When his ex wife's family insists on keeping their holiday traditions alive Marcus Dalton is more than a little surprised to see the changes in the young girl his brother in law had raised after his army buddy passed away years ago. Having missed the past three years of the college Co-Ed's life he's not only shocked by the stunningly beautiful girl's all grown up body but he's thrown off guard when it seems she's propositioning him. This is a short story 11 800 words approximately
3 SLIGHTLY PATHETIC STARS “Yes, yes I love you Marc.” "I’m going to breed you Nat.”
For me, the heroine was just so pathetically in love with the hero that it actually made me slightly ill.
I can admit to being very old fashion in regards to my romance/erotica books and I like it when the hero does the chasing. In this book, this heroine was so obviously begging for his love and affection that it was disturbing. She kept telling him over and over how much she loved him and has always loved him.
HER DESPERATION FOR HIS ATTENTION AND AFFECTION WAS JUST SO DISAPPOINTING!
She admitted to him, "I had always planned to stay to be close to you. I know it was wrong to be in love with you I’m sorry I would never have done anything about it I swear but I couldn’t bear the thought of never seeing you I’m sorry.” Where is your self respect WOMAN? Must you act this pathetic!
Other than this issue, this book was pretty good. I did enjoy their breeding sex.
IT WAS SMOKING HOT!
The hero does fall for her and he does tell her so but he was clearly the one making the decision in their relationship. But she was okay with that.
I guess, she was just so happy to be with him that small issues like free choice and freedom of expression, could be overlooked.
Even at the end he took matters in his own hands when he did this, Three months later when she was leaning over the toilet throwing up I had to come clean about poking holes in her diaphragm. I guess whatever he said goes! Oh well, I really don't understand these types of Dom/sub relationships.
However, I wouldn't recommend this book because honestly as it had too many errors in it. Just stupid mistakes that my 10 year old daughter could have picked up. Sometimes the sentence didn't even make sense!
Also, with the hero being abusive towards the heroine with the discipline using the belt, this makes it very hard for me to recommend to anyone.
Those are the things that I found hard to digest about this book.
Personally, I was bothered by it but I was more bothered by the pathetic heroine than anything else. This is how I saw it.
Happy reading or skipping!
Safety: hero was married and slept around after his divorce, heroine was a virgin, no OW/OM drama, no cheating, no condoms or mention of them.
Content alert: anal, oral, bondage, toys, and belt hitting.
So it turns out I haven't been marking all my smut as read. Also turns out I have read a butt load (pun intended) of smut over the last few months. My kindle feels cleaner already ;)
Good read with some seriously sexy scenes. I got a weird vibe when the nineteen year old girl was the aggressor of the relationship and I wanted more of an emotional connection between the two.
HOT. HOT. AND SWEET. Jordan Silver never ceases to surprise me. She really knew how to keep her readers interested, hot, and wanting more.
At first, I was like "What the heck? That's incest!" although they were not really related by blood, it's pretty awkward and weird since he practically watched her/seen her grew up.
So if you're in Marc's shoes, what will you do if your ex-sis-in-law, the woman who practically raised/mothered the girl/woman you're lusting after, giving you the go-ahead to go after her?
You can guess where the story goes, but honestly, it played out better than I expected.
His One Sweet Thing was a short and sweet read, plus the sex was totally hottttt! Yes, it was mostly sex, that was the point, but it also had a nice sweet little story.
I will definitely be looking at Ms. Silver's other books.
Seriously, horny and hot. Which could be the way the two of them should be labeled. It was a quick read but a really enjoyable one. I'm so glad it was out there on the free list. One of the few books that was simply a joy to read, no head games, no confusion, it was just orchestrated the sexiest way, by consenting adults.
Ummmm this was a big ol hot mess! To me it was a really bad porno! The "Love" was no where near even believable and neither was the story. All of a sudden he just had to get her pregnant. Ummm ok! Either this guy is a little sicker than he is letting on or they are really reaching with this one. This book was not for me sorry.
Marcus Dalton has not seen Nat in 3 years. During that time Marcus divorced his wayward wife but has still kept in contact with her family. At their annual get together he sees Nat again, she is stunning and all grown up. Marcus knows he should not be interested in the young beauty but when she makes her love for him known, he decides to take a chance. Will it pay off?
This one was a bit too odd for me. Nats family is like pushing her to Marcus in a sense and it just didn't read right to me.
I guess this is one story I got but never read. I'm glad I read it. A short and quick read. It was Insta love on Marc's part. And I'm glad it wasn't an uncle and niece romance. So cool to have her parents on board. I do love Ms. Jordan's stories. This will of course be a reread on down the line.
I thought it was cute the way her mom and dad were in on her feelings from the start. It was different with her doing the chasing and Dalton being gun-shy after being cheated on and divorced. I liked the epilogue with their kids.
If you like a story where the hero is all about breeding the heroine, this one is for you. It’s like a switch flips for Marc with Nat. Honestly very hot. Very Jordan Silver.
Marcus and Nat reconnect after she has grown up and he has divorced his wife. He learns that she has had feelings for him all along. This steamy story kept me glued to the pages and all caught up in Marcus and Nat's steamy drama.