26.10.23 'parrion' p11 no result on google - could be jargon for dye? Could be a raw material found only on Moonworld?
Peace at all costs, and appeasement of the aggressors as a basis for society? Extreme example.
'folokai' p13 - some kind of monster?
'"... pirik—" the bargain sum, Gird remembered: not a price paid, as if he were a sheep, but a sum to mark the conclusion to any bargain. The price was somewhat else.' p13 Interesting. Ominous.
Sibs used as an abbreviation for siblings. Is this a clue to why the drink is called sib? It sounds rather like some sort of chai.
Is there no week? Or is it simply not relevant because the days of his service don't fit it?
'"... Open heart, open hands: the Lady's blessing."' p17
The pace surprises me, like the Deed of Paksenarrion, for some reason. It's a tight mixture of specific incidents described in detail and overviews of varying periods.
fucking spurs
'he had never seen any lord, or anyone with powers beyond the stewards ability to ferret out the truth when someone lied.' p32 is this an actual power the steward uses or is it just skill and wit on the part of the steward? Does Gird know this?
> Allium tricoccum (commonly known as ramp, ramps, ramson, wild leek, wood leek, or wild garlic) is a bulbous perennial flowering plant in the amaryllis family Amaryllidaceae. It is a North American species of wild onion or garlic widespread across eastern Canada and the eastern United States. Many of the common English names for this plant are also used for other Allium species, particularly the similar Allium ursinum, which is native to Europe and Asia.
'He wished he could be an onion, safe underground.' p42
There's an emphasis on nature, even while acknowledging the distance between the farmer and the land, compared to someone like the Kuakgan, and I appreciate that. It's not always done, even when someone's supposed to have had a background as a farmer or sth like that.
Everyone just seems small-minded. I mean, they're meant to, I just find small-minded people annoying.
How dare they judge him.
> athwart
/əˈθwɔːt/
preposition
1. from side to side of; across.
"a counter was placed athwart the entrance"
2. in opposition to; counter to.
adverb
1. across from side to side; transversely.
"one table running athwart was all the room would hold"
2. so as to be perverse or contradictory.
"our words ran athwart and we ended up at cross purposes"
'For the first time in his life, he realized he could do harm he could not mend.' p49
'"... Remember what tree the forester chooses."
He'd heard that often and often before. It was not in the Lady's ritual, but it was the village's favorite truth: notice brings trouble. As bad to be always first in reaping as always last; as bad to be richest as poorest. The tall tree catches the forester's eye, and the fattest ox suggests a feast. He had never liked it, since he could not have hidden among others if he wanted to. What, he had wondered, was the tall tree supposed to *do*?' p54 fucking Tall Poppy
> vill: (in medieval England) the smallest administrative unit under the feudal system, consisting of a number of houses and their adjacent lands, roughly corresponding to the modern parish.
'He glared at the coals beneath the burning wood, that half-magical heap of coloured lights and mysterious shapes that seemed to be struggling to say something. A long hiss ended in a violent pop, and he jumped.
'I wonder what it said that time.' The girls voice held humor, as well as warmth. Gird didn't look at her.
'What all fires say,' he said.
'Here's home and safety,' she said. And then, surprisingly, 'Here's danger; here's death.'' p61
This feels a bit Druss and Rowena.
Parrion seems to be... area of expertise, or skill in, or right to practice.
hearthing - seems to refer to an area, like steading? Could be related to Wiktionary definition? : 7.(Germanic paganism) A household or group in some forms of the modern pagan faith Heathenry.
''You don't think a man knows himself best?'
Laughter burst out of her again. 'Who could? Can water know it's wet, or stone know it's hard? What could it measure itself against? ...'' pp67-68
'A daughter's parrion was a family's most valuable possession, the secrets and inherited talent of generations of women passed to a chosen carrier.' p73
A fridge for Mali?
'Esea was, after all, a god of light...' p85
> The more rural members of the population lived in cotholds. These were much smaller vassal holds, often consisting of a single extended family located near the fields, pasture, or other site of the holders' agricultural pursuits.
From the Pern wiki - McCaffrey and Moon worked together on Planet Pirates
'The steward came again, to value the cottage and the lord's property therein. Gird had the death fee to pay, part in coin and part in livestock - his precious heifers, two of them - and then the steward confirmed him in his father's place, as 'half-free tenant of this manor,' whose clothes and few personal tools might be handed down to his heir. The rest - the land, the cottage, the livestock, the major tools such as ox-yoke, plow, and scythe - were the lord's and he was 'allowed' to use them.' pp90-91
> A selion is a medieval open strip of land or a small field used for growing crops, usually owned by or rented to peasants. A selion of land was typically one furlong long and one chain wide, so one acre in area. However exact measurements could vary depending on the geography of the land.
'cracked pot' p101 used as an expression - reference by Erikson?
> bolus
1. a small rounded mass of a substance, especially of chewed food at the moment of swallowing.
2. a type of large pill used in veterinary medicine.
MEDICINE
a single dose of a drug or other medicinal preparation given all at once.
mid 16th century (denoting a large pill): via late Latin from Greek bōlos ‘clod’.
'Gird set the bucket carefully aside and gathered up his youngest child, letting him sob. He wanted to do that himself, would have given anything for a strong shoulder to cry on, but all the ones he'd known were gone.' p113
'... he wondered if it was bad luck to burn doorwood ...' p114
'Pidi replied with the triple of triples Gird had taught him.' p116 SOS
'Cob, behind him, grinned, wagged his head, and made the shame sign with his fingers.' p146
> levet
noun
obsolete
: REVEILLE
probably from Italian levata call to arms, action of raising, from feminine of levato, past participle of levare to raise, from Latin
Is there relevance here? Does it make a repeated bugling sound or did Moon just hear the word and like it, did she hear the word and forget it, or is it just coincidence?
'"I found most of the roots and barks for sib." He showed Gird a small pile which Gird would not have recognised. "There's no kira in sight of camp, and you told me not to leave—"
"Good for you. Do you know how much of each?" He certainly didn't. Pidi nodded.
"But it takes a long time. Do you want me to start it?"' p156
'"Thank Alyanya's grace for that," said Gird. He shivered, flicked his fingers to avert the trouble, whatever it had been (and he could guess well enough) ...' p182
p238 I kinda wish they'd introduced themselves, Gird's all 'the green-eyed man' this and 'the brown man' that and 'the black-bearded man' fought.
> strait
1. a narrow passage of water connecting two seas or two other large areas of water.
"the Straits of Gibraltar"
2. used in reference to a situation characterized by a specified degree of trouble or difficulty.
adjective ARCHAIC
(of a place) of limited spatial capacity; narrow or cramped.
"the road was so strait that a handful of men might have defended it"
close, strict, or rigorous.
"my captivity was strait as ever"
Middle English: shortening of Old French estreit ‘tight, narrow’, from Latin strictus ‘drawn tight’
'merin' p248
Gird seems ignorant of the role the sun plays in the lifecycle of plants - it seems odd given he's a farmer? Or maybe the perspective's just warped from Esea being the Aare god.
> mure
/mjʊə/
verbARCHAIC
imprison or shut up in an enclosed space.
Origin
late Middle English: from Old French murer, from Latin murare, from murus ‘wall’.
'The gnomes had had names for the units, based on size, from the five-gnome pigan to the hundred-gnome gerist, but the language of his own people had nothing but 'horde' and 'skirra.' The former meant everyone in the steading or hearthing who could fight, and the latter meant a small raiding party sent to steal livestock.' p358
'You can't mend it; best end it.' p371
'craftcot' p381 I assume from context a cottage with crafting equipment accompanying or modified in some way for craft?
figan soup?
' tracing one line with a blunt thumb, for he did not put the pointing finger, the shame finger, on anything that might be sacred.' p440 could the shame sign be some combination of both index fingers
tiroc p454
It feels like there could be a lot more detail in this story but at the same time you don't want to get bogged down.
She doesn't make much of the deaths of Gird's yeomen - or Gird doesn't. Is this an oversight or just the fact that he lives so close to nature and in such a repressed and brutal society that it's become commonplace to him - he lists at one point all of his immediate circle that died, before he became a member of the Stone Circle. There are rituals for the dead, but Gird doesnt dwell on people's absence or his grief, isn't shown to think about them unprompted. Paks does, from memory, so I'm inclined it just comes down to character and circumstance.
Gird is relatively small/close-minded which seems likely, accurate, a logical result of rule of one people by another.
> mode 4.
MUSIC
a set of musical notes forming a scale and from which melodies and harmonies are constructed.
late Middle English (in the musical and grammatical senses): from Latin modus ‘measure’, from an Indo-European root shared by mete1; compare with mood2.
> descant
noun
noun: descant; plural noun: descants
/ˈdɛskant/
1.
MUSIC
an independent treble melody sung or played above a basic melody.
ARCHAIC•LITERARY
a melodious song.
2.
LITERARY
a discourse on a theme.
verbLITERARY
/dɪˈskant,dɛˈskant/
talk tediously or at length.
late Middle English: from Old French deschant, from medieval Latin discantus ‘part-song, refrain’.
How a dead man gon be interesting in book two.
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I was ready to be disappointed, I sort of assumed it would be a bit of a rush job or with less substance than Paksenarrion, but it's not at all. There's a different, older perspective (I think it's set more than 300 years earlier) which allows for more worldbuilding at a really good pace, just odds and bits here and there, there's the culture clash from (and the revolution against) an immigrant people that provides a solid reasoning for a little more discussion of such, and there's the fact that the whole book more or less takes place in one country, whereas Paks was dashing round all over the place. I think I understand a little better now the unreasonable level of prejudice against magic-users. Like Paksenarrion it's a solid book that's worth reading and even a small amount of study. I do, after this first read quick on the heels of my... fourth? read of Paksenarrion, prefer The Deed of Paksenarrion as a story - the ending of Surrender None seems a little abrupt and... opaque? It's almost like she cut a manuscript in half, which I mean I appreciate because it means that there's a lower chance of errors and contradictions, the results of having a solid plan in place and the ability to use extensive oversight before publishing speak for themselves, but I wouldn't call it a satisfying conclusion. Not in a cliffhanger way though, not frustrating, I'm just left wanting more. Lucky I already have the sequel.
All in all I don't really understand the low rating - maybe people didn't read the publishing dates and, like Goodreads, thought this was the first book published? Maybe they were expecting something a little more spectacular or more similar to Paksenarrion? Maybe like me they're just unsatisfied by the ending? Maybe they just don't appreciate it. I enjoyed it, I appreciated it a little, and I definitely think there's more depth here that will be revealed through successive rereads. I grew to like and appreciate Paksenarrion more over time.