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The Circle
He was created for only one person. She was never supposed to be the One.
It is 1988 and Lilly, a shy high school senior with a non-existent social life, is forced to live out her romantic fantasies through the fictional characters of her books. That all changes when she issues a spur of the moment invitation to the strange new kid.
The world Charlie comes from is much different than Earth. Almost every aspect of a Sentrian's life is under complete government control. There is only one right the intrusive authorities may not violate: that God chooses your soul mate. While on his planet, Charlie never found his One, so when he develops an attraction to Lilly, he is torn. Should he ignore his feelings for the Earthan, or pursue a doomed relationship with the only girl he has ever cared about?
His contact with Lilly does not go unnoticed. Involvement with an Earthan is considered blasphemy, and Charlie is condemned as a criminal of the state. The couple is faced with a difficult choice: accept eternal separation or risk everything to stay together.
It is 1988 and Lilly, a shy high school senior with a non-existent social life, is forced to live out her romantic fantasies through the fictional characters of her books. That all changes when she issues a spur of the moment invitation to the strange new kid.
The world Charlie comes from is much different than Earth. Almost every aspect of a Sentrian's life is under complete government control. There is only one right the intrusive authorities may not violate: that God chooses your soul mate. While on his planet, Charlie never found his One, so when he develops an attraction to Lilly, he is torn. Should he ignore his feelings for the Earthan, or pursue a doomed relationship with the only girl he has ever cared about?
His contact with Lilly does not go unnoticed. Involvement with an Earthan is considered blasphemy, and Charlie is condemned as a criminal of the state. The couple is faced with a difficult choice: accept eternal separation or risk everything to stay together.
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First published August 2, 2013
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February 20, 2017
An usual book about a time traveller, love, meeting the 'One', friendship, family & corruption! I read this book really fast as I couldn't put it down. I was intrigued and wanted to find out what happened to Charlie and Lilly. There were plot twists that kept things flowing and a very surprising ending.
Onto book two to find out what happens to our plucky love struck pair.
Onto book two to find out what happens to our plucky love struck pair.
August 2, 2014
I received a free eBook copy of 'The Circle' via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
The Circle is a lovely story told from the perspective of Charlie, a Sentrian. He has been seen on a mission from his home planet to obtain information about Earthan life and as part of becoming involved with the "Earthans" he chooses to join the band. From this point, Charlie does something which goes against a fundamental rule of his kind... he becomes romantically involved with a sweaty Earthan girl. In doing so, all sorts of chaos and havoc erupt into Charlie and Lilly's lives. The strict laws from Charlie's home planet come crashing down in full force and Charlie finds his One.
I really enjoyed this book and can't wait to read the sequel! The story has a lovely written style and all of the characters were well rounded and you could easily empathise with their plight. Montemayor has a lovely written style which really brought the characters to life. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and it had just the right mixture of romance, intrigue and concern about the characters fate. I loved the sci-fi elements of the story and the brilliant characterisation, I could really feel myself becoming emotionally invested in the characters as the story progressed. The style and era of the decades which are used are great, I loved the quirky 50s style that Charlie wears through the 80s and how Lilly tries to combat his bad fashion sense. They're a lovely nerdy couple who try and stick together through all their worlds throw at them.
On occasion, instead of speaking as a teenager may do, both Charlie and Lilly seem more adult, though this is in keeping with the intellect which Montemayor claims the two possess. At times when Charlie replies to some of Lilly's questions he seems to begin a monologue style reply which didn't really seem in keeping with his character, especially when for so much of the book he is intent on keeping his identity a secret. As soon as Charlie has revealed his identity, it seems as if it wasn't that much of a big deal to Lilly and it took barely any time for her to come to terms with his true identity. Really these are just a bit finicky points but these were the only real issues I experienced with any part of the book!
This is a fantastic piece of writing and is definitely worth a read. Great appreciation to the author for sharing her lovely writing! I can't wait to read the sequel and really loved this work.
The Circle is a lovely story told from the perspective of Charlie, a Sentrian. He has been seen on a mission from his home planet to obtain information about Earthan life and as part of becoming involved with the "Earthans" he chooses to join the band. From this point, Charlie does something which goes against a fundamental rule of his kind... he becomes romantically involved with a sweaty Earthan girl. In doing so, all sorts of chaos and havoc erupt into Charlie and Lilly's lives. The strict laws from Charlie's home planet come crashing down in full force and Charlie finds his One.
I really enjoyed this book and can't wait to read the sequel! The story has a lovely written style and all of the characters were well rounded and you could easily empathise with their plight. Montemayor has a lovely written style which really brought the characters to life. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and it had just the right mixture of romance, intrigue and concern about the characters fate. I loved the sci-fi elements of the story and the brilliant characterisation, I could really feel myself becoming emotionally invested in the characters as the story progressed. The style and era of the decades which are used are great, I loved the quirky 50s style that Charlie wears through the 80s and how Lilly tries to combat his bad fashion sense. They're a lovely nerdy couple who try and stick together through all their worlds throw at them.
On occasion, instead of speaking as a teenager may do, both Charlie and Lilly seem more adult, though this is in keeping with the intellect which Montemayor claims the two possess. At times when Charlie replies to some of Lilly's questions he seems to begin a monologue style reply which didn't really seem in keeping with his character, especially when for so much of the book he is intent on keeping his identity a secret. As soon as Charlie has revealed his identity, it seems as if it wasn't that much of a big deal to Lilly and it took barely any time for her to come to terms with his true identity. Really these are just a bit finicky points but these were the only real issues I experienced with any part of the book!
This is a fantastic piece of writing and is definitely worth a read. Great appreciation to the author for sharing her lovely writing! I can't wait to read the sequel and really loved this work.
September 17, 2014
Book Review- The Circle by K.M. Montemayor
Lilly is starting her senior year and is excited for band. She has her underclassmen friends, Ian and Beth. She is happy to be around her people, the members of the band. She notices a new student. He is short and she mistakenly takes him as a freshman, but it turns out he is in her class. He appears to be a loner named Charlie.
However he likes to read and Lilly finds they have that in common. She starts inviting him to McDonalds after band. They strike up a friendship. It eventually turns into more. Lilly likes him a lot but notices his odd behavior. Something is very different about Charlie.
It turns out that Charlie is not what he seems. Lilly is completely shocked when she learns the truth. He and his parents are there on a mission. His parents don’t want Charlie and Lilly so close. In fact Charlie’s ex girlfriend does everything in her power to stop them from being together.
This book was interesting. I couldn’t put it down. Some of the storyline was a bit far out there, but needed to make Charlie the way he was. It also made the story exciting and full of secrets. Charlie tells Lilly the truth about himself and thinks of a way to be together. They almost made it. I was devastated when I got to the end and the part where the author chose to end it. I know there will be more to the story, but it ended on such a hopeless note. I really want to see what happens next. I’ve become invested in Charlie and Lilly. I want them to win. So I give this book a 4 out of 5.
Lilly is starting her senior year and is excited for band. She has her underclassmen friends, Ian and Beth. She is happy to be around her people, the members of the band. She notices a new student. He is short and she mistakenly takes him as a freshman, but it turns out he is in her class. He appears to be a loner named Charlie.
However he likes to read and Lilly finds they have that in common. She starts inviting him to McDonalds after band. They strike up a friendship. It eventually turns into more. Lilly likes him a lot but notices his odd behavior. Something is very different about Charlie.
It turns out that Charlie is not what he seems. Lilly is completely shocked when she learns the truth. He and his parents are there on a mission. His parents don’t want Charlie and Lilly so close. In fact Charlie’s ex girlfriend does everything in her power to stop them from being together.
This book was interesting. I couldn’t put it down. Some of the storyline was a bit far out there, but needed to make Charlie the way he was. It also made the story exciting and full of secrets. Charlie tells Lilly the truth about himself and thinks of a way to be together. They almost made it. I was devastated when I got to the end and the part where the author chose to end it. I know there will be more to the story, but it ended on such a hopeless note. I really want to see what happens next. I’ve become invested in Charlie and Lilly. I want them to win. So I give this book a 4 out of 5.
August 3, 2014
My Review:
This is a book that makes you have a smile plastered on your face most of the times.
The plot is amazing the characters are one of those you want to befriend in real life, except for the bad guys. You want to punch those :D
Although I did not like the writing, which was telling, not showing the story, I still gave it 4 stars / 5. Why?
Well , when you have a bland steak ( the writing style) and a juicy sauce ( the plot) , the taste will still be awesome.
It is also a book that revolves around people who love books , so i ended with some really interesting book recommendations. Thanks to Charlie and Liliana , who are the cutest thing ever!
I think is one of those books that is good for anyone who wants to start reading, I could not put the book down and I can barely wait for the next book !
We finally get some description starting from the second half of the book , and honestly the author has built such a beautiful world, which I hope we will be able to read more about in the following books.
This is a book that makes you have a smile plastered on your face most of the times.
The plot is amazing the characters are one of those you want to befriend in real life, except for the bad guys. You want to punch those :D
Although I did not like the writing, which was telling, not showing the story, I still gave it 4 stars / 5. Why?
Well , when you have a bland steak ( the writing style) and a juicy sauce ( the plot) , the taste will still be awesome.
It is also a book that revolves around people who love books , so i ended with some really interesting book recommendations. Thanks to Charlie and Liliana , who are the cutest thing ever!
I think is one of those books that is good for anyone who wants to start reading, I could not put the book down and I can barely wait for the next book !
We finally get some description starting from the second half of the book , and honestly the author has built such a beautiful world, which I hope we will be able to read more about in the following books.
September 2, 2016
4 out of 5 stars
I can't wait to find out will happen with Charlie and Liliana in the sequel!!!
I can't wait to find out will happen with Charlie and Liliana in the sequel!!!
November 10, 2018
An amusing author.
I like getting a glimpse into the female mind. It is a real alien way to look at the universe. This book sort of reminds me of Podkayne of mars ,because of the female protagonist. The sentria are a believable culture .
I like getting a glimpse into the female mind. It is a real alien way to look at the universe. This book sort of reminds me of Podkayne of mars ,because of the female protagonist. The sentria are a believable culture .
December 12, 2019
Charlie and Lilliana
Star crossed romance. Nicely written. Mixing sci-fi with romance and showing that differences between one planet and another are not so great. Goodies and baddies exist wherever, as does ambition and treachery. I enjoyed the book.
Star crossed romance. Nicely written. Mixing sci-fi with romance and showing that differences between one planet and another are not so great. Goodies and baddies exist wherever, as does ambition and treachery. I enjoyed the book.
July 17, 2014
I am a little bit uncertain of how to rate this book. On the one hand, the writing style is a little flat, lacking in dramatic flair, but on the other hand, it did suck me in and keep me reading.
It feels a lot like your regular high school drama - not-particularly-popular, booksy girl is generally overlooked in favour of her curvaceous and flirty best friend, until a boy enters the picture who is, in himself, something of an outsider. Together, they find they share a lot in common, and from these roots of a friendship, something rather more life-defining grows. Fairly standard stuff, pleasant to read, but not exactly life shattering.
However, Charlie is not from Earth - his people are a different strain of humanoids, located in a galaxy somewhere far beyond. He has been sent here, with his family, while his parents do important government-related security-stuff. His people are more-or-less from a dystopian society, with rigid rules and little freedom of movement. As his relationship with Lily develops, the press of his societal constrainsts hardens and it seems fate will drive the two young love-birds apart...
I enjoyed it, it was a fun read. I do feel Lily rushed into some rather foolhardy decisions and she felt somewhat younger than her 18 years (although I am not sure why). The bit when Charlie suddenly became "hot" when he took off his glasses rather bugged me too. Perhaps a little too Clark Kent? Anyway, the writing style felt a little dry, and the prose was not exactly eloquent and flowering, but it was a good, quick read. Although that ending... Grrrr!
Also, the dialogue felt artificial. I cannot pinpoint exactly why, but at times it did feel a little maid-and-butler and forced. Writing convincing dialogue is difficult, and I am sure that as the books proceed, this will improve.
Disclaimer: Free eARC via Netgalley and publisher in exchange for honest review - thank you!
It feels a lot like your regular high school drama - not-particularly-popular, booksy girl is generally overlooked in favour of her curvaceous and flirty best friend, until a boy enters the picture who is, in himself, something of an outsider. Together, they find they share a lot in common, and from these roots of a friendship, something rather more life-defining grows. Fairly standard stuff, pleasant to read, but not exactly life shattering.
However, Charlie is not from Earth - his people are a different strain of humanoids, located in a galaxy somewhere far beyond. He has been sent here, with his family, while his parents do important government-related security-stuff. His people are more-or-less from a dystopian society, with rigid rules and little freedom of movement. As his relationship with Lily develops, the press of his societal constrainsts hardens and it seems fate will drive the two young love-birds apart...
I enjoyed it, it was a fun read. I do feel Lily rushed into some rather foolhardy decisions and she felt somewhat younger than her 18 years (although I am not sure why). The bit when Charlie suddenly became "hot" when he took off his glasses rather bugged me too. Perhaps a little too Clark Kent? Anyway, the writing style felt a little dry, and the prose was not exactly eloquent and flowering, but it was a good, quick read. Although that ending... Grrrr!
Also, the dialogue felt artificial. I cannot pinpoint exactly why, but at times it did feel a little maid-and-butler and forced. Writing convincing dialogue is difficult, and I am sure that as the books proceed, this will improve.
Disclaimer: Free eARC via Netgalley and publisher in exchange for honest review - thank you!
August 10, 2014
[Scale: Excellent / Good / Fair / Poor]
Concept / Premise: Good
A tale of forbidden love. The idea behind this book is a good one. KM Montemayor has created an alien planet with it's own ways (a lot more oppressive and Big Brother-ish than Earth, and also with different ideas about romance and courtship). We see what happens when aliens from this world interact with Earthans; Earthans who are generally believed to be inferior creatures to them.
Characters: Good
The characters are likeable and have each got their unique voice. The characters could have more depth to help the reader emotionally connect with them. A ramping up of character depth combined with a bit more artful writing and this COULD have been butterflies-in-stomach, tear-inducing stuff, but as it is, it missed both those marks for me.
Dialogue: Good
The dialogue is good and convincing.
Execution: Fair
The story saves this book and keeps you reading all the way through to see what happens. The writing is a bit on the plain side, and it does tend to tell the story quite obviously rather than show it. Another point: I was looking forward to reading about the alien world and its ways and was a little disappointed about some of the creative choices which I felt could have been more creative. (eg. Their food could have been more interesting than just eating weird combinations like chicken in chocolate.) Finally, I felt the ending was quite abrupt, though I appreciate that this is in part because the story is meant to continue in the next book.
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All in all, a good book, but there is definitely room for improvement.
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*ARC copy provided courtesy of NetGalley*
Concept / Premise: Good
A tale of forbidden love. The idea behind this book is a good one. KM Montemayor has created an alien planet with it's own ways (a lot more oppressive and Big Brother-ish than Earth, and also with different ideas about romance and courtship). We see what happens when aliens from this world interact with Earthans; Earthans who are generally believed to be inferior creatures to them.
Characters: Good
The characters are likeable and have each got their unique voice. The characters could have more depth to help the reader emotionally connect with them. A ramping up of character depth combined with a bit more artful writing and this COULD have been butterflies-in-stomach, tear-inducing stuff, but as it is, it missed both those marks for me.
Dialogue: Good
The dialogue is good and convincing.
Execution: Fair
The story saves this book and keeps you reading all the way through to see what happens. The writing is a bit on the plain side, and it does tend to tell the story quite obviously rather than show it. Another point: I was looking forward to reading about the alien world and its ways and was a little disappointed about some of the creative choices which I felt could have been more creative. (eg. Their food could have been more interesting than just eating weird combinations like chicken in chocolate.) Finally, I felt the ending was quite abrupt, though I appreciate that this is in part because the story is meant to continue in the next book.
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All in all, a good book, but there is definitely room for improvement.
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*ARC copy provided courtesy of NetGalley*
September 10, 2014
Amazons blurb:
He was created for only one person. She was never supposed to be the One. It is 1988 and Lilly, a shy high school senior with a non-existent social life, is forced to live out her romantic fantasies through the fictional characters of her books. That all changes when she issues a spur of the moment invitation to the strange new kid. The world Charlie comes from is much different than Earth. Almost every aspect of a Sentrian's life is under complete government control. There is only one right the intrusive authorities may not violate: that God chooses your soul mate. While on his planet, Charlie never found his One, so when he develops an attraction to Lilly, he is torn. Should he ignore his feelings for the Earthan, or pursue a doomed relationship with the only girl he has ever cared about? His contact with Lilly does not go unnoticed. Involvement with an Earthan is considered blasphemy, and Charlie is condemned as a criminal of the state. The couple is faced with a difficult choice: accept eternal separation or risk everything to stay together.
My Thoughts:
I was really excited about the premise for this book. I love otherworldly heroes, and sci-fi in general. I just felt like there was so much that could have been done with this premise, but the book itself just kind of fell flat for me. I wanted to really like it, but it just seemed stilted or maybe bland?
Just couldn't get into this one..
He was created for only one person. She was never supposed to be the One. It is 1988 and Lilly, a shy high school senior with a non-existent social life, is forced to live out her romantic fantasies through the fictional characters of her books. That all changes when she issues a spur of the moment invitation to the strange new kid. The world Charlie comes from is much different than Earth. Almost every aspect of a Sentrian's life is under complete government control. There is only one right the intrusive authorities may not violate: that God chooses your soul mate. While on his planet, Charlie never found his One, so when he develops an attraction to Lilly, he is torn. Should he ignore his feelings for the Earthan, or pursue a doomed relationship with the only girl he has ever cared about? His contact with Lilly does not go unnoticed. Involvement with an Earthan is considered blasphemy, and Charlie is condemned as a criminal of the state. The couple is faced with a difficult choice: accept eternal separation or risk everything to stay together.
My Thoughts:
I was really excited about the premise for this book. I love otherworldly heroes, and sci-fi in general. I just felt like there was so much that could have been done with this premise, but the book itself just kind of fell flat for me. I wanted to really like it, but it just seemed stilted or maybe bland?
Just couldn't get into this one..
February 12, 2017
Where do I start
This book kept me thinking I new where the story was going but nope it took another turn, I came across this in the app store for free!! Once I started to read it there was no stopping me reading the others in no time! Loved the style of writing an the author has done a brilliant job in bringing the characters to life.
This book kept me thinking I new where the story was going but nope it took another turn, I came across this in the app store for free!! Once I started to read it there was no stopping me reading the others in no time! Loved the style of writing an the author has done a brilliant job in bringing the characters to life.
April 11, 2015
K.M. Montemayor has taken the term “Star-crossed Lovers” in a different direction than we normally see, and I Loved It! While Charlie is from the planet Sentria, and Liliana is from Earth, this isn’t just an alien/human love story. To me it is Literally a “Star-crossed Lovers” story. You need to read this story to find out why this is so different.
While the main characters are teens/young adults, the story also has some food for thought for adults too. It makes you think about the choices you get to have in life. And, that there are sometimes more than one option to choose from. I’m not sure if that was the intent, but that is the feeling I got from the story.
While the main characters are teens/young adults, the story also has some food for thought for adults too. It makes you think about the choices you get to have in life. And, that there are sometimes more than one option to choose from. I’m not sure if that was the intent, but that is the feeling I got from the story.
July 29, 2014
Copy provied by Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
This story gripped me from the beginning and wouldn't let me go til I read it and purchased the two other books in the series. The characters are very likeable and Charlie Gray is adorable as the awkward alien trying to fit in while fighting a "disgusting" attraction to the "sweaty Earthan", Liliana Garcia. The conclusion of The Circle will leave you desperate for more!
This story gripped me from the beginning and wouldn't let me go til I read it and purchased the two other books in the series. The characters are very likeable and Charlie Gray is adorable as the awkward alien trying to fit in while fighting a "disgusting" attraction to the "sweaty Earthan", Liliana Garcia. The conclusion of The Circle will leave you desperate for more!
September 8, 2013
The two main characters had me hooked from the start. The author painted a vivid picture of the two personalities. This picture made me want to learn more about them as individuals and as a couple. Against many odds, you want the best for this couple. An amazing new author who has me on edge for the second book.
July 28, 2014
I really enjoyed this book, but the whole time I was reading there was something bothering me and I couldn’t put my finger on what it is that is bothering me.
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July 21, 2014
So looking forward to book 2. The ending was just savage.
There were a couple of boring bits but mostly the book was enjoyable. It took me a while to like the characters lilly and Charlie, I still dislike Claire.
All in all a pleasant, easy quick read that isn't taxing on the brain.
There were a couple of boring bits but mostly the book was enjoyable. It took me a while to like the characters lilly and Charlie, I still dislike Claire.
All in all a pleasant, easy quick read that isn't taxing on the brain.
July 29, 2014
I really enjoyed this story. Different and entertaining. I can't wait to read the next book.
March 30, 2022
Lilly’s social life mainly revolves around band practice and her two sophomore band friends who she adopted as her band ‘children’. She takes her ‘children’ out for MacDonalds after most practices, and it is on a quick decision that she invites Charlie, the new kid, to join them. He has sat alone since he arrived at school, and she wants to make him feel included.
Charlie’s mission, unfortunately, involves him having to socialise with the Earthan teenagers, get to know them, join extracurricular clubs. Being musical, he decides to join the marching band, thinking it’ll be an easy way to meet the required criteria. But when the Earthan, Lillian, invites him to hang out, he finds himself on a path leading to friendship, and a much deeper understanding of the Earthans than he ever had before.
This is a novel filled with secrets. Charlie is always keeping something from someone. He is going to band because he likes it, not because he has to. He enjoys spending time with Lillian, not that his parents know of her existence. He is technically an alien – that’s probably the biggest secret he is trying to keep hidden. He leads a double life, pretending to be behaving so his parents leave him alone, and pretending to be a normal teenage boy, so Lillian will spend time with him. Even if he has to duck aside and look up the meaning of a word or term to keep his facade up, he seems determined to keep his secrets hidden.
Lilly has never been social, and yet, suddenly she not only has her band children, but she has another friend. But, Charlie is not a new band child, nor is he really a friend. He might dress strangely, and he may not be what others would consider handsome, but she wants to be more than friends with him. She knows that much for certain. Unfortunately, secrets have a tendency to reveal themselves, and, not that Lilly knew it, but their relationship was doomed from the start.
The idea of soulmates is presented in this novel, but in a strange way. On Charlie’s planet, they believe in the ‘One’, the person you are meant to marry and be with. Once you meet your One, that is it. But, finding the One can be difficult, especially if you’re not particularly interested in doing so. The difference I found, while reading this, is that usually, soulmates are depicted as a wonderful thing, that you may find your soulmate at any point in your life, and while you can’t decide who your soulmate will be, you have freedom around finding them. Finding the One is depicted as a very forced, urgent task. At eighteen, Charlie is already behind, as many marry several years before that if they have found their One. Finding his One is something Charlie is pressured into, something that he needs to do quickly, and it almost destroys the whole idea of soulmates. Charlie doesn’t necessarily want to meet his One, the amount of effort it takes is something he is expected to put into the task, not something he wants to do.
I found the pacing of this story a little strange. I would say that it moves quite slowly, but when I think about it, it doesn’t. At times, several days will go by in the span of a paragraph or two. The writing is laid out, at times, in a very factual way, telling what Charlie and Lilly are doing, without much about the details of anything. There is rarely a moment to pause, to get to know how the characters think, or feel, because the scenes move by so quickly, and I struggled to connect with the characters. I wanted them to have a happy ending, but I wasn’t entirely sure who they actually were.
This is not, in itself, a science fiction novel. It is a forbidden romance, set in the 1980s, and it just so happens that one of the characters comes from outer space. This is an easy book to read, and I definitely enjoyed the time period it was set in. It was refreshing to read a book where the characters weren’t glued to their phones, and the lack of more modern technology really showed itself in the second half of this novel, where things start to get more tense. I was a little disappointed with the ending, because the book is left on such a massive cliff-hanger, there is no way you can leave the story feeling satisfied if you are not planning on buying book 2.
Charlie’s mission, unfortunately, involves him having to socialise with the Earthan teenagers, get to know them, join extracurricular clubs. Being musical, he decides to join the marching band, thinking it’ll be an easy way to meet the required criteria. But when the Earthan, Lillian, invites him to hang out, he finds himself on a path leading to friendship, and a much deeper understanding of the Earthans than he ever had before.
This is a novel filled with secrets. Charlie is always keeping something from someone. He is going to band because he likes it, not because he has to. He enjoys spending time with Lillian, not that his parents know of her existence. He is technically an alien – that’s probably the biggest secret he is trying to keep hidden. He leads a double life, pretending to be behaving so his parents leave him alone, and pretending to be a normal teenage boy, so Lillian will spend time with him. Even if he has to duck aside and look up the meaning of a word or term to keep his facade up, he seems determined to keep his secrets hidden.
Lilly has never been social, and yet, suddenly she not only has her band children, but she has another friend. But, Charlie is not a new band child, nor is he really a friend. He might dress strangely, and he may not be what others would consider handsome, but she wants to be more than friends with him. She knows that much for certain. Unfortunately, secrets have a tendency to reveal themselves, and, not that Lilly knew it, but their relationship was doomed from the start.
The idea of soulmates is presented in this novel, but in a strange way. On Charlie’s planet, they believe in the ‘One’, the person you are meant to marry and be with. Once you meet your One, that is it. But, finding the One can be difficult, especially if you’re not particularly interested in doing so. The difference I found, while reading this, is that usually, soulmates are depicted as a wonderful thing, that you may find your soulmate at any point in your life, and while you can’t decide who your soulmate will be, you have freedom around finding them. Finding the One is depicted as a very forced, urgent task. At eighteen, Charlie is already behind, as many marry several years before that if they have found their One. Finding his One is something Charlie is pressured into, something that he needs to do quickly, and it almost destroys the whole idea of soulmates. Charlie doesn’t necessarily want to meet his One, the amount of effort it takes is something he is expected to put into the task, not something he wants to do.
I found the pacing of this story a little strange. I would say that it moves quite slowly, but when I think about it, it doesn’t. At times, several days will go by in the span of a paragraph or two. The writing is laid out, at times, in a very factual way, telling what Charlie and Lilly are doing, without much about the details of anything. There is rarely a moment to pause, to get to know how the characters think, or feel, because the scenes move by so quickly, and I struggled to connect with the characters. I wanted them to have a happy ending, but I wasn’t entirely sure who they actually were.
This is not, in itself, a science fiction novel. It is a forbidden romance, set in the 1980s, and it just so happens that one of the characters comes from outer space. This is an easy book to read, and I definitely enjoyed the time period it was set in. It was refreshing to read a book where the characters weren’t glued to their phones, and the lack of more modern technology really showed itself in the second half of this novel, where things start to get more tense. I was a little disappointed with the ending, because the book is left on such a massive cliff-hanger, there is no way you can leave the story feeling satisfied if you are not planning on buying book 2.
May 18, 2017
Bleh
I made it 40% into the book before I decided to read the reviews and see if other people were able to finish this. I was surprised how many gave it a good rating. The thing that started triggering on me was the blatant Christian overtone and conservative views through the whole book. Without looking I predicted that it was written by a 50 year old Christian conservative woman that spent time in Texas and, well, sadly I was right.
None of the reviews I read had a problem with the point of views, so it's probably just me. The most accurate review I read was either a one or two star that said the author was lazy, which after making my way all the way to the end to give it a fair review, I agree with.
The author suffers from floating head syndrome, at least I think that's what it's called, where the point of view jumps from one person to another with in the same section. She sections it off between scenes constantly, but not between views, so you jump from protagonist to antagonist and then to the friend within three paragraphs, it gets very tiring trying to figure out who she's talking about all the time.
There is also one point where she says she's going to call the guy one name even though they are in a different place where he has a different name, but then doesn't and then the last sentence does. Then she flips back again, and then back one more time.
The time travel thing doesn't follow through the book. The explanation for them watching Earthans doesn't really make sense if you think about it and the whole thing is written so hum drum. They went to the kitchen. They ate. They went to the car.
Another thing I found annoying was giving her Mexican family American names and a Christmas tree with a star on top. I'm not Mexican, but I have many friends who are and it's like she wanted to add culture to her book but never met a Mexican family in her life, so she made a white family with a Hispanic last names. This book felt so much like Christian conservative propaganda to me that it makes me wonder how people don't see it.
I made it 40% into the book before I decided to read the reviews and see if other people were able to finish this. I was surprised how many gave it a good rating. The thing that started triggering on me was the blatant Christian overtone and conservative views through the whole book. Without looking I predicted that it was written by a 50 year old Christian conservative woman that spent time in Texas and, well, sadly I was right.
None of the reviews I read had a problem with the point of views, so it's probably just me. The most accurate review I read was either a one or two star that said the author was lazy, which after making my way all the way to the end to give it a fair review, I agree with.
The author suffers from floating head syndrome, at least I think that's what it's called, where the point of view jumps from one person to another with in the same section. She sections it off between scenes constantly, but not between views, so you jump from protagonist to antagonist and then to the friend within three paragraphs, it gets very tiring trying to figure out who she's talking about all the time.
There is also one point where she says she's going to call the guy one name even though they are in a different place where he has a different name, but then doesn't and then the last sentence does. Then she flips back again, and then back one more time.
The time travel thing doesn't follow through the book. The explanation for them watching Earthans doesn't really make sense if you think about it and the whole thing is written so hum drum. They went to the kitchen. They ate. They went to the car.
Another thing I found annoying was giving her Mexican family American names and a Christmas tree with a star on top. I'm not Mexican, but I have many friends who are and it's like she wanted to add culture to her book but never met a Mexican family in her life, so she made a white family with a Hispanic last names. This book felt so much like Christian conservative propaganda to me that it makes me wonder how people don't see it.
November 6, 2017
While this was an easy read for me, I felt it lacked something that made it extra special. I wasn’t too connected to the characters and it seemed to me like the main male character was a bit of a Gary Stu. That said, I did enjoy the story and it did get better as it went on. Do I want to read the next book in the series? I’m not sure, possibly. I’m not jumping to buy it, though. Easy read, enjoyable but ultimately forgettable.
March 14, 2020
Cleverly wrapping teen romance with sci-fi
I was not expecting much more than a typical teen/coming of age and was pleasantly and quickly drawn into this well paced and thoughtful journey.
As an almost atheist, for me, the inclusion of religion was balanced nicely with the plot. It seems an integral part of the story without being overwhelming, or feeling like being preached at.
I really need to see if there is a twist - I was quite ready for one!
I was not expecting much more than a typical teen/coming of age and was pleasantly and quickly drawn into this well paced and thoughtful journey.
As an almost atheist, for me, the inclusion of religion was balanced nicely with the plot. It seems an integral part of the story without being overwhelming, or feeling like being preached at.
I really need to see if there is a twist - I was quite ready for one!
June 21, 2017
Set in the 80's, and a decent story-line.
The beginning was good and as it gets closer to the ending too.
The middle has some good parts too, but also falters a little.
There's a few typos, but I could make sense of what certain sentences were meant to be.
Romance with forbidden love.
The characters were good and, well, there could have been a bit more substance to some.
The beginning was good and as it gets closer to the ending too.
The middle has some good parts too, but also falters a little.
There's a few typos, but I could make sense of what certain sentences were meant to be.
Romance with forbidden love.
The characters were good and, well, there could have been a bit more substance to some.
September 26, 2017
I loved this book however....
The book has an abrupt ending, I bought the next book and it had an editing issue with it that made the book jump forward. The story is spoiled for me which is sad as the writing quality is very good.
The book has an abrupt ending, I bought the next book and it had an editing issue with it that made the book jump forward. The story is spoiled for me which is sad as the writing quality is very good.
March 31, 2020
This is a great book
This book has some great storyline. I can't wait to read the other books to it. The characters are likeable their story is sweet but it better have a happy ending or I'll pull back my good opinion.
This book has some great storyline. I can't wait to read the other books to it. The characters are likeable their story is sweet but it better have a happy ending or I'll pull back my good opinion.
October 28, 2022
An interesting well written book
This book is well worth a read.
It tells the tale of Charlie an alien who falls in,love with Lilly an earthling.
It is very dystopian and a great book to read.
I haven't decided whether or not to read the next 3 books in the set yet?????
This book is well worth a read.
It tells the tale of Charlie an alien who falls in,love with Lilly an earthling.
It is very dystopian and a great book to read.
I haven't decided whether or not to read the next 3 books in the set yet?????
June 11, 2017
Lo disfrute
Siento que pudo ser más descriptivo en la cultura alíen. El final me gustó. Leeré el segundo, la historia se disfruta.
Siento que pudo ser más descriptivo en la cultura alíen. El final me gustó. Leeré el segundo, la historia se disfruta.
December 31, 2017
Good read!
Th story line certainly gives you something to think about. Parallel universes are an interesting thought. I really liked it.
Th story line certainly gives you something to think about. Parallel universes are an interesting thought. I really liked it.
July 26, 2018
A great read
A thoroughly immersive story line. I found i didn't want to put it down.
I have to read the next book, hopefully to find things improve for the main characters
A thoroughly immersive story line. I found i didn't want to put it down.
I have to read the next book, hopefully to find things improve for the main characters
July 28, 2018
Was actually one of my favorite books not that well known but truly good. I can't wait to read the next one.
August 22, 2018
Interesting book, not what I expected. Took a while for me to get into the storyline but soon it is difficult to put it down. You need to read this with an open mind.
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