*I read this book via my Kindle Unlimited Subscription. I received NO compensation for this review and the opinions expressed are entirely my own.*
This was a rough zombie read for me. To complete my full disclosure, I am aware that this author has multiple pen names in other genres. I was curious when I saw him post under his erotica pen name this zombie book. I'm a big zombie fan, but I'm also a very picky zombie fan. I have HUGE pet peeves that are very dominant in the genre.
I was going to label this book a 2 star when I was midway done. The zombie scenes seemed like they were working for me--until they didn't. The author couldn't make up his mind if he wanted to write normal, Romero zombies, or the 'fast zombie' which is actually a metaphor for the youth of america's short attention span. (See, like I said, zombie fan I even know metaphors.) To further on the 'fast zombie' thing, he was mimicking scenes from World War Z. I've seen that movie enough to know when it's been used. I would've liked to see him use his own mythology, which I had high hopes for. I mean the start of the zombie virus was totally brilliant. A terrorist attack. I was like YAY! Something good! I was in it. Then the warning flags came up. The first women we see are stupid, and in the sex trade.
It didn't get much better. Once the plague was in full swing, and group of survivors were all hunkered down in the shipping warehouse of a bookstore. All the living females were crying, curled up in a ball, and then given tasks you would give--woman--in the 1950's!!!! Why couldn't a woman stand watch? Why couldn't you allow a woman to have a gun and defend the fort?
Oh, that's not all.
Then the women started to offer themselves up to all the big, strong men, in return for keeping them safe.
-headdesk-
What! You're kidding me right? I was so livid I wanted to stop, but I kept reading. Then the author has a female character give a monologue for her actions:
“You know, we think we’re civilized. We think we’ve evolved in the thousands of years man has walked the earth. Women have more independence and have been completely empowered – and yet – within twenty four hours of the world going to hell, we revert back to those base animal instincts that we’ve always inherited but learned to suppress,” she said. “Like the instinctive need to find a mate, and to reproduce, the instinct to survive is the strongest one mankind has, and Jillian is just doing what women have done for thousands of years. She’s drawn to the strongest male because it’s her best chance of protection and survival – and she’s appealing to him in the one way men are instinctively created to respond. She’s offering him her body, in the hope he will want her and will protect her. It’s what every woman instinctively craves,” Glenda confessed. 33% Kindle Edition
So yeah. Apparently we are all going to revert to submissive cave women in the zombie apocalypse leave all our loved ones behind and not even attempt to learn how to fight.
I don’t know what women this dude knows, but I personally will be fighting for my life! And teaching my daughter to do the same! But then the author has this inconsistent thing where this same chick knows how to use a high powered rifle and mows down a row of zombies. But then skip to later on where all these women were killed and assaulted? By like two bikers. REALLY?
I could go on and continue how the other girl introduced is in her 20’s and acts like she’s 16 and then they are going to Garden’s Eden aka: The Garden of Eden (The girl says all swoony eyed). Then compound that with the book ending with the lone girl standing ready to hop in the sack with the guy she met like 48 hours ago.
Then you have the bad zombie scenes, most men behaving like unevolved pigs and honestly I’m not sure why this author is being compared to any big name in the industry because he’s lacking BIG TIME! So the more I had to mull it over, the more I wish I could give this book negative stars, and that is a first. I’m disappointed that either this author hates women or really views them as weak, submissive, and incapable of holding their own in the zombie plague. This also needed a few more rounds of editing and perhaps a few critiques.