A frustrating book which could've been better than it was, I think.
The overall story is the type of thing I enjoy - magic vs. science, ancient vs. modern, with a sort of complex morality where both sides are right, and both sides are wrong, and you sort of like them and hate them equally. Well, not quite equally as, despite everything, I did side with Faerie because, as the Merlin said, a greenhouse is not a garden, and a garden is not a jungle, and I like a bit of wildness, me.
But the characters were distant and hard to follow. Their motivations were oftentimes confusing and I couldn't quite figure out why they were doing what they were doing. Of course, sometimes, I don't think they did, either. There are some books which fail to get you to relate to the character because there is too little information given on how the person is feeling, and what they are thinking. There are other books which seem to give you too much. This is one of the latter. It got quite repetitive and tedious, actually.
But, really, the main problem is that Bear seemed to try to cram in every version of Celtic and British mythology that ever existed, starting with the Tuatha de Danaan (an Irish notion), including the Seelie and Unseelie courts (Scottish), growing straight through Arthurian legend, co-mingling Shakespeare (both British), and then modernizing everything into this huge hodge podge of every damn thing under the sun, throwing in some 'werewolves', a bit of the old battle between Heaven and Hell (related to faerie through the seven-year tithe to Hell, though that was changed a lot since I always read that the tithe was a blood tithe and that, usually, they sent a mortal to fulfill it, not one of their own - but a necessary change for plot reasons), and then throwing in different magical systems to keep track of on top of it. (Maybe I'm just biased because I'm not a fan of the Arthurian stuff, or the teind tho I did like how Morgan was depicted, even if I was annoyed at the conflation with Morgan le Fay and the Morrighan. I had to keep telling myself this was a fictional story and not a treatise on the myths.) And, like someone else said, why should Celtic mythology rule the whole world? Except there were also Russian faeries in Faerie, but how come no, say, First Nation spirits, since the modern part of the story is in New York?)
Oh, and I know you can't blame Bear for the names, but when using names in Gaelic which are unpronounceable to English-speakers who don't know the rules of Gaelic, it might help to have some sort of table or something.
Not that that's entirely relevant, but, anyway...
As for characters, Whiskey was, by far, the best character and I truly felt for him. I sort of liked reading about Keith and the pack, though I grew tired of his constant vascillation. I liked the Merlin, too, though she was so important in the first third of the book, and then sort of just got shunted to the sidelines one she chose her side.
But I think the biggest thing that kept me distanced from the book was just the writing. At times it was hard to follow and jumpy. Something would happen sort of out of the blue, and I would flip back to see if I skipped a page or skimmed a paragraph by mistake. This seemed to happen a lot where I would sort of just start the skim. I didn't mean to - I'm not really a skimming type of reader. But the language was just laid on so thick in places. I mean, some of the metaphors were so overwrought. To paraphrase one example (since I don't have my book in front of me): 'His voice was like velvet brushing up her arm, but also cut like a razors edge of cold rain.' Or some such nonsense. At the start of the book I found the metaphors truly distracting. They did become less so as I progressed, but I don't know if that's because there were less of them, they got better, or just because I didn't pay as close attention.
**ETA - another thing that was a bit odd - we mostly follow three perspectives - Seeker/Elaine's, Keith's and Matthew's, and these are told in third person. That's fine. But then, at one point, Elaine's perspective switches from third person to first person for no real reason whatsoever. I mean, even in third person, we're told her inner thoughts and workings, so it's not like we get a more personal perspective by switching to first. It just sort of happens and for a second I was like "wait, was her part always in first person? *flip back* No, no it wasn't... it just changed. Ok - why? Wtf?"
Anyway...
Back to the jumpiness - at first I assumed this was a plot device. The characters didn't really know what was going on, so I figured it was a way to draw out the suspence. But then things started coming together, and people would be sitting around talking, sort of being expositiony, and they would have an eureka moment, and I would be left sitting there go "what the hell just happened?" I mean, I know that Faerie is all about riddles and puzzles and things, but this book seemed far too ponderous and hard to follow at times, for what amounted to, really, much ado about not that much because, at the end of the day, it wasn't really all that difficult. Sort of like she wrote it in a way to be befuddling because she knew that it was really rather straight-forward, but she wanted it to seem more layered than it was.
Then again, I suppose that, too, is very fey - all smoke and mirrors, tricks and illusions...
I haven't decided if I'll continue with the series. I am curious as to what happens. Does Keith return? Does Whiskey get released? I wasn't really satisfied with how this book ended, and I would like a more complete and, dare I say, happy-ish resolution, but being that none of these things are guaranteed, I'm not sure I want to get through the overly dense writing without knowing if the pay-out will be worth it. Decisions, decisions... *le sigh*