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Taken
When ex marine Jeremy Ashton is asked to look after his friend's eighteen year old daughter for the summer he has no idea what he's supposed to do with the out of control young tease. At thirty five he's a childless bachelor who doesn't know the first thing about kids; but when the young girl starts testing out her wiles on him he's about to show her just what happens when she teases a real man.
55 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 23, 2013
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Jordan Silver
237 books3,551 followersJordan Silver is the author of more than 150 steamy romance novels and novellas featuring over the top alpha males and the women who love them.
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May 26, 2015
3.5 Short and Smutty Stars!
No need for a real review for this one... A quick read (less than an hour) with a lot of hot and raunchy sex. Not too much of a story or character development, and there was some lack of punctuation that was distracting. But if you're looking for a short hot read- this is the one for you!
October 26, 2013
Phew...what a hot little read!
But, geez, what's with the general lack of punctuation marks!?
At times, I had to read sentences two or three times just to figure out where one sentence ended and the next one began. So yeah, that bothered me quite a lot after a while.
But other than that, it was a fun, very short, in between read with a hot, bossy alpha male! ;)
♦ 2.5 STARS. ♦
January 1, 2016
Ladies and gentlemen, I am proud to present to you a book so bad, it earned the coveted title of being The Worst Story I Have Ever Read In My Entire Life.
Mind you, that is no easy feat. There have been strong contenders for the position over the years, namely, the books in the Fifty Shades of Grey series. But they don't even come close to how bad this was.
Let me explain why this qualified for the title.
First, the writer used punctuation marks sparingly . And by sparingly, I meant "my-eyes-are-burning-where-the-hell-are-the-proper-punctuations?" Almost every paragraph lacked a period, a comma.
Yes, I'm serious. Take this for example:
Are you cringing now? No? Well, check the next paragraph:
And then there are errors like this:
You're finally tapping out? Well, imagine a whole novelette filled with paragraphs like that. I'm not kidding. Every single paragraph seemed like it was written by a 10-year-old kid.
Second, the prose was horrible . You know, I really shouldn't have expected much in the way of prose, considering the shitty way this was written. But really, these were just gag-worthy:
And this:
This was so horrible, it was almost amusing. Almost. If it weren't for the painful and graphic sex, I would have recommended this for science. But yeah. The sex here wasn't the enjoyable kind; it was painful as fuck . The first sex scene was basically rape, with the guy forcing the heroine, despite her tears and cries of pain:
And then there was a scene where he punished her for talking to another guy by forcing painful anal sex with her (no lube, no preparation):
So, no. I would never recommend this. NEVER. I don't understand how this got an aggregate rating of 3.45 stars from 1,387 Ratings. It's because of books like this that I'm losing faith in humanity.
P.S. Did I mention that the h is the daughter of the H's friend? And that she's only 18--old enough to be the H's daughter? Yup.
Mind you, that is no easy feat. There have been strong contenders for the position over the years, namely, the books in the Fifty Shades of Grey series. But they don't even come close to how bad this was.
Let me explain why this qualified for the title.
First, the writer used punctuation marks sparingly . And by sparingly, I meant "my-eyes-are-burning-where-the-hell-are-the-proper-punctuations?" Almost every paragraph lacked a period, a comma.
Yes, I'm serious. Take this for example:
If she doesn’t stop her shit I’m gonna fuck her, hard; that’s all there is to it there’s only so much a man can take after all. I know she knows what she’s doing too the little cock tease, lying there with her legs bent as she pretends to watch television while giving me crotch shots of her almost naked pussy.
Are you cringing now? No? Well, check the next paragraph:
I watched her as she swung her legs up and down and side to side, every once in a while she’d peek up at me to see if she had my attention but each time my focus would be on the screen.
And then there are errors like this:
I’m also pretty sure my good pal and his wife would not appreciate me drilling their barley legal daughter while she was in my care.
You're finally tapping out? Well, imagine a whole novelette filled with paragraphs like that. I'm not kidding. Every single paragraph seemed like it was written by a 10-year-old kid.
Second, the prose was horrible . You know, I really shouldn't have expected much in the way of prose, considering the shitty way this was written. But really, these were just gag-worthy:
I got up out of my recliner game forgotten as the woodyshe’d given me throbbed in my gym shorts.
And this:
Getting to my feet I took my rod of steel in hand and led it to her cunt opening while she protested futilely once more, too late my chin bore the evidence of just how much she was enjoying my attentions.
This was so horrible, it was almost amusing. Almost. If it weren't for the painful and graphic sex, I would have recommended this for science. But yeah. The sex here wasn't the enjoyable kind; it was painful as fuck . The first sex scene was basically rape, with the guy forcing the heroine, despite her tears and cries of pain:
I stopped talking and got down to some serious fucking, the pussy was so good I wanted to stay in her all day, I loved those pussy hurt noises she made as I plowed into her from behind the way her ass pushed back begging for more of my cock even as she cried out for pain.
And then there was a scene where he punished her for talking to another guy by forcing painful anal sex with her (no lube, no preparation):
I used my cock to punish as I bore into her battering her cervix; as soon as I felt her orgasm coming on I pulled out and slammed into her ass without lube. She screamed bloody murder...
So, no. I would never recommend this. NEVER. I don't understand how this got an aggregate rating of 3.45 stars from 1,387 Ratings. It's because of books like this that I'm losing faith in humanity.
P.S. Did I mention that the h is the daughter of the H's friend? And that she's only 18--old enough to be the H's daughter? Yup.
September 27, 2013
Super smutty fun! Holy shit this book was H-O-T.. this was my first Jordan Silver book and I really like her writing style. She's not afraid to push the envelope on right and wrong and can write some seriously hot smut.
Jordan is 35 and sex on stick.. AND keeping his friends 18 year old daughter, Nikki, for the summer.. she's become quite the handful..getting into trouble and going wild. She's basically a virgin slut :) and is mostly just a big tease... well she teases Jeremy one time to many and he decides to show this little girl who's boss. And he does this banging the shit out of her constantly. Damn.. he didn't ease baby girl into slowly either. um...yea.. wow..
I was over her my body casting a shadow as I blocked the sun, my hands went straight to her bottoms and pulled, she started and tried to turn over but I put my knee in the small of her back. “Stay where you are.” “What, what are you doing Major Ashton?” She looked over her shoulder at me but I paid her no mind as I tore the bikini bottoms down her thighs. Lifting her ass in my hands I sniffed her pussy before sticking my tongue out and...
And seriously...the whole book is just hot.. he doesn't take any shit off her. He's a total cave man with a huge ass pecker and he throws that thing around like crazy... bam bam bam.. crazy. She really didn't stand a chance against him and his amazing fuckabilities.
Yep, I liked it. A lot. I like these little hot short raunchy reads...I don't have to think about nothing.. just enjoy the ride ;)
October 1, 2013
1.5 short, smutty, sleazy stars
Just because it's smut it doesn't mean the author should forgo using commas and periods in their sentences, right? This was a short read but the writing just ruined it for me. The words used here are just, ugh, sleazy and not sexy at all. :(
Just because it's smut it doesn't mean the author should forgo using commas and periods in their sentences, right? This was a short read but the writing just ruined it for me. The words used here are just, ugh, sleazy and not sexy at all. :(
September 29, 2013
11 inches of fun!!
If you looking for a smutty read look no further.
December 26, 2014
In the entirety of 2014, there was not a SINGLE book that I rated 1 star. Of the 123 books I've read in 2014 so far, not a singly one deserved a one star. Except for this. This novel/novella was disgusting and awful and I cringe every time I think about it. I don't even want to get into it that much because it makes me feel sick, but just please NEVER READ THIS. Okay. I guess I have to get into it.
It's fucking ridiculous.
So it's from the male's perspective, who's 35 years old and has eleven inches down there (which he refers to as monster/meat. WHO DOES THAT?!?). An 18 year old girl, his friend's daughter no less, is spending time in his home over the summer because her parents trust him to take care of her because she's constantly rebelling against them. Pretty much a few hours (maybe less) after the parents leave, he rapes her.
But it's not completely portrayed in that way. She was 'asking for it' because she was 'teasing' him. And I quote, " I’m not sure what she’d expected when she first started her teasing but I’m pretty sure it wasn’t to find herself impaled on my monster. ". So then it's really painful for her and she didn't like it and she wanted him to stop ("there was no way I was stopping so her pleas fell on deaf ears", "some perverse part of me liked knowing I was causing her some pain") but he doesn't.
So then later they have a bunch of consensual sex later on, but still with him threatening her and acting like a dickface. He talks about his dick (or, as he calls it, monster)(literally wtf) like it has a mind of its own, and it 'can't help' itself. They go shopping for condoms (because he didn't care before about giving her an STD or making her pregnant the first two days they were fucking)(need I remind you that SHE'S EIGHTEEN AND JUST BECAME AND ADULT) and they meet one of his old conquests and she kinda hints that they should have sex. So the girl gets angry and storms off and then , as a way of provoking him and getting him back, gets a little flirty with one of the marines (who's 21) who comes by his place to ask about stuff.
So then, as the royally assholic dom that he is, thinks about firing the guy but then just rapes the girl again. Severely. I really don't want to get into detail because it pains me to do so, but it's absolutely awful. She still comes back to him, though, and then apologizes for TOUCHING ANOTHER GUY'S FREAKING ARM AND SAYING THAT THE OTHER GUY SHOULD MAYBE HANG OUT SOMETIMES and ladiladila happily ever after.
It's fucking ridiculous.
So it's from the male's perspective, who's 35 years old and has eleven inches down there (which he refers to as monster/meat. WHO DOES THAT?!?). An 18 year old girl, his friend's daughter no less, is spending time in his home over the summer because her parents trust him to take care of her because she's constantly rebelling against them. Pretty much a few hours (maybe less) after the parents leave, he rapes her.
But it's not completely portrayed in that way. She was 'asking for it' because she was 'teasing' him. And I quote, " I’m not sure what she’d expected when she first started her teasing but I’m pretty sure it wasn’t to find herself impaled on my monster. ". So then it's really painful for her and she didn't like it and she wanted him to stop ("there was no way I was stopping so her pleas fell on deaf ears", "some perverse part of me liked knowing I was causing her some pain") but he doesn't.
So then later they have a bunch of consensual sex later on, but still with him threatening her and acting like a dickface. He talks about his dick (or, as he calls it, monster)(literally wtf) like it has a mind of its own, and it 'can't help' itself. They go shopping for condoms (because he didn't care before about giving her an STD or making her pregnant the first two days they were fucking)(need I remind you that SHE'S EIGHTEEN AND JUST BECAME AND ADULT) and they meet one of his old conquests and she kinda hints that they should have sex. So the girl gets angry and storms off and then , as a way of provoking him and getting him back, gets a little flirty with one of the marines (who's 21) who comes by his place to ask about stuff.
So then, as the royally assholic dom that he is, thinks about firing the guy but then just rapes the girl again. Severely. I really don't want to get into detail because it pains me to do so, but it's absolutely awful. She still comes back to him, though, and then apologizes for TOUCHING ANOTHER GUY'S FREAKING ARM AND SAYING THAT THE OTHER GUY SHOULD MAYBE HANG OUT SOMETIMES and ladiladila happily ever after.
September 27, 2013
Well if you want a story to get off from the power a male has upon a woman then this one is the right one..
It' short and has errors but the sex part is good..
But why his penis must be 11 inches?
It bothers me how unrealistic everything was but this was the worst..
Sure it happens, but come on..
Everything else seems fake.. Couldn't this be real? After what they do, no pain at all and she acts like a lost puppy around him..
No matter what though there is a slight glimpse of romance and some feelings from his side..
We will see..
THOUGHTS ABOUT THE BOOK
- Unrealistic situations..
- Crude language..
- He is almost brutal towards her..
- I hope in the next part he will understand his feelings for her and there will be some love element..
It' short and has errors but the sex part is good..
But why his penis must be 11 inches?
It bothers me how unrealistic everything was but this was the worst..
Sure it happens, but come on..
Everything else seems fake.. Couldn't this be real? After what they do, no pain at all and she acts like a lost puppy around him..
No matter what though there is a slight glimpse of romance and some feelings from his side..
We will see..
THOUGHTS ABOUT THE BOOK
- Unrealistic situations..
- Crude language..
- He is almost brutal towards her..
- I hope in the next part he will understand his feelings for her and there will be some love element..
August 27, 2016
3.5 no real story, a LOT of hard fucking stars
Sometimes when you just fancy a bit of
'take my 11 inch cock and open wide'
totally dirty, (think ass straight to vag!)
'it ain't gonna be pretty'
'it is gonna be inappropriate'
fuckfesting fun!
you always know Jordan Silver will deliver!
30 minutes well spent I say! LOL
Sometimes when you just fancy a bit of
'take my 11 inch cock and open wide'
totally dirty, (think ass straight to vag!)
'it ain't gonna be pretty'
'it is gonna be inappropriate'
fuckfesting fun!
you always know Jordan Silver will deliver!
30 minutes well spent I say! LOL
November 8, 2021
Really nothing to review. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Those stars are only for the LOOOOOOOOTSSSSSS of heated moments b/w the MCs.
P.s.= Dont worry. No cheating.
February 14, 2022
4⭐️ I kind of felt bad for her in the beginning when he really said no mercy but now I just envy her 😒
October 23, 2013
Dreadful, for starters this book I read in 30 mins, it's a short sorry and a rip off for £1.93. Its going to be one of those books when the authors going to try and milk it, releasing the story over a vast amount of short stories and over price them. It's got to be one of the worse books I have ever read.
It's a poor story line and all it really talks about is sex to the point where its repetitive and predictable and boring. It's about a 35 year old man, he's a typical alpha male, who's been trusted with a friends virgin daughter who's acting like typical tease teen, only he decided she needs to be taught a lesson- by ruthlessly fucking her, and he forces himself upon her, takes her virginity and does all kinds of sick things, incl time after time openly enjoying shooting his load inside her, implanting his seed in her, to impregnate (he never once uses a rubber over the many times he bangs her) I'm sick of reading about pounding, ass and cervix etc. the writer should have gave it a storyline with sex rather than just focus on sex, and hope it sells. Bad punctuation, it's confusing at times one moment it's him telling the story then it changes to her and then it's as if another person is telling it, there is no consistency.
There's just something not right about this book. No way I'd buy any more from this author. I'm not a prude I
Iike a good hot book to read, this one was to far fetched, to sexually vile to enjoy and a poor storyline. Awful.
It's a poor story line and all it really talks about is sex to the point where its repetitive and predictable and boring. It's about a 35 year old man, he's a typical alpha male, who's been trusted with a friends virgin daughter who's acting like typical tease teen, only he decided she needs to be taught a lesson- by ruthlessly fucking her, and he forces himself upon her, takes her virginity and does all kinds of sick things, incl time after time openly enjoying shooting his load inside her, implanting his seed in her, to impregnate (he never once uses a rubber over the many times he bangs her) I'm sick of reading about pounding, ass and cervix etc. the writer should have gave it a storyline with sex rather than just focus on sex, and hope it sells. Bad punctuation, it's confusing at times one moment it's him telling the story then it changes to her and then it's as if another person is telling it, there is no consistency.
There's just something not right about this book. No way I'd buy any more from this author. I'm not a prude I
Iike a good hot book to read, this one was to far fetched, to sexually vile to enjoy and a poor storyline. Awful.
November 11, 2013
Well, that was.....different.
First off, I usually don't like novellas. Secondly, the numerous grammatical errors in this story should have been sending my literary OCD into overdrive.
But, despite everything it had against it, I somehow managed to really enjoy this twisted little story.
Silver writes bare bones, down and dirty smutty goodness. And even though I am not comfortable with her fondness for "breeding" (something that was only mentioned in passing here, but plays a more active role in some of her her other stories), I enjoyed the naughtiness of this. It was definitely different, and I think that's what I needed after suffering through a massive reading slump over the past few weeks.
This story was wacky and over the top raunchy, but I enjoyed the crazy ride.
First off, I usually don't like novellas. Secondly, the numerous grammatical errors in this story should have been sending my literary OCD into overdrive.
But, despite everything it had against it, I somehow managed to really enjoy this twisted little story.
Silver writes bare bones, down and dirty smutty goodness. And even though I am not comfortable with her fondness for "breeding" (something that was only mentioned in passing here, but plays a more active role in some of her her other stories), I enjoyed the naughtiness of this. It was definitely different, and I think that's what I needed after suffering through a massive reading slump over the past few weeks.
This story was wacky and over the top raunchy, but I enjoyed the crazy ride.
September 14, 2017
2 1/2 could have gone a lot better stars!
I didn't want to give it 1 star, but here it is about this book..
I mean, don't get me wrong, this is mainly about smut, but still, with the repition of certain words that much, it turned out to be worse than I anticipated. It really could have gone a LOT better, even within its premise as a smutty book.
Plus the guy was, excuse the language, a douche!
I mean, I get that he's the tough aluring guy, but still!
And darn it all, it was hot as heck!
I really wanted to give it more stars, but I couldn't
I didn't want to give it 1 star, but here it is about this book..
I mean, don't get me wrong, this is mainly about smut, but still, with the repition of certain words that much, it turned out to be worse than I anticipated. It really could have gone a LOT better, even within its premise as a smutty book.
Plus the guy was, excuse the language, a douche!
I mean, I get that he's the tough aluring guy, but still!
And darn it all, it was hot as heck!
I really wanted to give it more stars, but I couldn't
November 15, 2013
DAMN, GEEZ, PHEW...what a SHORT STEAMY read!
Need a cold shower!!! :D
But this book made me HAPPY, HAPPY....
Need a cold shower!!! :D
But this book made me HAPPY, HAPPY....
April 6, 2014
Omg, this was so HOT and awful! The grammar/punctuation was so bad, I figured it was Freudian stream-of-consciousness raunch. There was no point in whining about it, after awhile. I laughed my ass off when the author described one of the members of his security team as being in the "corpse" instead of the "corps." How could he fall in love with such a young, selfish and stupid girl? Hasn't he ever heard of the snatch and release method of fishing, heehee?
August 6, 2016
Book porn. Could have been better if the writing was not such an effin' mess. Wish the story was as good as the cover. But then, the explicit steam belies the sensual eroticism of the cover image as well. LOL
June 12, 2022
Too short
The story started off good in the beginning, but I didn't like the ending. It didn't feel finished, it felt a little open-ended.
The story started off good in the beginning, but I didn't like the ending. It didn't feel finished, it felt a little open-ended.
August 27, 2016
This was the worst story I have ever, EVER read in my life. I have never been more disgusted and repulsed. Nothing made sense, from the characters, to the plot. Absolutely horrendous. I don't even want to give it one star. My goodness, what a waste of time.
December 3, 2013
Hot little number!
March 10, 2014
I liked the borderline taboo plot of this series, but copy editing required. Double the periods and commas in the book and then we'd be in the ballpark of where it needs to be.
January 2, 2016
I think what bugged me most about book 1&2 is the guy was a dick. I didn't see him caring about anyone but himself. Plus he was cocky. Yes, dude we know everyone wants your dick.
December 30, 2018
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December 19, 2023
Very JS 🤡 - this one had very little plot
November 25, 2015
So that was pretty bad....but also kind of good...but mostly bad. So..yeah.
But seriously, this is a novella - thank God - and there is zero punctuation in the beginning. I mean, really, good luck. As the book progresses, we get punctuation but the spelling errors and incorrect word usage continue. This is erotica...(alright, it's porn) so you already know what to expect dialogue wise. Storyline - A concerned family sends their wild child 18yr old daughter to a 35yr old family friend who is a Major in the Military. His job is to babysit her for a few weeks and get her on the straight and narrow. Well, he got her on something alright, but it was more like his '11 inch monster'. *Rolls eyes* I know. I know. Then it's all sex, sex, 'don't walk around in your tiny bikini teasing me or you WILL get f*cked'. Then actual f*cking happens. It starts off kind of dubcon, but then is ok. She is a virgin, but such a quick learner! {straight face smiley} Elasti vag and everything, taking a pounding and begging for more! Also, one or both of them may need to see a doctor as bodily juices were dripping and flowing all over the place in suspiciously large quantities.
The male lead is a huge asshat and there are many things very wrong with this scenario, but it was interesting and I AM a sucker for the younger female / older male trope so I will read part 2.
2.5*
But seriously, this is a novella - thank God - and there is zero punctuation in the beginning. I mean, really, good luck. As the book progresses, we get punctuation but the spelling errors and incorrect word usage continue. This is erotica...(alright, it's porn) so you already know what to expect dialogue wise. Storyline - A concerned family sends their wild child 18yr old daughter to a 35yr old family friend who is a Major in the Military. His job is to babysit her for a few weeks and get her on the straight and narrow. Well, he got her on something alright, but it was more like his '11 inch monster'. *Rolls eyes* I know. I know. Then it's all sex, sex, 'don't walk around in your tiny bikini teasing me or you WILL get f*cked'. Then actual f*cking happens. It starts off kind of dubcon, but then is ok. She is a virgin, but such a quick learner! {straight face smiley} Elasti vag and everything, taking a pounding and begging for more! Also, one or both of them may need to see a doctor as bodily juices were dripping and flowing all over the place in suspiciously large quantities.
The male lead is a huge asshat and there are many things very wrong with this scenario, but it was interesting and I AM a sucker for the younger female / older male trope so I will read part 2.
2.5*
October 16, 2013
I'm not sure if this was more "Dear Penthouse" without the editing or a teen's fantasy of a masterful older man introducing her to sex. The basic storyline was of an 18-year-old virgin who had been getting into trouble at home being sent by her parents to live with their 35-year-old ex-military friend for the summer. The girl is a relentless tease and the man basically introduces his 12 inch cock (!) into every one of her virgin orifices--repeatedly and without a condom--within hours of her arrival.
Ordinarily, I enjoy well-written erotica. While technically this involved two "adults," I found the age and experience difference as well as the fact that the girl had been entrusted to his care frankly off-putting if not downright appalling. Add to that the story was not well-written and I found myself skimming past the sex scenes (which comprised most of the story) to the end.
At least it was short.
Ordinarily, I enjoy well-written erotica. While technically this involved two "adults," I found the age and experience difference as well as the fact that the girl had been entrusted to his care frankly off-putting if not downright appalling. Add to that the story was not well-written and I found myself skimming past the sex scenes (which comprised most of the story) to the end.
At least it was short.
February 18, 2014
Where do I start??? I love trashy smutty books, but this book is ridiculous .
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December 9, 2014
This is the first book by Ms Silver that I didn't like, not even a bit. I think what I missed was the lack of feelings from the MC's to one another...there wasn't even that famous insta lust that evolves to love with time, though here you won't be having. All the sex and as a matter of fact the whole story (wich pretty much was the coupling of those two) was just a fling intended to work as a lesson from the Hero to the little tease heroine.
At some point I felt that the author just wrote about that porn movie that she saw and what do you know, here we have a book!
At some point I felt that the author just wrote about that porn movie that she saw and what do you know, here we have a book!
December 29, 2016
2.75 stars
Little Nikki was an 18 year-old cock tease. Major Ashton wasn't one to remain idle and ignorant of her charms. This was a quick and dirty read with lots of foul language balanced with humor. I liked the humor of the male lead, but this story wasn't as realistic and leaned more towards demeaning the female lead.
Little Nikki was an 18 year-old cock tease. Major Ashton wasn't one to remain idle and ignorant of her charms. This was a quick and dirty read with lots of foul language balanced with humor. I liked the humor of the male lead, but this story wasn't as realistic and leaned more towards demeaning the female lead.
February 16, 2018
Nice dirty read. Sometimes you just need some dirty over the top alpha pounding! :)
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