Terror Asylum

by Sabrina Jen Mountford

Marie is a psychiatric nurse, working on a secure unit which detains patients when they've been sectioned under the mental health act. She's generally been kind and considerate to patients over the years, but when some patients were 'naughty' and not co-operative, refusing medication or simply not doing as they were told, she'd occasionally resorted to sedation and restraint as a punitive measure.

One night, after work, when leaving the unit. she has a sinister sensation that someone is following her. When she's chloroformed and kidnapped, she wakes up in a cell in an old abandoned insane asylum, wearing a straightjacket. Who has captured her? What tortures do they have in store for her?

It quickly becomes clear, Marie has been captured by a deranged ex-patient, who is hell-bent on revenge, determined to punish Marie for her abuse of authority, in a style which reflects the crime - the abuse of patients in a psychiatric unit. As Marie spends longer and longer isolated and restrained in a padded cell, treated as a patient, forcibly drugged and more, she starts to feel 'like' a patient and has to fight to retain her identity. Few, opportunities to escape do arise, and when you're restrained and hung-over from being drugged, it's surely only a matter of time before you end up back in your padded cell, terrified of what torture your captor has lined up for you next.

When a wandering urban explorer stumbles upon your locked padded cell, it seems like you might have one last throw of the dice, one last bid for freedom. With her sinister, deranged captor determined to destroy Marie's mind though, it's still not certain, Marie will ever escape the 'Terror Asylum' with her life, or her mind intact.

*Warning This Horror Story contains scenes of kidnap, torture and confinement. It also contains scenes which are sexual in nature. Suitable for 18+ only.

*The practices, policies and style of psychiatric patient care in this story is not intended to reflect current procedures and policies in any country and should be treated as entirely fictional.

*Saddleton Brook Lunatic Asylum is a fictional setting, any similarities with real psychiatric hospitals are coincidence. The psychiatric unit which Marie works at is also entirely fictional, any similarities with real psychiatric units are coincidence.

This story is approximately 18,000 words long, not including the additional information provided or the promotional descriptions of the author's other works.

Genres: BDSM

104 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 15, 2013

About the author

I enjoy writing about extreme, unrealistic scenarios... I like to write about female domination, male chastity, BDSM and forced feminization. I'm not a professional dominatrix or anything like that...

I have experimented with this sort of thing in the bedroom, don't get me wrong, I find nothing more amusing and satisfying than having my boyfriend wearing knickers, a bra and a suspender belt, his face plastered in make up, his hands hand-cuffed behind his back, over my knee recieving a good spanking... But I like to explore the unrealistic end of the scale in my writing.

Please don't read my stories expecting realistic scenario's, they are pure fantasy - products of my over-active imagination. I don't propose to be the greatest writer ever to grace paper, I do try my best though. Sometimes I accept it's perhaps not pulitzer prize material.

However, I do have a vivid and twisted imagination... And I think I understand the submissive male mind... (My boyfriend is about as submissive as they come.)

If you have enjoyed my stories, please, please write me a review - I know somebody out there likes them because they are selling briskly and people who buy one tend to buy at least two or three...

If you do write me a good, constructive review, include your email address, and I'll perhaps email you a free review copy of one of my new titles?

Lastly, thanks to everyone who's bought my work, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. I apologise for any typing errors or similar, every so often I read and re-check my titles before republishing them, but it's difficult. I do my best but I don't have a copy editor so my best is my best I'm afraid. If you spot a mistake, please email me at sjm.author@yahoo.com and I will correct it in the next re-publish.

If you have any comments, you can contact me at sjm.author@yahoo.com

~Sabrina

PS: I've had lots of email requests for paper editions of my stories for non-Kindle owners. For the benefit of those people I've used createspace to make some paper editions.

There are now several paperback editions of my work available, please search amazon paperbacks and the createspace store for 'Sabrina Jen Mountford' if you're interested.

After a heavy re-working, I've managed to get 'The Clinical Trial' approved! Please find it on the Kindle Store.

On a final note, anyone who has read all of my current catalogue and wants more of the same, I strongly suggest reading Sarah Jameson's fiction, Tatania, Monaco and Stacy's game.

If you still want more - I suggest taking a look at Anne Michelle, Sara Desmarais, Sandy Thomas and Selene St. Claire

My full catalogue - have you read them all?

The Clinical Trial (With The Receptionist
The Tormentress and the Boss
Slavery: Part 1 : Captured!
Slavery: Part 2 : Operated on : Forced Transsexual.
The Male Bridesmaid
The Hypnotist
A Sissy Story : WPC Domination
A Sissy Story : Feminized For Her ‘How he became a lesbian’
Cross Dressing : Schoolgirl Domination
Samantha’s Tale : The Deal (Prequel to ‘The Tormentress & The Boss’)
Anita’s Tale : The Sperm Donor
The Harem Slave
Femdom : The Dressmaker
Femdom : The Ex’s Revenge
Femdom: The Beautician Trap
Tickle Torture : Tickled into Submission
Tickle Torture : Tickled until she wets herself
The Male Bridesmaid 2 : The Reluctant Cuckoldress
Corporal Punishment : A Study in Caning (The BDSM Studies)
Orgasm Denial : A Study in Chastity (The BDSM Studies)
Femdom : The Game
Femdom : The Game 2 : High Stakes
Gender Swap : Anita's Transgender Pill : A Gender Bender Story

*Slavery 1 & 2 are available together and separately

Coming soon:-
Femdom : The Game 3 : The Ultimate Forfeit

Planned Titles:-
A Study in Feminization (BDSM Studies)
The Clinical Trial : Phase 2
Forced Fem : His first ‘Girls Day Out’ (Based on Fact.)
Femdom : Utopia – The Female Dominated Society

Compilations by the same author:-
Feminization Stories First Collect

Reviews

[Sabrina · Rating 5 out of 5]

(Editorial Review)

I loved writing this! I've spent a lot of time getting to know someone in mental health recently, and I've grown a fascination for the treatment of the mentally ill. I didn't want to disrespect mental health professionals, but I really wanted to write a padded cells and straight jackets story.

When I was looking for a good cover I spotted this and it got me thinking, what if it's not a currently operating psychiatric hospital? But an old abandoned one, the haunt of urban explorers? Then I came looked at lots of urbex pictures of asylums and thought, wouldn't it be delicious if there was an old abandoned asylum that had been hidden away? That nobody had visited for a long time and which was still full of equipment?

The final wonderful thought was who my antagonist could be. I really like this story, I know it's horror and not very erotic in places, but I think it is kind of sexy too, maybe not the conclusion, but bits of it.

I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Sabrina. xx.

[Maia Anne · Rating 5 out of 5]

I wasn't sure I'd actually enjoy this one. I read it from the perspective of someone who knows Sabrina through her slightly weird femdom and fetish books. This isn't erotic, well, I tell a lie, there are little bits which are 'slightly' erotic, but most of it isn't.

Despite this, I really enjoyed the story. I enjoyed it so much I referenced it, making it seem like it happened at the same time as my book The Photographer : Female Domination, Forced Feminization, BDSM & Male Chastity.

I know Sabs wanted to do a straight jackets story, but I wasn't entirely sure she could work the theme into a story - I mean it's pretty thin as a topic? What she does though is weave a tale about a maybe slightly sadistic psychiatric nurse, who gets her comeuppance when an ex-patient loses the plot, captures her and decides to treat her to the same sort of brutal treatment she'd received, in an old abandoned asylum.

I loved the straight jackets and padded cells, and psychiatric treatments, it reminded me a bit of a saw film. The fact that it was an old abandoned asylum and a psychiatric patient gone mad meant the treatments could be extreme, there was no safety-net for Maria.

The end is not erotic, it's pretty horrible for all involved. It reminds me somewhat of why I personally have something of a mild phobia of psychiatric treatment. I can't vouch for the accuracy of psychiatric treatment in this book, but Sabs definitely captures the essence of psychiatry phobia in it.

[Llinos Wyn Parry · Rating 1 out of 5]

Don't bother....

This COULD potentially have been a good piece of fiction, but certainly wasn't!
The only recommendation I would make is not to buy it.
1 star as I couldn't submit a review otherwise

[Claire Frost · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great book

[Tanager Leigh · Rating 2 out of 5]

I bought this book fully expecting that I would be disappointed. I was surprised that the writing was as good as it was. I'd say it is better than average free amateur bdsm short stories. Of course, depraved as I am, I kind of like asylum related erotica, specifically the extreme bondage aspects. So, despite the shallow characterizations and hurried plot, I sat back and let myself be thumped along over the horrific atrocities applied to the heroine of the book. At one point, I even found a sense of sympathy and I was rooting for her. Actually, I guess, shallow characterizations are best in the story, because emotional involvement would have been disturbing.

In the end, my main emotion was anger and it was not manifested from the author's foray into the creative realm, but rather erupted from the realization that the end of the story occurred at the 70% complete mark. [Note: As the author pointed out in comments, the word length is listed in the book's description.] The remaining content contained previews of other books which I will not be buying. So, instead of the 5 cent per page I was reluctantly spending, I was tricked into paying an abominable 7 cents per page. How utterly disappointing.

Oh, well! Such is the beauty of capitalism. And so, it is my duty as a consumer to express that this business model did not work for me at all.