It was mostly well written. The black characters weren't underwritten when compared to the white ones. * Though some of the slang in Jamels chapters was odd, like "moefuckee"? He used it twice. WTF? I feel like the climax could have been unpacked more, rather than "this horrible thing happens, here's a couple of paragraphs about the next morning, the end."
Moefuckee?
* taking off a star, because technically, they were all underwritten.