** Spoilers **
I do not like the way that this book starts off.
Anita, Gray's wife, is a alcoholic vampire? Really?
There were way too many inconsistencies between the first book and the second.
I understand that you could read one book without the other
BUT, whatever was said in the first book, should be upheld in the second.
Dom said that his father had four sons from Four different women in book one, Take Me.
However, in book two, Gray states that Luc and Dom have the same mother:
"He smiled a cruel smile as he turned to look at her. “My father loved my mother just not
enough to keep from fucking other women. Vasilius is only a year younger than me. He and Luc are
almost the same age. Grayson was born a month after me.
All different mothers.” _Chapter 7 of book one, Take Me
But in Tempting Gray_ Chapter 15
"He and Dom had always been close in their own way. They hadn’t shared many
personal conversations over the years, but that was only because it wasn’t necessary.
Dom was only thirteen months older than Gray. Their father had gotten Diane, his bruid,
pregnant for the first time. That son would bear the name Dominic. Four months after
Dominic was born, some business took his father, Argonzo, out to Turkey where he
quickly thought himself in love with a peasant vampire named Aysel. He’d bedded her,
gotten her pregnant with Gray. Only the oldest and the youngest brother were born
from Diane—Dominic and Lucas."
Also, in book 1, it was mentioned that Grayson owned his own security company.
However, in Grayson's book, Tempting Gray, he has a boss(Gray called in this mess to his boss—a woman he’d never want to be on the wrong end of—TJ."_Chapter 1?
Really?
"After Felicity left the estate last night, he’d called his brother Grayson to look into her.
Grayson owned a security company that specialized in protecting vampires and weres.
Some people always had targets on their back and no one, not even the immortal could always escape a murder attempt.
Grayson and his team did excellent work but something his brother excelled at was gathering intel."_Take Me Chapter 5 second part..
- In book 1, Take Me, Dom states that he and his brother Luc can talk in Turkish
but Grayson can not:
"His brother looked pissed, his jaw clenched and working left and right. “Really? Now you?”
“Sen neden bahsediyorsun?” What are you doing, he asked falling back into his old Turkish
language.
Gray shook his head. “That’s Luc that can speak Turkish.” He bent low at the knees.
“Remember, I come from another mother? Mine didn’t come from Turkey, brother.”
Dom squeezed his eyes shut. “Fuck, I’m sorry, Gray. I’m shitfaced.” _Book 1 Take Me Chapter 12.
- However, in Book 2, Grayson is speaking Turkish:
"It wasn’t until after her footsteps faded away and she disappeared from view that he
realized he’d fallen back on his native Turkish tongue"_Tempting Gray Chapter 11
An Editor and a Proof Reader should have read the first and second book for those discrepancies
I didn't like the way Grayson talked to Arabella in chapter 11 Tempting Gray,
it reminded me too much of how domineering Dom was in book one:
"“Go now, Arabella. Do not disobey me.” He pushed her shoulder enough to get her
feet moving. Her jaw wavered up in down like she wanted to say something. “Now!” he
said. It wasn’t until after her footsteps faded away and she disappeared from view that he
realized he’d fallen back on his native Turkish tongue. The unusual lapse would have to
be considered later though. For now…".
That did not fit Grayson's character at all.
Like I said, There were too many inconsistencies between book 1 and 2,
However, the story line for book 2 was "slightly" better.