Sweet and heartwarming story. Well told and developed. Amazing h and H. Only a tad slow!
*Spoilers* Slow as in once the author takes 5 pages to get the h to mull over leaving her store, deciding to do so, thinking over other things, get (lumber in and fit actually!) in the car, drive home and pull into the driveway.
This book should be a SuperRomance or a Love Inspired. What’s this story doing in Intimate Moments?
On one hand, I admire the h for being strong and resolute in not accepting the H’s moc offer. She knows she deserves more than a loveless union. Also, she doesn’t trust him. And certainly, doesn’t know him as it really was a ONS between relative strangers. Despite his protestations of a permanent commitment to her, their child and this marriage, she blocks her mind and heart to his words. She doesn’t want her daughter (and herself) to suffer from a loveless, or even a broken home.
And then on the other hand, I didn’t quite buy this argument as I found it to be so paradoxical - to her own life as an illegitimate child. Of course, times have changed and marriage is not a prerequisite for becoming a parent. But here, the small-town mentality hasn’t changed much from the days when she was made to feel like an abomination or a nonentity, throughout her childhood and later - all because of her illegitimacy. And now to subject her unborn child to the same kind of treatment did not sit well with me. She was already bearing the brunt of speculation and unsolicited advice and censure from people because of her pregnancy. And she knows from personal experience, how unprepared and defenseless a child can be to that.
So, even keeping aside the romance angle, I wish she was more practical and less self-protective on legitimizing her child’s birth. Of course, her experiences have made her to withdraw and be always guarded and I can respect that.
Her own thoughts tell us that she wanted her child and her love all to herself. Without sharing it with the Russos - the H’s family, whom she wished would provide a family’s love and support to her child but she's also wary that she may lose her child to that large, rambunctious lot. I couldn’t really blame her. With her quiet, self -effacing personality, the Russos must alarm her. Acknowledgment from the family does seem like a double-edged sword - from her pov.
The H was confused too. For him, with his amnesiac blackout, it was a whole lot to take in and so unexpectedly. So, his initial wariness and confusion for this double whammy is understandable. But he clears up his priorities and choices pretty soon and within few days. He's the usual alpha cop guy who abhors commitment and this was a 'trap' he didn't see coming - or was too soused to! But he never tries to blame anyone else but himself and never goes the wait and watch or DNA testing way.
While the h keeps fudging and stalling till the end.
I could understand her reticence and dismay on letting the H get revealed as her child’s father even though it's inevitable, but she just couldn’t face it. She still lets public opinion affect her life and decisions despite coming a long way and being the strong person she is beneath her retiring persona.
Amelia Rose.
Oh, how she tweaked my heart strings without even being born yet. Love how her mommy loved her so much already and how the author made her into a real person much involved and participating in the story. And it really tickled me how the author handles the birth and the after!
A great h and H. The story picks up satisfyingly in the last third.
So, a 3.65*