When I finished this book, I was so fucking mad.
The plot itself is okay at best. A world where people use the internet to download information into their brains. Okay I can see that working. Our main character, Alexandra Gray, is separated from her mother at birth because of a law that doesnt allow repeat offenders to have children or some shit. (Its been a while, and i am still fucking mad as hell) In the future, when Alex is 16 (I think) she becomes the youngest person to achieve some sort of status that people normally achieve when they are about 24. Her friend, Milo, who is obviously in love with her, gets jealous of her ability to retain so much information at high speeds. And then when she meets Aris, he gets more jealous. Eventually, they meet her mother, who has no recollection of what happened and shit... yada yada yada, and then they find her father is trying to destroy the world. They stop his plan to poison the planet with a black hole (What the fuck) That doesnt even seem to harm the earth. Alex gets stuck on a stranded island and nearly dies, until her mom comes to save her. Plot is alright at best. Ending is stupid, but everything else is alright. Also some strange parts, like the shaman part, is DEUS EX MACHINA, and could have been found out another way.
Now what really ruined the story for me was the characters.
Alexandra Gray
Oh my god this bitch is fucking annoying. This is the problem with prodigious characters. They aren't fucking relatable unless you give them a flaw. And as far as I know, she doesnt fucking have one. Everything she does is the right thing to do and she plows through it without any difficulty. Other than the kiss scene, where she truly does decide to reveal a different part of herself, she is incredibly one dimensional. In fact, a lot of characters in here are one dimensional. Honestly, as a character, the fact that she was unrelatable and can blow through any challenge made me wish she died at the end. Not only do I not care about her, I hated her. She's fucking flawless both physically and mentally. No one is like that in real life!
Milo
He's much more relatable, but i still dont like him. He has a jealous tendency that comes off as very possessive and entitled. But I dont really care about this guy because none of his flaws are redeemed. He just seems to get what he wants in the end.
Aris
Older Milo.
Mara
The one character that I actually liked. She had some flaws that were redeemed. Shes a typical mother, and all of her actions are justified, no matter how brutal they were. I wish she had gotten more time in the book, because her character is actually the best and the most relatable.
Maxim
Villain that tries to be a psychopath leader but doesnt pan out. His reasons for wanting to purge the earth doesnt make sense other than 'just cuz'. So I dont really care about this guy, and he doesnt rouse my interest enough to be an interesting psychopath villain. You see, here is the thing with Psychopathic leaders vs the Joker (Who is in my opinion the best fucking psychopathic villain ever). Psychopath leaders have one goal: To rule over others and dictate their lives. It leads them to do very predictable things, and thus makes them boring. They must have scenes where it is incredibly grotesque to show how far they will go to get what they want, and they have to actually be doing it themselves. It makes a bigger impact if the villain is the one doing the action rather than having his minions do it (As you can see, I also dont really find President Snow from THG to be that great of a villain either). What's going to make more of an impact: A whole lot of innocent men being executed by a firing squad? or A whole lot of men being executed with a bullet in each head by the ruler of the land?
The thing that sets Joker from most psychopaths is that he doesnt want power, thus making him less predictable. He doesnt want fame, or glory, or retribution. He wants the world to burn, and he loves doing it. Not to mention that his acts are incredibly hostile and outright, over-the-top menacing. But the fact that Joker doesnt want to rule the land sets him apart from other psychopaths already.
In short, I wish I got my time back. The only reason why I kept reading was because I thought it was going to get better. It didnt, and now because of this book, I refuse to get into books that have a shit start, like City of Bones and Insignia. Not worth anyone's time.
EDIT: I started writing fiction, and the perfect term for Alex is a MARY SUE! Edward Mullen, shame on you.