The Hot Switch

by S.C. Edward

PLEASE NOTE that this is a very short work of flash erotic fiction. Be advised that this tales includes detailed sexual situations, lack of condom use, profanity, and is not suited for readers under the age of 18. Intended for mature audiences only.

Zach is fed up with his cheerleader girlfriend. She ditches him, sleeps around and is the cause of all his grief. He gets introduced to his classmate Diana, and soon becomes infatuated with her. She is dating his friend, but Zach is unable to control his desire for her. As things spiral out of control for both of them, he makes a decision to take away her pain.

48 pages, Kindle Edition

First published October 5, 2013

About the author

I am an author who resides in the Big Apple and I use my writing as a conduit for exploring my sensual side. My forte is conjuring up interracial tales of passion, with no holds barred. I hope that you enjoy the ride with me as I take you through the workings of my sexual mind. Any feedback and comments are appreciated. I love to interact with my readers and can be reached at nixes1017@gmail.com.

Reviews

[Deborsha Guyot · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great short story.

I don’t put a review but this a really great story. They maybe have one or two words that are wrong like when they mean to say she they say he and words that don’t belong at all. But they do detract from how good it is.

[Midniteillusion · Rating 1 out of 5]

This is by far the worse short story, or any story for that matter, of any genre I've ever read. The story is jumbled and a mess. The two characters seems to have a class together but then don't know each other but are secretly crushing on one another. The author writes something one way then in the next page another. No chemistry between the two main characters. Even for a quick read it's all highly improbable.
That's not even the worst of it. The grammar and punctuation are a nightmare! It's written like a 12 year old got a hold of their parent's porn and tried to write a story. Though a 12 year old would probably have better punctuation. Incorrect use of quotations and open ended quotations leaving the reader to wonder if the character was still speaking or not. Starting sentences without capitalization, misspelling words, using numbers when they should be typed out. It's just too much. I could hardly focus on the poor plot due to the many grammatical and punctuation errors.
It may be a free book but save yourself the 20 minutes it takes to read it and read something better. It's not even worth the time.

I'd give it 0 stars if I could.