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Marcus: A Black Lily Club Story
Jasmine is a woman with a history of bad relationships. After receiving and invitation to the exclusive Black Lily Club, she decides to give something new a try before swearing off men all together. Will the things she experiences and the man she meets be enough to bring happiness into her relationships? Marcus is a 200 year old vampire searching for his soul mate. He is the owner and creator of the Black Lily Club, a haven for supernatural beings. Jasmine is the one person on this earth that calls to him like no other. Will his love be enough to save her from fate’s hands? Just when things start looking up for Jasmine and Marcus, hunters come to town. Thrust into a war she didn't know existed, Jasmine has a choice to make. Love or Life?
222 pages, Paperback
First published October 12, 2012
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Chelle
19 books62 followersChelle lives in small town Ohio with her family. She is a best selling author published with Hot Ink Press. She writes erotic romance with a little thriller on the side. When not curled up to her laptop, pecking out the next best seller. Chelle spends time outdoors connecting with nature and the things around her.
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August 11, 2017
DNF at 41%
Oh man. This book was published in 2013. I think 4 years is ample time to get an editor on the job.
Oh man. This book was published in 2013. I think 4 years is ample time to get an editor on the job.
January 4, 2013
Black Lily is a beautiful tale of love and sexual submission. The many sex scenes are drawn beautifully and chart the progression on the protagonists' characters. It's a pity about the numerous grammatical and spelling errors and the odd missing word. Luckily, though, the story is charming enough to ease you across the jarring mistypes and submerge you once more in its rich, exotic depths. I hope Chelle will choose to re-edit and remove the distractions from her intriguing and sensual narrative.
February 19, 2013
I am giving it 3 stars instead of 4 stars because of the grammatical errors. Other than that, it is a great story about soul mates.
March 3, 2013
Title: The Black Lily Club
Link: http://www.amazon.com/The-Black-Lily-...
ASIN: B009QAKV40
Story Rating: (paddles) 4/5 Story
Sting Factor: (kink) 3/5 Kink
Review:
Desperate times call for desperate measures. Jasmine has decided that "Old and alone with my battery-operated boyfriends is not where I am going to end up".
For two months Jasmine has waited for an invitation to The Black Lily, a BDSM club that can only be entered with an invitation and it has finally come. Scared and yet excited she prepares as directed by her invitation to take the first steps into something totally unknown to her. Being independent and self-sufficient seems to be a turn off to her having a relationship. Maybe BDSM will be the solution.
For the hundred years Marcus has searched for something or someone to complete him. She has finally walked through the door of his club. Marcus can sense that Jasmine is unsure of herself so he is sure to take things ever so slowly to help build her trust in him. He starts with a tour of part of the club and gauges her reactions to what she is seeing for the first time. He can smell her excitement and arousal and has a hard time containing himself, he must not move too fast and scare her off.
Jasmine feels she is ready to take things a step up from watching and agrees to go with Marcus to his place. When they enter he blindfolds her but softly sensually talks her into backing up to the bed and gently reassures her as he places cuffs on her and talks to her constantly as he restrains her spread eagle on the bed. Constant sensual touching and words bring her to an orgasm. As she is being released and comforted she admits that she has never before experienced an orgasm with a man. Marcus is so pleased when she expresses her desire to do more.
Plans are made to get to know each other and to explore more and more. She is hungry to do more with Marcus and he gently guides her through spanking, flogging, nipple clamps, oral sex, anal play and her hunger seems to only grow as her trust in Marcus increases.
Jasmine still does not know that Marcus is a vampire and when they prepare for her first public display in one of the viewing rooms she is excited. When Marcus adds a clit clamp she is nearly floating by the time they prepare to go. The final touch is his collar that he puts on her so all will know that she belongs to him. She feels a security she has never known before.
She is his and he is hers but that love and trust have one final test to take. Such gentle loving guidance to administer and crave things that have passed between these two has been an experience few too people have enjoyed. Do re-read to catch those wonderful thrills again and again.
A scintillating club scene short book with some fang-tastic fun!
Reviewed by: Erzabet and Victoria
Tags: BDSM. M/F. Toys. Anal Play. Spanking, Contemporary, paranormal
Link: http://www.amazon.com/The-Black-Lily-...
ASIN: B009QAKV40
Story Rating: (paddles) 4/5 Story
Sting Factor: (kink) 3/5 Kink
Review:
Desperate times call for desperate measures. Jasmine has decided that "Old and alone with my battery-operated boyfriends is not where I am going to end up".
For two months Jasmine has waited for an invitation to The Black Lily, a BDSM club that can only be entered with an invitation and it has finally come. Scared and yet excited she prepares as directed by her invitation to take the first steps into something totally unknown to her. Being independent and self-sufficient seems to be a turn off to her having a relationship. Maybe BDSM will be the solution.
For the hundred years Marcus has searched for something or someone to complete him. She has finally walked through the door of his club. Marcus can sense that Jasmine is unsure of herself so he is sure to take things ever so slowly to help build her trust in him. He starts with a tour of part of the club and gauges her reactions to what she is seeing for the first time. He can smell her excitement and arousal and has a hard time containing himself, he must not move too fast and scare her off.
Jasmine feels she is ready to take things a step up from watching and agrees to go with Marcus to his place. When they enter he blindfolds her but softly sensually talks her into backing up to the bed and gently reassures her as he places cuffs on her and talks to her constantly as he restrains her spread eagle on the bed. Constant sensual touching and words bring her to an orgasm. As she is being released and comforted she admits that she has never before experienced an orgasm with a man. Marcus is so pleased when she expresses her desire to do more.
Plans are made to get to know each other and to explore more and more. She is hungry to do more with Marcus and he gently guides her through spanking, flogging, nipple clamps, oral sex, anal play and her hunger seems to only grow as her trust in Marcus increases.
Jasmine still does not know that Marcus is a vampire and when they prepare for her first public display in one of the viewing rooms she is excited. When Marcus adds a clit clamp she is nearly floating by the time they prepare to go. The final touch is his collar that he puts on her so all will know that she belongs to him. She feels a security she has never known before.
She is his and he is hers but that love and trust have one final test to take. Such gentle loving guidance to administer and crave things that have passed between these two has been an experience few too people have enjoyed. Do re-read to catch those wonderful thrills again and again.
A scintillating club scene short book with some fang-tastic fun!
Reviewed by: Erzabet and Victoria
Tags: BDSM. M/F. Toys. Anal Play. Spanking, Contemporary, paranormal
December 1, 2012
I was given this book for my honest review.This is the type of romance novels that I personally love. Below you will find my review I hope it is helpful in helping you decide to read this.
This story is a Paranormal BDSM Short Story for ages 18+. It is about a lady named Jasmine who is your ordinary kind of woman she excel at everything she does in life except relationships. She always feels like she is missing something when it comes to the relationship in her life. She recieve a invitation to a private club called The Black Lilly. Jasmine is excited and nervous about going when she recieves the invitation, but she hopes she will find what shes been missing.
Meet Marcus the guy who has sent Jasmine the invitation. Marcus is a vampire who is looking for his soul mate. He invites Jasmine in hopes that she might be the one. She is to meet him at the bar and his first look at her gets his blood going. Marcus can't believe the feelings he has for Jasmine at first glance. He is hoping that she will feel the same things for him. Will this couple finally find what they are both missing you will have to read and find out.
I would recommend this book to anyone that like a good romance and is into paranormal reads. This author knows what she is doing and I personally can't wait till more come out. Purchase this book today I promise you won't be disappointed. When you purchase and finish reading this book please write a review of your own thanks.
This story is a Paranormal BDSM Short Story for ages 18+. It is about a lady named Jasmine who is your ordinary kind of woman she excel at everything she does in life except relationships. She always feels like she is missing something when it comes to the relationship in her life. She recieve a invitation to a private club called The Black Lilly. Jasmine is excited and nervous about going when she recieves the invitation, but she hopes she will find what shes been missing.
Meet Marcus the guy who has sent Jasmine the invitation. Marcus is a vampire who is looking for his soul mate. He invites Jasmine in hopes that she might be the one. She is to meet him at the bar and his first look at her gets his blood going. Marcus can't believe the feelings he has for Jasmine at first glance. He is hoping that she will feel the same things for him. Will this couple finally find what they are both missing you will have to read and find out.
I would recommend this book to anyone that like a good romance and is into paranormal reads. This author knows what she is doing and I personally can't wait till more come out. Purchase this book today I promise you won't be disappointed. When you purchase and finish reading this book please write a review of your own thanks.
January 19, 2013
Ebook: Black Lily Club
Author: Chelle
Fiction, Paranormal,
This review may contain spoilers
I was given this by the author for an honest review
Summary: Jasmine is a woman with a history of bad relationships and an inability to find a man to satiate her needs. One day she receives an invitation to an exclusive private club. What the hell, might as well give something different a try before swearing off men all together…right?
Marcus is a two hundred year old vampire who owns The Black Lillie Club, a safe place for vampires to seek their mates and partake in their darkest desires. He has been searching for his soul mate since his turning.
Can the Vampire who created this haven finally find his true soul mate? Can Jasmine find bliss in the hands of a stranger?
Contains: spanking, whips, cuffs, and strong BDSM scenes
The Review
I really liked this book, it brought you into the whole BDSM scene slowly, ideal for a new reader, just starting out and wanting to learn more about the scene, with a wonderful love story intertwined in it, I love the chemistry between Marcus and Jasmine, They truly were hot for each other, the sexual content had me enthralled, I loved that Marcus gently brings Jasmine into the scene because he does not want to scare her away as he believes her to be his soul mate, I hope the author will be writing more, I love the way she writes, highly recommended, 5/5
Author: Chelle
Fiction, Paranormal,
This review may contain spoilers
I was given this by the author for an honest review
Summary: Jasmine is a woman with a history of bad relationships and an inability to find a man to satiate her needs. One day she receives an invitation to an exclusive private club. What the hell, might as well give something different a try before swearing off men all together…right?
Marcus is a two hundred year old vampire who owns The Black Lillie Club, a safe place for vampires to seek their mates and partake in their darkest desires. He has been searching for his soul mate since his turning.
Can the Vampire who created this haven finally find his true soul mate? Can Jasmine find bliss in the hands of a stranger?
Contains: spanking, whips, cuffs, and strong BDSM scenes
The Review
I really liked this book, it brought you into the whole BDSM scene slowly, ideal for a new reader, just starting out and wanting to learn more about the scene, with a wonderful love story intertwined in it, I love the chemistry between Marcus and Jasmine, They truly were hot for each other, the sexual content had me enthralled, I loved that Marcus gently brings Jasmine into the scene because he does not want to scare her away as he believes her to be his soul mate, I hope the author will be writing more, I love the way she writes, highly recommended, 5/5
August 9, 2016
Marcus A Black Lily Club Story BY CHELLE
I got this book as a gift from Paranormal Romance & Authors That Rock for an honest review. Marcus a black lily club story… I can’t even find the right words. Holy craaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap. I have to give this book 4 fangs because it does have a few errors in it but hey it’s still a good read. I have such a hard time writing these without giving a lot away so let’s see how this one goes. There is sooooo much smexyness. Not even kidding I swear my windows are steamy! Jasmine is very independent runs her own business and life. In come sexy as all hell vampire Marcus and his BDSM club, Jasmines life will forever be changed. Marcus has got to be my favorite character hes been looking for his mate for 200 years and now that he finds her he cant let her go he will do anything to make his mate happy. This book 25+ haha kidding but really 18+ must love Doms, soul mates, vampires, werewolves, and kinkyness.
I got this book as a gift from Paranormal Romance & Authors That Rock for an honest review. Marcus a black lily club story… I can’t even find the right words. Holy craaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap. I have to give this book 4 fangs because it does have a few errors in it but hey it’s still a good read. I have such a hard time writing these without giving a lot away so let’s see how this one goes. There is sooooo much smexyness. Not even kidding I swear my windows are steamy! Jasmine is very independent runs her own business and life. In come sexy as all hell vampire Marcus and his BDSM club, Jasmines life will forever be changed. Marcus has got to be my favorite character hes been looking for his mate for 200 years and now that he finds her he cant let her go he will do anything to make his mate happy. This book 25+ haha kidding but really 18+ must love Doms, soul mates, vampires, werewolves, and kinkyness.
January 10, 2013
I was given a copy of this book for an honest review.
I found it a fast-paced short that lingers with you for a bit when you are finished reading it.
The Black Lily Club is the story of Jasmine, a small business owner with a long run of unsuccessful relationships. She receives an invitation to the exclusive Black Lily Club where her world is forever changed. Jasmine is invited by Marcus, the owner of the club who knows in his soul that they were meant for each other. He has secrets to share with her she cannot even imagine. Their magnetism toward each other is enchanting and lends itself well to the pace the book keeps. In the end I was impressed by the addition of details which set the Black Lily Club apart from others like it.
I recommend this short for all of my adult friends. It was a fun read.
I found it a fast-paced short that lingers with you for a bit when you are finished reading it.
The Black Lily Club is the story of Jasmine, a small business owner with a long run of unsuccessful relationships. She receives an invitation to the exclusive Black Lily Club where her world is forever changed. Jasmine is invited by Marcus, the owner of the club who knows in his soul that they were meant for each other. He has secrets to share with her she cannot even imagine. Their magnetism toward each other is enchanting and lends itself well to the pace the book keeps. In the end I was impressed by the addition of details which set the Black Lily Club apart from others like it.
I recommend this short for all of my adult friends. It was a fun read.
December 4, 2012
I found this very interesting and sexual. But not overwhelming. Jasmine has had relationship problems until she is invited to the Black Lily Club (BDSM club). She goes willingly, yet nervous. And through Marcus, who invited her, learns communication and submission. She also learns he is a vampire and she is his soul-mate.
This book was given to me by the author for review.
I did find a few grammar/spelling mistakes but not many-just a few. I did enjoy this book overall, it is a short story.
It did not have alot of the paranormal in it, but they were there. The story was more romance and BDSM.
This book was given to me by the author for review.
I did find a few grammar/spelling mistakes but not many-just a few. I did enjoy this book overall, it is a short story.
It did not have alot of the paranormal in it, but they were there. The story was more romance and BDSM.
February 15, 2013
this was a fabulous short read. We follow the our female lead Jasmine who is a successful business owner but has yet to find satisfaction in a relationship. She receives an invite to a very prestigious BDSM club and goes along. There she meets her admirer Marcus. He has been searching for her. He introduces her to the world of being a submissive and she quickly finds she is at home in this role.
Chelle's description hits the spot. Even someone not into these particular antics will get a buzz from the sexual description and heat between the main characters. This was a perfect read with my morning coffee. I will definitely read other works by this author.
Chelle's description hits the spot. Even someone not into these particular antics will get a buzz from the sexual description and heat between the main characters. This was a perfect read with my morning coffee. I will definitely read other works by this author.
October 16, 2012
Beautiful introduction to a new genre for me. I love the characters, the heart-stopping love story and the building of their relationship. Sex scenes were intensely erotic and wonderfully written. I am not familiar with BDSM genre books, so it was an enlightening book for me without being off-putting. The characters are superbly described and they have a magnetic and soul deep connectivity. Love this book! I would have given 5 stars, but there are a few little mistakes here and there. Overall....I loooved this story!!
February 27, 2013
This book was a great teacher for me, by the author Chelle. She did a wonderful job of introducing me to the world of BDSM. I learned a lot, and never felt the slightest bit uncomfortable. The characters Jasmine, a woman who is a bit hard to please, and Marcus, a vampire searching for the love of his life, come together, in order to find what they've both been missing. Marcus is an excellent tutor for Jasmine, and Jasmine proves to be more than she imagined in his eyes. But will the two be able to pull this off? You'll have to read. And by the way, it's a very good read.
November 26, 2012
I was given this book by the author in return for an honest review.
HOLY HELL!!!! What a pulse racer!!! This story of how Jasmine learns to become a submissive after never really being satisfied by a man is excellent. I love the vampirac twist, It gives a refreshing new outlook when there are so many BDSM erotica books out there!
A DEFINITE must read for anyone over 18.
I look forward to reading more from this author in the future
HOLY HELL!!!! What a pulse racer!!! This story of how Jasmine learns to become a submissive after never really being satisfied by a man is excellent. I love the vampirac twist, It gives a refreshing new outlook when there are so many BDSM erotica books out there!
A DEFINITE must read for anyone over 18.
I look forward to reading more from this author in the future
April 14, 2014
Not for me
I do love paranormal, and as this book has great potential, it fell short for me. Major editing needs to be done first and foremost. As far as the story, it felt so rushed, jumping into something else before anything is resolved. I enjoyed the characters, but could never develop a relationship with any of them. Some I couldn't even remember who they were, and some I didn't understand why they were in the story.
I do love paranormal, and as this book has great potential, it fell short for me. Major editing needs to be done first and foremost. As far as the story, it felt so rushed, jumping into something else before anything is resolved. I enjoyed the characters, but could never develop a relationship with any of them. Some I couldn't even remember who they were, and some I didn't understand why they were in the story.
March 8, 2013
Jasmine is invited to a BDSM club, with no idea who wants her there. Jasmine meets Marcus, the club owner, and falls head over heels in love for the lifestyle and him. Great story with erotica, love and a paranormal twist. WaAR
March 16, 2013
I can see where this book is just the beginning of a love story, of soul mates finding one another even when it seems as if the fates will never allow it. I hope to see more of this couple and their story as it continues to grow and encompass more of the players in their world.
May 15, 2015
Great story line...would of liked it to be longer but I would read a sequel to this book if there ever was one :)
April 24, 2014
As I sat down and started reading this book it had me hooked by the end of the first chapter. I fell in love with this book and the all most all the characters in this book. This book is full of emotional roller coaster that at times had me on the edge of my seat and gasping. This book is full of Hot Sexy As Hell Alpha Vampire Men that will have you drooling and your panty's wet . The sexual chemistry is so strong in tis book it should come with a fire extinguisher because at times I thought the book was going to combust because the part in the book was that hot.
Jasmine has a history of bad relationship and is unable to find a man who can take care of all her need . But she all so want to find some one who will let her be her self. But one day she receives an invitation to an exclusive private club. She decide to go to the cub and give it one more try be for she give up on all men. What she does not now is that Marcus a 200 year old vampire is the one who invited her because he want her as his mate . He also is the one who own the club where she will meet him. But after they meet she feel a strong attraction to him and she decide to see where they will go. The more time they spend the more she want him. But when she find out what he really is will it be to much . Will she walk away form her soul mate.
Their are some out their who think vampire and shifter are evil and will stop at nothing to get rid of them.
Can Marcus and Jasmine have a happy ever after or will fate step in and keep them apart.
Their is so much more juiciness in this book that I did not want to give away. I would love to read more from this author in the future
August 6, 2014
*This book was given to me by the author in exchange for an honest review*
Because this story is an ARC I will leave out any mention of grammatical errors/spelling errors and base this on just story.
The story is Jasmine gets an invitation to go to the exclusive invitation only club called “The Black Lillie Club.” (which is a BDSM club) Not only is it a BDSM club but it’s a special club only available to the supernatural like vampires and shape shifters (unless you’re a human and invited by someone supernatural). Jasmine hasn’t been great in the men/sex department since no man has ever made her go all the way. She goes to the club where she meets Marcus. Marcus shows her around and he shows her what the club has to offer. She and Marcus hook up and after they start a relationship. Marcus wants her to be submissive to him and after asking some questions she gives it a try.
I honestly couldn’t put this book down. It did have some awkward moments and if you aren’t into the whole BDSM story line then you wouldn’t enjoy it. The only thing I didn’t like was it was so short. A lot of things are missing like what characters look like because you aren’t given any description but like I said this is an ARC so I’m sure it’ll be fixed in a later draft. Overall I thought that the story was very interesting and cute and I did enjoy this.
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Because this story is an ARC I will leave out any mention of grammatical errors/spelling errors and base this on just story.
The story is Jasmine gets an invitation to go to the exclusive invitation only club called “The Black Lillie Club.” (which is a BDSM club) Not only is it a BDSM club but it’s a special club only available to the supernatural like vampires and shape shifters (unless you’re a human and invited by someone supernatural). Jasmine hasn’t been great in the men/sex department since no man has ever made her go all the way. She goes to the club where she meets Marcus. Marcus shows her around and he shows her what the club has to offer. She and Marcus hook up and after they start a relationship. Marcus wants her to be submissive to him and after asking some questions she gives it a try.
I honestly couldn’t put this book down. It did have some awkward moments and if you aren’t into the whole BDSM story line then you wouldn’t enjoy it. The only thing I didn’t like was it was so short. A lot of things are missing like what characters look like because you aren’t given any description but like I said this is an ARC so I’m sure it’ll be fixed in a later draft. Overall I thought that the story was very interesting and cute and I did enjoy this.
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September 21, 2013
The love story of Marcus and Jasmine is so captivating it made my heart ache!Added to the story is a sizzling serving of BDSM and you're in desperate need of a cold shower !Not only is the story well written, it pulls you in and and doesn't let you go until the last page is read!I read this book in a day and was so engrossed in it I couldn't believe when I came to the last page .Fans of the supernatural will not be disappointed , Vampires,Shifters and a love story that spans centuries,WOW! This book is a must read if you are a fan of vampire romance.Jasmine is happy in all avenues of her life except the romance department where she just can't seem to make a tangible and lasting connection.Just when she is about to throw in the towel,Marcus walks into her life and introduces her to his world of BDSM and enthralls her on a soul deep level.After she lays eyes on him the first time her life is altered forever.I fell head over heels for Marcus from the moment he was introduced into the story,and I cheered for Jasmine to finally find someone to connect with.Together nothing is impossible for these two who were born to be together.When you add to their insatiable need for one another the world of BDSM you have one sizzling work of erotica and you get to see that BDSM is not really all about pain but mostly pleasure,pleasure pushed to the brink of sexual annihilation.
April 20, 2014
Warning this book is heavy in bdsm themes and language.
Wow…wow this book left me speechless from chapter one. The book starts and jumps right into the black lily club, and Jasmines story. The book goes through how Marcus has been searching thousands of years looking for his one true love, Jasmine. That mean Marcus is a vampire and he runs the black lily which is a bdsm sex club that is home to the super natural, vampires and shifters.
Warning this book moves very fast so if that’s something you don’t like might not be for you.
So now that book includes my two favorite things super natural and bdsm. And this author combined them wonderfully, and left the reader hanging to read the next chapter. I could not put this book down and can’t wait for the next book to come out as you do meet a lot of other characters throughout the book. This book does have some sad points to it, so you might want to have tissues if you cry easy.
This book has love lose and happiness. I cannot stop raving about this book, for me it is hard to review as there are so many parts that I want to talk about but can’t without giving away something in the book so my recommendation is go get this book sit down have your man, women or some toy with you and enjoy!!! Have some fun ;)
5 stars
Reviewed by Jessica Zeleskey
Review courtesy of Nerd alert book love
Wow…wow this book left me speechless from chapter one. The book starts and jumps right into the black lily club, and Jasmines story. The book goes through how Marcus has been searching thousands of years looking for his one true love, Jasmine. That mean Marcus is a vampire and he runs the black lily which is a bdsm sex club that is home to the super natural, vampires and shifters.
Warning this book moves very fast so if that’s something you don’t like might not be for you.
So now that book includes my two favorite things super natural and bdsm. And this author combined them wonderfully, and left the reader hanging to read the next chapter. I could not put this book down and can’t wait for the next book to come out as you do meet a lot of other characters throughout the book. This book does have some sad points to it, so you might want to have tissues if you cry easy.
This book has love lose and happiness. I cannot stop raving about this book, for me it is hard to review as there are so many parts that I want to talk about but can’t without giving away something in the book so my recommendation is go get this book sit down have your man, women or some toy with you and enjoy!!! Have some fun ;)
5 stars
Reviewed by Jessica Zeleskey
Review courtesy of Nerd alert book love
August 10, 2016
I think I got this free through Amazon Kindle and just downloaded it on a whim. For a freebie, this wasn’t so bad. To be honest, it was a bit of a surprise to me that I liked it as much as I did.
I have two major complaints though hence why I rated the book 2 stars rather than 3. The first is that the book had some editing issues that were sometimes distracting. The second is that it really could have used an editor or at least a good run through to iron out some of the logistical issues. For example, at no time was it explained how Marcus knew about Jasmine and she never thought to ask him how he knew where she was or why she was invited. Jasmine was supposed be a prudent, intelligent woman so her not questioning Marcus and just showing up at a sex club due to the reception of a strange invitation didn’t make sense in the story.
Anyway, overall it wasn’t so bad. The love story turned out to be “awww” producing in the end and the chemistry between the couple was muy caliente. Also, I really liked the secondary characters and hope to read more of them.
I have two major complaints though hence why I rated the book 2 stars rather than 3. The first is that the book had some editing issues that were sometimes distracting. The second is that it really could have used an editor or at least a good run through to iron out some of the logistical issues. For example, at no time was it explained how Marcus knew about Jasmine and she never thought to ask him how he knew where she was or why she was invited. Jasmine was supposed be a prudent, intelligent woman so her not questioning Marcus and just showing up at a sex club due to the reception of a strange invitation didn’t make sense in the story.
Anyway, overall it wasn’t so bad. The love story turned out to be “awww” producing in the end and the chemistry between the couple was muy caliente. Also, I really liked the secondary characters and hope to read more of them.
April 21, 2014
3.5 stars
Jasmine gets and invitation to The Black Lily Club. she knows not from whom. since these invites are rare, she takes it up, hoping to find what she has been missing all her life. Marcus is a 200 year old vampire. its his club. and he wants Jasmine.
I found this book difficult in places to read. there is much of the story missing, I felt. there was no explanation as to HOW Marcus came across Jasmine for her to get the invitation and I would like to have known that.
the BDSM elements are good in parts, not so in others. Marcus is inclined to push Jamsine's limits, only to me, it seemed like he trashed them, completely, then expected her to be all grateful for it, like a good little sub. nope, not working for me. and the way Jasmine jumps Sam?? didn't work for me, at all.
some F/F scenes, and F/M/F as well as the BDSM.
will I read any more?? possibly not, but this was free, and for a freebie, twas okay.
Jasmine gets and invitation to The Black Lily Club. she knows not from whom. since these invites are rare, she takes it up, hoping to find what she has been missing all her life. Marcus is a 200 year old vampire. its his club. and he wants Jasmine.
I found this book difficult in places to read. there is much of the story missing, I felt. there was no explanation as to HOW Marcus came across Jasmine for her to get the invitation and I would like to have known that.
the BDSM elements are good in parts, not so in others. Marcus is inclined to push Jamsine's limits, only to me, it seemed like he trashed them, completely, then expected her to be all grateful for it, like a good little sub. nope, not working for me. and the way Jasmine jumps Sam?? didn't work for me, at all.
some F/F scenes, and F/M/F as well as the BDSM.
will I read any more?? possibly not, but this was free, and for a freebie, twas okay.
May 17, 2013
This book is a must read if you are a fan of vampire romance.Jasmine is happy in all avenues of her life except the romance department where she just can't seem to make a tangible and lasting connection.Just when she is about to throw in the towel,Marcus walks into her life and introduces her to his world of BDSM and enthralls her on a soul deep level.After she lays eyes on him the first time her life is altered forever.I fell head over heels for Marcus from the moment he was introduced into the story,and I cheered for Jasmine to finally find someone to connect with.Together nothing is impossible for these two who were born to be together.When you add to there insatiable need for one another the world of BDSM you have one sizzling work of erotica and you get to see that BDSM is not really all about pain but mostly pleasure,pleasure pushed to the brink of sexual annihilation.
September 24, 2013
Jasmine a beautiful woman whose life is pretty much on the right track except in one area, her sex life she never seems satisfied. Marcus a drop dead gorgeous Vampire who has, for what seems like an eternity been searching for the one perfect woman. Meanwhile, Jasmine receives and invite to the Black Lily club and enters a world completely unaware her life is about to an unexpected turn. Thing is not what they appear to be…..
Supernatural and BDMS, what an explosive combination! An unbelievable journey into A world of Vampires and shifters where thing are not as ordinary as one might think, giving you a new perspective into their world. Then we have Marcus and Jasmine that develop an epic love that will melt your heart as well as leaving you hot and bothered! This was an experience in the world of BDMS like no other leaving you wanting more of this series!!
Supernatural and BDMS, what an explosive combination! An unbelievable journey into A world of Vampires and shifters where thing are not as ordinary as one might think, giving you a new perspective into their world. Then we have Marcus and Jasmine that develop an epic love that will melt your heart as well as leaving you hot and bothered! This was an experience in the world of BDMS like no other leaving you wanting more of this series!!
February 5, 2014
This book improves as the story develops. I think that a good edit would improve it even further. It does have a lot of misspelt and duplicated words in sentences, which can be annoying.
The underlying story is pretty good and I enjoyed the reveal of the relevance of the dreams. The minor characters are clearly also begging for their stories to be told, and I would happily come back for more.
The underlying story is pretty good and I enjoyed the reveal of the relevance of the dreams. The minor characters are clearly also begging for their stories to be told, and I would happily come back for more.
April 14, 2014
3 1/2 stars
I liked it for what it was. A bit different from the average vampire story. I wish this book wasn't so quick to get to the I love yous and can't be without you speal. it was an enjoyable read and will probably read it again in the future. quite a few grammatical errors but it was good for the price.
I liked it for what it was. A bit different from the average vampire story. I wish this book wasn't so quick to get to the I love yous and can't be without you speal. it was an enjoyable read and will probably read it again in the future. quite a few grammatical errors but it was good for the price.
January 17, 2016
This was my very 1st Vampire BDSM Book & I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t help but say, it left me wanting more. The love story of Marcus and Jasmine is so captivating it made my heart ache and my body needing a shower, lol!! It was spicy hot & by the end I was hoping that the author Chelle will write more to find out what happened to the other characters! Hoping for a series!!
December 27, 2013
DNF. Storyline to me was just non existent. Too much fluff...not enough character build.
Would not recommend.
Would not recommend.
March 13, 2014
God i hat saying bad thing about someones creations so i want
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