Oh, the shallowness of my methods for this pick! The Breathtaker appealled to me because it has a really neat cover and I am interested in tornados. I mean, look it at, that barn on the cover is doomed!
You see, if Ms. Blanchard spent half as much time writing this book as she did commissioning and artist for the cover and hawking it on the today show, maybe it would be a worthwhile read. And if "ifs" and "buts" were candy and nuts, we would all have a Merry Christmas. I am sad to say that Christmas did not come in July for me, and that this book proved to be quite frustrating.
I can look past the scientific and meteorological inconsistencies for a good thrill. I am not opposed to an author taking license with reality in order to further a plot. Geographical errors, however, are my pet peeve and this novel is replete with them.
First of all, the novel is set in Oklahoma. The town is fictional, which is perfectly fine. However, the author places it north of El Reno (which is west of Oklahoma City), close to Interstate 10 (which is some 350 miles south in Texas), near "East Texas", even though it is mentioned that Lawton is a quick drive south (Lawton is near the Texas panhandle, which is West Texas). Also, the main character makes a drive from Promise, OK to Wink, Texas in one hour! Assuming that Promise (fictional town) is somewhere near Lawton, the drive to Wink (a real town in Winkler County, Texas) is some 9 hours. Also, the author makes a clear mistake by stating that Ponca City is in Kansas, when in reality it is in Oklahoma. There are countless other geographical fumbles, and it made this novel infuriating to read.
The plot is a bit over the top. A killer chases tornados and commits his crimes in their path at the moment they pass by the victims' dwellings. Even the best meteorologists are unable to predict tornadogenesis formation and touchdown points.
It seems like Ms. Blanchard, who is from the East Coast, decided to one day write a book about tornados and murder. She then asked herself where do tornados occur, and "Oklahoma" was the first state to come to mind. If she had spend some time looking at a map, maybe the details in geography would have been worked out. As it stands, this book reads as one involving tornados and the Great Plains written by someone who has never seen one nor been to that region of the country.
As my loving girlfriend says, "Write what you know."