in Japan and frequented the ramen bars...after reading this book, believe me, you'll want to.
Unusually, this isn't a dystopian scifi - whilst set in the near future, the society seems to be muddling along about as well as we are now. That doesn't make it a perfect world - but not one that's impossible to live in, either.
The action flows effortlessly - from scene to scene, though there are two split plot lines here, as Matt and his dad are in different places, living out different stories in the same timeline.
I'm very interested to see where Whaler takes this story next, for I'll definitely be looking out for the sequel.
January 19, 2014
Stones (Data) by Jacob Whaler is one of the most suspenseful books I have read. The story is a classic battle between good and evil, that moves through several times and continents. Jacob Whaler does an incredible job with describing the scenery in all of the story’s locations. His vivid description of characters, places, and gadgets makes his novel more believable.
Jacob Whaler makes futuristic technology more realistic by making it close to current technology. For example, the jax, used by everyone in Stones (Data) is similar to an iPhone, but more advanced. After reading this book, I fully intend to own a jax, or whatever they call it in the future.
While Stones (Data) is a suspenseful novel, it is also a love story. There are couples throughout the story. First, there is Matthew Newmark and Jessica Gibbons, a young adult couple. While they enjoy each other’s company, there is always that underlying stress because Matthew is unable to speak specifically about his past. Mikal Ryzaard and Alexa Gianopoulus can also be considered a couple, but a somewhat dysfunctional one.
I would recommend Stones (Data) to anyone who loves technology and suspenseful writing. I was absorbed from the first sentence until the last. This is the kind of story that would make a good movie, and possibly a section of a theme park.
Jacob Whaler makes futuristic technology more realistic by making it close to current technology. For example, the jax, used by everyone in Stones (Data) is similar to an iPhone, but more advanced. After reading this book, I fully intend to own a jax, or whatever they call it in the future.
While Stones (Data) is a suspenseful novel, it is also a love story. There are couples throughout the story. First, there is Matthew Newmark and Jessica Gibbons, a young adult couple. While they enjoy each other’s company, there is always that underlying stress because Matthew is unable to speak specifically about his past. Mikal Ryzaard and Alexa Gianopoulus can also be considered a couple, but a somewhat dysfunctional one.
I would recommend Stones (Data) to anyone who loves technology and suspenseful writing. I was absorbed from the first sentence until the last. This is the kind of story that would make a good movie, and possibly a section of a theme park.
November 2, 2013
“For thousands of years, the Stones have been hidden among us, giving a privileged few power to rule over masses, destroy empires and create new ones.”
As Matt finally leaves his over protective father, or so he thinks, he embarks on his new life as an adult on his own. Thinking his dad has been over reacting all of these years to people out there trying to kill them; Matt soon learns how much his dad was right in his actions. If only they all knew how bad it was really going to be, and all because of a rock!
I really enjoyed reading Stones Data! The story takes place in a future where technology has become a major part of everyone’s life, more so than it is now. All of the history, religion from other cultures and the creativity of the story put together by the author kept me hooked to the end. I just had to read the first chapter to the next book at the end and I still want more! Lol I feel that it was well written, easy to read and keep up with what was going on.
The only reason I gave this 4 stars is because I did find some minor editing issues. If not for that it would be a 5!
As Matt finally leaves his over protective father, or so he thinks, he embarks on his new life as an adult on his own. Thinking his dad has been over reacting all of these years to people out there trying to kill them; Matt soon learns how much his dad was right in his actions. If only they all knew how bad it was really going to be, and all because of a rock!
I really enjoyed reading Stones Data! The story takes place in a future where technology has become a major part of everyone’s life, more so than it is now. All of the history, religion from other cultures and the creativity of the story put together by the author kept me hooked to the end. I just had to read the first chapter to the next book at the end and I still want more! Lol I feel that it was well written, easy to read and keep up with what was going on.
The only reason I gave this 4 stars is because I did find some minor editing issues. If not for that it would be a 5!
August 10, 2016
I give this book (Stones Data) 4 stars. Overall the story was good and entertaining. I could definitely visualize everything that was being described. I thought the amount of detail was perfect in most areas, whereas a few areas didn't need as much and there were misspellings throughout the book.
The characters were good. The author makes you hate the villain (who truly is a piece of work) and the main character who is a young male adult, really does behave like a young male adult. It's infuriating, but pretty true to form. At times he shows great strength and wisdom and then others times it's like GROW UP. lol. But again... pretty close to character of a young male adult and you can tell that I've been sucked into the story when I'm yelling at him in the book.
Without giving too much away, I was a little disappointed in the end of the book as I thought it dragged on a bit and wasn't resolved as nice as I would have liked. But that is completely my preference and I'm sure not the case for all. Again, overall I enjoyed the book and I definitely see the story line getting stronger as the plot continues.
The characters were good. The author makes you hate the villain (who truly is a piece of work) and the main character who is a young male adult, really does behave like a young male adult. It's infuriating, but pretty true to form. At times he shows great strength and wisdom and then others times it's like GROW UP. lol. But again... pretty close to character of a young male adult and you can tell that I've been sucked into the story when I'm yelling at him in the book.
Without giving too much away, I was a little disappointed in the end of the book as I thought it dragged on a bit and wasn't resolved as nice as I would have liked. But that is completely my preference and I'm sure not the case for all. Again, overall I enjoyed the book and I definitely see the story line getting stronger as the plot continues.
January 13, 2014
I enjoyed this book. It's got good action, with tension building well to a satisfying climax. The book finishes off well, while leaving enough foreshadowing of problems to come in the next book of the series.
The characters are well developed. At times the antagonist came across a bit too much like a stereotypical villain, but there's back story to support why he is that way, so it works.
The writing is competently done, with an average number of typos or sentences that don't read quite right (I found 39, which I highlight obsessively in every eBook I read). A couple of times it seemed that there was a contradiction from something stated earlier, but then it was explained.
The stones themselves are described as ancient alien artifacts, with little to hint about their origin. The power they allow the owner to yield as a bit too close to magic for my taste, but that's just a personal hang up—I'm not really into fantasy. If that doesn't bother you, it won't detract from your enjoyment of the book.
All in all, a well written science fiction/techno-thriller.
Disclosure: I received a free copy of the eBook and agreed to review it.
The characters are well developed. At times the antagonist came across a bit too much like a stereotypical villain, but there's back story to support why he is that way, so it works.
The writing is competently done, with an average number of typos or sentences that don't read quite right (I found 39, which I highlight obsessively in every eBook I read). A couple of times it seemed that there was a contradiction from something stated earlier, but then it was explained.
The stones themselves are described as ancient alien artifacts, with little to hint about their origin. The power they allow the owner to yield as a bit too close to magic for my taste, but that's just a personal hang up—I'm not really into fantasy. If that doesn't bother you, it won't detract from your enjoyment of the book.
All in all, a well written science fiction/techno-thriller.
Disclosure: I received a free copy of the eBook and agreed to review it.
March 30, 2015
The first in a set of 4 books. Had to get book 2 to continue.
It's the year 2045 and you have a very powerful corporation, "MX Global" that is run by the very evil genius Dr. Mikal Ryzaard..He will not be satisfied until he plays "God" and controls the world..Now imagine that you come into possession of ancient, claw-shaped stone from the past..Called the "Magatama Stone" that is more stronger and powerful than any of your new technology that you've created..It's a data stone that can predict and manipulate the algorithm of the stock market and make you the richest man in the world without detection..That's just the beginning because there are darker, magical, hidden secrets that lie within the stone and it's holder....Innocent Matt Newmark while skiing in Colorado, accidentally falls and comes in contact with another stone that now becomes activated..This where the thrilling action starts and Matt is on the run for his life because he is a "holder"..The stones when activated alert each other and Dr Ryzaard will stop at nothing, even go beyond killing just to obtain the other stone...
It's the year 2045 and you have a very powerful corporation, "MX Global" that is run by the very evil genius Dr. Mikal Ryzaard..He will not be satisfied until he plays "God" and controls the world..Now imagine that you come into possession of ancient, claw-shaped stone from the past..Called the "Magatama Stone" that is more stronger and powerful than any of your new technology that you've created..It's a data stone that can predict and manipulate the algorithm of the stock market and make you the richest man in the world without detection..That's just the beginning because there are darker, magical, hidden secrets that lie within the stone and it's holder....Innocent Matt Newmark while skiing in Colorado, accidentally falls and comes in contact with another stone that now becomes activated..This where the thrilling action starts and Matt is on the run for his life because he is a "holder"..The stones when activated alert each other and Dr Ryzaard will stop at nothing, even go beyond killing just to obtain the other stone...
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