✅ Pace ✅ Quick read ✅ Cute ✅(🆗) Plot ✅(🆗) Characters (lacked depth) ✅🆗 Romance ❗️❗️Trigger warnings: mentions of miscarriage, car accident, mild PTSD
I will keep this one quite short.
It is not a bad story, as far as Dramione fanfictions go, but it was simple, predictable, and a little shallow. The pace is good, thankfully, making it easy to get into the story, but after a while, I got a little bored, waiting for something more to happen. The second half dragged on a little bit. It was all about Hermione and Draco, which is fine, but there was no real plot, or even sub-plot, besides them hooking up and realizing they loved each other (and being stubborn and obtuse about it).
The characters were the usual, and I was hoping for more depth, especially when it came to Draco. His relationship with Hermione started with lust and physical attraction, and evolved into romantic feelings, but I didn’t see the reason for that evolution. They slept together a few times, and then they acted jealous and admitted to themselves that they had feelings for each other, but it was a case of telling and not showing.
Still, it was a cute Dramione overall, with some satisfying Ron-bashing that didn't get out of hand.