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304 pages, Paperback
First published August 14, 2013

I actually cannot believe I finished this one. And part of me thinks that it might deserve a second star just because it did not make me give up on it before it was over. But on retrospect, i'm pretty sure I did a fair amount of skimming.
I found the plot to be fairly predictable. I mean, it was not awfully so- meaning that even though I knew the general direction of the plot, there were still some twists along the way. And to be honest, the fantasy world that this is set in was really interesting. I just wish that different characters and different struggles were set here.
I think the reason that I was so dissatisfied in these characters is that they had an inability to communicate- which might be my number one frustration with any romance novel. Just a simple conversation and some honesty could have saved SOO much struggle. I also disliked these characters because they changed for each other. And that really bothers me. It is one thing to go through difficulties together and come through on the other side different- and that metamorphosis bringing you together. But that is not what happened. And I just can't get behind things like that.
I also felt like this story was fairly disjointed, with the conflict doing a 180 three separate times in the novel, with the only common ground being their attraction. It felt like the author realized he had written a novella, and decided he needed to make it longer, so he added more plot. I realize that some of these critiques might be personal preference and so you may read the book and come to a completely different conclusion- and I hope so- but for me, this book was a disappointment.