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A Kind Deception
Two sapphic romance authors? They are brilliant at crafting the greatest feeling of all. But, can they manipulate the game of love in real life the same as they do with the characters they create? They should know how to handle drama, solve conflicts and ensure a happily ever after since they write beautiful stories that warm the hearts of so many people. So how hard can it be for them to live the romance that they write about?
Laurel Culhane is struggling with feeling unmotivated in her current stage of life and considering leaving her day job to pursue a career as a full-time author. However, growing up in a family with high expectations has left her hesitant to follow her dreams. Everyone knows Laurel is not a fan of the younger generation which has contributed to her growing dislike of corporate life. But, despite her general disinterest in the world of celebrities and anyone younger than her, for reasons unknown, she has caught the attention of Rayne Ducasse. However, Laurel has no intention of interacting with Rayne, because they couldn’t possibly have anything in common, and unlike the rest of the world she wasn’t under the woman’s spell.
Rayne Ducasse's life has been full of twists and turns that have ultimately led her to become a highly successful entrepreneur. However, in spite of all of her accomplishments and fame, her true passion lies in writing romance stories, which can be a very lonely process. She yearns to connect with someone who shares her passion. Someone who will see her for the woman she is beneath the surface when the cameras are off. Unfortunately, the woman who has caught her eye seems hellbent on ignoring her.
So, what happens when Laurel and Rayne meet at an awards ceremony? Will Laurel be able to maintain her guarded demeanor or will Rayne's charisma break through her icy facade, much like the characters Laurel writes about? Can Rayne prove to Laurel that she is more than the assumptions she's made about her? As they reveal more about themselves, despite their age difference, upbringing, and social status, will they discover that they may have more in common than they thought?
And as layer after layer is revealed to show who they are beneath the surface, is there more to their story than what meets the eye?
Laurel Culhane is struggling with feeling unmotivated in her current stage of life and considering leaving her day job to pursue a career as a full-time author. However, growing up in a family with high expectations has left her hesitant to follow her dreams. Everyone knows Laurel is not a fan of the younger generation which has contributed to her growing dislike of corporate life. But, despite her general disinterest in the world of celebrities and anyone younger than her, for reasons unknown, she has caught the attention of Rayne Ducasse. However, Laurel has no intention of interacting with Rayne, because they couldn’t possibly have anything in common, and unlike the rest of the world she wasn’t under the woman’s spell.
Rayne Ducasse's life has been full of twists and turns that have ultimately led her to become a highly successful entrepreneur. However, in spite of all of her accomplishments and fame, her true passion lies in writing romance stories, which can be a very lonely process. She yearns to connect with someone who shares her passion. Someone who will see her for the woman she is beneath the surface when the cameras are off. Unfortunately, the woman who has caught her eye seems hellbent on ignoring her.
So, what happens when Laurel and Rayne meet at an awards ceremony? Will Laurel be able to maintain her guarded demeanor or will Rayne's charisma break through her icy facade, much like the characters Laurel writes about? Can Rayne prove to Laurel that she is more than the assumptions she's made about her? As they reveal more about themselves, despite their age difference, upbringing, and social status, will they discover that they may have more in common than they thought?
And as layer after layer is revealed to show who they are beneath the surface, is there more to their story than what meets the eye?
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July 10, 2023
A love story between two sapphic authors? It's like the dream plot for lesfic lovers. Rayne is all charm and confidence, she is good at everything she does and is highly aware of her qualities. Behind the glitters of fame, she is so much more than what she is showing : she is engaged and her backstory cleverly highlights immigration issues.
I had a little preference for Laurel's characters despite her being a bit judgemental and infuriating at first : she has an opinion on a person just looking at the year they were born in. She is almost as icy as the ice queens she is creating in her books; but deep down she is insecure, guarded, her life choices are highly influenced by familial pressure. I loved seeing her literally learning the idiom : "don't judge a book by its cover", and having Rayne sweeping her off her feet.
Social media played an important in their story and I was glad to find characters in books that are as addicted as I am.
With a book longer than average, Von Triessen took the time to let Laurel fall for Rayne. When she finally surrenders it's all about fireworks, passion and a lot of spice.
You can trust Von Triessen to surprise you with an excellent plot twist. Don't panic, this time, she was merciful toward her readers and gave us a perfect sweet ending instead of an excruciating cliffhanger.
I felt the growth in her writing and if she keeps on that path I have no doubt SVT will have a future as bright as her own characters.
I had a little preference for Laurel's characters despite her being a bit judgemental and infuriating at first : she has an opinion on a person just looking at the year they were born in. She is almost as icy as the ice queens she is creating in her books; but deep down she is insecure, guarded, her life choices are highly influenced by familial pressure. I loved seeing her literally learning the idiom : "don't judge a book by its cover", and having Rayne sweeping her off her feet.
Social media played an important in their story and I was glad to find characters in books that are as addicted as I am.
With a book longer than average, Von Triessen took the time to let Laurel fall for Rayne. When she finally surrenders it's all about fireworks, passion and a lot of spice.
You can trust Von Triessen to surprise you with an excellent plot twist. Don't panic, this time, she was merciful toward her readers and gave us a perfect sweet ending instead of an excruciating cliffhanger.
I felt the growth in her writing and if she keeps on that path I have no doubt SVT will have a future as bright as her own characters.
March 23, 2024
5.0 ⭐🤍 (Timeless - Taylor Swift)
new comfort book just dropped!!! few books bring me the feeling that they are perfect for me, books that no matter what happens i know i will love the couple unconditionally and will mark me forever.
this was one of the rare books that made me feel like it was written for me, silly i know, but since i read the synopsis i knew it would become one of my favs. i couldn't stop reading and couldn't love them more than i do now :(
i won't write a full review but this was one of the best romance ive read and their story is SO beautiful and they brought me so much comfort. i just know this was one of the best book of the year.
p.s. ilysm my princess rayne ill protect you to death. 📃🤍🧸
new comfort book just dropped!!! few books bring me the feeling that they are perfect for me, books that no matter what happens i know i will love the couple unconditionally and will mark me forever.
this was one of the rare books that made me feel like it was written for me, silly i know, but since i read the synopsis i knew it would become one of my favs. i couldn't stop reading and couldn't love them more than i do now :(
i won't write a full review but this was one of the best romance ive read and their story is SO beautiful and they brought me so much comfort. i just know this was one of the best book of the year.
p.s. ilysm my princess rayne ill protect you to death. 📃🤍🧸
September 29, 2023
All that bashing on gen z in this book made me want to DNF it, the first 20% was so cringe… it read as if a boomer bashing millennials. But it picked up for me around 35% into it.
November 7, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️✨ (3.75 stars, rounded up here)
A Kind Deception by Skye von Triessen surprised me in a lot of ways. First of all, I adored both Rayne and Laurel. They were incredibly cute together, and their dynamic felt refreshingly real: healthy communication, strong chemistry, and no unnecessary drama.
I also loved that both were authors. The way their writing and the idea of “creating your own romance story” were woven into the book felt natural and meaningful, not just a random quirk added as a plot device.
Besides that, Laurel’s character arc stood out to me. She started off a bit unlikeable with her constant Gen Z bashing. At first, it made sense for her personality, but after a while it got repetitive (for me). Still, seeing her growth and how she softened over time as well as her standing up for herself to her family made it worth it.
The pacing dipped a little in the middle though, the story dragged more than I’d have liked but it found its rhythm again toward the end and wrapped up strong.
Overall, it’s a solid, thoughtful romance with great character work. Definitely one I’d still recommend.
A Kind Deception by Skye von Triessen surprised me in a lot of ways. First of all, I adored both Rayne and Laurel. They were incredibly cute together, and their dynamic felt refreshingly real: healthy communication, strong chemistry, and no unnecessary drama.
I also loved that both were authors. The way their writing and the idea of “creating your own romance story” were woven into the book felt natural and meaningful, not just a random quirk added as a plot device.
Besides that, Laurel’s character arc stood out to me. She started off a bit unlikeable with her constant Gen Z bashing. At first, it made sense for her personality, but after a while it got repetitive (for me). Still, seeing her growth and how she softened over time as well as her standing up for herself to her family made it worth it.
The pacing dipped a little in the middle though, the story dragged more than I’d have liked but it found its rhythm again toward the end and wrapped up strong.
Overall, it’s a solid, thoughtful romance with great character work. Definitely one I’d still recommend.
October 31, 2025
Another wonderful love story by an author who never disappoints.
December 14, 2023
3.5 ⭐️
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Review may come later
July 29, 2023
Soooo good!!!
*In Stephan's voice from SNL* This. Book. Has. Everything!!!
Thanks for the reco, Ari!
*In Stephan's voice from SNL* This. Book. Has. Everything!!!
Thanks for the reco, Ari!
December 1, 2023
Laurel was insufferable and her constant snap judgements about every new person she encountered really started to grate on me as the book went on. I liked Rayne well enough but I didn’t enjoy how she kept having to prove her intelligence and maturity to Laurel. I also didn’t really like the constant references to romance book tropes because it kept pulling me out of the story by making me aware I was reading a romance book.
I also saw that third act twist/betrayal coming and again Laurel’s reaction was overdramatic and unwarranted. Laurel’s response to Rayne’s ‘betrayal’ was shitty and terrible and I don’t think she deserved to get back with her in the end.
And the constant put downs and generalisations about Gen Z as a whole didn’t really get addressed appropriately because it felt like Rayne was happy to be ‘one of the good ones’ in the eyes of Laurel instead of Laurel realising her judgemental opinions were the problem. For example when Laurel lost her job because “many of the younger staff found her difficult to work with,” she still thought it was bullshit despite complaining about and maligning Gen Z for the whole book with barely any push back.
I also saw that third act twist/betrayal coming and again Laurel’s reaction was overdramatic and unwarranted. Laurel’s response to Rayne’s ‘betrayal’ was shitty and terrible and I don’t think she deserved to get back with her in the end.
And the constant put downs and generalisations about Gen Z as a whole didn’t really get addressed appropriately because it felt like Rayne was happy to be ‘one of the good ones’ in the eyes of Laurel instead of Laurel realising her judgemental opinions were the problem. For example when Laurel lost her job because “many of the younger staff found her difficult to work with,” she still thought it was bullshit despite complaining about and maligning Gen Z for the whole book with barely any push back.
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July 21, 2023
ABSOLUTELY PHENOMENAL IN EVERY WAY SHAPE AND FORM!!!
One of the BEST romance books I have EVER read. And overall just one of the best books I have ever read!!!
Truly speechless, as I can’t begin to voice the impact this book had on me. The writing, the CHARACTERS, the depth of the emotion I felt for these two human beings. Their entire life’s gut wrenching, yet BEAUTIFUL, journey! Truly fantastic!!! How a person, a writer, can pen fiction to the point of leaving a mark so internally on an a literal human being reading their work to the point that their brain genuinely tells them that they believably lived this story in a true reality, and was not simply a fictional work of art absolutely baffles me. Because that is sincerely what this book has done. I didn’t just read it. I lived it. I breathed it. I FELT EVERY EMOTION INKED ON THESE PAGES AS IF IT WERE REAL LIFE.
Just remarkable.
Absolutely REMARKABLE.
To the incredible author, thank you for sharing something so very special with the world. Because that is what this was, so very special.
One of the BEST romance books I have EVER read. And overall just one of the best books I have ever read!!!
Truly speechless, as I can’t begin to voice the impact this book had on me. The writing, the CHARACTERS, the depth of the emotion I felt for these two human beings. Their entire life’s gut wrenching, yet BEAUTIFUL, journey! Truly fantastic!!! How a person, a writer, can pen fiction to the point of leaving a mark so internally on an a literal human being reading their work to the point that their brain genuinely tells them that they believably lived this story in a true reality, and was not simply a fictional work of art absolutely baffles me. Because that is sincerely what this book has done. I didn’t just read it. I lived it. I breathed it. I FELT EVERY EMOTION INKED ON THESE PAGES AS IF IT WERE REAL LIFE.
Just remarkable.
Absolutely REMARKABLE.
To the incredible author, thank you for sharing something so very special with the world. Because that is what this was, so very special.
July 18, 2023
I don’t have the words to describe how much I loved this book 🥰 it gave me so many feelings, Rayne is the dream, what an amazing MC. I loved Skye’s previous 2 books but after reading this it’s safe to say Skye makes the top spot for my favourite author.
November 11, 2023
I'm sad to say it but it was a DNF for me at 72%. I disliked it from the start but saw a comment saying it was getting better from 35% up so I kept going. I hate judging a book I didnt finish so I tried my best but I was bored out of my mind at 72% and had to stop. It was so repetitive and I thougt since I wasnt a gen z I would not be bothered by the constant mention of how much Laurel hate them but yet...so annoying. When you're whole personnality is hating Gen Z and saying you are boring because you don't go out...readers have seen it all after 100 pages, no need for over 400. Laurel was flavorless and it felt like with Rayne, the author tried to create a stereotyped "perfect" selfmade gen z to prove how different she was from all the other gen z Laurel hates so much. Every discussion between the character were the same over and over again. Always the same "of course, you're shitty generation would do/think that" and "how someone like you can love someone boring like me". It pains me to say this because I LOVED Skye Von Triessen others books (If it's meant to be and When we're meant to be) and both of the protagonist from these books are some of the best written one I've seen and I loved them so much.
August 3, 2023
What a great read!!! All the feels throughout!!! The character arcs were engaging and relatable. Loved the information on immigration and Canada. Hated the angst but I had a feeling about the deception (not realizing what the deception was as I was feeling it lol) Chemistry was sublime, spice on point and their connection was amazing. And now I need a hug and cuddles. Beautiful writing! Thank you!
August 15, 2023
JUST WONDERFUL! So beautifully written book.
August 27, 2024
Laurel is 35, a sapphic author, and lives a modest life working as an auditor by day. She is completely dissatisfied with her life but lacks the confidence needed to make changes. Try as she might, Laurel can't meet the expectations of her parents. Her successes are lacking in their eyes, and their approval is the only thing that matters to her.
Rayne is 25 years old. She is also a sapphic author, as well as a choreographer and social media influencer. Rayne has acquired fame and money and lives part of her life in the public eye. The other part of her life is lived privately, either writing or working with immigrants seeking asylum in Canada. She is a perfect example of "there's more than meets the eye."
Circumstance brings the two authors to an in person meeting. While Rayne is trying her best to win over her favorite author, Laurel can't see past Rayne's age, as she has a real prejudice against the younger generation. Rayne may surprise Laurel, though, as she has a lot to teach the older woman about life, experience, and being true to yourself. Are these two able to write their own real-life happy ending much like they do in their books?
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I enjoyed this book. Reading romance novels can be really monotonous. Sometimes, it feels like you're reading the same story over and over again. I expected that out of this book, although I don't know why. I am certainly guilty of judging a book by its cover, and I feel like what you see on the outside doesn't match the inside on this one. Either way, I'm glad that it proved me wrong. Maybe I have a thing or two to learn about prejudices. Lol. Here are some things to check off if this is what you're looking for:
✅️ Ice queen
✅️ Age gap
✅️ 3rd act breakup
✅️ Alternating POV
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Rayne is 25 years old. She is also a sapphic author, as well as a choreographer and social media influencer. Rayne has acquired fame and money and lives part of her life in the public eye. The other part of her life is lived privately, either writing or working with immigrants seeking asylum in Canada. She is a perfect example of "there's more than meets the eye."
Circumstance brings the two authors to an in person meeting. While Rayne is trying her best to win over her favorite author, Laurel can't see past Rayne's age, as she has a real prejudice against the younger generation. Rayne may surprise Laurel, though, as she has a lot to teach the older woman about life, experience, and being true to yourself. Are these two able to write their own real-life happy ending much like they do in their books?
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I enjoyed this book. Reading romance novels can be really monotonous. Sometimes, it feels like you're reading the same story over and over again. I expected that out of this book, although I don't know why. I am certainly guilty of judging a book by its cover, and I feel like what you see on the outside doesn't match the inside on this one. Either way, I'm glad that it proved me wrong. Maybe I have a thing or two to learn about prejudices. Lol. Here are some things to check off if this is what you're looking for:
✅️ Ice queen
✅️ Age gap
✅️ 3rd act breakup
✅️ Alternating POV
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August 1, 2023
I was quite sad how quickly I finished this book. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Highly recommend it.
July 27, 2023
There is so much to say about this book, but I will not bore you with my words, because the words you should be reading are the ones on the pages.
I have never been a romance story type of person. I always thought they were cheesy and so unrealistic. But, Skye Von Triessen, has once again proven me wrong (not an easy thing to do). I have read all of her books more than once, if that tells you anything. And prior to reading her first book, I had never written a review on a book, because they take time and many stories had never really impacted me. But here we are again, another story from SVT that has left an impact.
I loved her first series, but this book…this story… was so ridiculously surreal for me that it honestly freaked me out the first time I read it. I often don’t get vulnerably emotional, but this book, hit I believe what the Gen Z’s call these days “the feels” (am I saying that right? I’m an old millennial like Laurel, so I have no idea about what’s cool these days lol). I love Laurel and Rayne equally because I see a lot of myself at different stages of my life in each of their characters. I know Laurel’s pain about never being enough, many years ago I had my heart broken because someone else was chosen over me, and it was the first time I learned that all I wanted was to just be enough. I know Rayne’s confidence and knowing what she wants and does everything from the little important things to the grandest of gestures for the people she loves; it’s much more of who I am today.
There was so much for me personally to unpack with this story. This is my 5th time reading it, and every time I feel like I have read a slightly different version and find something new. That’s the type of books you get from Skye. The depth of characters, the evolution of the characters both as a couple and individually, the importance of background and culture (I have a soft spot for stories that showcase a pride in a heritage and culture, because mine is often misunderstood). Skye is one of those rare author’s whose stories I feel could actually be realistic and are eerily relatable, and I so enjoy reading the magic she puts on paper (yes I still prefer physical copies to tablet lol). She has really done a phenomenal job with this story. I can even see how much her storytelling and writing itself has evolved since her first book…and to think she wrote 3 all in 1 year! Amazing to see that level of change in a short amount of time. Well done Skye!
Read this book. Read it more than once… because there is never enough times you can read a story that reminds you that…you…are…enough…as…is. Because you can’t love anyone else if you don’t love yourself first. And I still hope I can find someone like Rayne who (from my favorite line in the book p. 278 on KU and p. 317 paperback) says “someone who can love me at my worst and inspire me to become my best”.
I have never been a romance story type of person. I always thought they were cheesy and so unrealistic. But, Skye Von Triessen, has once again proven me wrong (not an easy thing to do). I have read all of her books more than once, if that tells you anything. And prior to reading her first book, I had never written a review on a book, because they take time and many stories had never really impacted me. But here we are again, another story from SVT that has left an impact.
I loved her first series, but this book…this story… was so ridiculously surreal for me that it honestly freaked me out the first time I read it. I often don’t get vulnerably emotional, but this book, hit I believe what the Gen Z’s call these days “the feels” (am I saying that right? I’m an old millennial like Laurel, so I have no idea about what’s cool these days lol). I love Laurel and Rayne equally because I see a lot of myself at different stages of my life in each of their characters. I know Laurel’s pain about never being enough, many years ago I had my heart broken because someone else was chosen over me, and it was the first time I learned that all I wanted was to just be enough. I know Rayne’s confidence and knowing what she wants and does everything from the little important things to the grandest of gestures for the people she loves; it’s much more of who I am today.
There was so much for me personally to unpack with this story. This is my 5th time reading it, and every time I feel like I have read a slightly different version and find something new. That’s the type of books you get from Skye. The depth of characters, the evolution of the characters both as a couple and individually, the importance of background and culture (I have a soft spot for stories that showcase a pride in a heritage and culture, because mine is often misunderstood). Skye is one of those rare author’s whose stories I feel could actually be realistic and are eerily relatable, and I so enjoy reading the magic she puts on paper (yes I still prefer physical copies to tablet lol). She has really done a phenomenal job with this story. I can even see how much her storytelling and writing itself has evolved since her first book…and to think she wrote 3 all in 1 year! Amazing to see that level of change in a short amount of time. Well done Skye!
Read this book. Read it more than once… because there is never enough times you can read a story that reminds you that…you…are…enough…as…is. Because you can’t love anyone else if you don’t love yourself first. And I still hope I can find someone like Rayne who (from my favorite line in the book p. 278 on KU and p. 317 paperback) says “someone who can love me at my worst and inspire me to become my best”.
July 12, 2023
This book made me laugh, smile, swoon and cry and of course fall in love with Laurel and Rayne.
Absolutely loved it!
Absolutely loved it!
February 18, 2025
DNF
What is this? No, really. And why does it have ANY 5 star ratings?? I couldn't finish. I made it just over 10% before I started skimming. And even skimming, I was bored and annoyed. Multiple reviews said it really improved around 35%. First off, if it takes over 1/3 of the book to get good, your book just isn't good. Sorry? Second, I as the reader should not have to wait that long. Your readers deserve better than slogging through so much to get something better written or more interesting or whatever supposedly happens at 35%.
My first overall issue comes in with the near-info dumping that kept happening. I didn't feel I was getting to know the characters through their lives as they lived, I kept getting long monologing thoughts about their exes or family or jobs. Second, Laurel's obsession with Gen Z was disturbing. I use the word 'obsession' very intentionally. It is most of what she thinks about, or somehow permeates her thoughts about ordinary things. Like, she could be having a perfectly normal moment on social media, and all of a sudden is thinking 'But Gen Z would do this' or 'the younger generation always _'. In theory, it could stem from her job, but this is too much. I read very little of this book and was annoyed. I decided to actually do some counting, or rather, have the search function count for me. In the book, 'Gen Z' is used 10 times, 'younger generation' 7 times, 'zig-zagger' 8 times, as well as 'younger' being used 29 times, which is important in a story with an age gap and an obsession with younger people and their behavior. You can change up the language, but you're still fixating on the same thing, and I didn't miss it.
To be specific with the less than 20% I read. Let's start with the opening scene. Laurel is doing job interviews, and of course, many of them are young, so we get our first taste of her obsession. And she is mean! She loathes this generation. Actually loathes them. She has boomer level disdain for Gen Z or those close enough to almost be considered Z. It's kind of gross and very unnecessary. And this whole scene left me feeling like the author was out of touch with reality. So this woman being interviewed is young, obviously, and she is late for her own interview. That is bad, make no mistake, as is the way she blows it off because she 'just had to stop for caffeine'. But what Laurel gets mad about more than anything is the woman asking up front what her salary would be. Apparently, that is both wrong and unprofessional. Yeah, in the boomer generation, it was. But times are changing, and so they should be! Interviews are hard enough and exhausting enough and too-plentiful-to-ever-actually-getting-a-job without wasting time on salaries that are too low. Get on YouTube and watch people talk about their job experiences; there are whole videos on it. It is bad! Insanely low salaries, both for the cost of living and for the degrees required for many positions. Too many duties for any normal person being paid for ONE job. Weird rules that you'll probably find out too late, like having to give a reason for using the bathroom for more than two minutes, or using it more than once a day. Yes, that and worse really happens. And it needs to change. You should know your job duties up-front, your salary up-front, there should never be restrictions on bathroom breaks or being forced to come in while sick, etc. Like, forgive my rant, but this is a very real problem. Employers want you to work long weeks, be on call when you should be at home relaxing, they want you to work for so little, and you damn well better ADORE them for daring to employ you. It is literal insanity, and I got so mad at Laurel for all of it. But then I realized the author is the problem. Laurel isn't written as an insane boss, just a judgmental one. It is the author's beliefs that an interviewee has no right to ask about salary before wasting their time on an interview for a job that might not be what they even want to interview for. Tell me you're out of touch without telling me you're out of touch....
Second specific complaint. The author did the name switch! It happens fairly rarely, thank heavens, but it is one of my biggest issues. If you do not know your own character's names in a scene and who is speaking or being spoken to, stop writing. Now. Shit happens, but that kind of shit should always be caught on editing. Even if you don't have an editor you paid or Beta readers, you yourself should catch that. So calling Rayne 'Torey', as if you two didn't just walk away from the ex back in the club a minute ago is just unacceptable.
And the scene I dipped out on for this book. Laurel agrees to meet Rayne for a drink. Sort of, but semantics. What got me about this scene was Rayne started to think she would never show, and she gets upset. She recalls their earlier conversation and gets irritated at remembering Laurel's assumption that Rayne thought she was somehow better than the other authors at the awards show. Which is so dumb, because that isn't what happened. Does Rayne have bad memory, or the author? Because what happened was Rayne caught on to Laurel's disdain and started in on her. Including saying 'And no, I'm not staying there because I think I'm too good to stay in the same hotel as everyone else.' She assumed Laurel might think that, cut the thought off at the head just in case, and then proceeded to get mad at Laurel in retrospect for thinking that. The thing she never said, that is. Like...what? And these two are supposed to fall in love?
I read up on some reviews after I gave up, to see what spoilers I could find. Not many, but multiple people did say that Laurel eventually realizes Rayne might be Gen Z, but she's different (ooh, not like other girls, yay), more mature and intelligent and breaks the stereotypes she has in her head. But I take issue with that, because first, she shouldn't have to prove herself to be anything other than who she is, young or not. Second, Laurel needs to get her judgmental head out of her judgmental ass. So what if Rayne did meet some Gen Z standards? In a real love story, Laurel would've come to love those things about Rayne, and maybe, just maybe, even learned to judge those different from her a little less. Because that is what it really comes down to. Laurel just can't stand those she doesn't understand. Hm, on the plus side, you're a lot like your parents after all. Congrats, maybe you'll fit in now!
What is this? No, really. And why does it have ANY 5 star ratings?? I couldn't finish. I made it just over 10% before I started skimming. And even skimming, I was bored and annoyed. Multiple reviews said it really improved around 35%. First off, if it takes over 1/3 of the book to get good, your book just isn't good. Sorry? Second, I as the reader should not have to wait that long. Your readers deserve better than slogging through so much to get something better written or more interesting or whatever supposedly happens at 35%.
My first overall issue comes in with the near-info dumping that kept happening. I didn't feel I was getting to know the characters through their lives as they lived, I kept getting long monologing thoughts about their exes or family or jobs. Second, Laurel's obsession with Gen Z was disturbing. I use the word 'obsession' very intentionally. It is most of what she thinks about, or somehow permeates her thoughts about ordinary things. Like, she could be having a perfectly normal moment on social media, and all of a sudden is thinking 'But Gen Z would do this' or 'the younger generation always _'. In theory, it could stem from her job, but this is too much. I read very little of this book and was annoyed. I decided to actually do some counting, or rather, have the search function count for me. In the book, 'Gen Z' is used 10 times, 'younger generation' 7 times, 'zig-zagger' 8 times, as well as 'younger' being used 29 times, which is important in a story with an age gap and an obsession with younger people and their behavior. You can change up the language, but you're still fixating on the same thing, and I didn't miss it.
To be specific with the less than 20% I read. Let's start with the opening scene. Laurel is doing job interviews, and of course, many of them are young, so we get our first taste of her obsession. And she is mean! She loathes this generation. Actually loathes them. She has boomer level disdain for Gen Z or those close enough to almost be considered Z. It's kind of gross and very unnecessary. And this whole scene left me feeling like the author was out of touch with reality. So this woman being interviewed is young, obviously, and she is late for her own interview. That is bad, make no mistake, as is the way she blows it off because she 'just had to stop for caffeine'. But what Laurel gets mad about more than anything is the woman asking up front what her salary would be. Apparently, that is both wrong and unprofessional. Yeah, in the boomer generation, it was. But times are changing, and so they should be! Interviews are hard enough and exhausting enough and too-plentiful-to-ever-actually-getting-a-job without wasting time on salaries that are too low. Get on YouTube and watch people talk about their job experiences; there are whole videos on it. It is bad! Insanely low salaries, both for the cost of living and for the degrees required for many positions. Too many duties for any normal person being paid for ONE job. Weird rules that you'll probably find out too late, like having to give a reason for using the bathroom for more than two minutes, or using it more than once a day. Yes, that and worse really happens. And it needs to change. You should know your job duties up-front, your salary up-front, there should never be restrictions on bathroom breaks or being forced to come in while sick, etc. Like, forgive my rant, but this is a very real problem. Employers want you to work long weeks, be on call when you should be at home relaxing, they want you to work for so little, and you damn well better ADORE them for daring to employ you. It is literal insanity, and I got so mad at Laurel for all of it. But then I realized the author is the problem. Laurel isn't written as an insane boss, just a judgmental one. It is the author's beliefs that an interviewee has no right to ask about salary before wasting their time on an interview for a job that might not be what they even want to interview for. Tell me you're out of touch without telling me you're out of touch....
Second specific complaint. The author did the name switch! It happens fairly rarely, thank heavens, but it is one of my biggest issues. If you do not know your own character's names in a scene and who is speaking or being spoken to, stop writing. Now. Shit happens, but that kind of shit should always be caught on editing. Even if you don't have an editor you paid or Beta readers, you yourself should catch that. So calling Rayne 'Torey', as if you two didn't just walk away from the ex back in the club a minute ago is just unacceptable.
And the scene I dipped out on for this book. Laurel agrees to meet Rayne for a drink. Sort of, but semantics. What got me about this scene was Rayne started to think she would never show, and she gets upset. She recalls their earlier conversation and gets irritated at remembering Laurel's assumption that Rayne thought she was somehow better than the other authors at the awards show. Which is so dumb, because that isn't what happened. Does Rayne have bad memory, or the author? Because what happened was Rayne caught on to Laurel's disdain and started in on her. Including saying 'And no, I'm not staying there because I think I'm too good to stay in the same hotel as everyone else.' She assumed Laurel might think that, cut the thought off at the head just in case, and then proceeded to get mad at Laurel in retrospect for thinking that. The thing she never said, that is. Like...what? And these two are supposed to fall in love?
I read up on some reviews after I gave up, to see what spoilers I could find. Not many, but multiple people did say that Laurel eventually realizes Rayne might be Gen Z, but she's different (ooh, not like other girls, yay), more mature and intelligent and breaks the stereotypes she has in her head. But I take issue with that, because first, she shouldn't have to prove herself to be anything other than who she is, young or not. Second, Laurel needs to get her judgmental head out of her judgmental ass. So what if Rayne did meet some Gen Z standards? In a real love story, Laurel would've come to love those things about Rayne, and maybe, just maybe, even learned to judge those different from her a little less. Because that is what it really comes down to. Laurel just can't stand those she doesn't understand. Hm, on the plus side, you're a lot like your parents after all. Congrats, maybe you'll fit in now!
December 25, 2023
This book gave me the stomach swoops that I used to get when I first started reading Sapphic Romances. It had a perfect balance of plot, steam, and all while being long enough that there was still enough time for it to be slow burn too. Definitely going on my will read again list. A few minor typos here and there that tend to always take me personally out of the zone, but far from the worse I've ever read and it did not detract from my enjoyment of the book overall, so call it 4.95/5
August 16, 2023
Another great book by this author! I love Rayne! She is so beautiful, kind, mature and understanding. But I didn’t like Laurel as much, I saw her as a judgmental, insecure and selfish person and I honestly thought Rayne deserved better. I still love this book though!
Would’ve been 5 stars if it weren’t for Laurel
Can’t wait for the next book by this author!
Would’ve been 5 stars if it weren’t for Laurel
Can’t wait for the next book by this author!
December 4, 2023
Beautiful , sexy , heartwarming story. My first read from Skye Von Triessen
I was drawn to this story from the beginning the writing was so amazing. The connection the characters have with other was so was strong it's breathtaking .
I was drawn to this story from the beginning the writing was so amazing. The connection the characters have with other was so was strong it's breathtaking .
July 10, 2023
A KIND DECEPTION SKYE VON TRIESSEN
Arc
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Laurel is employed as an accountant at the leading firm in Detroit. Meanwhile, Rayne has become a renowned dancer through her social media empire, supported by her loyal best friend. Additionally, Rayne is a successful writer of sapphic romance novels, cementing her status as a prominent author.
This particular book by Skye stands out from her previous works. A character who shares Laurel's profession as an accountant. This aspect intrigued me, as it showcased a unique perspective. The book immediately captured my interest, as it showcased growth and development from the author's earlier works. It also prompted contemplation about the progress women have made over the years, from the traditional roles of cooking, childcare, and wifehood to embracing their talents, gifts, and personal aspirations. While there is nothing wrong with being a wife and mother, it is vital to acknowledge and respect women's multifaceted nature. Personally, my wife recognizes my talents, goals, and individuality beyond just my role as a wife and mother. I disagree with the outdated and archaic belief system that limited our mothers' choices to being housewives. This is a perspective that I, and many other women, do not align with.
Furthermore, the story being set in Detroit, a city I grew up in and currently reside in, added an extra layer of intrigue for me.
Laurel comes from a family that has high expectations for her career, placing great emphasis on appearances, education, and securing a good job. Unfortunately, her relationship with her brother is strained, as he constantly belittles her and takes every opportunity to make her feel inferior due to his career as a lawyer. Corporate success, which her parents perceive as a higher achievement, further exacerbates the divide between them.
One of the main reasons Rayne is attracted to Laurel is that she sees beyond her physical appearance and fame. Laurel presents a challenge to her, which excites Rayne. Additionally, Laurel's intelligence and natural beauty are qualities that greatly appeal to Rayne.
A conversation between the two main characters about race resonated deeply with me. I firmly believe that the mind is the most powerful aspect of our being. Our journey through life is primarily mental, even when faced with racial discrimination, bad days, or rejections due to the color of our skin. We must not allow the ignorance of others to break our spirits. Rayne's grandmother imparting these wise words will undoubtedly guide her throughout her life, serving as the foundation of her strength.
The support, love, and respect that Rayne offers Laurel are truly beautiful. Rayne understands that breaking down the walls surrounding Laurel will take time, so she patiently supports her in pursuing her dream of becoming a full-time author. Rayne wants Laurel to be happy and live her life according to her own desires, rather than conforming to the expectations of her parents and family. Sometimes, distancing oneself from family becomes necessary in order to find happiness and live authentically. It is important to find a partner who loves and supports us unconditionally, while also challenging us in unexpected ways for our personal growth and well-being.
The story's richness lies in the compelling connection between the two main characters. Rayne's kindness and understanding towards Laurel make their love feel inevitable, as if no one else could ever capture her attention in the same way. Rayne manages to reach Laurel's heart and mind, breaking down her defenses slowly but surely. In the end, Laurel cannot resist this gentle and compassionate soul who also happens to be the most beautiful woman she has ever encountered.
The first love scene between them is nothing short of breathtaking, leaving me in awe.
I want to take a moment to express my gratitude to Skye for graciously providing me with an early copy of her incredible book. I am also immensely grateful for the unwavering support you have consistently shown me. Trust me when I say, this book is an absolute page-turner. I was so engrossed that I found myself reading until 2 am. Once you start, you won't be able to put it down! It truly deserves more than just a mere 5 stars ⭐️.
Arc
New Release
Laurel is employed as an accountant at the leading firm in Detroit. Meanwhile, Rayne has become a renowned dancer through her social media empire, supported by her loyal best friend. Additionally, Rayne is a successful writer of sapphic romance novels, cementing her status as a prominent author.
This particular book by Skye stands out from her previous works. A character who shares Laurel's profession as an accountant. This aspect intrigued me, as it showcased a unique perspective. The book immediately captured my interest, as it showcased growth and development from the author's earlier works. It also prompted contemplation about the progress women have made over the years, from the traditional roles of cooking, childcare, and wifehood to embracing their talents, gifts, and personal aspirations. While there is nothing wrong with being a wife and mother, it is vital to acknowledge and respect women's multifaceted nature. Personally, my wife recognizes my talents, goals, and individuality beyond just my role as a wife and mother. I disagree with the outdated and archaic belief system that limited our mothers' choices to being housewives. This is a perspective that I, and many other women, do not align with.
Furthermore, the story being set in Detroit, a city I grew up in and currently reside in, added an extra layer of intrigue for me.
Laurel comes from a family that has high expectations for her career, placing great emphasis on appearances, education, and securing a good job. Unfortunately, her relationship with her brother is strained, as he constantly belittles her and takes every opportunity to make her feel inferior due to his career as a lawyer. Corporate success, which her parents perceive as a higher achievement, further exacerbates the divide between them.
One of the main reasons Rayne is attracted to Laurel is that she sees beyond her physical appearance and fame. Laurel presents a challenge to her, which excites Rayne. Additionally, Laurel's intelligence and natural beauty are qualities that greatly appeal to Rayne.
A conversation between the two main characters about race resonated deeply with me. I firmly believe that the mind is the most powerful aspect of our being. Our journey through life is primarily mental, even when faced with racial discrimination, bad days, or rejections due to the color of our skin. We must not allow the ignorance of others to break our spirits. Rayne's grandmother imparting these wise words will undoubtedly guide her throughout her life, serving as the foundation of her strength.
The support, love, and respect that Rayne offers Laurel are truly beautiful. Rayne understands that breaking down the walls surrounding Laurel will take time, so she patiently supports her in pursuing her dream of becoming a full-time author. Rayne wants Laurel to be happy and live her life according to her own desires, rather than conforming to the expectations of her parents and family. Sometimes, distancing oneself from family becomes necessary in order to find happiness and live authentically. It is important to find a partner who loves and supports us unconditionally, while also challenging us in unexpected ways for our personal growth and well-being.
The story's richness lies in the compelling connection between the two main characters. Rayne's kindness and understanding towards Laurel make their love feel inevitable, as if no one else could ever capture her attention in the same way. Rayne manages to reach Laurel's heart and mind, breaking down her defenses slowly but surely. In the end, Laurel cannot resist this gentle and compassionate soul who also happens to be the most beautiful woman she has ever encountered.
The first love scene between them is nothing short of breathtaking, leaving me in awe.
I want to take a moment to express my gratitude to Skye for graciously providing me with an early copy of her incredible book. I am also immensely grateful for the unwavering support you have consistently shown me. Trust me when I say, this book is an absolute page-turner. I was so engrossed that I found myself reading until 2 am. Once you start, you won't be able to put it down! It truly deserves more than just a mere 5 stars ⭐️.
October 14, 2024
SVT has always been an eye opening author for me in everything she writes. I saw some of the reviews and knew it would take a minute to get past the Gen z bashing as a person born in 97 myself and I’m so happy I did. I won’t lie and say it wasn’t beyond irritating to read repeatedly but it definitely didn’t take away from the brilliance of the plot and development. I don’t even think Laurel is so much an ice queen despite behind portrayed that way by her lover, she read more like a person being held back and cornered from almost every angle in her life but internally just a passionate creative… which is bound to materialise in a harsh manner and having a lot of self degradation makes her difficult to love as a reader but I still did in the end because she’s more relatable irl.
Getting lost in their romance was really easy but I think Rayne being that Level of prefect, she could’ve had so many characters written as her soulmate. She’s an honest soul, unfazed but not oblivious to her money, fame and beauty and remains focused on real world issues and the supporting those who have and are suffering while wanting to enjoy peace and quiet of the home and life she’s created for herself.
I think the intimacy could have been explored in more ways that we saw. Laurel is a little insecure and Rayne is a big fan of foreplay, we don’t really get to see items with a good few steamy scenes but the cadence of their times together was pretty one note for me but the describe language will still give you the flutters regardless as per usual from SVT.
Getting lost in their romance was really easy but I think Rayne being that Level of prefect, she could’ve had so many characters written as her soulmate. She’s an honest soul, unfazed but not oblivious to her money, fame and beauty and remains focused on real world issues and the supporting those who have and are suffering while wanting to enjoy peace and quiet of the home and life she’s created for herself.
I think the intimacy could have been explored in more ways that we saw. Laurel is a little insecure and Rayne is a big fan of foreplay, we don’t really get to see items with a good few steamy scenes but the cadence of their times together was pretty one note for me but the describe language will still give you the flutters regardless as per usual from SVT.
July 18, 2023
I read this book without knowing a single thing about it and ended up finished it in one sitting. A trope about two sapphic authors falling in love and writing their story. A trope I didn’t know I needed until this book.
Rayne is a very loveable character. I thoroughly enjoyed the banter and the chemistry between her and Laurel. Though I felt a little short with Laurel at the end. Maybe I’m projecting as I see myself in some aspect of Laurel's personal life but I felt like her character development was slightly missed.
Would she have quit her job to pursue her dream if she was not fired? Or should she have taken the time for herself before going after Rayne? Or maybe I'm just a sucker for torturous angst.
I still love her in other aspects especially the time when she defended herself when it came to her family. I would have loved for her to finally give her brother something that he well deserves. 😂
This book is great! Makes readers reflect and question things. I've read SVT's other books as well and I love every one of them! Seeing the development and improvement of SVT's writing style has made every book better read.
I also love the little easter eggs about Notting Hill that she added in the book!
September 20, 2023
Skye Von Triessen writes books that are so inspirational and emotive. Her stories are real and raw. She takes on real life issues that other books in this genre looks over and it’s so refreshing to read. This book was another rollercoaster ride similar to her first two books. Never boring and captivating from start to finish. Perfect blend of angst and passion. Skye has a talent like no other when she writes her spicy scenes. You feel the passion and she is the first author that made me wonder what it would be like to spend a night with her because my god does she write such amazing lovemaking scenes that I’m sure gets many readers wet.
I already can’t wait to see what she releases next. Thanks for another great book.
I already can’t wait to see what she releases next. Thanks for another great book.
January 22, 2024
I honestly LOVED this book! The characters are so well written and the words used to describe their thoughts and feelings were an amazing portal that revealed the different layers of both Rayne and Laurel! I adore Rayne’s character and love how she was depicted as a mature, thoughtful, sensitive and selfless adult despite others from her generation! Furthermore Laurel’s character development and ability to overcome her anxiety was really refreshing and impressive! As a person who is going through similar experiences as Laurel in terms of parental expectations I was able to deeply resonate with her. This was one of the best books I’ve ever read and I’m off to read the two other books Skye Von Triessen has published! Please continue your writing and I’ll support you as much as I can!!
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August 8, 2025Wdym? I understand trying to write a book that’s an age gap and showing us the difference between generations too. I’m also gen z and Dayna’s (I think) reason for being late seems inaccurate. I know gen z’s are pretty blasé about certain things but I don’t know any gen z that says they NEED to get their coffee fix before their interview. JOB interview. And then she’s also dressed very well. If they were trying to give a blasé feel to her character, shouldn’t she also be wearing something blasé? Maybe I’m thinking too much about this. Also why every sapphic book I wanna read, there are almost not POC’s? I think Laurel is Black but I’m not even sure.
July 31, 2023
An emotional roller-coaster, but I loved every second of it.
I emotionally bonded with the characters from page one and that made me giggle, smile and even cry on my journey throughout this book.
It was an absolute comfort read even though it broke my heart. Definitely one of my top 5 sapphic books I've ever read! Thank you Skye for this masterpiece ❤️
I emotionally bonded with the characters from page one and that made me giggle, smile and even cry on my journey throughout this book.
It was an absolute comfort read even though it broke my heart. Definitely one of my top 5 sapphic books I've ever read! Thank you Skye for this masterpiece ❤️
May 19, 2025
I really enjoyed this book, Skye has made such an amazing story.
such a beautiful and entertaining love story with just the right amount of heartache, real-world politics, and societal problems (immigration, racism, homophobia). This is done in a way that makes you think deeply about these issues without being overwhelmed. A difficult balance to achieve, but done to perfection by Skye.
such a beautiful and entertaining love story with just the right amount of heartache, real-world politics, and societal problems (immigration, racism, homophobia). This is done in a way that makes you think deeply about these issues without being overwhelmed. A difficult balance to achieve, but done to perfection by Skye.
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