I had expected that a book on papyrus would be interesting, especially given my love of Ancient Egypt. Maybe it would have been if the author was a decent writer or had a decent editor, but as it stands this book was a joke.
My generic gripe is that it was poorly written. The author is all over the place with his writing, with story/informational flow being optional. There are paragraphs inserted that are essentially unrelated to the topic at hand, as if the author/editor forgot to remove them from earlier drafts. Far too often I was left scratching my head as to how we were suddenly on this topic/tangent that added absolutely nothing to the topic at hand or the book overall. Disjointed is probably too kind an adjective for this book.
I also found so many errors in the book that were actually laughable. As in I literally laughed out loud many times. I ended up abandoning the book (life is too short for this crap) but here are a few favorites from before I did that:
The most common large animals in African swamps are the amphibians, such as crocodiles and hippos..." P20
Crocodiles and hippos...amphibians. WTF? Even if you don't have a biology degree, I bet you do have Google. For fuck's sake neither one is even an amphibian, he didn't get one right. Sigh. I may give you "amphibious" but not a fucking amphibian. For reference: crocs are reptiles and hippos are mammals. Ugh.
So began the tragic exodus made famous by Wordsworth's epic poem Evangeline..." P60
I just can't with this guy. Evangeline was written by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow. I'm guessing the whole Wadsworth/Wordsworth screwed him up but again, may I offer Google?
Yet the Acadians remained God-fearing, morally pure individuals with large families in which illegitimate children were scarce. Outsiders found them generally free of malice and vengeance; they were, like the marsh people in Egypt, cheerful, light-hearted, and good." p62
You may be asking yourself "Acadians? I thought this was in Egypt?" Oh my friend, it is but this author felt it was a good idea to constantly compare the marsh people of Egypt to his own family tree of Acadians. FFS. I particularly love that he claims moral purity for these people, as if 1) anyone is and 2) everyone's morals are the same. This whole paragraph sounds like a freaking Mormon pamphlet or something. I honestly cannot take someone or their book seriously when they say things, in a non-fiction work about EGYPT, that this other group was "morally pure" and "good" etc. Just go away.
That there may be some basis for this theory comes from a story released in 2009 by a BBC news team. After examining the remains of Cleopatra's sister Princess Arsinoe, found in Ephesus, Turkey, Hilke Thuer of the Austrian Academy of Sciences concluded that the evidence indicated that the mother of the two women had African facial features." P83
There's so much to unpack here. First of all, this paragraph, despite the "that there may be some basis" crap, does not support the previous paragraphs and came out of nowhere. (Essentially he mentions that the "progenitors of Egypt" could have come from Africa. Please, someone tell him where the fuck Egypt is.) WHY does this have anything to do with the Ptolemies that were ruling thousands of years later?
As for Cleopatra's sister:
1) There is no evidence it is Arsinoe, in fact the age of the body indicates it pretty much cannot be.
2) The body found has NO SKULL. I repeat, no HEAD, which is where such a claim would be confirmed. It was taken in the early 1900s and so they had to work from secondhand information.
3) Arsinoe is thought to potentially be Cleopatra's half sister, only sharing the same father.
The author using this one brief article that itself is likely wholly wrong about Cleopatra's sister to support a theory that need not even be in the book, which also references Egypt as if it isn't even on the continent of Africa, pretty much tells me all I need to know about this book.
Oy, what a mess.