Spring is in the air and it's Easter weekend. Fox is on the hunt for something new and exciting, and finds it in the form of a sexy young twink named Trick.
There's much more to Trick than his out-there attitude and unique style. Fox quickly finds that out during one night of hot, passionate sex.
And what about those undies? Are they for freaking real?
The blurb totally reeled me in. I was intrigued by these undies but I was left feeling disappointed. I struggled to get through this once the guys got together. I just did not care. The sex talk was unimaginative and awkward. I liked the main characters (atleast based on their internal monologues), but I didn't see the chemistry at all.
I liked this. I think it could have been really good if the sex scene wasn't so cheesy. I think only guys in pornos say stuff like that. It started out really good and then seemed like the author ran out of time and quickly put the second half of the story together.
I thought this was a cute story. I really enjoyed Fox and Trick getting together. The only problem I had with it was that I wanted more. Did they keep seeing each other? Did Fox get to top? Did he ever come out?
Dissappointing, there seemed to be agood story in there, but it wasn't realised. There was no chemistry between the characters, the sex was boring and the sex talk unimaginative and porny... Which is bad, when your story is primarily a sexscene
short (17 pages on smashwords) not much story (but it's ok because i just want to read sex scene) get right to the point really fast -> sex (of course) I give my stars to Trick I like physically smaller top <3