Wow! Margaret Johnson-Hodge is one of my favorite authors and still is! I was excited to read part three since I've been following Margaret's work since "Warm Hands." In this story, all the characters are back- Dajah and Rick, Jeff, Mya, and Gina. The beginning of the story flowed nicely. I was able to follow that Dajah and Jeff had broke up. Margaret did an excellent job at expressing the emotions that both characters felt about the break-up, and the richness of these characters was still there. I could easily remember them from the previous books, and they seemed authentic. Around the middle of the story, the details and the flashbacks made the read choppy, and the storyline began to tumble. It was as if another writer had taken over and the characters took on new lives that were quite different from what was portrayed in the beginning, and from what I knew of them in the past. There were also unnecessary subplots, particularly with Gina who could have been left out all together. The ending was rushed and unbelievable. I found it hard to accept that certain characters were back together (Not trying to give away the story). At times it seemed like Rick would go back to his old habits and end up with Gina. Mya was so confused about everything and trying to please everyone, except herself. There was no time to really show her growth process and her final decision. I thought she would either end up on her own or back with Alex. Jeff seemed so hurt that he would have gotten with just about anyone even Jill. I don't think he was over Dajah just as much as I thought he wasn't over Mya. I don't think Dajah was over Jeff. None of the characters ever seemed sure of what they wanted, they just accepted the next best thing. Suddenly they make a decision to settle down. Ring on finger. Yes let's have kids and maybe five. The end. I was turning the page thinking I missed something. I went back and reread the last three chapters and I just couldn't accept the ending the way it was. I hope there will be a part four to smooth things over, or perhaps a short story. These characters are so rich that they deserve one more chance not to tumble over.