I’ve always said a good book of fiction will be based on reality. This book was nothing like reality….. more fantasy instead. I was eager to read this, it held such promise, but I found myself skimming most of the book. Once I saw how situations were being handled, it was easy to guess future outcomes. These were college age students but come across as immature middle schoolers. Hence my 2 1/2 stars.
👁OBSERVATIONS👁
… The author cemented my opinion of Liam and Ava in this book. That’s good and bad. When opinions are formed and the reader sees no redeeming value in specific characters, why would that reader want to see the character(s) devious behavior being justified in future books?
… And yes, Ava, everyone knows you don’t go out with your best friend’s ex... especially when that ex just broke up with her by humiliating her in the worst way possible… and didn’t care how he hurt her. Your fictional friend may be forgiving, but that’s doubtful in real life. No way you are a true friend and no way your friend would forgive you with the breakup being so fresh, so degrading and so cruel. You were not a victim, Ava. You made a choice. A year or two down the road that choice could have been seen differently, but so soon after a humiliating breakup... nope.
… Jesse was the only mature one of the bunch. Can’t imagine any woman not wanting a Jesse in her life. Would have been nice ‘seeing’ Liam realize Jesse was everything he wasn’t, and 'feel' true remorse. Jesse has a back story of pain too but he didn’t allow it to make him use and abuse others.
… The revenge plan was foolish. Why would Julia ever agree to cheapen herself? Why agree to plans that Giff and Ava set in motion? How would a scheme like that cause an ex to be jealous? Nope, it would drive him away as he would see Julia the way ‘Cal’ saw her, as a disgraceful girl seducing every jock on campus. Not good. Not one bit flattering to Julia. This was a fourth grader mindset, not adult college students.
… At times authors do too good of a job cementing opinions about characters. Ava was wrong and no other book will make me see her in different light. No way to justify her betrayal, and in real life, Julia would see it as betrayal. She made a choice and choices have consequences. This storyline justified Ava’s actions by blaming the ex. Not good.
… Liam was an entitled jerk, and no matter what his backstory is, he always will be that jerk. If I were to read about his ‘poor, pitiful me’ excuses in future books, I would still see him for what he did in this book because there was absolutely no remorse, true remorse revealed. Thus, no way to justify his actions and behavior we witnessed in future books. Maybe, just maybe, if I had read his ‘woe is me’ storyline first, I could understand better. But, seeing his depth of cruelty and LACK of compassion in this book makes it difficult to even want to try to understand why he is the way he is.
… Where was Liam’s remorse? Those simple ‘I’m Sorry’ statements don’t cut it. He made Julia a laughing stock on campus, on purpose!
I love redemption storylines but it must be true redemption. I kept reading hoping to see this but unfortunately that was not the case.