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Alpha
When domme Alaine Dunham meets beautiful, young werewolf Seth, she dreams of training him to be the perfect bottom to fill her Alpha needs. She quickly finds that gentling the wild wolf is one thing; subduing the rebellious human is another. Tensions mount as the full moon pushes them to consummate their bond before relationship concerns are soothed.
After a strange book falls into Alaine's hands she begins to doubt her relationship, her instincts, and the moon.
After a strange book falls into Alaine's hands she begins to doubt her relationship, her instincts, and the moon.
- GenresBDSM
53 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 23, 2013
21 people want to read
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Fierce Dolan
7 books37 followersblatant voyeur+ slipstream scribe=erotic mezzofiction writer
Mezzofiction writer, Fierce is imagination shapeshifted as a scribe taunting blank pages and carpal tunnel, neither of which are much use for deadlines. Close allies are impeccable timing and a trusty masseuse. Being a switch I/ENFP doesn't hurt. For kicks Fierce has other personas across several genres, tends to fill in “Other” on surveys without explaining, and chooses the finality of the Japanese Tamagotchi.
Mezzofiction writer, Fierce is imagination shapeshifted as a scribe taunting blank pages and carpal tunnel, neither of which are much use for deadlines. Close allies are impeccable timing and a trusty masseuse. Being a switch I/ENFP doesn't hurt. For kicks Fierce has other personas across several genres, tends to fill in “Other” on surveys without explaining, and chooses the finality of the Japanese Tamagotchi.
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January 5, 2014
When an alpha werewolf refuses to submit to an alpha dominatrix, what happens? A delicate dance of seduction? Or perhaps taunting tango of sexual lust? Alaine Dunham is a dominatrix in the well-known BDSM club, Malice. Her specialty is bringing men to their knees. She flogs, whips and pegs them until they are a whimpering mess.
The kink in here is good. What's not to like about an alpha male submitting to an alpha female? What's not to like about reading about a woman pegging a male hard in the ass? The BDSM in this story is titillating. It would have been nicer if the scenes were more action than telling. This is what really brought the story down. Ms. Dolan tells the story and shows very little action. The BDSM concepts are sexy and erotic, it would be much hotter if the reader is a voyeur, not a second hand listener. Alaine spends an inordinate amount of time talking about herself. It becomes tedious in such a short story. If the reader ignores Aliane's introspection and her heavy handed manner of introducing werewolf Seth into submission, the sex is good. First, there is bestiality which is always a surprise and delight. It's not technically animal on human because it's a werewolf. Adding in watersports, knotting and squirting, it kicks up the heat in the story.
The world building in here is sketchy. There are some hints of nefarious secret groups hunting for werewolves. What they want with werewolves is not fully revealed. Perhaps it will show up in the next installment. There is some detail about Alaine's past which helps explain how she realized her potential to sooth the beast, so to speak. Her naughty escapades help make this teasing tale sexy hot. The jumping from past to present is a bit jarring. There needs to be a bit smoother transition. The potential for this story is there. Ms. Dolan does capture the reader's attention. If she would show more than tell, develop her characters a bit more and spend more time world building, this series could really take off. An example of better character develop would be Seth. For Seth to suddenly roll over in submission so quickly and become suzy homemaker is a stretch and causes a reader to snort in disbelief. For this, it is a 3 star kinky and 2 star for writing. This averages to a 2.5 star which is truncated to a 2. This book is recommended for kinky readers who enjoy a hint of taboo.
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The kink in here is good. What's not to like about an alpha male submitting to an alpha female? What's not to like about reading about a woman pegging a male hard in the ass? The BDSM in this story is titillating. It would have been nicer if the scenes were more action than telling. This is what really brought the story down. Ms. Dolan tells the story and shows very little action. The BDSM concepts are sexy and erotic, it would be much hotter if the reader is a voyeur, not a second hand listener. Alaine spends an inordinate amount of time talking about herself. It becomes tedious in such a short story. If the reader ignores Aliane's introspection and her heavy handed manner of introducing werewolf Seth into submission, the sex is good. First, there is bestiality which is always a surprise and delight. It's not technically animal on human because it's a werewolf. Adding in watersports, knotting and squirting, it kicks up the heat in the story.
The world building in here is sketchy. There are some hints of nefarious secret groups hunting for werewolves. What they want with werewolves is not fully revealed. Perhaps it will show up in the next installment. There is some detail about Alaine's past which helps explain how she realized her potential to sooth the beast, so to speak. Her naughty escapades help make this teasing tale sexy hot. The jumping from past to present is a bit jarring. There needs to be a bit smoother transition. The potential for this story is there. Ms. Dolan does capture the reader's attention. If she would show more than tell, develop her characters a bit more and spend more time world building, this series could really take off. An example of better character develop would be Seth. For Seth to suddenly roll over in submission so quickly and become suzy homemaker is a stretch and causes a reader to snort in disbelief. For this, it is a 3 star kinky and 2 star for writing. This averages to a 2.5 star which is truncated to a 2. This book is recommended for kinky readers who enjoy a hint of taboo.
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December 6, 2013
This was a delicious short read that kept me glued to the pages in the midst of a mighty writerly deadline. The sexual tension between Alaine and Seth is toe curling. She is a Domme and this werewolf boy will come to heel. The best part about it is that he is no way less a man for being submissive. Just the opposite. Even as he learns to master the wolf within, he must harness his desire and do as his Mistress bids him. Sometimes that is easier said than done. With techniques that have conquered stronger men, Seth and Alaine begin a journey that will lead them both into a mutually beneficial arrangement. This was a great read either in the series or on its own. Fierce Dolan is an author to watch. I love a sexy lycanthrope tale!
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