It is summer 2015. I needed to make a run to Costco and picked up cheap lunch with my four children, ages seven and under. It was crowded and we shared one of the odd tables with Lois Brown! She was so kind and engaging with my kids. I had just finished The Queen's Thief series by Megan Whalen Turner and Mrs. Brown's daughter looked the perfect age to love it (plus The Lioness series by Pierce), so we started talking about books and she mentioned that she is an author. What a pleasant surprise! I noted the title and downloaded her three books when I got home. It was lovely to meet you, Lois!
Cycles is the story of a girl named Renee who is 13.5 and has her life change very quickly when she is in an accident after trying to save her neighbor's rare, living horse (after a horse epidemic that killed almost all others) from thieves. She loses a lot of blood, requiring a transfusion. However, her blood is odd and they do not have a match. Her neighbor, Dr. Dawson, tells the hospital staff that he has some of her blood stored (because of a science experiment that he helped her with, but this is a lie), and they use it to save her life.
The plot was interesting. Inventive, different, refreshing. The facts she shared about various things she based the story on read too formal for the rest of the writing style: for example, when she shares about the pressure needed to break an arm, or about the details of the eclipse cycle. It certainly moved at a quick pace and I stayed up later to read it, so it IS compelling.
I liked that she had different races than all white. Thank you. She labels and describes and equalizes, which I like. She didn't give too many descriptors of Alex Massri's hired arm other than he had tattoos, a low IQ, his name was Duane and Sam calls him a Gorilla. She does not come out and give him a race. HOWEVER, Duane actually means dark or black. So, I found it highly offensive that she used a gorilla as the descriptor. It is racist. Whether intended or not, I am surprised no one caught this, or that the author had this blind spot. Additionally when she describe Massri she says she is beautiful, then says she has a Barbie sculpted body. Barbie is a completely unattainable ideal. No thanks. Girls already have enough media hurled at them about what they "should" look like. Some of the phrases used in the book (Sam: didn't know why Renee was so irritable, but it was probably some girl thing he didn't want to know about. Sam: now he was surrounded by two silly, superstitious females. Gamma Didi: they don't want to talk to an old woman like me. ) were sexist and ageist which I have no tolerance for, ESPECIALLY from a female writer!
On the one hand, I get it. Sam and Renee are outcasts, not very cool, etc, and maybe teenagers will relate to that. A lot of the school interactions were what any parent hopes school is not like, episodes of bullying for Sam, they were just awful.
The two descriptions of birth are somewhat at odds. First you have Helen having a baby alone, but her mother was a midwife, but also her mother died and she was only in town because of the funeral, I guess they were estranged, and her husband wasn't with her because he hated her mother (nice). Then you have Renee's father relating that her mother was unconscious for her birth and thinks it is the best way to have a baby. Both descriptions make birth something to fear. I think that is lazy writing because that is universally what is written in fiction about having a baby. So, that part was not original and was, again, something that I really despise seeing from a female author.
So, should you read it? yes. Resoundingly. I am being more specific than I usually am in reviews because, let's be honest, I have a newborn and have the downtime to give a solid review. I think it could have certainly benefitted from a good editor and I applaud Brown's obvious imaginative weaving of a story. I look forward to reading the other two books and will continue as she evolves and matures as a writer. I am glad I read it. Writing a book is a huge accomplishment!