This is a really hard book to rate. Why you ask? Because there was a lot of stuff to love... and then a lot of stuff not to love.
We have Delaney (a.k.a. Lane or Laney), a young woman who has just broken up with her cheating TV star boyfriend and moved into a new apartment. Thanks to a skin issue that causes her to have "patches" of discoloration and a bitch-faced mother (who is seen once and never heard from again, rather unsatisfactorily), not to mention the actions of her dickhead ex, Laney is rampant with insecurities. She still thinks she loves her cheating ex because he's beautiful and she's not (or maybe doesn't think she is -- it was hard to tell if Laney was actually beautiful and just didn't realize it because of her skin problems or if her friends just loved her so much they only saw the beautiful). Then we have Oliver, Laney's new neighbor, a good looking doctor playboy who is in love with his brother's fiancee.
This book has some great commentary on love and appearances and expectations and heroes. The author did an excellent job in making sure both of her characters had very real flaws, which is something not a lot of romance authors think to do. Unfortunately, particularly with Laney, these flaws made it very hard to love the characters. I didn't respect Laney for a large part of the book. She was willing to go back to her cheating asshat ex simply because she didn't want to be alone. I hate those women and I don't want to read about them. I get that there are esteem issues, but I can deal with an FMC that would rather be alone while thinking her cheating asshat ex is the best she can do, but not with one who is willing to upend her life to go back and continue to be a doormat for him. I really just have very little sympathy for that kind of woman. Also, later in the book when things are getting weird between Laney and Oliver, in an effort to avoid him, Laney gives her dog away so she won't have to see him. Seriously? She gets this dog earlier in the book from the pound (so clearly the dog is going to have abandonment issues) and then she just gives it to one of her best friends so she doesn't have to walk it. It's implied that it isn't a permanent thing, but that's pretty horrible and selfish dog owner behavior.
Not. Cool.
I was a bit more tolerant of Oliver (which is odd for me because I tend to be harder on the males than the females in these stories). I got why he was the way he was, with his hero complex and his almost courtly love for his future sister-in-law. And again, I liked the way the book didn't shy away from his flaws, or try to turn his hero complex into something more admirable.
Unfortunately, something about the writing never really connected with me. A lot of the action happened off page. I don't mean the sex scenes (although anyone looking for smut needs to be aware that those were off-page too), but conversations and emotions. I feel the book would have benefited from getting some of Laney's conversations with her cheating ex -- as it was, it's mentioned many times after he visits her that she is still texting him, but then the whole thing is dropped. I get that for Laney he wasn't important, but it felt like her eventual apathy toward her ex should have been brought up. Also, there were some pretty important conversations with Mia that really should have been on-page (in my opinion). As it was, a lot of the emotions I should have been connecting with just weren't there and it felt like I was reading... well... words on a page. There were odd non-sequiturs and frequently, when I thought a character should have been reacting to something another one said (this was usually in the conversations between Oliver and Laney), there was no reaction at all, only to find out pages later, that the character had responded to something completely different.
This wasn't a bad book at all -- it was a cute little romantic... well I won't call it a comedy because beyond some cute banter, it didn't really try to be funny, but it wasn't really a drama either. So I guess a cute little romantic something. And again, the author had some really fantastic thoughts regarding several subjects that you don't see very often in romance novels. I love that she didn't shy away from the fact that for all of Laney's insecurities, she was extremely appearance-motivated. But that's really what it felt like -- two characters, not people being brought alive from the electronic pages of my Kindle. I really enjoyed it and found it hard to put down, but in the end, this was one that could have been so much better.
(Plus, this subject bears repeating: I don't care how broken-hearted you are, you don't give your dog, who you adopted from the pound only a few months ago and is starting to get used to you, away because it's just too hard (read: you're too self-absorbed) to see your ex when you walk her.)