Cowboy Command

Cowboy Justice Association #1

by Olivia Jaymes

Sometimes you have to die to be born.

One minute Katie is eating lunch with her sister, the next she barely escapes a car bomb meant to kill her. If that wasn’t enough, someone sets fire to her home and burns it to the ground. Luckily, Federal agents are going to give her a new identity until she can testify against the man who wants her dead. They change her name to Presley, her hair color to brown, and her shorts and sandals to jeans and cowboy boots. She’s not thrilled about being sent to a small town in Montana to hide, but she wants to stay alive.

Sheriff Seth Reilly is doing a favor for an old Army buddy. He’s promised to watch over a woman whose life is in danger, but he didn’t plan on her being so young and beautiful. He’s tempted, but she’s a bundle of trouble. Seth likes his women calm and sedate. Presley is the kind of woman who would keep him up at night and make him crazy. Too bad he’s starting to enjoy it.

Passion flares between Seth and Presley, heating up the cold Montana nights. Knowing they only have a short time together, they vow not to fall in love. But when danger finds Presley, Seth will risk everything to keep her safe until she can testify. Will Presley get her old life back or start a new life with Seth instead?

Publisher’s warning: This book contains graphic sex scenes including an alpha male cowboy sheriff using Christmas lights to tie up his woman, a sexy strip tease, and steamy action in the cab of a truck.

Genres: Romance, Romantic Suspense, Westerns, Erotica, Contemporary, Suspense, Contemporary Romance

286 pages, ebook

First published September 29, 2013

About the author

Olivia Jaymes is a wife, mother, lover of sexy romance, and caffeine addict. She lives with her husband and son in central Florida and spends her days with handsome alpha males and spunky heroines.
She currently has five series: Cowboy Justice Association, Danger Incorporated, and Military Moguls, Midnight Blue Beach Trilogy, and her brand new contemporary romance series The Hollywood Showmance Chronicles.

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Reviews

[book_luv_r · Rating 2 out of 5]

Why do I keep falling for the reviews that make me think I'm going to find my next "it" book? This book started out pretty good, but once Presley is taken to Montana to hide out, things get boring. Fast. Seth is the sheriff in a small Montana town. This book has all the makings of a steamy, well developed love story. Not!. Up until the 50% mark I thought the book would have been better suited to have the title be Vanilla Cowboy. They drink root beer, soda, and lots of coffee. Seth tells her he would like to sleep with her and is it okay. Boring. The strange sex scenes felt very robotic with quite a lot of talking to each other about their families and how they grew up while they are naked, supposedly in the throws of passion. The author throws in words like the c word, which seemed so out of place. Weird book.

[Maida (Medley of Books) · Rating 2 out of 5]

RATING: 1.5 HEARTS

Much to my dismay, I too often fall for the allures of beautiful book covers (most specifically to those that feature gorgeous men!), and while there have been numerous times where the intended book has been amazing outside and in, there have been just as many – if not more – times where I have been majorly disappointed. Olivia Jaymes’ Cowboy Command, unfortunately, falls in the latter category.

The one thing I try very hard to not do while reading any book, is skip pages. It’s something I do to keep an open mind no matter how distressing the read. With this book, I had no choice. We are given a promising enough blurb; with a not so overly complicated plot, two very different but interesting characters, and the hint of a hot romance. What should have made this a memorable read when combining these three elements, instead, proved to be a hinderance to the storyline. The beginning-to-end flow of narrative is present, but with no depth. Every action scene, character development (mostly on Presley’s side), and even sex scene felt empty, making for a very dull read and the main reason for my constant page-skipping.

Seth’s character is probably the only compensatory (and my most favourite) part of this entire story. His character portrays the image of the bad boy mixed with the gentle and sometimes overprotective man – my kind of hero (and he’s a cowboy!!). That being said, we are introduced to Seth’s weakness in the story He blames himself for killing his best friend in a car straddling game gone wrong when they were teenagers, and he can’t forgive himself and while this is a large part of Seth’s character development, it is not referenced upon again after the initial mention nor is it resolved by the end. And yet, somehow, we end up with a HEA with both characters happy. Every aspect of this story is centered on Katie/Presley, and how she grows as a character and overcomes her weaknesses and insecurities. Seth’s character is eclipsed by Presley’s to the point of being quite annoying. I wanted more of Seth, more of his fun, quirky family, and even his circle of lawmen friends – heck, I wanted anything but more of Presley, which did not happen in this case.

Presley’s character is a source of frustration throughout the story. Perhaps, I would have invested more in her had the focus of the entire story not been solely on her, despite her being one of the protagonists. As for the romance, meh (not the best word, but it describes my feelings perfectly) comes to mind. There is a little bit of kink thrown into the smexy scenes, and emotional attachment is forenamed, yet the romance left a more “whatever” kind of feeling rather than in girly giddiness. In fact, most of the pages I skipped were the love scenes. As a romance junkie, this is perhaps why I couldn’t get much into the story as well.

Overall, where Cowboy Command might be the perfect read for many readers, regrettably, it was not for me. I haven’t dismissed the series altogether, but I am not jumping to get Justice Healed in my hands anytime soon. Maybe when I’m in one of my “I-want-to-read-a-cowboy-story-but-can’t-find-one-because-I’m-too-lazy-to-browse-Goodreads” moods.



No disrespect was intended towards the author or anyone who did enjoy this read. These are my honest opinions.


Updated: May 17, 2014

[Teri · Rating 2 out of 5]

1.5-2 stars
I don't know what to say, nothing about this really worked for me. I really liked the idea, and it started right away with action, but dear god this got just flat out bizarre to me. Strange conversations. Seth and Presley are discussing losing their virginity within minutes of knowing each other, Eliza is telling presley how she is in lust with some other dude and how badly she wants him despite JUST meeting Presley and the fact that presley works for her BOYFRIEND, and the mother talking about how seth must want to do her and they'll be a great couple. What in the actual fuck? I never really got the attraction between them, we just get strange scenes and odd conversations, then strange sex. It was too bad, too, because I think there was a ton of potential here. I started out liking Presley, but pretty much ended up hating her. I did like that Seth was kind of flawed, he wasn't just some hot, alpha, in charge sheriff--he was weird and had some issues, which I did appreciate. Overall, this just wasn't for me.

[Ariel Marie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Nice read!

Read the book in one sitting! Great read. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves Cowboys and law enforcement!

[Sania · Rating 4 out of 5]

Standalone/Cliffhanger: Standalone but part of a series
Ages of H and h: h is 26 and H is 36
Multi-Luv'n/Ménages: No
Was There Descriptive Sex: Yes
Descriptive Sex &/Or Drama Between H/h With OW/OM: No but.
>>If So, Before or After H/h Hookup: So when Katie/Presley arrives to town Seth has a girlfriend. She's super sweet and really nice and becomes friends with Presley They're going out just because it's a small town and it's expected but there is no spark. From the offset, Eliza tells Presley that she has a crush on some other dude, Eliza tells Seth it's not working out and breaks up with him. It's not mentioned that they were sleeping together and it didn't bother me.
Contains Cheating: No
Amount of Sex In The Book: A decent amount.
HEA/HFN/etc Ending: HEA
Will This Meet My 'Safety Gang' Buddies' Approval: Yes
Any Triggers/Warnings: Yz
>>Detail: Their first conversation is about losing their virginity, how old they were and who. I just found the conversation weird as that's not something I'd disclose to someone when I'd first meet them.
Do You Recommend This Book: Yes.
Will You Re-read This Book: Yes
Would You Read More Books By This Author: Yes

My Thoughts
I've been really lucky with the freebies I've got from Amazon. I really enjoyed this story. It was well paced and I truly felt the chemistry between themy. I love when I find books that don't use OW/OM as a dramatic plot device.

[Deanie Nelder · Rating 4 out of 5]

Katie is stunned when her car explodes and she's whisked away by U.S. Marshalls, who tell her her boss is involved in arms smuggling. She's put into Witness Protection, and ends up in Montana under the care of Sheriff Seth Reilly.

Katie/Presley is a great, spunky, fun character, and I like the interaction between her and Seth. They're the perfect case of opposites attract. The mystery part of the story is intriguing, and has enough twists and turns to keep readers guessing. Otherwise, the writing is clunky in places, and the world building for the Cowboy Justice Association doesn't always seamlessly fit into the rest of the story line, but it's still a great start to an interesting series.

[Bookgyrl · Rating 2 out of 5]

Katie becomes Presley after her car explodes and she is whisked away by the FBI. She is brought to Montana and in the protection of the Sheriff, Seth. As his secretary he can keep an eye on her.

Fast and sexy story but nothing really special or original. I found out who the culprit was early on so that was no surprise. Written well and with steamy scenes.

[Karen Roma · Rating 4 out of 5]

As a debut novel to a new series I found this book extremely entertaining.

Katie/Presley is a young woman totally convinced that she is unable to make good choices in not only her everyday life but in romance as well. But Katie has a heart of gold and is liked by everyone she comes in contact with, due to her genuine and caring personality.

Seth Reilly is a small town Sheriff who volunteers to protect Presley until the very real threat to her life is resolved. Seth is a brooding, control freak who demands order in all aspects of his life and is unprepared for the whirlwind impact Presley will have on his existence; and existing is exactly what Seth is has been doing.

Seth has taken soul responsibility for a tragedy that happened in his teens, and closed himself off from any form of emotional commitment. But Presley sees through Seth’s tough and commanding persona to the passionate and protective soul beneath, and is determined to show Seth the fun side of life.

While I rarely read other reviews, I found it interesting that Seth was described as NOT being a hero, simply because he didn’t directly save Presley’s life. I would reason that there are more forms of rescue than merely the physical, and that exposing someone’s ability to love and be loved unconditionally, is every bit as heroic as taking a bullet.

I look forward to Ms Jaymes`next book in this series.

[Cyn Mistress Kitty · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love this new series. Can't wait to read Tanner's story.
Just did a re-read. Getting ready for a continuation of Presley and Seth story in Sept.

[Kelly · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a good read. Good characters and good storyline.

[hayley · Rating 3 out of 5]

his honey leaked honey 💔

[Donna · Rating 1 out of 5]

I’ve gave this book 1 star because I just didn’t like the style of writing.
It was wrote in a 3rd person form
Someone telling the story and explaining what the characters were saying and feeling
I didn’t enjoy it at all
I won’t be reading the rest in the series

[Debbie Maas Eppenstein · Rating 5 out of 5]

Definitely great book for me

I love this series! Who wouldn’t like strong law men and a damsel in distress. Definitely a great read for me.

[Kat · Rating 2 out of 5]

Meh. Started off promising, then what was left was just meh. I don't know what it was, the characters were bleak, as if it was put together in a hurry and not a lot of love went into it. A pleasant enough read, however I will not be reading the next ones in the Cowboy Justice Association series.

[Danielle Gypsy Soul · Rating 2 out of 5]

Cowboy Command is the first book in Olivia Jaymes Cowboy Justice Series. The book centers on Kate/Presley and Seth. Someone is trying to kill her, Kate/Presley so the FBI hid her in a small town in Montana. Where an old friend of the FBI agent and the sheriff has agreed to keep on eye on Presley and keep her safe until she can testify for the FBI.

This book has a pretty solid plot, nothing very complicated and two very different characters. Presley and Seth don't have much in common and completely different personalities. There are a few side characters such as Seth's family and his fellow sheriffs.

The reason this book was just okay for me was the depth of the book. This book centered a little too much on Presley and her growth as a character and not enough on Seth. Seth has the alpha male protective instincts, sense of right/wrong along with some gentleness but a past that has made him averse to taking risks and needing to be in control of things. Presley on the other hand is a carefree, sweet woman who doesn't seem to take much seriously and brings chaos with her whereever she goes. The book centers around Presley's growth and overcoming her insecurities. I wanted more Seth and I wanted to see how they were going to overcome their differences but this just didn't happen. We got the HEA without any type of resolution on how they were going to make things work (except by having a lot of sex and there was a lot of sex with a little kink thrown in.) I ended up skimming the sex scenes because there just didn't seem to be enough of a connection between Presley and Seth to engage me. I would have loved to read more about Seth's family and even his sheriff friends.

Overall, Cowboy Command was just okay. I put it down a couple times and wasn't in a hurry to get back to it. I haven't dismissed the series all together though and may try one more but again I'm not in any hurry to do so.

[Jo-Anne · Rating 3 out of 5]

Someone was trying to kill Katie so she had to go into witness protection. The FBI agent assigned to her case had a friend in a remote location in Montana who agreed to take her in. This brought lots of changes for Katie. First she became Presley. Second she moved in the winter to Montana from Florida where she had never seen snow.

The man protecting Presley was the town sheriff who not only gave her a place to live but a job as his secretary. The sheriff, Seth, is very controlling and grumpy which caused him to go through a lot of secretaries. He is surprised when Presley handles the job well and isn't intimidated by him.

Even though Seth doesn't know anything about Presley, he is strongly attracted to her. This is a very sexy story with both of them fighting their attraction knowing that Presley will be leaving once whoever is trying to kill her is caught and she testifies against them. In general I thought the sex scenes were too explicit. They didn't seem to suit the story and served no purpose. I didn't like the mild BDSM scenes. I understand the point of them was to show that Katie trusted Seth but to me it seemed out of place in the story.

I love stories with people who are in the WITSEC program, so that aspect was very interesting to me. As for the characters, I really liked Seth but Katie was weird so I couldn't connect with her.

[Melvina · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a really enjoyable read. It was recommended to me by Bookbub so i thought I'd give it a go. I enjoyed the storyline of Katie (Presley) having to go into witness protection and being moved to a very remote location in Montana in the midst of winter, and for a girl that's used to the sunny climes of Tampa Florida, it's a bit of a culture shock. She is nothing like what Seth expects and within minutes of meeting they're having a discussion that would shock a nun, much to his surprise. He likes things organized and controlled and walks around with a broom up his ass, and she's a free spirited, go for it kind of girl. They're both a little wary but can't fight the attraction to each other, which is explosive, especially as she's not afraid to tell him what she wants in the bedroom. This book has warmth, humour and a couple that will have you willing them on. I'm looking forward to book 2.

[Margie Vickers · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hiding from a killer.

Katie is almost blown up in her car, but having left her in the restaurant she is saved. To protect her is in witness protection program. She is sent to Montana and a sexy sheriff Seth who is her protector. Follow them as they evade gun traffickers to a grad jury trial and all their troubles, including a hateful stepsister. A great read.

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[REGINA L. MAYER · Rating 4 out of 5]

Cowboy Command

I enjoyed the storyline. I'm not a total prude but the sexual dialog became almost redundant. The story had enough substance without trying to enhance it with repeatedly going into a detailed description of Seth and Presley's love making.

[K · Rating 5 out of 5]

Too hot!

Love finding new authors! I love a book that you can't put down! This book is full of suspense and hot sex with a cowboy sheriff!

[Joanne · Rating 4 out of 5]

Enjoyed this book and looking forward to reading the other books in this series!

[TB Roxie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good enough for me to buy book 2 at an inflated price of 4.99. LOL

[Kristin Young · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wonderful book from beginning to end! Can't wait to read the next one.

[Judy · Rating 2 out of 5]

DNF

[Nancy Reads · Rating 4 out of 5]

COWBOY COMMAND: Book 1 (Cowboy Justice Association) by Olivia Jaymes! It is a story with Danger, Passion, Secrets, True Love, and Romance Suspense and you get to meet the Cowboy Justice Association.

Katie Johnson was having lunch with her one remaining relative, Nora Shefflin. It was a trying lunch. Katie called Nora a sister, but Nora called Katie a stepsister. It was apparent that Nora did not care for Katie as much as Katie cared for Nora. It's been a difficult time. Nora had gotten Katie a job with Randall Simon as assistant and she was obviously jealous of how much Randall liked Katie. She accused her of sleeping with her boss and using her looks to get her on his side. The lunch had a fast ending and had not ended well. Katie got up to leave soon after her sister. In her hurry to leave had left her cell phone. As she was hurrying to her car, she could not find her phone and was about to head back to the restaurant. She hadn't gotten very far, when debris started raining down from her car. Katie put her hands over her head to protect herself. A man who said he was a Marshall whisked her away into a car. They knew she had injuries, but their goal was to get her away from any remaining danger. They thought her boss Randall, had planted a bomb into her car. They thought he wanted her dead!

The next thing Katie knew is she was in witness protection, and everyone thought she was dead. Goodbye to Florida and hello to Harper, Montana. Her new name is Presley Lawson. She had been a blonde but now was a brunette. When she was to meet her new protector, Sheriff Seth Reilly was when she really hit the jackpot. He was everything a young single woman could want in a man. She's given a job as a new secretary for him, and a small apartment about his office. Their attraction was fast and easy. Opposites seem to attract. The cutest thing was when he wants her to go turkey hunting for Thanksgiving. They sat on the cold ground waiting, when the turkey showed up, she wouldn't let him kill the turkey. She'd known he wasn't mad, but you could say frustrated. When they got in his truck, she knew just what would make him happy. It worked because he headed to town feeling better than ever had after a hunting trip and he didn't even have a turkey.

[Megan · Rating 3 out of 5]

Quick Info
Standalone/Cliffhanger?: Standalone
Part of a Series?: Yes
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Meeting the Characters
Presley Abigail Lawson / Katie Johnson
Sheriff Seth Reilly
Evan
Nora
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What happens?
Someone is trying to kill Katie after a failed attempt on her life the feds swoop in and put her in witness protection figuring her boss was trying to kill her as part of an investigation into his business and crimes against the USA.
She meets Sheriff Seth Reilly as Presley Lawson (he knows her real identity) and begins to change his life around. Unfortunately it is not smooth sailing for the couple as before the case can go to trial someone fires on Katie/Presley and Seth takes her into hiding traveling to the FBI or Federal Marshall Evan so she can testify.
Final thoughts
This is 3 stars because I feel this book doesn't completely flow. Its almost like the author had 3 scenes in her mind and kind of stitched them together it doesn't completely work.
I'm not in love with them either, I don't feel like I connect to the characters and Katie or Presley just seems too nice and too well together after nearly being blown up for crying out loud I'd be a wreck especially the mental damage afterwards. I did get to halfway through and begin to like them a lot more. She isn't as annoying as she starts out to be and he isn't a grump as he was.
Also this is marked as erotica and OK sex scenes happen but I don't think its erotic...
Would I read again?: Maybe I wouldn't be mad.
Would I read this author again?:Yes

[JoAnn Gillispie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Funny,romantic story with great characters!

Ranching culture in Montana with a sexy sheriff & the mystery of tried to kill our heroine, Presley. Seth, the sheriff & hometown boy tied in a close knit family & his closest friends in law enforcement from other counties & towns. Their story was made rich by the erotic exploration of each other’s sexual fantasies. The journey they made together gave context to Seth is as an alpha male & Presley as a modern woman. Presley described Seth’s rugged,fit body & chiseled chin as beyond sexy, making her aroused with wet panties every time she looked at him! Presley wants to explore BDSM with Seth because she has discovered needs that can only be met by her alpha. Their erotic lovemaking will keep you on the edge of your seat. Seth discovered why he wanted his life totally in control. Presley understood why her family in Florida really wasn’t her family & the fulfillment she found in submitting herself to Seth. And, his law enforcement friends are included in their story providing characters & background for future stories in Montana! I highly recommend this romantic love story!

[Pam · Rating 2 out of 5]

The plot was there, but the execution, not so much. The book was too focused on Katie/ Presley. Not enough on Seth. The title was all wrong. Seth was an interesting character. I wanted to know more about his past and experience resolutions with him. Loved his family, the other Sheriffs and Harper. Even Evan. The ingredients were there. Not executed for me. The plot became boring after Katie/ Presley was placed in the witness protection program. She was written as a sweet, naive woman, but I found her a little manipulative. They’re relationship and sex scenes. Ridiculous. Talking about everyday things during the throws of passion. Really? It was almost like the writer was trying too hard to create sexy times for us. I found myself skimming over 90% of the sex scenes because I didn’t believe in the relationship. I figured out early on who was behind the attempts on Katie/ Presley’s life. So obvious. The story really didn’t end well, even though there was an HEA. This was my first experience with this author. At some point I may try other writings.

[Busybeth76 · Rating 5 out of 5]

Bringing Justice to Presley

Katie Johnson lives a pretty simple life, having left college before she finished, she's been drifting from job to job. Her current job as administrative assistant for the CEO of a weapons manufacturer seems to be going well. Her step sister helped her get the job, after all. But then Katie faces some attempts on her life, she's scooped by a U.S. Marshall and she finds her boss may not be as safe as she thought. She becomes Presley Lawson and is moved from sunny Florida to wintery, snowy Harper, Montana and Sheriff Seth Reilly. Just until she can testify. Presley has known only sun and city, Seth has known 4 seasons and country. But he know how to protect, and that's how he and Presley must learn to coexist. Clever, funny dialogue with a diametrically opposed couple makes for entertaining times. Throw in a crazy road trip and unexpected plot twists and you have a delightful story leading to a wonderful conclusion. Love the start of this series.