[4★ Book]
This is the first actual book I’ve finished in well… ever. Therefore, I don’t have much to go off. I would also like to note, I haven’t read the first two books of the series (Captivated by You and Consumed by You) just as I haven’t read the following books to this one (trust me to read out of order lol).
Due to me reading the series out of order, I was obviously a bit lost when Johannes brought up his family (Asher and Penn + partners) but this is a fault on my part, I’m sure if I read the previous books first, I’d be more in the know.
Onto the actual book, I found it addictive to read, whether this was because it is in the small genre of books I enjoy, I don’t know, but every few days I kept opening the book to read more.
I enjoyed the dual POV’s in the book, especially because they didn’t just recount the same event from each of their perspectives, which I find a bit dry.
The characters both had interesting stories, with Johannes’ traumatic past with Sadie and his lack of trust in everyone, and Eloise’s previous relationship leaving her scared and on the run with Chloe, they were a nice mix of emotions and had plenty of trauma to unpack together.
My only real faults with the book were the cliché turns it took and the pacing. Getting so close to opening up to each other and then being interrupted by an old friend? Shocker, never saw that coming, might save that one for the history books… and as for pacing, it started off good, then after the first time together, things escalated quickly… Eloise went from being a rookie server to Johannes, to then being his assistant, to then not working and yet being the most important person to him within the space of? Weeks? A few months? Then there was the ending section, a few weeks after the traumatic kidnapping, sharing their truths and recuperating, Eloise decides she wants a baby with Johannes and Johannes wants several, definitely with her. To finish it off, time-skip a year and she’s six months pregnant. Maybe it’s just me, but a lot happened in that year and a half or so that the book spans over. (Unless I’m just slow and misunderstanding the timeline lol)
Aside from that, I would’ve also liked to have seen more about what actually happened in Oklahoma with Mateo, both POV’s heard gunshots, but all we knew after that was that Eloise and Chloe were safe and Mateo was in custody, what happened there?
Regardless, the book was still a good read and I plan on reading the others in the series at some point. I especially want to know how Nolen plans to get with Marlowe, and if he’ll succeed or not…