While I love this series, this was by far my least favorite book of the bunch.
The highlight of this book was absolutely Derek and his parents, along with the occasional pop up of a character from the past books.
The story was very choppy, as there were gaps in it that should have been filled with information to make Rylie a more likeable and believable character.
Her relationship with Caleb, which played such a vital role in who she becomes, was not addressed in a way that answered any of the questions that it left us with, nor outlined this pivotal point in her life that caused such a drastic change in who she was. She played the POOR ME routine through most of the book, yet we never quite understand why she even stayed with him. Instead, it was inconsistent in its plot, which left Rylie very inconsistent in her behavior.
I could not get behind her at all, but instead found myself hoping that Derek just moved on to someone else. She did things that were completely contradictory to who she portrayed herself to be, then quickly reversed it and pushed Derek away. His patience, understanding and gentle hand were more than swoon worthy, and he had some of his own individual moments that made you realize just how special he was.
The issue with Derek's "friend," who made Rylie uncomfortable, was the beginning of the end for me where this girl was concerned. The fact she never told Derek about her uneasiness,but asked him numerous times to stay with her, then unloaded her past in front of him and his parents at a specific moment, also led to more behavior that made no sense.
While Rylie appeared to state that she behaved a certain way and changed for a specific reason, none of that truly played out when the times were necessary, but, instead, she reverted to a different person that did not comport with who she was being painted as.
One particular storyline inconsistency was regarding Rylie's house and her master bedroom. Time was taken to address her room being taken over by a king size bed, but that she will never get a smaller one because she loves her bed...then later on...her bed is a queen when Derek takes her there. Minor...sure, but bothersome, yes, because the inconsistency was a consistent flow for the story and the character of Rylie.
I had high hopes for this book because I truly loved the times Derek made an appearance in the other books, and he did not disappoint in this book in terms of enjoying seeing the person he was and could continue to grow to be. What fell short for me was Rylie's inconsistency and the large gaps in time and information that appeared to be necessary to make this story complete, whole and flow in a more cohesive manner.
Still love this series, but this particular story was not a winner for me.