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Crossing Death #1
Death of the Body
I grew up in a world of magic. By the time I was ten I understood nature, talked to the trees, and listened to the wind. When the kingdom of men conquered my town, I was murdered by one of my own—the betrayer of my kind. But I didn't stay dead.
I woke to find myself in a strange new world called Los Angeles. The only keys to the life I remembered were my father’s ring, my unique abilities, and the onslaught of demons that seemed hell-bent on finding me. Now I must find out who I really am, protect my friends, and get back to my beloved hometown of Orenda.
I woke to find myself in a strange new world called Los Angeles. The only keys to the life I remembered were my father’s ring, my unique abilities, and the onslaught of demons that seemed hell-bent on finding me. Now I must find out who I really am, protect my friends, and get back to my beloved hometown of Orenda.
398 pages, Paperback
First published December 12, 2013
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About the author
Rick Chiantaretto
4 books129 followersI've often been accused of having done more in my life than the average person my age, but if I were completely honest I'd have to tell you my secret: I'm really 392.
So after all this time, I'm a pretty crappy writer.
I'm the author of the Crossing Death series and Facade of Shadows , as well as 'Tailored for the King,' a short story found in Twice Upon a Time . I have a bunch more half-written (when you have eternity, why rush?). I've been favorably reviewed, featured on ReadFree.ly's Top 50 Best list of 2013 and 2014, and my how-to-write-horror articles have been quoted in scholarly (aka community college freshmen's) papers.
I enjoy the occasional Bloody Mary, although a Bloody Kathy or Susan will suffice.
Mostly, I just try to keep a low profile so people don't figure out who I REALLY am.
So after all this time, I'm a pretty crappy writer.
I'm the author of the Crossing Death series and Facade of Shadows , as well as 'Tailored for the King,' a short story found in Twice Upon a Time . I have a bunch more half-written (when you have eternity, why rush?). I've been favorably reviewed, featured on ReadFree.ly's Top 50 Best list of 2013 and 2014, and my how-to-write-horror articles have been quoted in scholarly (aka community college freshmen's) papers.
I enjoy the occasional Bloody Mary, although a Bloody Kathy or Susan will suffice.
Mostly, I just try to keep a low profile so people don't figure out who I REALLY am.
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February 8, 2014
I was given a copy of this book for the blog tour in exchange for an honest review. What to say about this book? Well, let me just say that I have not read anything like this!! It is so imaginative, witty, action-filled, scary, creepy, surprising and awesome. I was enjoying the book and when I was just getting a sense of what I thought was happening, Rick changed it!! Something completely unexpected happened and it changed into something else. But this did not detract from the story or the circumstances. It actually enhanced it and caused me to be even more invested in the story and want to know more about what the hell was going on. Rick is so adept at not giving anything away until the last possible second. While the main character, Edmund, would come to the realization sooner than the reader, he never let it be known to the reader until it was necessary. I really had a hard time figuring anything out early on, which is a good thing to me! I was so enamored with this story and I did not want to stop reading it. I only had about 40% left when I went to bed the other night and I stayed up to finish it because I had to know what was going on. I couldn't quite put my finger on what was happening and what everything meant so it was frustrating and I needed to know! I felt like I needed to know more than I needed sleep. I love when a book does that to me.
November 8, 2013
Amazing!! This book has such a unique idea and is completely gripping from beginning to end! Rick's imagery is absolutely phenomenal. I felt like I was watching it on the big screen the entire time I was reading it and I got really excited to eventually see it in movie form. Just be aware it may not be appropriate for children under 13. I think it's a must read!!!
February 13, 2014
"What if all religions were stories, and all stories were true?"
4 Fantastically Bloody Stars
Ok…so I am an Urban Fantasy virgin.
I know right?
Death of the Body was my FIRST read in this genre.
And. WOW. It did not disappoint.
Edmund is a 10 year old boy living in a world of magic. He lives in the quiet town called Orenda. He talks with nature…communicates with the Earth herself.
But. Edmund's world comes crashing down around him when he and his people are betrayed by one of their own.
Edmund in turn....is murdered.
"I watched in disbelief as blood seeped through my fingers and dripped, thick as syrup, to the ground."
Waking up a 12 year old boy, Edmund tries to piece together his being and his memories, and how he came to be who he woke up as. He needs to find a way to get back to Orenda and to avenge his family and his people.
Ok. I don't want to give much else away. This book. It was captivating. I had a hard time putting it down each time I had to. Edmund is such a strong character. He is kindhearted, loyal, and fearless. He looked death in the face and he said "Go to Hell".
Each of the characters in the book brought so much to the story.
Nicholas was the humor. He was likeable and relatable. The banter between him and Edmund made them real. It made them human.
Xia. She was the grounding force of these boys I think. She is a tough, mouthy girl...my kind of girl.
The budding romance between her and Edmund adds another aspect to the story. It adds a softness to the story.
"I caught a mischievous look in her eye just moments before she pressed her lips to mine. The look caused a thrill to ripple through my body, but the greater response was when i felt her melt into my embrace and give way to my lips.”
Now. Ok.
I am not a religious person in anyway. No way whatsoever. Nadda. I don’t typically read much of anything that contains religious references, and I do not follow religious practices or keep up on the 411 of religion. So, that being said, there were times where I was disinterested with all of the religion talk and had a hard time following along. I had to fight the urge to skim a few times. And, that was because I didn't want to miss something important.
But. It didn’t deter me from continuing on and experiencing the magical story of Edmund.
That ending.
I couldn’t have even guessed that’s what was going to happen! The plot takes different twists and turns that it kept me on the edge of my seat and kept me wondering. Constantly questioning what the future held for the characters. And shock at the things that did happen.
When I first started reading, I had my assumptions about what was going to happen or what I thought certain things meant. And those assumptions were basically shattered when I got to the end of the book.
I did have one hang up. I felt that the ending was a bit rushed. It just seemed to all end so quickly. I would have liked to see it play out a little bit more….but then I guess that means the author would have left me with MORE questions about the ending.
Haha!
Rick truly has an amazing ability of describing a person or a scene that draws the reader in. He gives such a vivid depiction of everything that is happening, you literally feel like you are there. Like you are experiencing it along with the characters. You can SEE everything so perfectly.
I am a visual person. I like the images to be drawn out or described for me. I like pictures. I like to see what I am reading. Rick has done that with this book.
He uses words, names, objects that have meaning. Like for instance. Orenda. The name of Edmund’s home had meaning. And that meaning actually makes a lot of sense for the book.
oren•da
noun \ōˈrendə\
a supernatural force believed by the Iroquois Indians to be present, in varying degrees, in all objects or persons, and to be the spiritual force by which human accomplishment is attained or accounted for.
I was completely and utterly fascinated by this book and the authors ability to grab my attention and keep it.
Few books have done that for me as of lately.
So. Bravo Rick.
You made me step out of my perfectly manicured smut box and take a chance on a genre that I would have never given a second thought to. And I actually enjoyed it.
Now. Can we please have book two since you left us hanging with book one?
4 Fantastically Bloody Stars
Ok…so I am an Urban Fantasy virgin.
I know right?
Death of the Body was my FIRST read in this genre.
And. WOW. It did not disappoint.
Edmund is a 10 year old boy living in a world of magic. He lives in the quiet town called Orenda. He talks with nature…communicates with the Earth herself.
But. Edmund's world comes crashing down around him when he and his people are betrayed by one of their own.
Edmund in turn....is murdered.
"I watched in disbelief as blood seeped through my fingers and dripped, thick as syrup, to the ground."
Waking up a 12 year old boy, Edmund tries to piece together his being and his memories, and how he came to be who he woke up as. He needs to find a way to get back to Orenda and to avenge his family and his people.
Ok. I don't want to give much else away. This book. It was captivating. I had a hard time putting it down each time I had to. Edmund is such a strong character. He is kindhearted, loyal, and fearless. He looked death in the face and he said "Go to Hell".
Each of the characters in the book brought so much to the story.
Nicholas was the humor. He was likeable and relatable. The banter between him and Edmund made them real. It made them human.
Xia. She was the grounding force of these boys I think. She is a tough, mouthy girl...my kind of girl.
The budding romance between her and Edmund adds another aspect to the story. It adds a softness to the story.
"I caught a mischievous look in her eye just moments before she pressed her lips to mine. The look caused a thrill to ripple through my body, but the greater response was when i felt her melt into my embrace and give way to my lips.”
Now. Ok.
I am not a religious person in anyway. No way whatsoever. Nadda. I don’t typically read much of anything that contains religious references, and I do not follow religious practices or keep up on the 411 of religion. So, that being said, there were times where I was disinterested with all of the religion talk and had a hard time following along. I had to fight the urge to skim a few times. And, that was because I didn't want to miss something important.
But. It didn’t deter me from continuing on and experiencing the magical story of Edmund.
That ending.
I couldn’t have even guessed that’s what was going to happen! The plot takes different twists and turns that it kept me on the edge of my seat and kept me wondering. Constantly questioning what the future held for the characters. And shock at the things that did happen.
When I first started reading, I had my assumptions about what was going to happen or what I thought certain things meant. And those assumptions were basically shattered when I got to the end of the book.
I did have one hang up. I felt that the ending was a bit rushed. It just seemed to all end so quickly. I would have liked to see it play out a little bit more….but then I guess that means the author would have left me with MORE questions about the ending.
Haha!
Rick truly has an amazing ability of describing a person or a scene that draws the reader in. He gives such a vivid depiction of everything that is happening, you literally feel like you are there. Like you are experiencing it along with the characters. You can SEE everything so perfectly.
I am a visual person. I like the images to be drawn out or described for me. I like pictures. I like to see what I am reading. Rick has done that with this book.
He uses words, names, objects that have meaning. Like for instance. Orenda. The name of Edmund’s home had meaning. And that meaning actually makes a lot of sense for the book.
oren•da
noun \ōˈrendə\
a supernatural force believed by the Iroquois Indians to be present, in varying degrees, in all objects or persons, and to be the spiritual force by which human accomplishment is attained or accounted for.
I was completely and utterly fascinated by this book and the authors ability to grab my attention and keep it.
Few books have done that for me as of lately.
So. Bravo Rick.
You made me step out of my perfectly manicured smut box and take a chance on a genre that I would have never given a second thought to. And I actually enjoyed it.
Now. Can we please have book two since you left us hanging with book one?
January 30, 2014
I was instantly captivated by this book as soon as it started. The beginning will blow your mind. You’re like what in the world happened. So of course I kept reading because I needed to know more about what was happening. It is such a wonderful story that will keep you reading and your interest peaked.
I absolutely adored Edmund. He was such a great kid. As soon as the book starts you are in love with him and his friends. They are all wonderful. Then you learn their secrets and you can’t help but adore them that much more. My heart broke for all of them though the more I read. Especially Edmund. He went through so much.
So if you love getting to read a different type of story that will leave you thinking and doing your best to guess what’s going on this is the book for you. I was ecstatic to get to read this book; it was definitely suspenseful and kept my attention. I was NEVER bored and I love it when a book can keep me glued to it. Definitely worth reading.
I absolutely adored Edmund. He was such a great kid. As soon as the book starts you are in love with him and his friends. They are all wonderful. Then you learn their secrets and you can’t help but adore them that much more. My heart broke for all of them though the more I read. Especially Edmund. He went through so much.
So if you love getting to read a different type of story that will leave you thinking and doing your best to guess what’s going on this is the book for you. I was ecstatic to get to read this book; it was definitely suspenseful and kept my attention. I was NEVER bored and I love it when a book can keep me glued to it. Definitely worth reading.
November 7, 2013
Had an opportunity to beta read this book for a great debut author. A full review will come... but know this... its an awesome ride :)
December 16, 2014
This book captivated me from the first page. Edmund is a well developed character who gains sympathy for all he must endure during the course of the book.
August 11, 2016
This book is not the present you'd buy your great Aunt Muriel. This is a grizzly, awesome, dark, smart, and scary little book. It starts off with the ten year-old main character waking up after being slashed across the stomach. It keeps going from there.
This is a book about resurrection and rebirth, and you have to live behind the eyes of someone who happens to die a lot. Not a lot a lot, but more than I have. I've never died before, but after reading Death of the Body, I kinda feel like I have. It's the kind of book that writes itself into the back of your eyelids. I loved it.
With all the talk about death, and resurrection, it's natural that it delves deeply into religion. It's not disrespectful per-say, but the story analyzes religions with an almost snarky reverence. It fictionalizes religions. It made me think. It made me unsettled, and then it made me dive back in.
The writing is crisp, the words flow well, and he has a clear voice, but I liked it the best when I was so sucked in I didn't notice the voice, and all I heard was the whispers of the trees, and the gentle cadences of the system of magic. The romance felt real, but not central to the story, though it shifts motivation.
This book is not for everyone. But if you love thinking about all things possible, (Justin, I'm talking about you) then this is a book you'll just love.
It's quite possibly the most brilliant, grizzly, monster-filled book I've ever read.
And the monsters look human.
That's the scariest part.
This is a book about resurrection and rebirth, and you have to live behind the eyes of someone who happens to die a lot. Not a lot a lot, but more than I have. I've never died before, but after reading Death of the Body, I kinda feel like I have. It's the kind of book that writes itself into the back of your eyelids. I loved it.
With all the talk about death, and resurrection, it's natural that it delves deeply into religion. It's not disrespectful per-say, but the story analyzes religions with an almost snarky reverence. It fictionalizes religions. It made me think. It made me unsettled, and then it made me dive back in.
The writing is crisp, the words flow well, and he has a clear voice, but I liked it the best when I was so sucked in I didn't notice the voice, and all I heard was the whispers of the trees, and the gentle cadences of the system of magic. The romance felt real, but not central to the story, though it shifts motivation.
This book is not for everyone. But if you love thinking about all things possible, (Justin, I'm talking about you) then this is a book you'll just love.
It's quite possibly the most brilliant, grizzly, monster-filled book I've ever read.
And the monsters look human.
That's the scariest part.
December 13, 2013
Edmund lives in a world that is magical and he can commune with the earth itself. It's pretty cool and unlike any other story I have ever read.
He has a destiny and an amazing magic. He is out hunting with his friends when things go seriously wrong. Edmund loses everything within a short amount of time and has been betrayed by a trusted man who ultimately ushers in his demise.
Characters are very believable for me all well described as well as the scenery. The author paints a grand picture in both sight and sound for me. When the fire followed him back through the tree I could imagine the sight and smell of it all. There is a great attention to detail. The whole elemental thing was great I always love that! I love Xia and Alexander!
I was taken aback by the religious twists to the story it was intriguing to say the least.
All in all it was a really good read. A good plot, creative and unique. Definitely an Urban Fantasy to give a great example of what Urban Fantasy should be.
I can't even imagine going through the crap Edmund had to go through.
As Alexander he must find his way and figure out what has happened to him. And what his destiny holds.
If you like mysterious Paranormal or Urban Fantasy this is the book for you.
Very imaginative and if there are more books to come I look forward to reading them.
He has a destiny and an amazing magic. He is out hunting with his friends when things go seriously wrong. Edmund loses everything within a short amount of time and has been betrayed by a trusted man who ultimately ushers in his demise.
Characters are very believable for me all well described as well as the scenery. The author paints a grand picture in both sight and sound for me. When the fire followed him back through the tree I could imagine the sight and smell of it all. There is a great attention to detail. The whole elemental thing was great I always love that! I love Xia and Alexander!
I was taken aback by the religious twists to the story it was intriguing to say the least.
All in all it was a really good read. A good plot, creative and unique. Definitely an Urban Fantasy to give a great example of what Urban Fantasy should be.
I can't even imagine going through the crap Edmund had to go through.
As Alexander he must find his way and figure out what has happened to him. And what his destiny holds.
If you like mysterious Paranormal or Urban Fantasy this is the book for you.
Very imaginative and if there are more books to come I look forward to reading them.
July 16, 2014
I will admit in the beginning of this book I was a little unsure. I had heard nothing but good thoughts and read very positive reviews, so I trudged on dutifully knowing not all can be revealed in the first chapter. But, as I got about 8 pages in I was grasped by the story and it's characters.
I felt myself being thrust through every twist and turn and, as though I was watching an action packed thriller on screen. The world of magic and elementals is explained in an all new light giving the reader great perspective as no other author has ever managed to do in my opinion.
The religious undertones that arise throughout the book would usually turn me off, forcing me to accuse the author of pretentious misguided views put forth by yet another person that has not properly done their research. (Yes I have read quite a few books like this and, I am very well educated in theology and polytheistic religions.) But, to my utter surprise, Rick Chiantaretto has made it not only work within the parameters of his book but, also has done his research. (If I'm honest I was crushing on the authors knowledge just a little bit.)
I give this book a definite 5 ***** stars and will leave my fingers crossed for it to turn into a series. Perhaps book two will have a bit more about the secondary characters to fulfill my extreme curiosities.
I felt myself being thrust through every twist and turn and, as though I was watching an action packed thriller on screen. The world of magic and elementals is explained in an all new light giving the reader great perspective as no other author has ever managed to do in my opinion.
The religious undertones that arise throughout the book would usually turn me off, forcing me to accuse the author of pretentious misguided views put forth by yet another person that has not properly done their research. (Yes I have read quite a few books like this and, I am very well educated in theology and polytheistic religions.) But, to my utter surprise, Rick Chiantaretto has made it not only work within the parameters of his book but, also has done his research. (If I'm honest I was crushing on the authors knowledge just a little bit.)
I give this book a definite 5 ***** stars and will leave my fingers crossed for it to turn into a series. Perhaps book two will have a bit more about the secondary characters to fulfill my extreme curiosities.
January 14, 2015
---Advanced Copy Reader Review---
I decided to give this a quick reread in preparation for the release of book 2 (Death of the Spirit) in the series.
Death of the Body was just as creative and interesting the second time through.
---Original Review given Oct 2013---
This is probably my all time favorite beta read. Mr. Chiantaretto's "Death of a Body" was so well written and unique that it was a pleasure to read.
The characters where interesting enough that I wanted to know more about all of them...even the side characters. The magic system was exciting and interesting and the plot keep me reading (ie devouring) as fast as I could.
I decided to give this a quick reread in preparation for the release of book 2 (Death of the Spirit) in the series.
Death of the Body was just as creative and interesting the second time through.
---Original Review given Oct 2013---
This is probably my all time favorite beta read. Mr. Chiantaretto's "Death of a Body" was so well written and unique that it was a pleasure to read.
The characters where interesting enough that I wanted to know more about all of them...even the side characters. The magic system was exciting and interesting and the plot keep me reading (ie devouring) as fast as I could.
January 30, 2015
This is only a portion of my review, the rest can be found on my blog
Accepted Wisdom
I would describe Rick Chiantaretto’s writing as vivid and articulate. The horror elements in his writing are gruesome and fear-inducing. The world he creates is astonishing and quite complex; it draws you in and takes you on hell of a ride that will leave you gasping for breath. His character development is remarkable; each character comes to life before your eyes in such a realistic manner. You can literally feel their emotions flow off the pages. The magical elements are fantastically intriguing and will make you wish you had the ability to perform magic yourself.
My opinion:
Death of the Body wasn’t what I expected it to be…. It was so much more! It honestly scared the daylights out of me. The energumen (demons) in this book are absolutely terrifying and vicious things. I’ve been freaking out every time I hear the wind blow loudly or see a strange dark shadow. One encounter Edmund had in particular has shaken me to the core. I’m not sure I will ever be able to get the image out of my mind. This is saying a lot because it takes a lot to freak me out, I totally don’t scare easily.
Edmund has such a strong will to live. He is loyal, compassionate, and brave. My heart aches for him because everything has been taken away from him, yet his hope never falters. He goes through some horrible situations that would break most people but he always finds a way to survive. I have a feeling that no matter what happens he will find a way to make things right. He is a fighter and will do anything it takes to get justice for his people. I cannot wait to continue on with him in his journey!
As a whole I loved just about everything in this novel. I was a little taken back by all the religious references at first, sometimes a bit confused, but they are important to the story. Without them the book would seem incomplete. In the end everything falls into place and makes perfect sense. I just wish it didn’t end in a cliff-hanger because now I have to wait to find out what happens. I hate not knowing. The wait for the next book may kill me.
This is only a portion of my review, the rest can be found on my blog
Accepted Wisdom
Accepted Wisdom
I would describe Rick Chiantaretto’s writing as vivid and articulate. The horror elements in his writing are gruesome and fear-inducing. The world he creates is astonishing and quite complex; it draws you in and takes you on hell of a ride that will leave you gasping for breath. His character development is remarkable; each character comes to life before your eyes in such a realistic manner. You can literally feel their emotions flow off the pages. The magical elements are fantastically intriguing and will make you wish you had the ability to perform magic yourself.
My opinion:
Death of the Body wasn’t what I expected it to be…. It was so much more! It honestly scared the daylights out of me. The energumen (demons) in this book are absolutely terrifying and vicious things. I’ve been freaking out every time I hear the wind blow loudly or see a strange dark shadow. One encounter Edmund had in particular has shaken me to the core. I’m not sure I will ever be able to get the image out of my mind. This is saying a lot because it takes a lot to freak me out, I totally don’t scare easily.
Edmund has such a strong will to live. He is loyal, compassionate, and brave. My heart aches for him because everything has been taken away from him, yet his hope never falters. He goes through some horrible situations that would break most people but he always finds a way to survive. I have a feeling that no matter what happens he will find a way to make things right. He is a fighter and will do anything it takes to get justice for his people. I cannot wait to continue on with him in his journey!
As a whole I loved just about everything in this novel. I was a little taken back by all the religious references at first, sometimes a bit confused, but they are important to the story. Without them the book would seem incomplete. In the end everything falls into place and makes perfect sense. I just wish it didn’t end in a cliff-hanger because now I have to wait to find out what happens. I hate not knowing. The wait for the next book may kill me.
This is only a portion of my review, the rest can be found on my blog
Accepted Wisdom
December 13, 2014
This book had me so engrossed that I didn't want to eat, sleep or work! I will NOT be getting mommy of the year, due to this book! I loved the way this writer made everything he described so vivid in my imagination. It was like I was in the book walking right along with the characters, seeing, hearing, almost feeling everything they felt. If a writer can do that to you, you've lucked into finding an amazing story teller and you should gobble up everything he writes! I know I will. Not even some of the best selling authors I've read can make me feel like I've stepped inside the pages of there book. I can read and love the story, but not feel it. Make since?
The characters were very likeable, funny and interesting. Edmund is the main character and he lives in Orenda, a place of magic, a place where they're one with everything around them. We first meet him at age 10, not too long before he dies and...moves on. He is a very mature 10 year old, but I thought it fit well, as he was raised a totally different way than a child from our world would be. Nicholas is my favorite out of the trio, although Edmund and Xia are just as awesome, there is just something about Nicholas that makes me want to hang out with him and soak it all in. He'd defiantly make me laugh, although we don't get to see much of that side of him, you'll see glimpses.
We don't meet Xia until about halfway through the book. She has some magic abilities of her own, just not quite as strong or even like Edmunds, and she is Edmunds love interest. She is , I think, a good match for Edmund.
This book had me on the edge of my seat at times. Who am I kidding...I was on the edge of my seat most of the book, trying to figure out what was going to happen next and who was going to turn out to be the bag guy. I did not figure it out until it was too late and I'm usually very good at guessing what's going to happen. This book talks about all types of religion. Some might be put off by that, but I realize it is a book, and the writer is telling a fictional story. Either way, I find all kinds of religion fascinating, I loved it. The book as a whole, everything in it and even the cover, was awesome for me. I am all about some darker reads! I give Death Of The Body 5 stars.
The characters were very likeable, funny and interesting. Edmund is the main character and he lives in Orenda, a place of magic, a place where they're one with everything around them. We first meet him at age 10, not too long before he dies and...moves on. He is a very mature 10 year old, but I thought it fit well, as he was raised a totally different way than a child from our world would be. Nicholas is my favorite out of the trio, although Edmund and Xia are just as awesome, there is just something about Nicholas that makes me want to hang out with him and soak it all in. He'd defiantly make me laugh, although we don't get to see much of that side of him, you'll see glimpses.
We don't meet Xia until about halfway through the book. She has some magic abilities of her own, just not quite as strong or even like Edmunds, and she is Edmunds love interest. She is , I think, a good match for Edmund.
This book had me on the edge of my seat at times. Who am I kidding...I was on the edge of my seat most of the book, trying to figure out what was going to happen next and who was going to turn out to be the bag guy. I did not figure it out until it was too late and I'm usually very good at guessing what's going to happen. This book talks about all types of religion. Some might be put off by that, but I realize it is a book, and the writer is telling a fictional story. Either way, I find all kinds of religion fascinating, I loved it. The book as a whole, everything in it and even the cover, was awesome for me. I am all about some darker reads! I give Death Of The Body 5 stars.
September 3, 2014
"What if all religions were stories, and all stories were true?"
Death of the Body is possibly one of those most unique stories I have ever read. From the first page I became fully engrossed in the world that Rick Chiantaretto created and I was not able to put it down until I finished it. It was so good in fact that I finished the book in one sitting.
Death of the Body is the story about Edmund and his journey from another world (or as the book describes it, another level) called Orenda. Orenda is a world of magic where Edmund is able to directly connect and even communicate with nature.
Tragedy strikes his world when his kingdom is conquered and betrayed by one of his own kind. Even though this betrayer does kill Edmund, he miraculously wakes up in Los Angeles, CA. All he has now to guide him is his father's ring, his magical abilities, and the vague letter from his father he found in Orenda before he was killed.
Now when I say that this storyline is unique, I really mean it. It touches on the subject of religion in a way I have never seen done before and I absolutely love that aspect of the book. It's one of those stories that really makes you think.
What I loved most about Death of the Body along with the unique storyline was the characters. Edmund, Nicholas and Xia are all fantastic with very distinct personalities that seem to jump off the pages as you are reading. Their banter back and forth between one another had me laughing out loud at times and I couldn't help but wish I knew characters like this in real life. The romantic relationship that develops between Edmund and Xia is also quite adorable.
Overall I absolutely loved this book and I would recommend it to anyone looking for an dark urban fantasy mixed in with a few (small) horror elements. I can't wait to read the next book in the series :)
Death of the Body is possibly one of those most unique stories I have ever read. From the first page I became fully engrossed in the world that Rick Chiantaretto created and I was not able to put it down until I finished it. It was so good in fact that I finished the book in one sitting.
Death of the Body is the story about Edmund and his journey from another world (or as the book describes it, another level) called Orenda. Orenda is a world of magic where Edmund is able to directly connect and even communicate with nature.
Tragedy strikes his world when his kingdom is conquered and betrayed by one of his own kind. Even though this betrayer does kill Edmund, he miraculously wakes up in Los Angeles, CA. All he has now to guide him is his father's ring, his magical abilities, and the vague letter from his father he found in Orenda before he was killed.
Now when I say that this storyline is unique, I really mean it. It touches on the subject of religion in a way I have never seen done before and I absolutely love that aspect of the book. It's one of those stories that really makes you think.
What I loved most about Death of the Body along with the unique storyline was the characters. Edmund, Nicholas and Xia are all fantastic with very distinct personalities that seem to jump off the pages as you are reading. Their banter back and forth between one another had me laughing out loud at times and I couldn't help but wish I knew characters like this in real life. The romantic relationship that develops between Edmund and Xia is also quite adorable.
Overall I absolutely loved this book and I would recommend it to anyone looking for an dark urban fantasy mixed in with a few (small) horror elements. I can't wait to read the next book in the series :)
February 9, 2014
This is not the kind of book I would've picked to read. That said, I'm glad I gave this book and this amazing story a chance because I LOVED it!
I'm not going to tell you what the book is about you can read it and figure it out yourself, I'm going to tell you what I loved about the book and consequently the author.
The story flows easily and it gives you a clear understanding of the main character and his journey through a magical world.
The images described are vivid and colorful, incredibly real. Every scene is described in a way that you feel like you're part of the story. The characters are believable, and even though I had a little bit of a hard time at the beginning matching the age of the character with the language used, that didn't take away from the story at any moment.
This book makes a lot of reference to religion and although I understand this is a delicate subject for certain people, we have to look at the big picture. This is a character looking for his place in the world he lives in, searching for his purpose and constantly asking himself questions that us humans, as characters in our own stories looking for our reason to live, are also wondering about.
This is a fantasy book, no doubt, but it's also a well written story by a very intelligent and well spoken author that I would highly recommend. Be brave today and try something new ;-)
I'm not going to tell you what the book is about you can read it and figure it out yourself, I'm going to tell you what I loved about the book and consequently the author.
The story flows easily and it gives you a clear understanding of the main character and his journey through a magical world.
The images described are vivid and colorful, incredibly real. Every scene is described in a way that you feel like you're part of the story. The characters are believable, and even though I had a little bit of a hard time at the beginning matching the age of the character with the language used, that didn't take away from the story at any moment.
This book makes a lot of reference to religion and although I understand this is a delicate subject for certain people, we have to look at the big picture. This is a character looking for his place in the world he lives in, searching for his purpose and constantly asking himself questions that us humans, as characters in our own stories looking for our reason to live, are also wondering about.
This is a fantasy book, no doubt, but it's also a well written story by a very intelligent and well spoken author that I would highly recommend. Be brave today and try something new ;-)
January 30, 2014
I was provided an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I started this novel thinking that my kids would like it. I could not have been more wrong. What was really so amazing about this book was that it was not a quick read for me.
This story begins with a 10 year old mage and then we travel through some deadly adventures with him. The reason this was not a quick read for me is because the details that enriched each sentence. Not only that, but the importance of each detail really grabbed me.
Edmund was a pretty striking character and I did not identify with him immediately, but as I read about him maturing I grew more and more fond of him.
I think that the author really took time to develop a history and world for Edmund and that comes across in his writing.
I am excited for a sequel to this one.
There is some blood and gore in this one, but the author did a great job of giving just enough detail to see it with out making me sick!!
I started this novel thinking that my kids would like it. I could not have been more wrong. What was really so amazing about this book was that it was not a quick read for me.
This story begins with a 10 year old mage and then we travel through some deadly adventures with him. The reason this was not a quick read for me is because the details that enriched each sentence. Not only that, but the importance of each detail really grabbed me.
Edmund was a pretty striking character and I did not identify with him immediately, but as I read about him maturing I grew more and more fond of him.
I think that the author really took time to develop a history and world for Edmund and that comes across in his writing.
I am excited for a sequel to this one.
There is some blood and gore in this one, but the author did a great job of giving just enough detail to see it with out making me sick!!
November 21, 2013
I was very lucky to read the Beta version of Rick's book. Fantastic! I've not read a book in a long time with such interesting concepts, fascinating ideas. The way Rick describes the characters and surroundings brings it all to life. It will be great fun to re-read it when it is released.
January 15, 2014
**review to come**
I'm still too butthurt that I can't read book two yet! ;) (Totally KIDDING! Yes, I did like it that much that I neeeeeeeeeed more!)
I'm still too butthurt that I can't read book two yet! ;) (Totally KIDDING! Yes, I did like it that much that I neeeeeeeeeed more!)
April 5, 2014
Ok, something is obviously wrong with me. I feel like I'm reading darker and darker books as time progresses - could I be a closet masochist or something? Hmmm... Nah, I believe I'm perfectly fine and nothing has changed my preferences to scarier reads! (I think...)
Edmund is a young mage, who, at the tender age of ten, can understand nature and bend the elements to his will - or, to put it more correctly, he is in perfect sync with them, they usually do as he requests. But what is a boy to do when he finds his hometown partly destroyed and his people dead or missing? Even his powers seem useless, as he, too, ends up dying at the hands of the man who betrayed Orenda to the humans. And yet, death doesn't look that much of an obstacle, as he soon comes to find out. Now reborn as Alexander, an orphan at a Catholic orphanage, Edmund must try to blend in and exist in a life that feels foreign and familiar at the same time - people tell him about who he's been up to this point, while his memories tell a different story, one of alfalfa fields and forests and magic users. Moreover, demons who had once hunted his kind are after him, with the traitor as their leader - and it will take much more than sharp wit and strong magic for Edmund to avoid them and keep his new friends safe.
Now, then... This all sounds like a fictional story with magic, and demons, and the likes, right? Ha! Try again! While it does have all those things, it has many more to give to those readers who dare get a little more scared and freaked out than usual in order to read a good book that will give them the thrill of their life - or, well, scare, but who cares? Hey, no one said the life of a reader is easy, ok? Sometimes, when we know the book we're holding is a masterpiece, we have to make some sacrifices - I shall never regret the sleep I lost or the nightmares, Death of the Body was absolutely worth it all!
Rick Chiantaretto is a master wordsmith. I don't know why everyone's not raving about him, or this book, yet. The man is... I don't even know if an adjective exists to properly describe him. I guess you could call him somewhat of a poetic butcher. He has a way of making you cry with his writing, but he does so while bringing death to his story - more and more as it goes on, and, let me tell you, I was either sobbing (we're talking the "curl in a ball and choke from the hysteria" sobs) or freaking out (I now have a blanket permanently and strategically placed on the back of my chair, so that I can hide under it if I get too scared). Also, I think I woke up my parents a time or two because I screamed. Oh, and did I mention the nighmares? Yeah, it was horrible, I had to beg my 12-year-old brother - who, by the way, had already finished the book long before I did (particulary in a single sitting) and didn't find it scary at all - to let me sleep with him!
And he made me cry! A lot! Yes, I know I said that before, but it's different when you cry about characters. I cried over a tree. A freaking tree! And then a dog! Oh, and let's not forget that poor spoon! Believe me, when I say he's good, then I mean it - he's damn good!
Not only was he so awesome in coaxing the words to work in his favor, though, he also had a variety of the most amazing characters. Edmund was fully 3D, well-thought, and believable. And any kind of character he came to meet - be it friend, ally, or simple bystander - followed the same pattern of depth. It didn't matter if there was just another orphan at the orphanage, a mere potted plant, or even the wind - Mr. Chiantaretto gave each of them a voice of their own, an existence that didn't just serve the purpose of helping the story progress from plot point A to plot point B. (on a completely selfishly added point, I adored Nicholas! why do I always love the best friend, shall remain one of the mysteries of life...)
A while ago, I heard the book got banned - which of course, at that time, seemed logical to me. I thought it was offensive, or talked about things that more religious people might find heretic. And while I do understand there are books like that and I generally avoid them, I have to inform you that this is not such a book. Yes, it did give a different perspective on death, and being reborn, and demons - even people like Moses or Jesus - but one has to remember that it's fiction. The info - which the writer seems to have studied thoroughly - is only twisted enough to suit the needs of the story, not to tell you that it's something you should take as seriously as the Bible itself. You choose what to believe - and frankly, if you really think your beliefs are in danger because someone said so in a fantasy book, or if you think that they're solid because someone again said so in a religion-themed book, then you really need to grow up. I for one found the way Chiantaretto used several religions entertaining, amusing, and not offensive at all - and I teach in Sunday School, so that should prove that reading this perfect, breathtaking story doesn't make one question their beliefs.
Take this for example. Edmund seems to enjoy being sarcastic or irritating to religious people. And yet, there is a particular line of his that sums up his reasons for this pretty accurately - as well as shows that he's not trying to belittle anyone's faith.
"I don’t mind religious people, it’s the hypocrites I can’t stand."
This is enough proof - see? he did it again, one line and he explains much more than others do through pages and flashbacks! - that he doesn't mean to make fun of all this, but to make sure his readers have a good time by going through Edmund's witty remarks to said hypocrites.
This is one book that you definitely need to read. It made me laugh with Nicholas's innuendos, cry with Edmund's tragic experiences, and bite my nails till they bled from the agony of it all. And while it is a lot scarier than what I'm used to - scarier than Netherworld, even, and that thing had me creeped at the mere sound of my own voice - I don't think, had I been able to own a time machine and go back in time, that I would have done anything else but re-open the book and read it all over again.
***I was given a review copy from a LibraryThing Member Giveaway in exchange for an honest review. The opinion stated in this review is solely mine, and no compensation was given or taken to alter it.***
Find this and other reviews at: http://cupcakesandpopcorn.wordpress.com/
Edmund is a young mage, who, at the tender age of ten, can understand nature and bend the elements to his will - or, to put it more correctly, he is in perfect sync with them, they usually do as he requests. But what is a boy to do when he finds his hometown partly destroyed and his people dead or missing? Even his powers seem useless, as he, too, ends up dying at the hands of the man who betrayed Orenda to the humans. And yet, death doesn't look that much of an obstacle, as he soon comes to find out. Now reborn as Alexander, an orphan at a Catholic orphanage, Edmund must try to blend in and exist in a life that feels foreign and familiar at the same time - people tell him about who he's been up to this point, while his memories tell a different story, one of alfalfa fields and forests and magic users. Moreover, demons who had once hunted his kind are after him, with the traitor as their leader - and it will take much more than sharp wit and strong magic for Edmund to avoid them and keep his new friends safe.
Now, then... This all sounds like a fictional story with magic, and demons, and the likes, right? Ha! Try again! While it does have all those things, it has many more to give to those readers who dare get a little more scared and freaked out than usual in order to read a good book that will give them the thrill of their life - or, well, scare, but who cares? Hey, no one said the life of a reader is easy, ok? Sometimes, when we know the book we're holding is a masterpiece, we have to make some sacrifices - I shall never regret the sleep I lost or the nightmares, Death of the Body was absolutely worth it all!
Rick Chiantaretto is a master wordsmith. I don't know why everyone's not raving about him, or this book, yet. The man is... I don't even know if an adjective exists to properly describe him. I guess you could call him somewhat of a poetic butcher. He has a way of making you cry with his writing, but he does so while bringing death to his story - more and more as it goes on, and, let me tell you, I was either sobbing (we're talking the "curl in a ball and choke from the hysteria" sobs) or freaking out (I now have a blanket permanently and strategically placed on the back of my chair, so that I can hide under it if I get too scared). Also, I think I woke up my parents a time or two because I screamed. Oh, and did I mention the nighmares? Yeah, it was horrible, I had to beg my 12-year-old brother - who, by the way, had already finished the book long before I did (particulary in a single sitting) and didn't find it scary at all - to let me sleep with him!
And he made me cry! A lot! Yes, I know I said that before, but it's different when you cry about characters. I cried over a tree. A freaking tree! And then a dog! Oh, and let's not forget that poor spoon! Believe me, when I say he's good, then I mean it - he's damn good!
Not only was he so awesome in coaxing the words to work in his favor, though, he also had a variety of the most amazing characters. Edmund was fully 3D, well-thought, and believable. And any kind of character he came to meet - be it friend, ally, or simple bystander - followed the same pattern of depth. It didn't matter if there was just another orphan at the orphanage, a mere potted plant, or even the wind - Mr. Chiantaretto gave each of them a voice of their own, an existence that didn't just serve the purpose of helping the story progress from plot point A to plot point B. (on a completely selfishly added point, I adored Nicholas! why do I always love the best friend, shall remain one of the mysteries of life...)
A while ago, I heard the book got banned - which of course, at that time, seemed logical to me. I thought it was offensive, or talked about things that more religious people might find heretic. And while I do understand there are books like that and I generally avoid them, I have to inform you that this is not such a book. Yes, it did give a different perspective on death, and being reborn, and demons - even people like Moses or Jesus - but one has to remember that it's fiction. The info - which the writer seems to have studied thoroughly - is only twisted enough to suit the needs of the story, not to tell you that it's something you should take as seriously as the Bible itself. You choose what to believe - and frankly, if you really think your beliefs are in danger because someone said so in a fantasy book, or if you think that they're solid because someone again said so in a religion-themed book, then you really need to grow up. I for one found the way Chiantaretto used several religions entertaining, amusing, and not offensive at all - and I teach in Sunday School, so that should prove that reading this perfect, breathtaking story doesn't make one question their beliefs.
Take this for example. Edmund seems to enjoy being sarcastic or irritating to religious people. And yet, there is a particular line of his that sums up his reasons for this pretty accurately - as well as shows that he's not trying to belittle anyone's faith.
"I don’t mind religious people, it’s the hypocrites I can’t stand."
This is enough proof - see? he did it again, one line and he explains much more than others do through pages and flashbacks! - that he doesn't mean to make fun of all this, but to make sure his readers have a good time by going through Edmund's witty remarks to said hypocrites.
This is one book that you definitely need to read. It made me laugh with Nicholas's innuendos, cry with Edmund's tragic experiences, and bite my nails till they bled from the agony of it all. And while it is a lot scarier than what I'm used to - scarier than Netherworld, even, and that thing had me creeped at the mere sound of my own voice - I don't think, had I been able to own a time machine and go back in time, that I would have done anything else but re-open the book and read it all over again.
***I was given a review copy from a LibraryThing Member Giveaway in exchange for an honest review. The opinion stated in this review is solely mine, and no compensation was given or taken to alter it.***
Find this and other reviews at: http://cupcakesandpopcorn.wordpress.com/
August 27, 2016
I received an advanced reader’s copy of this book. I wasn’t quite sure what to expect given the genre, but I was very pleasantly surprised by what I read. The way the book is structured it’s laid out in such a way that keeps you guessing where the plot is going, and how it will all intertwine and wrap up, but to me that was the appeal. If I can figure a plot out quickly I am usually quite disappointed. Some may not like the jumping around of the storyline(s) but the transitions were written well enough that it did not bother me in the least.
The main character, Edmund, travels through time and tries to constantly figure out who he is, what his purpose is, and what his place is in the world he currently lives in. He is always searching for answers and things are constantly questioned, such as religion. Fair warning if you are easily offended when it comes to religion this may not be the book for you. It’s not that there is particular mockery going on but beliefs are definitely questioned and challenged in Christian religions (such as Catholics, Mormons, etc…).
Edmund has different friends wherever he lands, but they are reminiscent of each other. I liked how the author was able to make these similarities from place to place. There is definitely a sense of darkness in this book with a bit of gore (not over the top), but given the title you should probably already know what you’re in for. I don’t want to give away too much but it felt like 3 good books in 1. How can you go wrong with that?
This was a book I had a hard time putting down, and a hard time finding time for. However, if after a couple of months you still want to pick the book up to keep reading - that is always a good thing. It kept my attention, and it kept me guessing. I couldn’t ask for more. I hope you enjoy this book. $.99 – nothin’ to lose. You pay more at McDonald’s or Redbox. Go for it, I highly recommend it!
The main character, Edmund, travels through time and tries to constantly figure out who he is, what his purpose is, and what his place is in the world he currently lives in. He is always searching for answers and things are constantly questioned, such as religion. Fair warning if you are easily offended when it comes to religion this may not be the book for you. It’s not that there is particular mockery going on but beliefs are definitely questioned and challenged in Christian religions (such as Catholics, Mormons, etc…).
Edmund has different friends wherever he lands, but they are reminiscent of each other. I liked how the author was able to make these similarities from place to place. There is definitely a sense of darkness in this book with a bit of gore (not over the top), but given the title you should probably already know what you’re in for. I don’t want to give away too much but it felt like 3 good books in 1. How can you go wrong with that?
This was a book I had a hard time putting down, and a hard time finding time for. However, if after a couple of months you still want to pick the book up to keep reading - that is always a good thing. It kept my attention, and it kept me guessing. I couldn’t ask for more. I hope you enjoy this book. $.99 – nothin’ to lose. You pay more at McDonald’s or Redbox. Go for it, I highly recommend it!
August 6, 2016
I began reading this book with little idea of what it would contain. The early chapters frustrated me for the same reason I've heard other reviewers mention, the narration doesn't seem to match the age of the narrator. But once I got into the third part of the book, I couldn't put it down. I wanted to find out where everything was going, and felt rewarded when I got to the end.
I enjoyed the mythologies that were pulled together for weave the world in which Edmond grows up. The ideas about the world and magic make for a fun fantasy. Though some of the events were fairly gruesome, I think that Rick avoided gratuitous gore that might put some people off.
I enjoyed the mythologies that were pulled together for weave the world in which Edmond grows up. The ideas about the world and magic make for a fun fantasy. Though some of the events were fairly gruesome, I think that Rick avoided gratuitous gore that might put some people off.
February 3, 2014
I was given the opportunity to receive and review an ARC of this book by the author. If you are looking for a dark urban fantasy full of magic, unexpected twists, and a little romance on the side then this book is for you.
It starts out with the main character Edmund who is 10 years old at the time but is betrayed and killed by one of his own. Edmund actually wakes up and is 21 years old and in a different time and world but struggles to make sense of his surroundings. This is when I started taking interest of the story as well.
We meet new characters in this world that sort of remind Edmund of his past. Edmund has several abilities that allow him to speak to nature in a unique way which I am sure we will see more as the series continues.
There are quite a few religious undertones in this book so that being said it may not be suitable for all readers. It does seem the author has done some research of several religious aspects and was written well throughout the novel.
I didn't know what to expect when I started reading this book but it was very interesting and a very different read than what I am use too. I cannot wait what will happen in book 2.
It starts out with the main character Edmund who is 10 years old at the time but is betrayed and killed by one of his own. Edmund actually wakes up and is 21 years old and in a different time and world but struggles to make sense of his surroundings. This is when I started taking interest of the story as well.
We meet new characters in this world that sort of remind Edmund of his past. Edmund has several abilities that allow him to speak to nature in a unique way which I am sure we will see more as the series continues.
There are quite a few religious undertones in this book so that being said it may not be suitable for all readers. It does seem the author has done some research of several religious aspects and was written well throughout the novel.
I didn't know what to expect when I started reading this book but it was very interesting and a very different read than what I am use too. I cannot wait what will happen in book 2.
January 20, 2019
This is a quote of the first part of the book. I like Rick Ch's writing style as this is the first book I've read of his. I recommend this book if this is a genre you are fond of.
I watched in disbelief as blood seeped through my fingers and dripped, thick as syrup, to the ground. I heard each drop thud against the ground beneath me. The echo in my ears beat louder than any drum. For the first time in my ten years of life, I cursed the connection I had with the planet. I cursed it for its betrayal. I cursed it because, with every drop of blood that spilled, the planet felt my pain and mimicked my screams with its own bleating sound that bounced around inside my already spinning head.
My legs were weak and my knees buckled but I didn’t dare let my hands loosen from around the wound in my stomach. I caught the weight of my fall with my face. I rolled onto my side in order to breathe. Pain surged as the ragged edges of my wound rubbed together. I felt every last severed nerve. They were all on fire.
Blood poured quickly. Worse than seeing it, I could feel it, hot and sticky in a pool beneath me. My stomach retched but it would hurt to throw up so I tried to force down the feeling. Bile came up anyway. I turned my head and choked it out. The rusty taste left in my mouth was so sour it made my eyes water. I cried uncontrollably, feeling ashamed of myself.
I wished for the comfort of my mother and father. I longed for the company of my two best friends. It was ironic that I’d just had a conversation about death with them a day ago.
As I lay sobbing on the ground, the thought that I was going to die became more and more real. Already my blood was soaking back into the earth that I loved so much. I thought of the lessons that taught me not to fear death. I had been taught that death was a return to the larger conscious mind that is nature. This awareness made my people who they were and gave us our unique gifts.
I was afraid anyway. The thought of dying was much more terrifying now than when it was taught to me by the Elders.
The Elders. The Elders who were either dead or enslaved. The Elder who betrayed us all and who did this to me.
Rage: pure, blazing, and blinding in its fury. I was too enraged to even notice that I could feel anything besides pain. Rage boiled inside me as blood boiled from my stomach and I realized it was based in two other emotions: hate and disbelief.
Then something cold and wet hit me between the eyes. I rolled onto my back and stared into the dark and threatening clouds. Another something hit the back of my hand, and I lifted it (was my arm always this heavy?). A drop of rain mingled with my blood.
I had never experienced rain before. It never rained here—at least not in my lifetime. Rain was for when the world was angry, when its powers had been abused and the balance of life had been disrupted.
But wasn’t I angry? And wasn’t I connected to the planet? Didn’t I understand its moods and feelings? Why wouldn’t it then understand me? In my delirium this seemed to make sense, and the large flash of lightning that then split the sky seemed to confirm my thoughts. The flash was blinding, and I didn’t have enough energy to be startled by the fact that my vision remained nothing but the same bright white light.
I shivered as cold crept into me; it didn’t help that I was lying in a chilling pool of blood. The rain picked up. I was nearly soaked through, but was too weak and numb to move. At least the pain was starting to slip away. I could only imagine how blue my fingertips must have looked. They felt like ice.
After the pain was gone, the fear began to fade. All the tension in my body went with it. Cold as I was, I started to feel strangely comfortable. I could feel the earth beneath me, supporting me, soft and gentle. My mom used to hold me like this.
When I realized the rage was slipping, I cried out. I wanted to keep it alive within me. I wanted to be angry and upset. I wanted to be angry because feeling an emotion—any emotion—was better than accepting death.
As the rage faded further, I thought I heard distant laughter. How could anyone be happy now? How could they laugh as I lay here, a mangled mess? It took me a minute to remember that just because the earth could feel my pain didn’t mean everyone else could too—especially not the outsiders.
Their voices were getting louder and nearer. When they suddenly stopped, I heard a gasp. Mustering the last of my strength, I reached toward the voices.
“Please,” I tried to say, but it came out as barely more than a groan.
“Get a doctor!” a woman’s voice commanded. I felt slight vibrations through the earth as somebody ran away. The woman who spoke came over and kneeled next to me. I wasn’t too far gone to feel surprise. I imagined I was a frightening sight. I expected her to keep her distance, so my eyes widened when she took my hand in hers. She was warm, but trembling.
“What did this to you, child?” Her voice shook but was full of compassion and concern.
“Magic.” I couldn’t tell if I actually said the word or just thought it. One of the big surprises I found in this book is that that the author had an LDS/Mormon background and periodically taps into that faith and ideas. Huge surprise to me.
Happy Reading - Enjoy!!!
I watched in disbelief as blood seeped through my fingers and dripped, thick as syrup, to the ground. I heard each drop thud against the ground beneath me. The echo in my ears beat louder than any drum. For the first time in my ten years of life, I cursed the connection I had with the planet. I cursed it for its betrayal. I cursed it because, with every drop of blood that spilled, the planet felt my pain and mimicked my screams with its own bleating sound that bounced around inside my already spinning head.
My legs were weak and my knees buckled but I didn’t dare let my hands loosen from around the wound in my stomach. I caught the weight of my fall with my face. I rolled onto my side in order to breathe. Pain surged as the ragged edges of my wound rubbed together. I felt every last severed nerve. They were all on fire.
Blood poured quickly. Worse than seeing it, I could feel it, hot and sticky in a pool beneath me. My stomach retched but it would hurt to throw up so I tried to force down the feeling. Bile came up anyway. I turned my head and choked it out. The rusty taste left in my mouth was so sour it made my eyes water. I cried uncontrollably, feeling ashamed of myself.
I wished for the comfort of my mother and father. I longed for the company of my two best friends. It was ironic that I’d just had a conversation about death with them a day ago.
As I lay sobbing on the ground, the thought that I was going to die became more and more real. Already my blood was soaking back into the earth that I loved so much. I thought of the lessons that taught me not to fear death. I had been taught that death was a return to the larger conscious mind that is nature. This awareness made my people who they were and gave us our unique gifts.
I was afraid anyway. The thought of dying was much more terrifying now than when it was taught to me by the Elders.
The Elders. The Elders who were either dead or enslaved. The Elder who betrayed us all and who did this to me.
Rage: pure, blazing, and blinding in its fury. I was too enraged to even notice that I could feel anything besides pain. Rage boiled inside me as blood boiled from my stomach and I realized it was based in two other emotions: hate and disbelief.
Then something cold and wet hit me between the eyes. I rolled onto my back and stared into the dark and threatening clouds. Another something hit the back of my hand, and I lifted it (was my arm always this heavy?). A drop of rain mingled with my blood.
I had never experienced rain before. It never rained here—at least not in my lifetime. Rain was for when the world was angry, when its powers had been abused and the balance of life had been disrupted.
But wasn’t I angry? And wasn’t I connected to the planet? Didn’t I understand its moods and feelings? Why wouldn’t it then understand me? In my delirium this seemed to make sense, and the large flash of lightning that then split the sky seemed to confirm my thoughts. The flash was blinding, and I didn’t have enough energy to be startled by the fact that my vision remained nothing but the same bright white light.
I shivered as cold crept into me; it didn’t help that I was lying in a chilling pool of blood. The rain picked up. I was nearly soaked through, but was too weak and numb to move. At least the pain was starting to slip away. I could only imagine how blue my fingertips must have looked. They felt like ice.
After the pain was gone, the fear began to fade. All the tension in my body went with it. Cold as I was, I started to feel strangely comfortable. I could feel the earth beneath me, supporting me, soft and gentle. My mom used to hold me like this.
When I realized the rage was slipping, I cried out. I wanted to keep it alive within me. I wanted to be angry and upset. I wanted to be angry because feeling an emotion—any emotion—was better than accepting death.
As the rage faded further, I thought I heard distant laughter. How could anyone be happy now? How could they laugh as I lay here, a mangled mess? It took me a minute to remember that just because the earth could feel my pain didn’t mean everyone else could too—especially not the outsiders.
Their voices were getting louder and nearer. When they suddenly stopped, I heard a gasp. Mustering the last of my strength, I reached toward the voices.
“Please,” I tried to say, but it came out as barely more than a groan.
“Get a doctor!” a woman’s voice commanded. I felt slight vibrations through the earth as somebody ran away. The woman who spoke came over and kneeled next to me. I wasn’t too far gone to feel surprise. I imagined I was a frightening sight. I expected her to keep her distance, so my eyes widened when she took my hand in hers. She was warm, but trembling.
“What did this to you, child?” Her voice shook but was full of compassion and concern.
“Magic.” I couldn’t tell if I actually said the word or just thought it. One of the big surprises I found in this book is that that the author had an LDS/Mormon background and periodically taps into that faith and ideas. Huge surprise to me.
Happy Reading - Enjoy!!!
December 16, 2014
Captivating from the very first chapter. Leaves you asking questions than draws you into reading more just to have them answered, yet replaced with many more. The way in which the story is written makes you feel as if you are the main character, confused, frustrated, scared and just a plain and simply a boiled mixed emotions, and questions.
This has a religious insight within I have never seen before, and was quite intrigued by. Far warning though, those with high or easily offended belief showed be cautious. Every religion is practically mentioned, and some what mocked at time. Keep in mind this is after all a story, in which the main character is lost within himself and follows not one belief, better said as quoted "What if all religions were stories and all stories where true?"
This book is not only captivating all throughout, it has a great mix of horror, thriller chills, humor, and mystery. Every chapter draws you in more and more. Fantastic read, and I recommend it all who like paranormal, thriller and mystery reads! I am positive I will be rereading it several more times.
This has a religious insight within I have never seen before, and was quite intrigued by. Far warning though, those with high or easily offended belief showed be cautious. Every religion is practically mentioned, and some what mocked at time. Keep in mind this is after all a story, in which the main character is lost within himself and follows not one belief, better said as quoted "What if all religions were stories and all stories where true?"
This book is not only captivating all throughout, it has a great mix of horror, thriller chills, humor, and mystery. Every chapter draws you in more and more. Fantastic read, and I recommend it all who like paranormal, thriller and mystery reads! I am positive I will be rereading it several more times.
February 13, 2014
My kind of book! Fantasy, Faith, Fear, & Fabulous! MORE...more...MORE...that's what I kept thinking! =) A story that is full of wonder, magic, & has the ability to creep you out all at the same time. LOVE IT! Very different from what I've been reading the last few weeks. The beginning had my full attention with the mages & the evil lurking. I enjoyed learning the ways of Orenda & feeling all of the emotions portrayed. While the twist took me a few moments to wrap my head around it definitely made me want to figure it all out even more. Edmund's journey took us through space & time revealing some answers while opening up more questions along the way. Chiantaretto has a unique writing style that I look forward to seeing more of! The more I read the more I wanted, & the end ensured that I will be reading book 2 as soon as it's available!
September 15, 2014
meh ... a LOT of religion when I wasn't expecting it. the story was all over the place and hard to follow at times. most certainly not my cup of tea, you know?
January 29, 2014
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October 2, 2014
4 Stars|Goodreads|Amazon
Meg's Review:
This novel was a raw and highly engaging read. We start off with a jolt and it never stops going. The main character in this book dies. Often-ish. I know that's vague, but I really want you to read it and don't want to give too much away. I mean we meet Edmund at age ten and from there we travel with him through these horrific but not horrific, but still scary and interesting journeys. The definition of great Urban Fantasy.
Some parts of this book I did the *hide and cringe* and others I just gapped at what was happening. The detail in this novel just grips you.
I am not a fan of books with religion as a main aspect, and this one doesn't per say, but some of the parts about it are analytical and dismissive in a way. But, it is in a way that I thought it played well with the story. It didn't distract me, and in fact I thought it was a very unique outlook.
The book is wonderfully written and the characters personal is very well-developed. The writing style is well thought out and the plot line keeps the reader engaged.
A scary and interesting read that I am glad I picked up. Not a book for everyone, but if you want a little scary that makes you think, this book is for you.
Synopsis:
I grew up in a world of magic. By the time I was ten I understood nature, talked to the trees, and listened to the wind. When the kingdom of men conquered my town, I was murdered by one of my own—the betrayer of my kind. But I didn't stay dead.
I woke to find myself in a strange new world called Los Angeles. The only keys to the life I remembered were my father’s ring, my unique abilities, and the onslaught of demons that seemed hell-bent on finding me. Now I must find out who I really am, protect my friends, and get back to my beloved hometown of Orenda.
Meet Rick Chiantaretto
Author Bio:
I've often been accused of having done more in my life than the average person my age, but if I were completely honest I'd have to tell you my secret: I'm really 392.
So after all this time, I'm a pretty crappy writer.
I have one book published but out of print, one coming out soon, and a bunch half written (when you have eternity, where's the reason to rush?). I've been favorably reviewed by horror greats like Nancy Kilpatrick, and my how-to-write-horror articles have been quoted in scholarly (aka community college freshmen's) papers.
I enjoy the occasional Bloody Mary, although a Bloody Kathy or Susan will suffice.
Mostly, I just try to keep a low profile so people don't figure out who I REALLY am.
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October 17, 2018
now i am hooked. This was such a great, easy and creative book. i was hooked after the first page.
The characters were easy to fall in love with and follow, along with the story. the author made the mental visions so easy and vivid of the surroundings and the characters actions felt so real.
i would highly recommend this author and this book.
The characters were easy to fall in love with and follow, along with the story. the author made the mental visions so easy and vivid of the surroundings and the characters actions felt so real.
i would highly recommend this author and this book.
March 31, 2019
Death
A little different on the set up of the storyline but detailed characters, will read book 2 but not rushing to get it
A little different on the set up of the storyline but detailed characters, will read book 2 but not rushing to get it
November 12, 2014
Review originally posted to Author Unpublished: http://authorunpublished.wordpress.com
Death of The Body by Rick Chiantaretto was not exactly what I expected, but it was certainly a fascinating read. I thought this book was going to be your usual, angsty, teen-becomes-grim-reaper story, but that isn’t exactly what I got.
The book is the story of Edmund, a boy from the world of Orenda, where mages live in harmony with nature and in conflict with the human race. Evil spirits, Energumen, roam the land in search of unwary people to possess and control. Despite the dangers, Edmund’s childhood is filled with adventure, friends, family, and his magical connection to nature. All that changes one day when his people are betrayed by one of their own, and Edmund’s life is thrown into uncertain chaos.
I’ll admit. At first, I was confused. I’d read that this was a YA novel, but the main character was barely 10 years old. For more than half the book, Edmund was under 14. It threw me off. However, this changed later in the book, and for the remainder of the story, Edmund was a student in college. I can’t fault the author for the way the story was put together. I can’t imagine it having been written any other way. I think it was important to the story line to show Edmund’s childhood, just as it was important to show his older self… however, it did make it hard to place this in the YA category. The first half of the book is very clearly Middle-Grade, and the latter half, I feel, should have been labeled New Adult. There’s large amount of gore, and there are intimate situations that aren’t really appropriate for the early YA crowd—it didn’t feel like it fit into the category it was placed.
Character-wise, I liked the characters. Edmund was an intelligent, conscientious boy, and his friends were equally as enjoyable…. but I didn’t feel like I had a personal investment in any of the characters. Don’t get me wrong, I was interested to see where Edmund’s story was leading, but it wasn’t a soul-gripping heart-wrenching concern over his life. I think part of that is my own fault though. I’m used to reading romance novels where the reader’s association with the main characters is a little deeper than that usually presented in a fantasy novel. I can’t hold that against the story. I will say, however, that I was a little disappointed in the romantic side of the story, regardless. The relationship between Xia and Edmund moved quickly and didn’t seem to have a lot of emotion behind it. I wish it had been developed a little slower.
That aside, the story was well written. There were a few spelling mistakes and incomplete sentences, but nothing too jarring. Overall, I liked the it. I don’t want to give too much away, so I’ll hold off on long explanations and in-depth delving into the religious aspect of it and how it related to the world building, but it was one of the most fascinating part of the story. The world building was excellent and engaging on a level I didn’t expect. It was a completely new way of looking at the Grim Reaper mythos, and I loved every bit of it. Would I read this book again? I don’t know. It was a good read, but I don’t know that it has a lot of re-read value. Would I continue on with the series? Yes. Definitely. Would I recommend it? Yes. If you enjoy fantasy, you’ll get a kick out of this fresh take on the Grim Reaper. I would highly recommend giving it a chance.
Death of The Body by Rick Chiantaretto was not exactly what I expected, but it was certainly a fascinating read. I thought this book was going to be your usual, angsty, teen-becomes-grim-reaper story, but that isn’t exactly what I got.
The book is the story of Edmund, a boy from the world of Orenda, where mages live in harmony with nature and in conflict with the human race. Evil spirits, Energumen, roam the land in search of unwary people to possess and control. Despite the dangers, Edmund’s childhood is filled with adventure, friends, family, and his magical connection to nature. All that changes one day when his people are betrayed by one of their own, and Edmund’s life is thrown into uncertain chaos.
I’ll admit. At first, I was confused. I’d read that this was a YA novel, but the main character was barely 10 years old. For more than half the book, Edmund was under 14. It threw me off. However, this changed later in the book, and for the remainder of the story, Edmund was a student in college. I can’t fault the author for the way the story was put together. I can’t imagine it having been written any other way. I think it was important to the story line to show Edmund’s childhood, just as it was important to show his older self… however, it did make it hard to place this in the YA category. The first half of the book is very clearly Middle-Grade, and the latter half, I feel, should have been labeled New Adult. There’s large amount of gore, and there are intimate situations that aren’t really appropriate for the early YA crowd—it didn’t feel like it fit into the category it was placed.
Character-wise, I liked the characters. Edmund was an intelligent, conscientious boy, and his friends were equally as enjoyable…. but I didn’t feel like I had a personal investment in any of the characters. Don’t get me wrong, I was interested to see where Edmund’s story was leading, but it wasn’t a soul-gripping heart-wrenching concern over his life. I think part of that is my own fault though. I’m used to reading romance novels where the reader’s association with the main characters is a little deeper than that usually presented in a fantasy novel. I can’t hold that against the story. I will say, however, that I was a little disappointed in the romantic side of the story, regardless. The relationship between Xia and Edmund moved quickly and didn’t seem to have a lot of emotion behind it. I wish it had been developed a little slower.
That aside, the story was well written. There were a few spelling mistakes and incomplete sentences, but nothing too jarring. Overall, I liked the it. I don’t want to give too much away, so I’ll hold off on long explanations and in-depth delving into the religious aspect of it and how it related to the world building, but it was one of the most fascinating part of the story. The world building was excellent and engaging on a level I didn’t expect. It was a completely new way of looking at the Grim Reaper mythos, and I loved every bit of it. Would I read this book again? I don’t know. It was a good read, but I don’t know that it has a lot of re-read value. Would I continue on with the series? Yes. Definitely. Would I recommend it? Yes. If you enjoy fantasy, you’ll get a kick out of this fresh take on the Grim Reaper. I would highly recommend giving it a chance.
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