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The Marksmith

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When they took away my freedom. When they hunted down my friends. When the gods broke with faith. When all that's left is an arrow. Then I will nock...

Deep within the wrinkled folds of time, an unjust act by a just king brought about the desolation of a kingdom. For an age the secret of that discarded sin has lain chained beneath a sea of sand. Now, as a shadow seeps from the festering land and hope fades into the world of dreams, no secrets shall remain.
Crone has long been a thrall. He has long desired freedom. When the whispered words of a dream compel him to act upon desire, the archer Crone and his companions find themselves pawns in an unfinished game for power.
Hunted by the empire he defied and dark forces intent on keeping the secret of Divine Sin sequestered, Crone must choose his fate. It may well shatter the spirit of friends and burn the soul of an entire world to ash...for in the gathering storm of war, the Marksmith learns that freedom may be the harshest master of all.

304 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 3, 2013

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C.V. Dreesman

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CV graduated with a degree in English while married to the amazing love of his life and raising his son. As an author he seeks to take readers' breath away linguistically.

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4 reviews
September 21, 2013
I absolutely love this book! It crosses any genre label. It combines elements of fantasy and action, has some drama and romance. The author draws you into the story so you feel as though you are the characters and you actively take part in the adventure and feelings of them, especially the main character of Crone. I genuinely cared about the characters and was anxious to know what happened next. The author did a good job of not revealing everything at once (and I won't give away things and spoil it for everyone else), so there was a build up to each secret that was revealed. The only thing I missed was going into more detail of some of the minor aspects of the world, which I hope will be included in the next book. But the imagining and storytelling voice of this world and the characters was brilliant. I have a feeling I will be rereading this book again and I can't wait for the series to continue. I highly recommend this book for anyone looking for a new and interesting read!
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844 reviews121 followers
December 3, 2020
This is the first book I read from this author and let me tell you that I loved it! Such a good book with great characters that keeps you obsessed with every page since the first one. The ending of this book.. come on! I just didn´t expect it! Can´t wait to read other books from this great writer! Amazing job! a must-read!. A fantastic book that has it all!

I happily endorse this story to any and all who are looking for a fantasy enjoyable read and a completely different experience than anyone could imagine on their own. I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. Many twists and turns to the plot. I highly recommend Dreesman books
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September 26, 2013
I would really like to rate this book as 2 1/2 stars, but since you can't rate in halfs I have rounded it up to 3 stars.

About half way through this book I started to get the feeling that this book was birthed from short entries written when the author found the time. Now I'm not sure if this is what really happened, it just seemed like it.

Everything seems to be told in spurts. A few paragraphs here talking about one thing, and marker to separate everything than a few more paragraphs talking about thing else, or just fast forward in the future some. Having the story told this way made the characters very one dimensional. I had a hard time finding any reason to like anyone because I never got the chance to really know them. Reading a book like this is hard, if you don't care for the characters you don't care about what they are up to.

I also found myself confused a lot. Not really sure of everything that was going on. There seemed to also be a lot of pointless sex going on. . .but at least this was tastefully done. It is in no way anywhere close to an erotica, and I was happy about that.

The concept of the book was good, though I found myself not really liking the characters to much after a while the plot was good. I am a sucker for quests like Crone found himself on. But I still found myself confused a lot during the entire read, like the test that Crone goes through at one point in the book had me scratching my head wondering what the hell was going on. The ending was interesting, didn't see a lot of it coming so that was nice.

The book is told from a few different point of views, this is something I really love, and it was done well. I could easily figure out who was who. This at least made me very happy.

I'm not one that usually complains about grammar or editing issues, because really how am I to point these things out when I am horrible with them myself. But there are a lot of very glaring issues the farther you get into the book. Words not capitalized at the beginning of a sentence, or the one I found the most instead of had it would be hand. A quick go through and these things can get cleaned up nicely.

Would I recommend this book? Eh, its a maybe. . .it would really depend on the person. The author has talent, I'll give him that, he just needs to work on his character development and a few other things.

**Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the author exchange for a honest review.**

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