As a girl whose roots go deep in the Great Southern region of WA this was always going to be a must-read book for me. Set in and around Tenterden, a tiny stop on the five-hour drive to Albany from Perth, the story takes place a mere 30 mins from where I grew up. The landscapes, the smells, the seasons, I was looking forward it all.
Debut author Molly Schmidt had this story of the Tetley family in the aftermath of losing a parent on her mind for years before writing the book. She knew that interweaving Noongar characters would be important to the events in the story, but how to do this? Enter her collaboration with Noongar elders, a Masters thesis on how non-Aboriginal writers can include Noongar characters in their fiction, and the result is the Hungerford Award winning manuscript that became Salt River Road.
Told through the eyes of 16 year old Rose Tetley and 17 year old Frank Tetley speaking to their deceased mother, this is a story of the rapid descent of the family after their mother dies. The farm they manage is in disarray, the five kids lose focus, the youngest is left to his own devices. Family connections and friendships are strained. So we wait to see how they will emerge from this hole.
This is getting rave reviews, has been on various shortlists. The treatment of casual racism is handled exceptionally well and matches my experience of country towns of the time. Likewise the treatment of families who are not the local ‘landed gentry’. If you are interested in how authors write grief then I think you will love Rose and Frank and it shows that the author was able to draw on her own experiences well here.
Taken in totality the story is a good one, however I felt that it lacked narrative balance in parts.
Some of the most impactful elements of the story involved the weaving in of the Noongar characters who are central to the Coming of Age of the whole family, and they were not, in my opinion, brought in early enough or given enough airtime to turn this from a solid novel to a great one.
The Descent felt too laboured and the Ascent out of Family Hell felt rushed. The switch from dark to light being exactly that, a switch that felt out of character with the rest of the novel.
And finally, as someone from the place I did expect to feel more connected to the unique smells, sounds and vibe of the Great Southern which was missing for me.
So, depending on your taste in novels you will either love this entirely, or like me, appreciate it on one level while feeling it lacked something on another. Where we will all agree however is that this is a writer to watch because if this is her debut then her path forward is bright.