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The McCauley Brothers #3
Ruining Mr. Perfect
It's Not Easy Being Right...
Vanessa Campbell is a CPA by day and a perfectionist by night. She's fit, successful... and decidedly lonely. She can't stop thinking about the youngest McCauley brother, Cameron. He's just like her: smart, attractive, and usually right — except when dealing with her.
...But Someone's Got To Do It.
Cameron McCauley likes Vanessa a little too well. She's a blond goddess with a razor-sharp tongue. She hates to be wrong, just like him. But she can hold a grudge and is stubborn to a fault — also like him.
A past misunderstanding has them rubbing each other the wrong way. Cam is dying to shake Vanessa up — get her to let loose. But if he succeeds, can his heart handle it?
Vanessa Campbell is a CPA by day and a perfectionist by night. She's fit, successful... and decidedly lonely. She can't stop thinking about the youngest McCauley brother, Cameron. He's just like her: smart, attractive, and usually right — except when dealing with her.
...But Someone's Got To Do It.
Cameron McCauley likes Vanessa a little too well. She's a blond goddess with a razor-sharp tongue. She hates to be wrong, just like him. But she can hold a grudge and is stubborn to a fault — also like him.
A past misunderstanding has them rubbing each other the wrong way. Cam is dying to shake Vanessa up — get her to let loose. But if he succeeds, can his heart handle it?
352 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published October 7, 2014
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Marie Harte
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Caffeine addict, boy referee, and romance aficionado, New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Marie Harte has over 100 books published with more constantly on the way. She’s a confessed bibliophile and devotee of action movies. Whether hiking in Central Oregon, biking around town, or hanging at the local tea shop, she’s constantly plotting to give everyone a happily ever after. Visit http://marieharte.com and fall in love.
Caffeine addict, boy referee, and romance aficionado, New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Marie Harte has over 100 books published with more constantly on the way. She’s a confessed bibliophile and devotee of action movies. Whether hiking in Central Oregon, biking around town, or hanging at the local tea shop, she’s constantly plotting to give everyone a happily ever after. Visit http://marieharte.com and fall in love.
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January 6, 2018
So I sort of started this series out of order which I think is like a reading sin or something but hey, I saw this book on hoopla and I just had to have it. I didn't even think about where it was within whatever series it was in. I saw the cover. I saw how long the audio was. I got it. Pretty simple stuff but now that I did start it out of order I might as well continue reading this series that way - so I will definitely move to book 2 then go to book 1. THEN maybe one day and one year I will actually reread this series in the correct order. MAYBE.
Anyhooo, Ruining Mr. Perfect is about Cameron and Vanessa - or was it? I didn't really get that it was all about them and their relationship. To me it seemed like this book was more about Cameron's overall family and whatever was going on between his parents. Hopefully the next two books might clear this whole family thing up?
Now don't get me wrong, I still loved the book but I will admit that I was a little confused. This is obviously all my fault since I didn't read the first book nor the second book. But trust me, I will redeem myself one day guys!
I really liked Vanessa and Cameron and I liked their relationship. I didn't really like the audio because I thought whoever was reading it was just annoying af. So whenever I get the next two books I'll just stick to actually reading them.
Anyhooo, Ruining Mr. Perfect is about Cameron and Vanessa - or was it? I didn't really get that it was all about them and their relationship. To me it seemed like this book was more about Cameron's overall family and whatever was going on between his parents. Hopefully the next two books might clear this whole family thing up?
Now don't get me wrong, I still loved the book but I will admit that I was a little confused. This is obviously all my fault since I didn't read the first book nor the second book. But trust me, I will redeem myself one day guys!
I really liked Vanessa and Cameron and I liked their relationship. I didn't really like the audio because I thought whoever was reading it was just annoying af. So whenever I get the next two books I'll just stick to actually reading them.
October 19, 2014
~~3.75 HEARTS~~
I felt like Cameron got cheated out of his own book. This book is supposed to be about the youngest McCauley brother but it wasn't focused soley on Cameron & Vanessa. I felt like it was focused more on what was going on around them mainly Cameron's parents. This was still an enjoyable read even though I liked the first 2 books more.
December 18, 2014
Vanessa Campbell is one of the tougher girls of the group. She’s a perfectionist and always has to be right. With the way she was brought up, Vanessa didn’t receive love or attention from her parents and that has really affected how she runs her own life. However, RUINING MR. PERFECT shows that Vanessa is absolutely capable of falling in love. The only problem is, she doesn’t know how to handle it.
Cameron McCauley is the sensitive one. He’s the smart, sexy and successful hottie in a suit that can charm the pants off everyone. So it’s really no surprise when the sexual tension between Vanessa and Cam heats up quick.
What I love about this book is the way Harte made it all about the hero and the heroine. So many books have conflicts that are based on just miscommunication, which I’ll admit happens here. However, I didn’t feel annoyed as I usually do with those kinds of easily-solved problems with this one. I think it’s because Harte does a fabulous job of showing the reader where Vanessa is coming from and nicely displays how afraid she is. By the end, you’re rooting for her character as she makes those grand leaps that I don’t think I’d be strong enough to do, so it’s nice when the reader can relate to character’s emotions and fears.
Of course, Harte doesn’t stray from the sexiness – one of my favorite things about this series. And yet, with all the smoking hot sex scenes in this book, Harte makes each one important in developing their relationship. The one that absolutely killed me is when Vanessa breaks into him home and waits for him to get back into the gym. There’s not a lot of passionate words there, but the scene definitely packs an emotional punch and nearly broke my heart in the process.
Something different that was added in is the ups and downs of Bitsy and Pop or better known as Beth and James, the boys’ parents. It may come as a shock to many but they are on the rocks and everything they experience gets hard before it can get better. Kudos to Harte who is not only able to balance TWO romances well in one book, but to give their parents the happily-ever-after that they deserve.
Next up is Mike’s book and if the last chapter of the book is anything to go by, it’s definitely going to be a thrill to read. I am dying for Mike and Del to be together. Since this series is a little more on the sexier side, it reminds me a lot of Toni Blake’s Destiny series that definitely burns up the sheets. And yet, the humor and particularly Vanessa and Cameron’s personality in this book, reminds me a lot of Julie James’ style as well. If you’re a fan of either of them, you.must.read.this.series!
Favorite Quote:
“Man, I’m falling for you, Cameron McCauley. And just this one, I don’t want to be right about being so wrong for you.”
*ARC provided by publisher
October 10, 2014
Slick‘s review posted on Guilty Pleasures Book Reviews
4.5 STARS
Review copy provided for an honest review
There’s something special when two people are made for each other and that’s exactly how I feel about the hero and heroine in Marie Harte’s Ruining Mr. Perfect. Both are goal oriented, financial geniuses, exercise fiends, and health conscious. They pretty much are perfect for one another except they both like to be right and they both have some issues stemming from their childhoods. An excellent cast of characters that will charm you, a plot that throws a monkey wrench into 5 and 10 year plans, panty dropping sizzling sex scenes, and two stubborn people learning to yield once in a while makes this one entertaining and sexy story.
Cameron McCauley is cut from a different cloth than his brothers and his father. He respects them immensely but Cam is more of a thinker and while he appreciates the work they do it was never something he wanted for himself. He’s always gone after what he wants but he’s held back from Vanessa the beautiful blond that moved in next door to his oldest brother but after a shared kiss on Christmas day he’s decided it is time to make a move problem is Vanessa is tough and prickly and he knows he has to approach her just right in order to finally go after what he wants.
I loved watching these two come together and begin to figure out how right they were for one another. Because of their shared interests they just meshed but their competitive sides reared up occasionally giving them grief. To top it off Cameron has always felt like he needed to prove himself to everyone so at times he pushes a little too hard and Vanessa grew up devoid of human contact and emotion so she is completely self sufficient which makes it difficult for her to let anyone do anything for her and for her to trust they will do it. At times she drove me a little crazy but I really did understand her issues.
This author always writes hot, steamy, down and dirty sex scenes and these two tear up the sheets and pretty much every available surface. The problem is they often use sex to get out of having discussions they need to have because they both realize how easily the other becomes distracted.
While the majority of this book is Cameron and Vanessa trying to navigate the relationship waters there are a couple of other side stories going on which just adds to an already fantastic book. One of the stories directly impacts Cameron and Vanessa as they both feel they were right in the way they handled the situation.
From the very first book I have been in love with the McCauley family and these characters. Ruining Mr. Perfect was an amazing addition to a strong series but I’m putting it out there, I can’t WAIT to see what happens next because I have a feeling the next book is going to be even better.
4.5 STARS
Review copy provided for an honest review
There’s something special when two people are made for each other and that’s exactly how I feel about the hero and heroine in Marie Harte’s Ruining Mr. Perfect. Both are goal oriented, financial geniuses, exercise fiends, and health conscious. They pretty much are perfect for one another except they both like to be right and they both have some issues stemming from their childhoods. An excellent cast of characters that will charm you, a plot that throws a monkey wrench into 5 and 10 year plans, panty dropping sizzling sex scenes, and two stubborn people learning to yield once in a while makes this one entertaining and sexy story.
Cameron McCauley is cut from a different cloth than his brothers and his father. He respects them immensely but Cam is more of a thinker and while he appreciates the work they do it was never something he wanted for himself. He’s always gone after what he wants but he’s held back from Vanessa the beautiful blond that moved in next door to his oldest brother but after a shared kiss on Christmas day he’s decided it is time to make a move problem is Vanessa is tough and prickly and he knows he has to approach her just right in order to finally go after what he wants.
I loved watching these two come together and begin to figure out how right they were for one another. Because of their shared interests they just meshed but their competitive sides reared up occasionally giving them grief. To top it off Cameron has always felt like he needed to prove himself to everyone so at times he pushes a little too hard and Vanessa grew up devoid of human contact and emotion so she is completely self sufficient which makes it difficult for her to let anyone do anything for her and for her to trust they will do it. At times she drove me a little crazy but I really did understand her issues.
This author always writes hot, steamy, down and dirty sex scenes and these two tear up the sheets and pretty much every available surface. The problem is they often use sex to get out of having discussions they need to have because they both realize how easily the other becomes distracted.
While the majority of this book is Cameron and Vanessa trying to navigate the relationship waters there are a couple of other side stories going on which just adds to an already fantastic book. One of the stories directly impacts Cameron and Vanessa as they both feel they were right in the way they handled the situation.
From the very first book I have been in love with the McCauley family and these characters. Ruining Mr. Perfect was an amazing addition to a strong series but I’m putting it out there, I can’t WAIT to see what happens next because I have a feeling the next book is going to be even better.
November 28, 2016
Well I have to say it was good but not my favorite, it was the first that had multiple couples.
- The hero and heroine were too much alike yet they had their differences, like the heroine she looked to me that she had something in common with Brody the hero f the previous book, and that is when in a fix they prefer to deal with it on their own and this happened a lot in this book, were she either avoid the hero or ask for some space.
- Believe it or not I liked the parents part more than the main couple, yeah the beginning wasn't that sunny, but with the progress it took I just looked forward to the next part they will be mentioned. Loved the jealousy, the date, and everything.
- Loved the Del parts can't wait to read the next book, I liked her family especially her dad.
- I think the reason I didn't like this book too much is that it has too much baggage, like the emotional parts the misunderstandings, the lack of communication,
- This is the first book that makes me remember that some books teach you a certain morale, and for this one the morale was communication, nothing gets across or accomplished if there was none.
- And don't let me start with the epilogue, it was AMAZING!! just hilarious XD it left me tingly with anticipation for the next book ^^
Overall, *thumbs side-ways*
- The hero and heroine were too much alike yet they had their differences, like the heroine she looked to me that she had something in common with Brody the hero f the previous book, and that is when in a fix they prefer to deal with it on their own and this happened a lot in this book, were she either avoid the hero or ask for some space.
- Believe it or not I liked the parents part more than the main couple, yeah the beginning wasn't that sunny, but with the progress it took I just looked forward to the next part they will be mentioned. Loved the jealousy, the date, and everything.
- Loved the Del parts can't wait to read the next book, I liked her family especially her dad.
- I think the reason I didn't like this book too much is that it has too much baggage, like the emotional parts the misunderstandings, the lack of communication,
- This is the first book that makes me remember that some books teach you a certain morale, and for this one the morale was communication, nothing gets across or accomplished if there was none.
- And don't let me start with the epilogue, it was AMAZING!! just hilarious XD it left me tingly with anticipation for the next book ^^
Overall, *thumbs side-ways*
October 4, 2018
This was a match I was excited for, although the next one is the one I've been dying to read. Loved the ending so hard! Miss Controlling got exactly what she needed with the perfect guy for her.
March 24, 2016
I had soooooooooooo high expectations for this book. I mean, it was always on the back of my mind and I'm always trying to find the opportunity to read it. Well, now that I did I am hugely disappointed..
Ruining Mr. Perfect is the kind of story where so much is happening at the same time I felt my own mind filled with noise. The multiple stories going in it did not help either.. There was the main story of Vanessa and Cameron, then Cameron's father and mother then what I think is the beginnings of Mike's story with Delilah, I just couldn't handle that many plots at the same time..
Also, Vanessa and Cameron are cheesy. What I appreciated about Vanessa was her strong will and determination but I'm not sure about her and Cameron together.. They were fine at the beginning but then after they got together the first time the only good part of their story was the sex scenes. I couldn't care less about what is happening to them.. it was like poof! spark gone!
Ruining Mr. Perfect is the kind of story where so much is happening at the same time I felt my own mind filled with noise. The multiple stories going in it did not help either.. There was the main story of Vanessa and Cameron, then Cameron's father and mother then what I think is the beginnings of Mike's story with Delilah, I just couldn't handle that many plots at the same time..
Also, Vanessa and Cameron are cheesy. What I appreciated about Vanessa was her strong will and determination but I'm not sure about her and Cameron together.. They were fine at the beginning but then after they got together the first time the only good part of their story was the sex scenes. I couldn't care less about what is happening to them.. it was like poof! spark gone!
August 10, 2018
Cameron & Vanessa have had a simmering "thing" since the first book in the series, which they are finally acting on in this book! Cameron is all in from the start, but Vanessa is skittish & keeps waiting for the bomb to drop & things to be over. Cameron is as much of an alpha as his brothers physically, but is more intellectual. Vanessa is more no-nonsense than the previous heroines in this series. There is a secondary story about the McCauley parents that has continued over from the last book, as well as the start of a new relationship for the oldest brother Mike, so I would suggest reading the whole series in order. Loved this one, too!
December 13, 2014
Overall rating: 4.5 stars!!
Triggers:
Cheating:
Love triangle:
Sex with om/ow:
HEA:
My review:
Since the beginning of this series I always knew there was something brewing between our little Vanessa and Cameron. This was a very cute and sweet romance. Very little drama which I enjoyed and although not as much steam as the last book, it still fit. I loved both of the main characters.
Also, although I did appreciate the side romance of James and Beth - I wish it was resolved a little bit. But it was still sweet.
I can't wait for Mike's story!!! :D
Triggers:
Cheating:
Love triangle:
Sex with om/ow:
HEA:
My review:
Since the beginning of this series I always knew there was something brewing between our little Vanessa and Cameron. This was a very cute and sweet romance. Very little drama which I enjoyed and although not as much steam as the last book, it still fit. I loved both of the main characters.
Also, although I did appreciate the side romance of James and Beth - I wish it was resolved a little bit. But it was still sweet.
I can't wait for Mike's story!!! :D
January 1, 2016
I wasn't that impressed with this installment. To me, it didn't make sense to put the two cerebral types together. I couldn't see what made them spark! Vanessa has had an aloof thing going for the entire series and falling in love didn't soften it like it should have! Cameron was also a bit of a drama prince, and wound up really hurting Vanessa in the process! Not to mention, they were pretty stupid in thinking that only the Pill would protect them from pregnancy! It was just asking for trouble when I read that! All in all, this was the weak link in the series for me.
February 3, 2018
Cameron and Vanessa's story is hilarious. Vanessa is so controlled and has a plan for her life and future. Though Cameron has a plan, his McCauley upbringing has taught him to go with the flow a little better than Vanessa. Once these two decide they want to be together they dive right in, but stumble over a few things as they go.
Vanessa's penchant for speaking the truth and telling her version of what's right cause a few problems with their relationship. Cameron knows what he wants, and it's Vanessa. He just hast to get around a few of her barriers to get her to the same place.
I loved snippets of James and Beth's relationship, as well as getting more insight into Del, J.T. and Liam Webster, as well as the crew at the shop. I can't wait to dive into that series as well as the Donnigans.
I don't know what took me so long to get into this series. I love rom-coms and this series is right up my alley.
Vanessa's penchant for speaking the truth and telling her version of what's right cause a few problems with their relationship. Cameron knows what he wants, and it's Vanessa. He just hast to get around a few of her barriers to get her to the same place.
I loved snippets of James and Beth's relationship, as well as getting more insight into Del, J.T. and Liam Webster, as well as the crew at the shop. I can't wait to dive into that series as well as the Donnigans.
I don't know what took me so long to get into this series. I love rom-coms and this series is right up my alley.
July 27, 2017
I'm enjoying this series.
This is Vanessa and Cam's book and we get to see how their on again off again relationship plays out. We also get a peek at Cam's parents and what went wrong with their marriage as well as a glimpse at Vanessa's parents.
4 stars
This is Vanessa and Cam's book and we get to see how their on again off again relationship plays out. We also get a peek at Cam's parents and what went wrong with their marriage as well as a glimpse at Vanessa's parents.
4 stars
January 9, 2019
My favorite book in this series so far. I loved Vanessa and her little predicament, though Cam's reaction pissed me off. And the two of them are on fire.
May 3, 2019
The title of this one does not make sense to me. Additionally, I felt like too much time was spent on Cameron’s parents and it kind of detracted from the central story.
October 7, 2014
Oh god. It’s scary how enamored I am with these brothers, really. I even come to wish there were a few more of them to go for future books, just so I wouldn’t have to leave them and their family dynamics so soon. And yes, even though the next book is months away, I said ‘soon’.
If I have to be completely honest, I didn’t know how Cam and Vanessa was going to work. I had a feeling and enough confidence in Marie Harte’s writing that she’d make them work, but I just couldn’t see the how. I like my romances best on the ‘opposites attract’ side. The more they bicker, the better and sexier. And though Cam and Vanessa did their fair share of bickering, thanks to Vanessa’s constant need to be right and her extremely blatant ways and Cam’s equal insistence on being the right one and his desire to be respected and needed, they were still too alike. Was I wrong? Hey, I’m not too proud to say I was. And in my defense, I knew Marie Harte was going to make it work. Didn’t I just say it? And she actually opened my eyes up to new possibilities in romance, a world where too alike couples can make things work and be damn sexy doing it too.
With the first two books, the heroes and heroines spending so much time together and being so close, I had a great chance to get to know them and what to expect from their stories. With Cam and Vanessa though, because of the kind of people they were, it was hard to anticipate exactly what I would get. It might’ve been scary, but their story flew so smoothly that all my worries melted away from the first chapter. Sure, Vanessa was pragmatic and even cold at times, and extremely blunt bordering on annoying in some cases, but she had her reasons for being so. When I realized where she came from-we were hinted at her family life in previous books- I couldn’t fault her for being a little too logical. In fact, I respected her ability to filter her emotions and analyze situations and-contrary to what she felt about herself- her inner softness and her clear devotion to those she truly loves. And then there was Cam, with his healthier and more serious look at life that set him aside from his usually playful and lighthearted brothers. But Cam, with his unMcCauley ways, he was also very charming, attentive, caring, and with the exceptions of a few times, quite understanding. So I let him get away with his silly side that emerged a few times. He had his hangups too, and that only made him more relatable, and that, in turn, made him a good hero in my book. Or in Marie Harte’s. Semantics.
As much as Cam and Vanessa’s story was sexy, nicely told, charming and cute, I also liked the subplot involving the Mama and Papa McCauley. They had their little story going on for two books now, and normally I might’ve preferred to give my undivided attention to the current hero and heroine, but their issues piqued my interest, what can I say?
A great addition to a great family series, pick this-and the previous ones- up for some good time. You’ll get to laugh out loud, spy on guys’ Friday card games, read some sexy romance, and envy all kinds of different women while expanding your fictional boyfriend pool. A fully enjoyable reading experience this series is proving to be. You won’t regret it.
Next, the big bear of a man, single father. Need I say? Do I really have to take the time and effort to type down how much I’m anticipating his story? As soon as I was done reading about-and loving immensely- Cam and Vanessa’s story, I started thinking about how great and so damn sexy Mike and Del’s probably going to be. Give me a bickering couple to obsess over any day and experience my joy.
If I have to be completely honest, I didn’t know how Cam and Vanessa was going to work. I had a feeling and enough confidence in Marie Harte’s writing that she’d make them work, but I just couldn’t see the how. I like my romances best on the ‘opposites attract’ side. The more they bicker, the better and sexier. And though Cam and Vanessa did their fair share of bickering, thanks to Vanessa’s constant need to be right and her extremely blatant ways and Cam’s equal insistence on being the right one and his desire to be respected and needed, they were still too alike. Was I wrong? Hey, I’m not too proud to say I was. And in my defense, I knew Marie Harte was going to make it work. Didn’t I just say it? And she actually opened my eyes up to new possibilities in romance, a world where too alike couples can make things work and be damn sexy doing it too.
With the first two books, the heroes and heroines spending so much time together and being so close, I had a great chance to get to know them and what to expect from their stories. With Cam and Vanessa though, because of the kind of people they were, it was hard to anticipate exactly what I would get. It might’ve been scary, but their story flew so smoothly that all my worries melted away from the first chapter. Sure, Vanessa was pragmatic and even cold at times, and extremely blunt bordering on annoying in some cases, but she had her reasons for being so. When I realized where she came from-we were hinted at her family life in previous books- I couldn’t fault her for being a little too logical. In fact, I respected her ability to filter her emotions and analyze situations and-contrary to what she felt about herself- her inner softness and her clear devotion to those she truly loves. And then there was Cam, with his healthier and more serious look at life that set him aside from his usually playful and lighthearted brothers. But Cam, with his unMcCauley ways, he was also very charming, attentive, caring, and with the exceptions of a few times, quite understanding. So I let him get away with his silly side that emerged a few times. He had his hangups too, and that only made him more relatable, and that, in turn, made him a good hero in my book. Or in Marie Harte’s. Semantics.
As much as Cam and Vanessa’s story was sexy, nicely told, charming and cute, I also liked the subplot involving the Mama and Papa McCauley. They had their little story going on for two books now, and normally I might’ve preferred to give my undivided attention to the current hero and heroine, but their issues piqued my interest, what can I say?
A great addition to a great family series, pick this-and the previous ones- up for some good time. You’ll get to laugh out loud, spy on guys’ Friday card games, read some sexy romance, and envy all kinds of different women while expanding your fictional boyfriend pool. A fully enjoyable reading experience this series is proving to be. You won’t regret it.
Next, the big bear of a man, single father. Need I say? Do I really have to take the time and effort to type down how much I’m anticipating his story? As soon as I was done reading about-and loving immensely- Cam and Vanessa’s story, I started thinking about how great and so damn sexy Mike and Del’s probably going to be. Give me a bickering couple to obsess over any day and experience my joy.
October 7, 2014
Caffeinated Dates with Ruining Mr. Perfect
First Date: In the previous novel Vanessa Campbell our little perfectionist, drill sergeant and number geek shared a rather smokin’ hot kiss with Cameron. He is the youngest McCauley, who unlike his brother’s isn’t in the family construction business, prefers apple-flavored beers, eats healthy and is neat. Nothing has happened since then, but Cameron is finding opportunities to spend time with her. Vanessa is impossibly attracted to him, but with her roommates dating his brothers it could get messy and Vanessa doesn’t do messy.
Second Date: I love the little tango, denial and friendship developing between them. Talks at the gym, a situation push them into spending time together and ooh-la-la the sparks, the heat, the view. I am melting as I try to both savor and move forward to my HEA. Meanwhile, there is trouble at the McCauley homestead, and it is shaking up the boys. Mike and Delilah butt heads and the brothers dish and tease each other. I adore the small-town vibe, side stories and updates regarding previous couples.
Third Date: Vanessa and Cameron are so hot together, but Vanessa has some hang-ups and trust issues that are making things difficult. Miscommunication, feelings, fears and an unexpected complication throw a bump into the relationship. Of course, family and friends are there to offer advice and help the couple out. Other threads wrap us as our couple grows. The chemistry between Cannon and Vanessa was delightful from their banter to sexy time making this date the most precious as I rooted for them.
Copy received from publisher.This review was originally posted at Caffeinated Book Reviewer
First Date: In the previous novel Vanessa Campbell our little perfectionist, drill sergeant and number geek shared a rather smokin’ hot kiss with Cameron. He is the youngest McCauley, who unlike his brother’s isn’t in the family construction business, prefers apple-flavored beers, eats healthy and is neat. Nothing has happened since then, but Cameron is finding opportunities to spend time with her. Vanessa is impossibly attracted to him, but with her roommates dating his brothers it could get messy and Vanessa doesn’t do messy.
Second Date: I love the little tango, denial and friendship developing between them. Talks at the gym, a situation push them into spending time together and ooh-la-la the sparks, the heat, the view. I am melting as I try to both savor and move forward to my HEA. Meanwhile, there is trouble at the McCauley homestead, and it is shaking up the boys. Mike and Delilah butt heads and the brothers dish and tease each other. I adore the small-town vibe, side stories and updates regarding previous couples.
Third Date: Vanessa and Cameron are so hot together, but Vanessa has some hang-ups and trust issues that are making things difficult. Miscommunication, feelings, fears and an unexpected complication throw a bump into the relationship. Of course, family and friends are there to offer advice and help the couple out. Other threads wrap us as our couple grows. The chemistry between Cannon and Vanessa was delightful from their banter to sexy time making this date the most precious as I rooted for them.
Copy received from publisher.This review was originally posted at Caffeinated Book Reviewer
December 30, 2014
The Good, The Bad and Everything In Between
This is a character driven story with alot of camaraderie between siblings and a set of friends who live next door. Vanessa’s a confident heroine, which I gravitate towards. She takes command in her professional life as well as with Cam, though I think it is a fairly even power exchange between the two. However, seeing Vanessa take control and direct the action on occasion was a nice change of pace and Cam’s very into her, which is attractive to me. There are good stretches of dialogue which allowed me to get to know Cam and Vanessa better.
My main complaint was I felt that I was missing something while reading it. The story shifts between Cam/Vanessa and their friends/family enough that my unfamiliarity with them hindered my enjoyment. The book starts as if we’re in the middle of a story instead of a real intro to these particular characters. It was only after I started that I realized that this was the third book, which is the reason for my slight disconnect, I believe. Though I have to give points for a secondary romance - it rarely happens in novels these days it seems (always saving that romance for the next book).
The Bottom Line
Even if I felt a little lost at times, I did enjoy the author’s “voice” and I would be open to checking out the earlier books.
**ARC provided by publisher via netgalley in exchange for an honest review**
This is a character driven story with alot of camaraderie between siblings and a set of friends who live next door. Vanessa’s a confident heroine, which I gravitate towards. She takes command in her professional life as well as with Cam, though I think it is a fairly even power exchange between the two. However, seeing Vanessa take control and direct the action on occasion was a nice change of pace and Cam’s very into her, which is attractive to me. There are good stretches of dialogue which allowed me to get to know Cam and Vanessa better.
My main complaint was I felt that I was missing something while reading it. The story shifts between Cam/Vanessa and their friends/family enough that my unfamiliarity with them hindered my enjoyment. The book starts as if we’re in the middle of a story instead of a real intro to these particular characters. It was only after I started that I realized that this was the third book, which is the reason for my slight disconnect, I believe. Though I have to give points for a secondary romance - it rarely happens in novels these days it seems (always saving that romance for the next book).
The Bottom Line
Even if I felt a little lost at times, I did enjoy the author’s “voice” and I would be open to checking out the earlier books.
**ARC provided by publisher via netgalley in exchange for an honest review**
February 5, 2017
I read the first two books in this series a while back and, for some reason, I never continued. I'm sorry that I waited so long to pick up the third McCauley brother book, Ruining Mr. Perfect. This was Cameron and Vanessa's book. Both of them are pretty straight laced and different from their families and friends. The fact that they are so similar should make for a logical relationship. But emotions have a way of rearing their ugly heads to make things more complicated,
I thought this was a really cute romance. Vanessa and Cameron were really suited for each other. Loved how Cam saw right through all of her BS and broke down her walls. This book is big on the theme of communication. Because of that, there was a lot less angst in the story. That was refreshing. There is a big surprise toward the end of the book that throws the couple for a loop, but I loved it.
There is a secondary story line that continues from the previous book. Beth and James McCauley are separating after 30 something years. It is hard on everyone involved. Watching them make their way back to each other was entertaining. I think I was rooting for them more than Cam and Vanessa. This as a great addition to the series. I highly recommend it.
I thought this was a really cute romance. Vanessa and Cameron were really suited for each other. Loved how Cam saw right through all of her BS and broke down her walls. This book is big on the theme of communication. Because of that, there was a lot less angst in the story. That was refreshing. There is a big surprise toward the end of the book that throws the couple for a loop, but I loved it.
There is a secondary story line that continues from the previous book. Beth and James McCauley are separating after 30 something years. It is hard on everyone involved. Watching them make their way back to each other was entertaining. I think I was rooting for them more than Cam and Vanessa. This as a great addition to the series. I highly recommend it.
October 2, 2014
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NUMBER OF HEARTS: 4 1/2
REVIEW:
Awe, Marie does it again. I think Cameron & Vanessa are my favorite so far. I just love how they are so much a like yet different. That Cameron knows how to push Vanessa’s buttons and how she fights back. I loved how even when they fight they don’t really fight. Unless of course Vanessa is wrong then the fight is to the death. These two are just great.
And the side story with Pop & Bitsy is great too. And I loved the introduction to Mike & Del’s book. hehehe..... This one is going to be a fun ride, can’t wait to read.
If you have not started this series you should really think about it. These McCauley boys are hot and know what they are doing. Well most of the time :) And if I were you I would start at the beginning (you don’t have to but I would)
Disclaimer:
I received a complimentary copy of the book from NetGalley & Sourcebooks Casablanca in exchange for an honest review. This review is my own opinion and not a paid review.
NUMBER OF HEARTS: 4 1/2
REVIEW:
Awe, Marie does it again. I think Cameron & Vanessa are my favorite so far. I just love how they are so much a like yet different. That Cameron knows how to push Vanessa’s buttons and how she fights back. I loved how even when they fight they don’t really fight. Unless of course Vanessa is wrong then the fight is to the death. These two are just great.
And the side story with Pop & Bitsy is great too. And I loved the introduction to Mike & Del’s book. hehehe..... This one is going to be a fun ride, can’t wait to read.
If you have not started this series you should really think about it. These McCauley boys are hot and know what they are doing. Well most of the time :) And if I were you I would start at the beginning (you don’t have to but I would)
Disclaimer:
I received a complimentary copy of the book from NetGalley & Sourcebooks Casablanca in exchange for an honest review. This review is my own opinion and not a paid review.
October 11, 2014
4.5 stars
I really liked this one! For me Vanessa was the best female character from this series!
She was fun in her "I'm-always-right-and-always-saying-the-truth" way! You just couldn't help but lover her and cheer for a HEA for her!
Cam is a McCauley so nuff said! You just can't help but love all those boys!
Now I'm really curious to Mike's story because from all of them he was the one that I first liked and I can't wait to see how the author is going to work her relationship with him and his adorableeeee kid! =)
I really liked this one! For me Vanessa was the best female character from this series!
She was fun in her "I'm-always-right-and-always-saying-the-truth" way! You just couldn't help but lover her and cheer for a HEA for her!
Cam is a McCauley so nuff said! You just can't help but love all those boys!
Now I'm really curious to Mike's story because from all of them he was the one that I first liked and I can't wait to see how the author is going to work her relationship with him and his adorableeeee kid! =)
January 2, 2015
The best part about this book was Cam and Vanessa's banter! They were pretty cute together, except for their idiot moments.
I loved how self-assured and comfortable in his own skin Cam was. He wasn't overly cocky, he had just the right amount of confidence. It was damn attractive.
There are some minor quibbles I had that kept this from being a perfect five stars, but nonetheless, it was an enjoyable read.
I loved how self-assured and comfortable in his own skin Cam was. He wasn't overly cocky, he had just the right amount of confidence. It was damn attractive.
There are some minor quibbles I had that kept this from being a perfect five stars, but nonetheless, it was an enjoyable read.
July 4, 2014
Loved cam and how sweet he was but he still had a edge. They really are a great couple together. The best part is when u find out why he joined the gym lol
July 19, 2018
4.5 Stars! I can safely say, I’m hooked on the McCauley family. They showcase a love, both romantic and familial, that draws you in and glues you to the page.
Summary:
Vanessa Campbell is known as the cold, mean one. And mostly that’s true. She makes grown men cry, for goodness's sake. But she sees her blunt honesty and efficient demeanor as a boon. So what if she’s a bit of a perfectionist. She’s fit, pretty, and successful. She can also be honest and admit, if only to herself, that she may be lonely, too. Especially after watching her roommates and sister’s of the heart, find their perfect love. Vanessa doesn’t kid herself into believing that she’s capable of the same, but she also can’t stop thinking about the youngest McCauley brother. Cameron McCauley has definitely noticed the ice-cool blonde bombshell. How could he not with her terrific body and razor-sharp tongue, not to mention her superior intellect. They are a lot alike, in fact. When a past misunderstanding has them going head to head with sparks flying, Cam is determined to shake Vanessa up. But neither counted on the deep feelings that would follow. Despite having a lot of similar personality traits, how can an emotionally detached woman fit with a man that has no problem letting his emotions fly? There’s also the tiny fact that neither of them like being wrong. Both Vanessa and Cam will have to confront issues from their childhoods and decide if they can aside their stubborn need to be right in order to embrace the future and love they could have together.
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I started this series because I had come across Flynn and Maddie’s book and it interested me. I didn’t expect to love it as much as I have, though. The McCauley’s have really won me over and I can’t get enough of their love, loyalty, ribbing, and fun. To be honest, I was wary of reading this book because I didn’t think I’d like Vanessa. I really didn’t like her in book one, but I softened to her in book two. Now that we’ve gotten her POV and see where she’s coming from, she’s a pretty unique character. Considering her family, I can see how she comes off cold, uninterested, and mostly mean. The Vanessa you don’t see often is the one who struggles to connect with others, but loves deeply. I appreciated her blunt honesty, even if hearing the truth could be painful. Cameron isn’t a McCauley brother that I felt overly close to. The most we saw of him was his brothers picking on him. He’s smart, successful, charming, and funny. He was also a bit more in-tune with his emotions than the other guys. I liked that he was different from his brothers and father. While he didn’t look down on the good work they did, he preferred a different path. He was a thinker and planner, using his smarts to be successful in a career that suited his more logical and analytical mind. Together, I don’t think two more people belong than Cam and Vanessa. They were so alike, but gave the other what they needed and provided them someone to be themselves. I liked the push/pull that generated from them both always liking to be right, and the stubborn refusal to admit to mistakes. The sex wasn’t bad either. Their fast-paced and intelligent banter served as a sort of brainy foreplay. They were steamy hot and their lust practically dripped off the page. Overall, I loved this book and think it could be my favorite of the series so far. This is the first book that the storyline contained two romances and I believe Ms. Harte did a wonderful job giving each the page time they needed. While Cam and Vanessa’s story enlightened me to their personalities on a deeper level, a big draw for this book is Pop and Bitsy’s story. The McCauley parents found themselves in a rocky situation, and I loved seeing them work through it and how the kids handled it. I loved that it showed a marriage down the road and the work and love it takes to keep everything good. I really couldn’t ask for more from this series or family. I’ve been entertained since page one, and I only fall harder with each book. Next up is Mike, the oldest McCauley, and I’m really looking forward to seeing if he can be open to love again. ♡
Summary:
Vanessa Campbell is known as the cold, mean one. And mostly that’s true. She makes grown men cry, for goodness's sake. But she sees her blunt honesty and efficient demeanor as a boon. So what if she’s a bit of a perfectionist. She’s fit, pretty, and successful. She can also be honest and admit, if only to herself, that she may be lonely, too. Especially after watching her roommates and sister’s of the heart, find their perfect love. Vanessa doesn’t kid herself into believing that she’s capable of the same, but she also can’t stop thinking about the youngest McCauley brother. Cameron McCauley has definitely noticed the ice-cool blonde bombshell. How could he not with her terrific body and razor-sharp tongue, not to mention her superior intellect. They are a lot alike, in fact. When a past misunderstanding has them going head to head with sparks flying, Cam is determined to shake Vanessa up. But neither counted on the deep feelings that would follow. Despite having a lot of similar personality traits, how can an emotionally detached woman fit with a man that has no problem letting his emotions fly? There’s also the tiny fact that neither of them like being wrong. Both Vanessa and Cam will have to confront issues from their childhoods and decide if they can aside their stubborn need to be right in order to embrace the future and love they could have together.
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I started this series because I had come across Flynn and Maddie’s book and it interested me. I didn’t expect to love it as much as I have, though. The McCauley’s have really won me over and I can’t get enough of their love, loyalty, ribbing, and fun. To be honest, I was wary of reading this book because I didn’t think I’d like Vanessa. I really didn’t like her in book one, but I softened to her in book two. Now that we’ve gotten her POV and see where she’s coming from, she’s a pretty unique character. Considering her family, I can see how she comes off cold, uninterested, and mostly mean. The Vanessa you don’t see often is the one who struggles to connect with others, but loves deeply. I appreciated her blunt honesty, even if hearing the truth could be painful. Cameron isn’t a McCauley brother that I felt overly close to. The most we saw of him was his brothers picking on him. He’s smart, successful, charming, and funny. He was also a bit more in-tune with his emotions than the other guys. I liked that he was different from his brothers and father. While he didn’t look down on the good work they did, he preferred a different path. He was a thinker and planner, using his smarts to be successful in a career that suited his more logical and analytical mind. Together, I don’t think two more people belong than Cam and Vanessa. They were so alike, but gave the other what they needed and provided them someone to be themselves. I liked the push/pull that generated from them both always liking to be right, and the stubborn refusal to admit to mistakes. The sex wasn’t bad either. Their fast-paced and intelligent banter served as a sort of brainy foreplay. They were steamy hot and their lust practically dripped off the page. Overall, I loved this book and think it could be my favorite of the series so far. This is the first book that the storyline contained two romances and I believe Ms. Harte did a wonderful job giving each the page time they needed. While Cam and Vanessa’s story enlightened me to their personalities on a deeper level, a big draw for this book is Pop and Bitsy’s story. The McCauley parents found themselves in a rocky situation, and I loved seeing them work through it and how the kids handled it. I loved that it showed a marriage down the road and the work and love it takes to keep everything good. I really couldn’t ask for more from this series or family. I’ve been entertained since page one, and I only fall harder with each book. Next up is Mike, the oldest McCauley, and I’m really looking forward to seeing if he can be open to love again. ♡
July 9, 2025
Before I start this, I have to preface by saying I have a soft spot for cold and bitchy heroine's. That's because 9/10 times it's usually who is neurotypical and has their own method of working through things that no other character makes an attempt to understand. And yes that includes the male main character. And Vanessa was no different. I honestly felt for her because sometimes it felt like the characters were trying to be daft when it came to understanding her. And dear god don't even get me started on his brothers. The end part where they were literally shitting all over her and how she might be as a mother WHILE SHE WAS PREGNANT. Yeah, as someone with anxiety I would have been 10x worse than her. Like just imagine being pregnant (hello hormones) and you already question you're abilities to be a mother, the pregnancy is accidental so you had 0 time to plan, you're working through a relationship and personal issues, and now you're fuckass boyfriend's fuckass brothers are shitting all over you and just exacerbating you're concerns. And the only thing that moron of a boyfriend had to say was "they were joking". And then said moron boyfriend had the gall to be mad at you for how you were reacting to the pregnancy. It was like watching a train wreck. Honestly, I needed a scene where the brothers apologized to her PROFUSELY. Also in no world, like hell would literally have to freeze over, before I let my fucking boyfriend talk about my friend that way (and I can say it goes both ways but I'm emphasizing this because they dogged on Vanessa the whole damn book). You have something to say, you say it her face when I'm there. And any other situation, you keep your mouth closed about my best friend. That's just me though. This is also a personal choice, but I don't have the friendship dynamics that Vanessa had in this book. There were times where I thought Vanessa was in the wrong, but as someone who had a slightly cruel nickname it does not feel good. I do have to say that Marie Harte really can't write female characters (or male characters but I can't make those claims when I hate most male characters anyways0. Like Vanessa was supposed to be this badass take no shit girlie, but I fear she took a lot of shit. There were so many times when she totally should have stood on business. Like when he was bitching about the advice she gave his mother (was he a little tiny bit valid for saying that she should have talked to him beforehand, perhaps, but I'll never admit it). Like KING YOU SHOULD HAVE TOLD YOU"RE MOTHER THAT. Her husband was literally emotionally cheating on the poor woman, you should've been like "mama fuck him go spread you're wings". And when he cornered her she should have been like "boy I was basically doing you're job and I knew you wouldn't understand and guess what I was right cause here we are". And honestly, I laughed out loud when she broke up with him over the phone, cause yeah eat him up. And when he ghosted her for two days he was POUTING LIKE A CHILD over her not telling him she was pregnant (and also when he blatantly chose to misunderstand what she was saying) I literally wanted her to go to him and beat him with her damn stiletto. GOD FORBID a woman take a few days to emotionally regulate after hearing life altering news. And also, the woman you claim to love is literally pregnant and going through it alone, there has to be a better time for you're hissy fit. God, by the end of the book the person I thought most understood her was his dad, like this damn book got me siding with the emotionally cheating, thickheaded, stuck in the old days waste of good air.
Anyways this book stressed me out. Let's retire the trope of trying to "soften" and change a woman who clearly just has different boundaries.
Anyways this book stressed me out. Let's retire the trope of trying to "soften" and change a woman who clearly just has different boundaries.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 25, 2019
This was my favorite from the whole series so far. I really reading Vanessa and Cameron's I also really liked how we got Beth and James story as well. Cam and Vanessa and seeing their relationship grow was great. I also really liked seeing Cam's relationship with his brothers in the other books you don't really see the relationship from his point of view.
I'm really glad we got to see more of Del from the other books she is such an amazing character i'm glad that she is in these books. I also really liked Maddie and Abby I really like how they like family to Vanessa i'm really glad that she has them. Vanessa's family I thought they were kinda cold to her. But, when Vanessa started to talk about them to Cam you could see that only someone who gets her would get along with her parents
Vanessa as the heroine I really enjoyed learning more about her personality and seeing how Cameron and her get together. I really enjoyed seeing the way she was around Cam versus the way she was when she was with the other people around her like Maddie and Abby and the McCauley Brothers.
Cameron as the hero I also really enjoyed because you got to see him fawn all over a girl which I think was awesome I was really looking forward to his story. Seeing how he kept telling Vanessa that she can't always be right was s funny in a way because you knew that she wasn't gonna change that part about herself. I also really liked seeing his relationship with his father evolve and see how they got along and put everything bad that may have happened in the past and move on. Seeing his relationship with brothers was great especially that part where Mike and Cameron got into a fight.
When Vanessa found out she was pregnant that had to be the best part because I knew it was coming and with those two being so good together and those two having a family together would be the best happy ending to this book because of who these two characters are.
The parents story line was great I was really sad to know that they separated because of some miscommunication. When they got back together I thought that made the book even more amazing.
I'm really glad we got to see more of Del from the other books she is such an amazing character i'm glad that she is in these books. I also really liked Maddie and Abby I really like how they like family to Vanessa i'm really glad that she has them. Vanessa's family I thought they were kinda cold to her. But, when Vanessa started to talk about them to Cam you could see that only someone who gets her would get along with her parents
Vanessa as the heroine I really enjoyed learning more about her personality and seeing how Cameron and her get together. I really enjoyed seeing the way she was around Cam versus the way she was when she was with the other people around her like Maddie and Abby and the McCauley Brothers.
Cameron as the hero I also really enjoyed because you got to see him fawn all over a girl which I think was awesome I was really looking forward to his story. Seeing how he kept telling Vanessa that she can't always be right was s funny in a way because you knew that she wasn't gonna change that part about herself. I also really liked seeing his relationship with his father evolve and see how they got along and put everything bad that may have happened in the past and move on. Seeing his relationship with brothers was great especially that part where Mike and Cameron got into a fight.
When Vanessa found out she was pregnant that had to be the best part because I knew it was coming and with those two being so good together and those two having a family together would be the best happy ending to this book because of who these two characters are.
The parents story line was great I was really sad to know that they separated because of some miscommunication. When they got back together I thought that made the book even more amazing.
May 22, 2017
So here I thought this was just about Cameron and Vanessa falling in love....nope seems Beth and James Macauley (mom and dad to the brothers) are having marital issues too.
Seems that communication, or lack of, is not a problem just for the younger generations. Neither is stubbornness or frustration.
I get that Vanessa had an odd and somewhat cold childhood. Two professors whom are more interested in academia than their daughter....tends to leave a person with trust and intimacy issues. Now Cameron just has issues since dad has always picked on him for being a "nancy" and not working in a manly career like his brothers. See, everyone has their issues and if we just stopped hiding and faced it think how much sooner we could find our HEA and have a GREAT relationship with our parents. Okay maybe not for Vanessa but there is still hope for everyone else.
I will admit there times I wanted to shake Vanessa and tell her to get her head out of her ass and follow her own advice. And Cameron.....OMG....for being a financial genius and self-made man...I can so see why his dad might have called him a "nancy"...geez you got a pair in those boxer briefs? Guess that just shows a sign of good writing when you can forget you are reading about fictional characters and not some real person.
Story jumped a little too often for me from Cam-Vanessa to Beth-James but eh...it is what it is. Then you add the other two couples, the hottie intern, Mr. Small Dick and Liam....well it can feel a little crowded at times. Plus we get a glimpse of things to come....Big Brother Mike and Del, the lady mechanic with the tatts and piercings....this could be interesting.
Seems that communication, or lack of, is not a problem just for the younger generations. Neither is stubbornness or frustration.
I get that Vanessa had an odd and somewhat cold childhood. Two professors whom are more interested in academia than their daughter....tends to leave a person with trust and intimacy issues. Now Cameron just has issues since dad has always picked on him for being a "nancy" and not working in a manly career like his brothers. See, everyone has their issues and if we just stopped hiding and faced it think how much sooner we could find our HEA and have a GREAT relationship with our parents. Okay maybe not for Vanessa but there is still hope for everyone else.
I will admit there times I wanted to shake Vanessa and tell her to get her head out of her ass and follow her own advice. And Cameron.....OMG....for being a financial genius and self-made man...I can so see why his dad might have called him a "nancy"...geez you got a pair in those boxer briefs? Guess that just shows a sign of good writing when you can forget you are reading about fictional characters and not some real person.
Story jumped a little too often for me from Cam-Vanessa to Beth-James but eh...it is what it is. Then you add the other two couples, the hottie intern, Mr. Small Dick and Liam....well it can feel a little crowded at times. Plus we get a glimpse of things to come....Big Brother Mike and Del, the lady mechanic with the tatts and piercings....this could be interesting.
January 10, 2018
4.5 stars. Well written and paced story with very likeable characters.
I have read and reviewed these books previously from the back of the book but they have all gone missing. Rereading this series is not a hardship as you are introduced to a very great group of characters you want to know more about. Even the parents are great and get some page time in the series.
This series is centred around a family of brothers, blood and heart, and their friends. You get a good feel for their background and what goes on between this close-knit family, including brotherly hazing, fist and verbal fights and the teasing.
Even the women have a close bond and there’s also laughs and carrying on to be had.
Though this book is about Vanessa and Cameron there is a secondary story going on in the background with the McCauley parents having marital problems.
This doesn’t detract from the story as it is well written and flows well but it does cut down on Vanessa and Cameron to me.
These two are carbon copies of each other, both in the financial field, both control freaks, except Cameron has had a loving and supportive background whilst Vanessa’s parents seem to be cold and unlikeable.
Cameron is the youngest brother and so different from his rambunctious brothers. He is calm, sensitive and stubborn in his own way. This doesn’t mean he can’t hold his own against the others.
Vanessa is a control freak with a background of sabotaging any relationships with men. Falling in love is not something she believes she can do until Cameron comes along and she does not know how to react.
I really did like how this played out.
I have read and reviewed these books previously from the back of the book but they have all gone missing. Rereading this series is not a hardship as you are introduced to a very great group of characters you want to know more about. Even the parents are great and get some page time in the series.
This series is centred around a family of brothers, blood and heart, and their friends. You get a good feel for their background and what goes on between this close-knit family, including brotherly hazing, fist and verbal fights and the teasing.
Even the women have a close bond and there’s also laughs and carrying on to be had.
Though this book is about Vanessa and Cameron there is a secondary story going on in the background with the McCauley parents having marital problems.
This doesn’t detract from the story as it is well written and flows well but it does cut down on Vanessa and Cameron to me.
These two are carbon copies of each other, both in the financial field, both control freaks, except Cameron has had a loving and supportive background whilst Vanessa’s parents seem to be cold and unlikeable.
Cameron is the youngest brother and so different from his rambunctious brothers. He is calm, sensitive and stubborn in his own way. This doesn’t mean he can’t hold his own against the others.
Vanessa is a control freak with a background of sabotaging any relationships with men. Falling in love is not something she believes she can do until Cameron comes along and she does not know how to react.
I really did like how this played out.
December 28, 2018
I read this series in order, which definitely helps as I knew the other characters and had some sense of what was going on. Plus, I knew who all the side characters were. There may be some spoilers in this review for the first two books.
Cam’s dad and brothers are all blue collar workers, Cam being the exception. Instead of working with his hands he is much more of a mathematics kinda guy. Sometimes this puts him at odds with his pop and the boys and other times they go right to him for help. I do hate how it puts him at odds with his daddy more often than not. At times I felt that Cam was a little bit too sensitive.
Vanessa lives next door to Cam’s widowed brother and nephew. Vanessa is the tough one outta of the group of girls living in his parent’s old home (his childhood home). She can kinda be a witch and she most definitely has a resting face. I liked it when she was wrong since she is almost always right. She has a corporate job, a planner and a plan. Her plan does not include Cam or a serious relationship. Too bad for her, his plans do include her and a happily ever after.
There are a lot of subplots going on here with Del and Mike then Cam’s parents. I think that took away from Cam and Vanessa’s story a bit. I also think that they may both be a little too uppity to actually workout, maybe even a little too much alike.
My Rating 3 stars out of 5
Favorite Quote “It means, princess, that if you touch me again, I’ll give you the kiss you’ve been begging for since day one.”
Other People
Beth- Cam’s mom
James- Cam’s dad
Mike- Cam’s brother
Del- automatic
Cam’s dad and brothers are all blue collar workers, Cam being the exception. Instead of working with his hands he is much more of a mathematics kinda guy. Sometimes this puts him at odds with his pop and the boys and other times they go right to him for help. I do hate how it puts him at odds with his daddy more often than not. At times I felt that Cam was a little bit too sensitive.
Vanessa lives next door to Cam’s widowed brother and nephew. Vanessa is the tough one outta of the group of girls living in his parent’s old home (his childhood home). She can kinda be a witch and she most definitely has a resting face. I liked it when she was wrong since she is almost always right. She has a corporate job, a planner and a plan. Her plan does not include Cam or a serious relationship. Too bad for her, his plans do include her and a happily ever after.
There are a lot of subplots going on here with Del and Mike then Cam’s parents. I think that took away from Cam and Vanessa’s story a bit. I also think that they may both be a little too uppity to actually workout, maybe even a little too much alike.
My Rating 3 stars out of 5
Favorite Quote “It means, princess, that if you touch me again, I’ll give you the kiss you’ve been begging for since day one.”
Other People
Beth- Cam’s mom
James- Cam’s dad
Mike- Cam’s brother
Del- automatic
February 9, 2022
I don't know why a "strong independent female" character somehow is so often portrayed by being a bitch. I appreciate why Vanessa is emotionally reserved but I don't get why she has to be so waspish all the time. It doesn't make me want to like her.
I also don't know good family loving and fun is all about razzing and insults. Not that there isn't space for some clever remarks but calling your kids names and putting them down all the time to "toughen them up" is not good parenting and if one of them doesn't do well with that kind of treatment and feels like it means you don't love him --maybe stop. It does make me sympathize with Cam on some level but the over the top we're so much smarter than everyone else talk between him and Vanessa is off-putting.
The side story with the parents takes a lot of attention off the main couple and I'm cringing a bit for the upcoming story with Mike because I can see it's going to be another one of strong independent bitch and insult slinging macho man. The books are well written and since I read one of the later books about the cousins I kind of have to fill in the gap but I think I need to take a break between to refresh my palate.
I also don't know good family loving and fun is all about razzing and insults. Not that there isn't space for some clever remarks but calling your kids names and putting them down all the time to "toughen them up" is not good parenting and if one of them doesn't do well with that kind of treatment and feels like it means you don't love him --maybe stop. It does make me sympathize with Cam on some level but the over the top we're so much smarter than everyone else talk between him and Vanessa is off-putting.
The side story with the parents takes a lot of attention off the main couple and I'm cringing a bit for the upcoming story with Mike because I can see it's going to be another one of strong independent bitch and insult slinging macho man. The books are well written and since I read one of the later books about the cousins I kind of have to fill in the gap but I think I need to take a break between to refresh my palate.
November 5, 2017
Vanessa and Cameron seem to be the odd ones in their group, especially Cameron. He's the white collar guy to his blue collar family. I love how all his brothers tease Cameron about his metro sexual ways. Vanessa comes off as a stick in the mud type A personality, but the two of them worked together. It was fun to see the two of them bond over things everyone else hated them.
The older McCauley's marriage problems came to a head in this one. It was interesting to see how everyone reacted. I was a bit surprised that Vanessa was the one to take charge of things and confront Bitsy. Her advice to Bitsy was solid, it worked if things worked out for the couple or if they didn't. It was interesting to see how Cameron reacted to the advice when he learned of it. I didn't expect Cameron to loose it like he did, nor did I expect Vanessa to fill James in where she did.
I wasn't sure Vanessa and Cameron would be able to over come their issues, which was too bad because so much was at stake. I was glad that both of them got their heads out of their asses and talked.
The older McCauley's marriage problems came to a head in this one. It was interesting to see how everyone reacted. I was a bit surprised that Vanessa was the one to take charge of things and confront Bitsy. Her advice to Bitsy was solid, it worked if things worked out for the couple or if they didn't. It was interesting to see how Cameron reacted to the advice when he learned of it. I didn't expect Cameron to loose it like he did, nor did I expect Vanessa to fill James in where she did.
I wasn't sure Vanessa and Cameron would be able to over come their issues, which was too bad because so much was at stake. I was glad that both of them got their heads out of their asses and talked.
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