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Potion Shop
Liza goads her friend, meek little Marcy, into visiting the local potion shop. It's an odd place filled with bottles, unguents, ointments and more. And staffed by a handsome young man named Travis.
But, when Marcy goes back inside to give Travis her number, something has changed. He isn't the charming young man she'd met just a few minutes before.
What happened in the few moments she was outside?
But, when Marcy goes back inside to give Travis her number, something has changed. He isn't the charming young man she'd met just a few minutes before.
What happened in the few moments she was outside?
22 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 18, 2013
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July 30, 2017
This is a short interlude in the lives of two girls who visit a potion shop for a giggle. It's just across the road from the coffee shop.
I'd suggest not believing the spill chucker - roman-esk is not a word, 'trying to demure' is nonsensical and calling a potion shop worker a vial personality, twice, is either bad spelling or an erudite pun above the heads of many YAs. I'm really not sure how old the ideal reader should be as I spy strong language.
What I do like is that one of the young women asks for a charm to make her more confident, but as the story proceeds and the need arises, her confidence is found. I have enjoyed fantasies by this author set in other worlds.
The author made this short available to download free. This is an unbiased review.
I'd suggest not believing the spill chucker - roman-esk is not a word, 'trying to demure' is nonsensical and calling a potion shop worker a vial personality, twice, is either bad spelling or an erudite pun above the heads of many YAs. I'm really not sure how old the ideal reader should be as I spy strong language.
What I do like is that one of the young women asks for a charm to make her more confident, but as the story proceeds and the need arises, her confidence is found. I have enjoyed fantasies by this author set in other worlds.
The author made this short available to download free. This is an unbiased review.
August 12, 2020
Two friends visit a potion shop kinda daring eachother but what they get is more then they bargained for.
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