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The Movement of Crowns
Is it the perfect or the worst time for the kingdom to…change?
The nation of Diachona rejoices as the king’s daughter and heir, Constance, turns twenty. Yet, not everyone approves of Constance’s desire to sit on the National Council: a Council run solely by men.
What’s more, oppressive threats from a neighboring, powerful empire are rousing the people’s fears. Amid rumors of war and personal doubts about her future, Constance suspects that her growing love for one Commander Alexander may be ill-timed. Especially if this is the end of the kingdom as they know it…
The nation of Diachona rejoices as the king’s daughter and heir, Constance, turns twenty. Yet, not everyone approves of Constance’s desire to sit on the National Council: a Council run solely by men.
What’s more, oppressive threats from a neighboring, powerful empire are rousing the people’s fears. Amid rumors of war and personal doubts about her future, Constance suspects that her growing love for one Commander Alexander may be ill-timed. Especially if this is the end of the kingdom as they know it…
116 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 18, 2012
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Nadine C. Keels
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Nadine. A French name, meaning, "hope."
Her lifelong passion for the power of story makes reading and writing an adventure for Nadine C. Keels. She’s driven to write the kinds of stories she’s always wanted to read but couldn’t always find, featuring diverse and uncommon lead characters in a medley of genres.
Through her books and her blogs (Prismatic Prospects, Gentle Reads Fiction, and Selectively Gritty Fiction), Nadine aims to spark hope and inspiration in as many people as she can reach.
Her lifelong passion for the power of story makes reading and writing an adventure for Nadine C. Keels. She’s driven to write the kinds of stories she’s always wanted to read but couldn’t always find, featuring diverse and uncommon lead characters in a medley of genres.
Through her books and her blogs (Prismatic Prospects, Gentle Reads Fiction, and Selectively Gritty Fiction), Nadine aims to spark hope and inspiration in as many people as she can reach.
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August 15, 2017
A refreshing, almost fairy tale like, fantasy where royalty, political jockeying and warring neighbours vie for control. There's a slow-burning romance, too, which I enjoyed. I hate to say it, but I was so disappointed when it ended. Too short! I wanted more, which isn't a bad thing for a series. Can't wait to read more from Keels.
My Rating: 4.5 stars
My Rating: 4.5 stars
February 16, 2018
Okay, so it took me longer than normal to read this book because yesterday my internet suddenly went away and it turns out I had to restart my laptop. (silly me hadn't downloaded this and was reading it in my email, which takes internet)
SO onto the review.
First of all, pg 86- pg 94ish was just a whirlwind of emotions and so so crazy. It was pulled off amazingly, good job, Nadine.
So the plot was really good. At first, it moved a bit slowly, but it wasn't a bad slow.
The one thing is that there were a lot of huge blocks of text and monologue type speeches. That bothered me sometimes because it made me skim.
The characters were very well developed (big spoiler)
The book was a little predictable, except that one part that was completely and totally insane and if I told you anything about it it would ruin the whole story. That plot twist was just crazy.
SO onto the review.
First of all, pg 86- pg 94ish was just a whirlwind of emotions and so so crazy. It was pulled off amazingly, good job, Nadine.
So the plot was really good. At first, it moved a bit slowly, but it wasn't a bad slow.
The one thing is that there were a lot of huge blocks of text and monologue type speeches. That bothered me sometimes because it made me skim.
The characters were very well developed (big spoiler)
The book was a little predictable, except that one part that was completely and totally insane and if I told you anything about it it would ruin the whole story. That plot twist was just crazy.
August 11, 2016
It was refreshing to read a fantasy with no magic in it. I enjoyed it a lot, especially since I’m not a fan of dark magic or high/epic fantasy. I couldn’t put it down, quite honestly, because, even without the actual thing, Nadine C. Keels managed to make this an absolutely magical story.
In general, The Movement of Crowns was a pretty good book. It was an novella, but I feel like there could – and should – have been more, which is why it didn’t get five stars.
I wish the plot had been slowed down, and that the ending weren’t so … well, a bit anticlimactic. However, I did enjoy it.
The character were enjoyable, understandable, and in general complex and real. I liked Constance a lot and got to know her very well, and, of course, I liked Staid (Commander Alexander). He was very interesting.
I didn’t really under the Queen. Perhaps everything that happened with her was a little sudden? Still, that was a cool subplot.
I thought the writing was very good. Adored Nadine C. Keel’s style.❤
Overall, I enjoyed this novella, but felt that the pace was a little out of whack.
Read the full review on my blog.
~Kellyn Roth, Reveries Reviews
In general, The Movement of Crowns was a pretty good book. It was an novella, but I feel like there could – and should – have been more, which is why it didn’t get five stars.
I wish the plot had been slowed down, and that the ending weren’t so … well, a bit anticlimactic. However, I did enjoy it.
The character were enjoyable, understandable, and in general complex and real. I liked Constance a lot and got to know her very well, and, of course, I liked Staid (Commander Alexander). He was very interesting.
I didn’t really under the Queen. Perhaps everything that happened with her was a little sudden? Still, that was a cool subplot.
I thought the writing was very good. Adored Nadine C. Keel’s style.❤
Overall, I enjoyed this novella, but felt that the pace was a little out of whack.
Read the full review on my blog.
~Kellyn Roth, Reveries Reviews
April 4, 2019
4*
Ms. Keels is a unique and talented voice in fiction. Her work is not only lyrical and lovely, it always affords the reader unexpected wisdom and depth.
Ms. Keels is a unique and talented voice in fiction. Her work is not only lyrical and lovely, it always affords the reader unexpected wisdom and depth.
April 11, 2022
I find this series a very intelligent, entertaining read, and the romance tasteful and sweet.
June 15, 2023
Short, sweet, and enjoyable story set in a fictional kingdom featuring a strong main female character.
October 26, 2013
The mythical land in which this story takes place is quite well developed. I could visualise it throughout and wanted to go there, were I a man of course. I couldn’t help but picture the scenery and the world as a whole. Keels’ descriptions were well put together and fit very well with the flow of the story.
I found the characters in this novel to be quite superficial. Not only in personality, but in development as well. Because of this they were next to impossible to identify with making it hard to get into the story. That said, I really love the fact that a woman was standing up in a male dominated world, with those men close to her for support. It was quite heart-warming.
Overall, I had quite mixed feelings on this book. There were times when I was really starting to get into it and was enjoying it and others where I found myself rather lost and afloat. I wanted to like it more but had a hard time getting into the story as a whole.
Please note that I received this novel free of charge from the author in exchange for an honest review.
I found the characters in this novel to be quite superficial. Not only in personality, but in development as well. Because of this they were next to impossible to identify with making it hard to get into the story. That said, I really love the fact that a woman was standing up in a male dominated world, with those men close to her for support. It was quite heart-warming.
Overall, I had quite mixed feelings on this book. There were times when I was really starting to get into it and was enjoying it and others where I found myself rather lost and afloat. I wanted to like it more but had a hard time getting into the story as a whole.
Please note that I received this novel free of charge from the author in exchange for an honest review.
May 16, 2017
This is a wonderful fantasy about kingdoms, Kings and a Princess. Also woven in is a beautiful romance between Princess Constance and Commander Alexander. In the midst of the threat of war and devastation a wonderful thing is taking place as Princess Constance comes of age. You are sure to enjoy this quick read and will want to follow it up with the next book in the series.
I won this book in a contest with no requirement for a review. All views are my own.
I won this book in a contest with no requirement for a review. All views are my own.
October 8, 2022
This might be a case of a book description that's slightly misleading. It does have all of the elements it promises, but in small amounts, with less conflict in the plot than I expected. I did enjoy it, just not as much as I hoped to.
The old-fashioned style of the prose was a nice change of pace, and Constance was easily likeable as the main character. If you enjoy sweet, non-magical fantasy, give this a try!
The old-fashioned style of the prose was a nice change of pace, and Constance was easily likeable as the main character. If you enjoy sweet, non-magical fantasy, give this a try!
June 9, 2017
GREAT HISTORICAL ROMANCE STORY!
The characters and storyline were superb. The reading of this book was definitely worth the time. Constance and Alexander are a beautiful couple, but I was not looking for an HEA with the report of his death. Thank heavens, you had more in store for us. Thank you, Danny Scott.
The characters and storyline were superb. The reading of this book was definitely worth the time. Constance and Alexander are a beautiful couple, but I was not looking for an HEA with the report of his death. Thank heavens, you had more in store for us. Thank you, Danny Scott.
March 18, 2017
Fantastic Fantasy
This book captures the heart and imagination with its vivid imagery and vivacious main character. While a few long kisses do occur the general nature of this book is sweet, with the perfect dash of fantasy words to make you travel across the invisible realms to the land of Diachonia ( I have no clue if that is spelled correctly)
This book captures the heart and imagination with its vivid imagery and vivacious main character. While a few long kisses do occur the general nature of this book is sweet, with the perfect dash of fantasy words to make you travel across the invisible realms to the land of Diachonia ( I have no clue if that is spelled correctly)
September 7, 2014
In a world that is run by kings, the future of Diachona is insecure. For their king has no sons, only a daughter named Constance. Despite the country’s disappointment for the king’s lack of sons, the king is persistent to make his daughter his heir. While the country’s ongoing debate over naming Constance his heir, the king of Munda, a neighboring country, lusts after some of the lush lands of Diachona. Diachona soon find themselves at the brink of war. Could Constance help save Diachona and in the process become the official heir to the throne?
I found Constance to be an amazing woman. It is clear that she is destined to become a great queen. She loves her country. She also loves and respects her father, whom she looks up to as a great king. Constance is a great strategist. She makes many plans and is willing to take many risks. She also researches the customs, situations, and politics of her enemy’s people to understand Munda’s situation. It is because of this that she sees Munda’s weakness which is Diachona’s advantage. Even though Constance is a good politician, she also rules with her heart. She is very emotional. She is in love with Staid, the military leader of Diachona. Yet she knows her family wants her to marry a foreign prince to help strengthen alliances. Constance is determined to be the official heir to the throne, win the war, and to have love.
I didn’t think the world-building was fully developed. I would have liked to known a bit more about Diachona and the neighboring countries surrounding her. I would also have liked to known more about the Diachonian peoples, customs, and culture. Yet, I did come to the conclusion that Diachona had a great military, and that the council members seem to be divided. They were more concerned about their own safety, rather than that of their country because they wanted to Diachona to give themselves up to Munda very easily.
Overall, the book is about love, family, and hope. The message of the book is that God has a plan for all of us and to trust in His plan. We as human beings are called to do what is right. I found the story to be very slow-paced and I was very bored by the politics, which covered half the book. I also thought that the climax was boring for it had no tension, and I think it should be rewritten to heighten its dramatic effect. However, I did like the story for it was light-hearted, sweet, and lovely. I also thought it was a beautiful ending. I recommend this book to fans of Christian, fantasy, and romance genres, and anyone interested in strong heroines and who is looking for an inspiring story about hope.
(Note: This book was given to me by the author in exchange for an honest review.)
I found Constance to be an amazing woman. It is clear that she is destined to become a great queen. She loves her country. She also loves and respects her father, whom she looks up to as a great king. Constance is a great strategist. She makes many plans and is willing to take many risks. She also researches the customs, situations, and politics of her enemy’s people to understand Munda’s situation. It is because of this that she sees Munda’s weakness which is Diachona’s advantage. Even though Constance is a good politician, she also rules with her heart. She is very emotional. She is in love with Staid, the military leader of Diachona. Yet she knows her family wants her to marry a foreign prince to help strengthen alliances. Constance is determined to be the official heir to the throne, win the war, and to have love.
I didn’t think the world-building was fully developed. I would have liked to known a bit more about Diachona and the neighboring countries surrounding her. I would also have liked to known more about the Diachonian peoples, customs, and culture. Yet, I did come to the conclusion that Diachona had a great military, and that the council members seem to be divided. They were more concerned about their own safety, rather than that of their country because they wanted to Diachona to give themselves up to Munda very easily.
Overall, the book is about love, family, and hope. The message of the book is that God has a plan for all of us and to trust in His plan. We as human beings are called to do what is right. I found the story to be very slow-paced and I was very bored by the politics, which covered half the book. I also thought that the climax was boring for it had no tension, and I think it should be rewritten to heighten its dramatic effect. However, I did like the story for it was light-hearted, sweet, and lovely. I also thought it was a beautiful ending. I recommend this book to fans of Christian, fantasy, and romance genres, and anyone interested in strong heroines and who is looking for an inspiring story about hope.
(Note: This book was given to me by the author in exchange for an honest review.)
October 2, 2013
This short book shares quite a story...
Since I read only a few books each year using the Kindle App on my laptop I kind of figured I would start this book and leisurely read it while doing other things. Yep, that was the plan. Didn't quite work out that way though. Instead I started it in the afternoon and finished that night. This book had a way of pulling you in... maybe it was a little bit of magic...
The Movement Of Crowns is a lovely cross-stitch of threads. It is not only a sweet love story, but also a nice piece of political fiction, and the story of a princess growing up and finding her place.
The story flows smoothly; some events are expected but there are also some surprises. In many ways a simple but very enjoyable story, it is perfect for a relaxing evening.
The royal family of Diachona is amazing! After a family tragedy the Queen falls into a state of unawareness, taking no part in what goes on around her. Not only does the King still love and care for his wife but he refuses to put her away and find another one. Constance, also, frequently visits her mother and talks to her, hoping that she may some day rejoin palace life. I really enjoyed the interaction between the King and Constance. He is loving, supportive, and does his best to prepare her for future role. The King wants what is best for his daughter and his kingdom as well. She, in turn, not only listens to and respects him but does her best to live up to the example he has set.
There is much to admire in the heroine. Constance simply wishes to do what is right for her kingdom, her family, and herself, pretty much in that order. She is intelligent, educated, and wants to use that to better the kingdom, even if the Council isn't quite ready for her take on a role traditionally held by a prince. She is kind and lovely, catching the eye of more than one suitor in this story.
So, if you like to sit down for a couple of hours and finish a good story. If you like a book that isn't quite traditional fantasy. If you like story that isn't overtly Christian but teaches Biblical principals and a love of family. Well, The Movement Of Crowns just might be the book for you. This reader is looking forward to sometime reading the next book, The Movement Of Rings.
(I received an E-book copy from the author in exchange for an honest review. I was not required to give a positive review. All opinions are my own)
Since I read only a few books each year using the Kindle App on my laptop I kind of figured I would start this book and leisurely read it while doing other things. Yep, that was the plan. Didn't quite work out that way though. Instead I started it in the afternoon and finished that night. This book had a way of pulling you in... maybe it was a little bit of magic...
The Movement Of Crowns is a lovely cross-stitch of threads. It is not only a sweet love story, but also a nice piece of political fiction, and the story of a princess growing up and finding her place.
The story flows smoothly; some events are expected but there are also some surprises. In many ways a simple but very enjoyable story, it is perfect for a relaxing evening.
The royal family of Diachona is amazing! After a family tragedy the Queen falls into a state of unawareness, taking no part in what goes on around her. Not only does the King still love and care for his wife but he refuses to put her away and find another one. Constance, also, frequently visits her mother and talks to her, hoping that she may some day rejoin palace life. I really enjoyed the interaction between the King and Constance. He is loving, supportive, and does his best to prepare her for future role. The King wants what is best for his daughter and his kingdom as well. She, in turn, not only listens to and respects him but does her best to live up to the example he has set.
There is much to admire in the heroine. Constance simply wishes to do what is right for her kingdom, her family, and herself, pretty much in that order. She is intelligent, educated, and wants to use that to better the kingdom, even if the Council isn't quite ready for her take on a role traditionally held by a prince. She is kind and lovely, catching the eye of more than one suitor in this story.
So, if you like to sit down for a couple of hours and finish a good story. If you like a book that isn't quite traditional fantasy. If you like story that isn't overtly Christian but teaches Biblical principals and a love of family. Well, The Movement Of Crowns just might be the book for you. This reader is looking forward to sometime reading the next book, The Movement Of Rings.
(I received an E-book copy from the author in exchange for an honest review. I was not required to give a positive review. All opinions are my own)
February 20, 2015
King Matthias of the kingdom Diachona and his wife have been childless for 10 years until his wife finally bears him an heir. The servants report was brought to him with both joy and empathetic resignation because the child was a girl.
The story picks up again 20 years later when Constance is getting ready to have her 20th birthday celebration and she officially becomes a royal junior, ready to take on royal duties. Against the wishes of many on the king's council, Constance becomes a Junior council member (she is after all, a woman!) and council members are only men of 30 years or more of age.
Diachona has allies and enemy nations around it as most countries do. Politics and political intrigue form the basis of the plot. Add in some clean romance and you have a delightful story with a strong female character lead with a good head on her shoulders.
There are twists in the plot along the way that may surprise you. I found myself empathizing with Constance at various points in the story. With the future of her kingdom at stake, for example, how can she possibly entertain the thought of falling in love? Yet, all the same, despite everything, she is!
I especially enjoyed the interaction between King Matthias and Constance and his reassurance to her that he didn't regret that she was not a boy. Providence (God) had provided him with what he needed and he was content.
I very much enjoyed the blending together of war, romance and politics. I rated this book 5 stars out of 5. I'm looking forward to the second book in the series!
Thank you to the author for providing a copy of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review. A positive opinion was not required. All thoughts are my own.
This review was published on my blog Shelf Full of Books http://kathrynsshelffullofbooks.blogs...
The story picks up again 20 years later when Constance is getting ready to have her 20th birthday celebration and she officially becomes a royal junior, ready to take on royal duties. Against the wishes of many on the king's council, Constance becomes a Junior council member (she is after all, a woman!) and council members are only men of 30 years or more of age.
Diachona has allies and enemy nations around it as most countries do. Politics and political intrigue form the basis of the plot. Add in some clean romance and you have a delightful story with a strong female character lead with a good head on her shoulders.
There are twists in the plot along the way that may surprise you. I found myself empathizing with Constance at various points in the story. With the future of her kingdom at stake, for example, how can she possibly entertain the thought of falling in love? Yet, all the same, despite everything, she is!
I especially enjoyed the interaction between King Matthias and Constance and his reassurance to her that he didn't regret that she was not a boy. Providence (God) had provided him with what he needed and he was content.
I very much enjoyed the blending together of war, romance and politics. I rated this book 5 stars out of 5. I'm looking forward to the second book in the series!
Thank you to the author for providing a copy of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review. A positive opinion was not required. All thoughts are my own.
This review was published on my blog Shelf Full of Books http://kathrynsshelffullofbooks.blogs...
December 30, 2013
Novellas are a strange territory to me. I reviewed the short story collection, The Struggle, a few weeks ago, but otherwise I’ve only reviewed novels. But The Movement of Crowns sounded interesting in Nadine Keels’ proposal, and I decided to read it. Very glad that I did!
Princess Constance has finally reached adulthood in her kingdom of Diachona, and has numerous trials ahead of her: chiefly being the fact that, since she is the king’s only child, will she be accepted into the Council?
Moreover, now that she has come of age, many eligible suitors are calling on her: the prince of ally Reeh, the Cheiftain Greenly and…Commander Staid Alexander, her childhood friend and the man she truly loves.
But he is called to give military aid to Reêh and Diachona must decide, with Constance’s help, if they should go to war with Munda, a volatile neighboring country.Through it all, Constance worries that she might wind up mentally “adrift”, as her very own mother, the queen, is.
With many plot twists (especially for a 115 page novella), deeply expressed emotions of love, fear and grief and a wonderfully crafted lead heroine, this ebook is one many will want to pick up.Personally, I loved that this was based on emotions rather than physical relations, I quite enjoyed that a large portion of the story focused on Constance proving that she was worthy of her Council place despite her age and gender.This book can be read by anyone, but young women especially should pick this up, and its sequel, The Movement of Rings.
Great characters, stunning plot and a thought-provoking message make this a story worth reading.
5/5–great!
Princess Constance has finally reached adulthood in her kingdom of Diachona, and has numerous trials ahead of her: chiefly being the fact that, since she is the king’s only child, will she be accepted into the Council?
Moreover, now that she has come of age, many eligible suitors are calling on her: the prince of ally Reeh, the Cheiftain Greenly and…Commander Staid Alexander, her childhood friend and the man she truly loves.
But he is called to give military aid to Reêh and Diachona must decide, with Constance’s help, if they should go to war with Munda, a volatile neighboring country.Through it all, Constance worries that she might wind up mentally “adrift”, as her very own mother, the queen, is.
With many plot twists (especially for a 115 page novella), deeply expressed emotions of love, fear and grief and a wonderfully crafted lead heroine, this ebook is one many will want to pick up.Personally, I loved that this was based on emotions rather than physical relations, I quite enjoyed that a large portion of the story focused on Constance proving that she was worthy of her Council place despite her age and gender.This book can be read by anyone, but young women especially should pick this up, and its sequel, The Movement of Rings.
Great characters, stunning plot and a thought-provoking message make this a story worth reading.
5/5–great!
November 15, 2013
The Movement of Crowns is a smart modern fairy tale. Diachona is vividly and beautifully written with a lot of care toward setting the scene of political struggle counterpoised with romance. Keels build her world with a deft hand so that it feels appropriately complex and yet carry an air of stark reality.
Constance is a strong young woman who is realistically flawed. She’s uncertain of herself and has a strong need to prove herself. She relies on her friend for an understanding of her fellow characters. She’s part of a political game of chess that is very cleverly mapped out for the reader. Keels entertains the reader while slowly setting up what’s to come in the more intense second part of her story. Readers of romance, political intrigue and alternate worlds will find themselves engaging with Constance and her struggle.
I have two criticisms of The Movement of Crowns. The first is that the dialogue is very inconsistent in style. There is a feel and formality that slips from time to time lending itself to more modern speak. The second is that some of the key background characters are quite one-dimensional. In my opinion the story doesn’t suffer from the lack of development but could have been enhanced with just a few lines.
Keels is strongly Christian and her work reflects her beliefs. The Movement of Crowns doesn’t have an overbearing religious subtext but it is quite evident. Her romance storyline is very appropriate for young teens and the fantasy-like story line may appeal to young girls.
Constance is a strong young woman who is realistically flawed. She’s uncertain of herself and has a strong need to prove herself. She relies on her friend for an understanding of her fellow characters. She’s part of a political game of chess that is very cleverly mapped out for the reader. Keels entertains the reader while slowly setting up what’s to come in the more intense second part of her story. Readers of romance, political intrigue and alternate worlds will find themselves engaging with Constance and her struggle.
I have two criticisms of The Movement of Crowns. The first is that the dialogue is very inconsistent in style. There is a feel and formality that slips from time to time lending itself to more modern speak. The second is that some of the key background characters are quite one-dimensional. In my opinion the story doesn’t suffer from the lack of development but could have been enhanced with just a few lines.
Keels is strongly Christian and her work reflects her beliefs. The Movement of Crowns doesn’t have an overbearing religious subtext but it is quite evident. Her romance storyline is very appropriate for young teens and the fantasy-like story line may appeal to young girls.
January 23, 2014
Constance is the princess of Diachona and the only child of the King and Queen. She has great aspirations in being her father's heir and showing those who doubt a woman could rule that they are wrong. She has her father's support and is willing to put in the hard work to prove she has what it takes. By her side is her childhood friend and romantic interest Commander Alexander the leader of the her father's army.
Just as Constance is coming into her role as heir, a neighboring empire starts to threaten the people of Diachona. When an allied country is hit by hard times the King's focus is torn and Constance sees the right time to step up to secure her position on the Council. Constance was allowed to travel as a young woman and this helps her with knowledge that could prevent the kingdom from going to war.
I enjoyed this novella. I think Nadine did a great job in creating the world of her series. You can tell she really put thought into creating Diachona and it's people. I just wish it would have been novel length so there could have been a bit more development of the story and the characters. I liked how the religious aspects weren't too overpowering and played in nicely with the story.
I received an eBook copy from the author for my honest review. I don't know if I would have purchased this book on my own otherwise, but I'm happy Nadine got in touch with me to review her book.
(Originally posted at Little Thoughts About Books
Just as Constance is coming into her role as heir, a neighboring empire starts to threaten the people of Diachona. When an allied country is hit by hard times the King's focus is torn and Constance sees the right time to step up to secure her position on the Council. Constance was allowed to travel as a young woman and this helps her with knowledge that could prevent the kingdom from going to war.
I enjoyed this novella. I think Nadine did a great job in creating the world of her series. You can tell she really put thought into creating Diachona and it's people. I just wish it would have been novel length so there could have been a bit more development of the story and the characters. I liked how the religious aspects weren't too overpowering and played in nicely with the story.
I received an eBook copy from the author for my honest review. I don't know if I would have purchased this book on my own otherwise, but I'm happy Nadine got in touch with me to review her book.
(Originally posted at Little Thoughts About Books
September 4, 2018
“We begin to see what our children will be, from the time when they’re still toddling. But as time passes, at intervals, we find ourselves virtually having to relearn our children, all over again.”
-Matthias to Constance
Overall I really enjoyed this book and intend to read on in the series. I adored Nadine’s words, and am especially partial to the above quote. I have a few qualms with the story, but once I dug through the first couple of pages, I was entranced. I also enjoyed the fact that this young woman, barely a legal adult in the eyes of her country was standing tall and to her own against a rule full of men.
Qualm 1: I’m not sure if it’s just the ebook or not, but I had a really hard time with the format, or lack thereof. There were four main breaks, but aside from that it took a couple of paragraphs a time to figure out that a scene had changed. There were no other clear chapters, and I could easily envision the four main breaks being larger breaks with chapters in between. There’s an example at the edge of my mind that I’m not grasping.
Qualm 2: Clarification in specifics, largely Captain Staid Alexander. She addresses him differently three times and it took longer than I believe it should have for me to put together that he was the same person. And among that, Providence. It wasn’t until I was halfway through the book that I realized Providence was a part of their religion, or else I missed something in the beginning, which is entirely possible.
I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review via Voracious Readers Only.
-Matthias to Constance
Overall I really enjoyed this book and intend to read on in the series. I adored Nadine’s words, and am especially partial to the above quote. I have a few qualms with the story, but once I dug through the first couple of pages, I was entranced. I also enjoyed the fact that this young woman, barely a legal adult in the eyes of her country was standing tall and to her own against a rule full of men.
Qualm 1: I’m not sure if it’s just the ebook or not, but I had a really hard time with the format, or lack thereof. There were four main breaks, but aside from that it took a couple of paragraphs a time to figure out that a scene had changed. There were no other clear chapters, and I could easily envision the four main breaks being larger breaks with chapters in between. There’s an example at the edge of my mind that I’m not grasping.
Qualm 2: Clarification in specifics, largely Captain Staid Alexander. She addresses him differently three times and it took longer than I believe it should have for me to put together that he was the same person. And among that, Providence. It wasn’t until I was halfway through the book that I realized Providence was a part of their religion, or else I missed something in the beginning, which is entirely possible.
I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review via Voracious Readers Only.
October 16, 2013
A great trip to a far away land! Really a great read! This tale takes us back in time to when kings & queens ruled. We travel with the Princess Constance & her entourage while learning of her family, their kingdom, & their battles. We witness the daily routine of the Princess as she becomes of age preparing for her future. All the while attempting to free herself from the doubts of skeptical elders who are stuck in their belief that women are not meant for decision making & power.
The characters are very like able & fit in nicely with their surroundings. I did find it slip at times from the old ways of speaking to our modern chatter, but it was easy to follow & I enjoyed the story a lot. I have to say the huge surprise that she sprung on us was well worth my momentary freak out! And...I love King Matthias & what he stands for! As well as Queen Grace who's momentary lapse in time brings about many emotions, but never truly giving up. It is easy to envision the passionate Princess ruling with greatness. Oh, but let's not forget the forever friend, Staid, who proves to be a romantic, not simply a warrior, bringing so much to this tale. I look forward to reading more of Diachona, the neighboring kingdoms, & where they shall lead us.
The characters are very like able & fit in nicely with their surroundings. I did find it slip at times from the old ways of speaking to our modern chatter, but it was easy to follow & I enjoyed the story a lot. I have to say the huge surprise that she sprung on us was well worth my momentary freak out! And...I love King Matthias & what he stands for! As well as Queen Grace who's momentary lapse in time brings about many emotions, but never truly giving up. It is easy to envision the passionate Princess ruling with greatness. Oh, but let's not forget the forever friend, Staid, who proves to be a romantic, not simply a warrior, bringing so much to this tale. I look forward to reading more of Diachona, the neighboring kingdoms, & where they shall lead us.
February 5, 2014
**reviewed for Round Table Book Reviews**
3.5 stars
Nadine Keels did a good job creating Diachona. She gave it an old-time feel, bringing back kings and queens. Constance is an only child and princess of Diachona. Being the only heir, she has high aspirations to prove that a woman can rule. She's willing to do whatever it takes to prove everyone wrong.
As if having to wonder if she will be accepted into the council isn't enough, she's also come of ago where it's time to find a suitor. There are many options, but only one man that she truly loves. All of this, along with the threat of war.
Although I'm not a huge fan of novellas, once I got into this book, I needed to know what happened next. With all of the plot twists that take place, you'll enjoy the ride through this mythical land. I do believe that anyone can enjoy this book, but feel that the younger audience will truly love it.
3.5 stars
Nadine Keels did a good job creating Diachona. She gave it an old-time feel, bringing back kings and queens. Constance is an only child and princess of Diachona. Being the only heir, she has high aspirations to prove that a woman can rule. She's willing to do whatever it takes to prove everyone wrong.
As if having to wonder if she will be accepted into the council isn't enough, she's also come of ago where it's time to find a suitor. There are many options, but only one man that she truly loves. All of this, along with the threat of war.
Although I'm not a huge fan of novellas, once I got into this book, I needed to know what happened next. With all of the plot twists that take place, you'll enjoy the ride through this mythical land. I do believe that anyone can enjoy this book, but feel that the younger audience will truly love it.
February 10, 2014
I read this for Round Table Book Reviews
I found this to be a sweet story, set in the mythical Kingdom of Diachona. Where Constance, thr King’s daughter is coming of age & wishes to join the National Council. She is very clever & well read, she also travelled around the Kingdom, learning about the people who live there & nearby.
It is basically a love story, but we get to explore the wonderful scenery of the Kingdom, with the Princess Constance & the Commander Alexander.
Nadine Keels, really describes the place beautifully, you really feel like you are there & part of it all.
It’s not all sweetness & light, there are some sad moments & some very emotional moments.
This was a very nice easy read, I had it finished in 2.5 hours.
I found this to be a sweet story, set in the mythical Kingdom of Diachona. Where Constance, thr King’s daughter is coming of age & wishes to join the National Council. She is very clever & well read, she also travelled around the Kingdom, learning about the people who live there & nearby.
It is basically a love story, but we get to explore the wonderful scenery of the Kingdom, with the Princess Constance & the Commander Alexander.
Nadine Keels, really describes the place beautifully, you really feel like you are there & part of it all.
It’s not all sweetness & light, there are some sad moments & some very emotional moments.
This was a very nice easy read, I had it finished in 2.5 hours.
September 17, 2013
I was given a copy of this book by the author for review.
Overall, I liked the central characters, who were believable and I certainly liked Constance's strength. I did find the language quite heavy going, although some descriptions were extremely well done. Although set within a fantasy world, the story did have the feel of 'true' history - that in itself well done, bringing alive the 'world' for its characters (and the reader).
These are not the usual stories I like, but I will say that it was well written and for those who enjoy the 'historical romance' type, it's a good read. But that's not to say that it went much deeper than that - I don't give spoilers.
Worth a look.
Overall, I liked the central characters, who were believable and I certainly liked Constance's strength. I did find the language quite heavy going, although some descriptions were extremely well done. Although set within a fantasy world, the story did have the feel of 'true' history - that in itself well done, bringing alive the 'world' for its characters (and the reader).
These are not the usual stories I like, but I will say that it was well written and for those who enjoy the 'historical romance' type, it's a good read. But that's not to say that it went much deeper than that - I don't give spoilers.
Worth a look.
July 1, 2014
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review.
This is a well written descriptive book. The author vividly paints the picture for you and you can visualize the entire story. The characters are relatable and everything that occurred had a realistic vibe to it.
This is a well written descriptive book. The author vividly paints the picture for you and you can visualize the entire story. The characters are relatable and everything that occurred had a realistic vibe to it.
December 27, 2014
This is an absolutely wonderful epic fantasy/romance book. From the beginning, I was hooked on the characters, storyline, and excellent use of adjectives. Felt as if I was right there observing and taking part. Nadine is a superb author and I highly recommend this book.
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January 23, 2016This was a great book. A new author to me and definitely one worth reading. I suppose this is fantasy, but reads like historical romance. Loved the voice the author uses.
March 25, 2023
Very sweet, very hope-filled, with a lot of characters who will stay with you even after you finish.
July 8, 2020
If you’re looking for a quick read in a medieval setting with castles, kings and romance, then you might want to check out “Movement of Crowns” by Nadine C. Keels! The title and cover piqued my curiosity to download this book, and I’m glad I did!
In the land of Diachona, the king’s daughter and heir, Constance, celebrates a birthday and begins her journey to becoming not just a beloved daughter of the land, but a strong female who has the ability and desire to lead her people. When Constance was first introduced at the beginning of the book, I immediately liked her. Her love of travel and learning about different lands became a huge connecting point for me. I also really enjoyed Staid Alexander’s character - he was the perfect hero! The book balanced between Constance and Staid’s romance and her desire to become a part of the Counsel and help with kingdom decisions. For a short novella of 113 pages, “Movement of Crowns” covered a lot of ground.
Another thing that I really appreciated about this book was the insight into Contance’s mother, Grace, who suffered with depression. I read a lot of Christian Fiction, and there’s just not a lot of situations where people deal with anxiety, depression or other special needs and illnesses. Throwing in a character with this kind of need can really change the direction of a story and/or the surrounding characters. I think this author did a good job with showing how depression can affect those closest to you in a loving, informative way. It made the story authentic. There were heroes - but they struggled with things at home that they had no control over. It was an interesting twist to the story, and I’m glad the author saw fit to craft it that way.
With a novella, I know it can be hard to use the “show not tell” method because there’s just not a lot of space for a story to develop and I felt that with this story. It wasn’t poorly written, but there were some slow spots and places where characters would talk for almost a whole page to explain their feelings. I also felt like there could have been a few more chapter breaks to help with the flow.
Conclusion: A lot of reviews mention that this novella is fantasy. Since I read a fair amount of fantasy in the Christian Fiction genre, I’ll just mention that this is more like a medieval historical in a fictional place. You won’t find any magic, dragons or strange made up creatures associated with the fantasy genre in this book! It’s really a sweet romance with a deep theme of forging your own path in life and breaking through tradition to fulfill your call, and of course, following your heart and marrying for love instead of expectation! All in all, I enjoyed this book and would be interested in what happens next in the series! A very clean read!
In the land of Diachona, the king’s daughter and heir, Constance, celebrates a birthday and begins her journey to becoming not just a beloved daughter of the land, but a strong female who has the ability and desire to lead her people. When Constance was first introduced at the beginning of the book, I immediately liked her. Her love of travel and learning about different lands became a huge connecting point for me. I also really enjoyed Staid Alexander’s character - he was the perfect hero! The book balanced between Constance and Staid’s romance and her desire to become a part of the Counsel and help with kingdom decisions. For a short novella of 113 pages, “Movement of Crowns” covered a lot of ground.
Another thing that I really appreciated about this book was the insight into Contance’s mother, Grace, who suffered with depression. I read a lot of Christian Fiction, and there’s just not a lot of situations where people deal with anxiety, depression or other special needs and illnesses. Throwing in a character with this kind of need can really change the direction of a story and/or the surrounding characters. I think this author did a good job with showing how depression can affect those closest to you in a loving, informative way. It made the story authentic. There were heroes - but they struggled with things at home that they had no control over. It was an interesting twist to the story, and I’m glad the author saw fit to craft it that way.
With a novella, I know it can be hard to use the “show not tell” method because there’s just not a lot of space for a story to develop and I felt that with this story. It wasn’t poorly written, but there were some slow spots and places where characters would talk for almost a whole page to explain their feelings. I also felt like there could have been a few more chapter breaks to help with the flow.
Conclusion: A lot of reviews mention that this novella is fantasy. Since I read a fair amount of fantasy in the Christian Fiction genre, I’ll just mention that this is more like a medieval historical in a fictional place. You won’t find any magic, dragons or strange made up creatures associated with the fantasy genre in this book! It’s really a sweet romance with a deep theme of forging your own path in life and breaking through tradition to fulfill your call, and of course, following your heart and marrying for love instead of expectation! All in all, I enjoyed this book and would be interested in what happens next in the series! A very clean read!
July 8, 2019
This sounded promising. :D But it was neither as good or a poor as I was expected. Overall, there was some solid world building, a large cast of characters, each unique from each other. A woman fighting to serve her people in a man's word. And a unique father-daughter relationship.
It was just that the plot was pretty predictable. I was hoping for something a little different, or even the same usual story but that drew my emotions further in. There was one major plot twist that I totally wasn't expecting, especially not in that way -- and I find unexpected plot rare but awesome -- but I immediately guessed how it would be resolved.
I did really appreciate how the princess and king interacted with the queen. And her part in their lives and the story.
I also liked that the princess wasn't overly a tomboy or overly girly. She was a woman in the man's world, but she was also feminine. She had a mind of her own, but she had self-control and discernment in many situations.
Overall, not amazing, not bad. :)
Content Warnings:
Sexual Content: Kisses. Implied that a side character married couple had sex, fleeting non-graphic teasing (asked if a baby was on the way). (I actually found that really weird that the princess was the one to bring it up in that way.)
Cuss words: None.
Violence: None that I can remember.
Gore: None.
It was just that the plot was pretty predictable. I was hoping for something a little different, or even the same usual story but that drew my emotions further in. There was one major plot twist that I totally wasn't expecting, especially not in that way -- and I find unexpected plot rare but awesome -- but I immediately guessed how it would be resolved.
I did really appreciate how the princess and king interacted with the queen. And her part in their lives and the story.
I also liked that the princess wasn't overly a tomboy or overly girly. She was a woman in the man's world, but she was also feminine. She had a mind of her own, but she had self-control and discernment in many situations.
Overall, not amazing, not bad. :)
Content Warnings:
Sexual Content: Kisses. Implied that a side character married couple had sex, fleeting non-graphic teasing (asked if a baby was on the way). (I actually found that really weird that the princess was the one to bring it up in that way.)
Cuss words: None.
Violence: None that I can remember.
Gore: None.
March 23, 2018
I am actually reading the whole series, but I just finished this first novella.
What was difficult:
It took me a long time to get into this story, and I think it's because of the writing style. (Though some of it could be attributed to my hectic life of late.) The style was not bad or unpleasant, and honestly it fit the theme and atmosphere of the story well. It just took me a bit to find a flow. I found myself able to put it down easily, even though I was enjoying the story for a time.
What was interesting:
Nadine has an interesting way of transitioning from one time to the next. It worked; it was always just a little surprising. I did not dislike it. In fact, I thought it was kind of fun. Like there was this understood "moving on" statement after each scene.
What I liked and why I gave it 4 stars:
I loved the story. The romance between the princess and the commander was sweet. As were the relationships between Constance and her father. I smile often while reading the story, and there was one moment where I laughed out loud. This was my first time reading a novella. It was cute.
What I hope for:
I am hoping with the momentum I have gained from the first book, I can get through the other two much faster, and I hope I continue to enjoy them as well.
What was difficult:
It took me a long time to get into this story, and I think it's because of the writing style. (Though some of it could be attributed to my hectic life of late.) The style was not bad or unpleasant, and honestly it fit the theme and atmosphere of the story well. It just took me a bit to find a flow. I found myself able to put it down easily, even though I was enjoying the story for a time.
What was interesting:
Nadine has an interesting way of transitioning from one time to the next. It worked; it was always just a little surprising. I did not dislike it. In fact, I thought it was kind of fun. Like there was this understood "moving on" statement after each scene.
What I liked and why I gave it 4 stars:
I loved the story. The romance between the princess and the commander was sweet. As were the relationships between Constance and her father. I smile often while reading the story, and there was one moment where I laughed out loud. This was my first time reading a novella. It was cute.
What I hope for:
I am hoping with the momentum I have gained from the first book, I can get through the other two much faster, and I hope I continue to enjoy them as well.
March 10, 2018
The first book in a three book series, The Movement of Crowns is an epic fantasy set in the kingdom of Diachona. The story follows the royal family from the birth of the new heir.
A patriarchal society, Diachona has never been without a male heir before. But after years of failed attempts, finally, the king and queen are blessed with a daughter. Over the years she grows to be a strong independent woman, traveling to neighboring kingdoms, learning their languages and customs.
The book begins with her birth and jumps to her 20th birthday celebration. Traditionally the heir is made a “Junior“ in their 20th year and takes a spot on the council. Constance will be the first Princess to take such a position.
I found that the characters were richly developed and easy to like. The story development was smooth and natural, providing a richness of detail without overwhelming the reader.
Although part of a three book series, this is an excellent story even as a standalone.
Reviewed for LnkToMi iRead in response to a complimentary copy of the book provided by the publisher in hopes of an honest review. See the review of the full series at LnkToMi iRead.
A patriarchal society, Diachona has never been without a male heir before. But after years of failed attempts, finally, the king and queen are blessed with a daughter. Over the years she grows to be a strong independent woman, traveling to neighboring kingdoms, learning their languages and customs.
The book begins with her birth and jumps to her 20th birthday celebration. Traditionally the heir is made a “Junior“ in their 20th year and takes a spot on the council. Constance will be the first Princess to take such a position.
I found that the characters were richly developed and easy to like. The story development was smooth and natural, providing a richness of detail without overwhelming the reader.
Although part of a three book series, this is an excellent story even as a standalone.
Reviewed for LnkToMi iRead in response to a complimentary copy of the book provided by the publisher in hopes of an honest review. See the review of the full series at LnkToMi iRead.
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