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Slave
Vada Roberts was just like any other teenager. She got in trouble by her parents and did things she wasn't supposed to do. Then one night she is kidnapped by sex traffickers along with her best friend Brittany Beagleman. They are then owned by one of the biggest sex traffickers, Mr. James and is forced into slavery. Ryan Dean, Vada's love interest, sets out into the dangerous world of human trafficking to find them and bring them home even though he battles with demons of his own. As he plunges deeper into danger he realizes finding them won't be easy. Can he save them before it's too late? Can Vada save herself before she loses her mind?
173 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 6, 2013
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April 5, 2020
Try writing it over.
Horrible grammar spelling and missing words. If you can write using no grammar or spelling and missing a lot of the words I could be a best selling author
Horrible grammar spelling and missing words. If you can write using no grammar or spelling and missing a lot of the words I could be a best selling author
July 29, 2020
Pretty sloppy
Too many misspelled words, missing words, and sentences that didn’t make sense. Written by what appeared to be a teenage
Too many misspelled words, missing words, and sentences that didn’t make sense. Written by what appeared to be a teenage
March 21, 2017
Another book about sex trafficking!
This is another tale of a young girl not following her parents instructions and ending up being the victim of the sex trafficking racket. It has some unusual family twists to the story, as well as a romantic involvement that makes everything turn out rosy. Not a very realistic book, and really not very interesting unless you are into sadistic sex. I did not really care for it, as it is just not my type of story. Kathy R. Blackman
This is another tale of a young girl not following her parents instructions and ending up being the victim of the sex trafficking racket. It has some unusual family twists to the story, as well as a romantic involvement that makes everything turn out rosy. Not a very realistic book, and really not very interesting unless you are into sadistic sex. I did not really care for it, as it is just not my type of story. Kathy R. Blackman
March 29, 2019
Good story but....
The story was very good, until the end. The Ending was just too unbelievable. A girl just wouldn't be that chipper after everything Vada went through. My biggest issue with this book is that it is very obvious the author doesn't have a beta reader and or an editor. There are just too many errors in the book, which makes it hard to read at times.
The story was very good, until the end. The Ending was just too unbelievable. A girl just wouldn't be that chipper after everything Vada went through. My biggest issue with this book is that it is very obvious the author doesn't have a beta reader and or an editor. There are just too many errors in the book, which makes it hard to read at times.
January 8, 2019
Couldn't read this anymore awful
I should have read the reviews before purchasing this. The spelling mistakes are bad. Have you heard of proof reading. I also prefer books that aren't written in first person to many he and she's it gets boring. If I could give it 0 stars I would.
I should have read the reviews before purchasing this. The spelling mistakes are bad. Have you heard of proof reading. I also prefer books that aren't written in first person to many he and she's it gets boring. If I could give it 0 stars I would.
October 21, 2019
Slave
I very much disliked the ending. It was very muddled them abrupt. I thought the author was telling a story of what is becoming and has been a human tragedy, sex trafficking. But instead the story fell short by turning into a soap opera type story.
I very much disliked the ending. It was very muddled them abrupt. I thought the author was telling a story of what is becoming and has been a human tragedy, sex trafficking. But instead the story fell short by turning into a soap opera type story.
February 27, 2020
Review of slave
I thought this book was good. The storyline was believable. This book was very traffic but there was a warning about that. I found a lot of typos but over all a good read..
I thought this book was good. The storyline was believable. This book was very traffic but there was a warning about that. I found a lot of typos but over all a good read..
July 5, 2020
Hard to read
I gave it a five because it kept me very interested. I just wish someone would have proofread it before hand , there were so many misspelled words you had to keep rereading the paragraphs to get to the point
I gave it a five because it kept me very interested. I just wish someone would have proofread it before hand , there were so many misspelled words you had to keep rereading the paragraphs to get to the point
August 2, 2021
Interesting read
Interesting read. Really got me hooked from the first couple of pages. Once you read for yourself, you might understand why I gave it a 4 star. There are some spelling errors. But im still kind of unsure about one aspect of this book.
Interesting read. Really got me hooked from the first couple of pages. Once you read for yourself, you might understand why I gave it a 4 star. There are some spelling errors. But im still kind of unsure about one aspect of this book.
June 21, 2022
Slave
Some good parts and a few surprises. Generally about average and master plot easy to guess from HR beginning. A light love story with some fairly good forced sex which is the main topic of the book.
Some good parts and a few surprises. Generally about average and master plot easy to guess from HR beginning. A light love story with some fairly good forced sex which is the main topic of the book.
February 8, 2018
The book slave
I really appreciated this book put a lot in perspective for me. It’s crazy to think this stuff really happens to girl and it’s heart breaking anyone would do this.
I really appreciated this book put a lot in perspective for me. It’s crazy to think this stuff really happens to girl and it’s heart breaking anyone would do this.
May 23, 2018
Didn't like
I didnt like this book. It was poorly written. The story line was alright but was hard to get through. I had to make myself finish the book.
I didnt like this book. It was poorly written. The story line was alright but was hard to get through. I had to make myself finish the book.
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September 28, 2018Great book kept me on the edge of my seat
Good read couldn't put it down. Kept me on the edge of my seat looking forward to read other books from the author
Good read couldn't put it down. Kept me on the edge of my seat looking forward to read other books from the author
March 22, 2020
the story was interesting believable in the beginning but did not seem to know how to end it. seemed to come up a little short on a good ending. overall a decent read
June 29, 2020
Quick read
I would recommend this book. It was a book you didn't want to put down. Wish there was a second part.
I would recommend this book. It was a book you didn't want to put down. Wish there was a second part.
July 17, 2021
Spelling
OMG, when a ten year old can spell better. You need to use spell correct. Or you could hire me to proof read for you.
OMG, when a ten year old can spell better. You need to use spell correct. Or you could hire me to proof read for you.
March 19, 2022
Fair
Many mis spelled words. I was reminded of the filthy people in this world who deserve nothing LESS than the death penalty.
Many mis spelled words. I was reminded of the filthy people in this world who deserve nothing LESS than the death penalty.
May 5, 2022
Triggers
If you have triggers this is not the book for you. Interesting book, with a sorta happy ending. I will say there are alot of grammatical errors
If you have triggers this is not the book for you. Interesting book, with a sorta happy ending. I will say there are alot of grammatical errors
October 20, 2022
Grammar errors
There were several grammar errors. I had to keep rereading to figure out what was being said. It was very disappointing.
There were several grammar errors. I had to keep rereading to figure out what was being said. It was very disappointing.
October 20, 2022
Slave
This was a great book that will grab you from the first page and keep you interested!! I highly recommend it!!
This was a great book that will grab you from the first page and keep you interested!! I highly recommend it!!
June 21, 2016
Slave
The storyline was interesting but mostly predictable, outside of the ending, for this type of story it was completely unpredictable and not quite imaginable. Their is a secondary storyline that plays throughout the book but doesn't really come to fruition until the end and then it leaves a lot of unanswered questions. It also would have been nice to get some of the other girls point of views given some of their actions, as that also left questions.
The editing cost this book a star all by itself. In short it is mostly non-existent in the sense that maybe basic spellchecker was used, which will not tell you that incorrect words were used and this often made the story confusing and in some cases, losing the reader.
I have the book 3* because this type of story is hard to write, no matter what your reality of this type of situation is. In my mind it got an extra start for that reason alone.
The storyline was interesting but mostly predictable, outside of the ending, for this type of story it was completely unpredictable and not quite imaginable. Their is a secondary storyline that plays throughout the book but doesn't really come to fruition until the end and then it leaves a lot of unanswered questions. It also would have been nice to get some of the other girls point of views given some of their actions, as that also left questions.
The editing cost this book a star all by itself. In short it is mostly non-existent in the sense that maybe basic spellchecker was used, which will not tell you that incorrect words were used and this often made the story confusing and in some cases, losing the reader.
I have the book 3* because this type of story is hard to write, no matter what your reality of this type of situation is. In my mind it got an extra start for that reason alone.
November 24, 2016
It's hard enough to control my dyslexia when reading. Throw in a book that has extra words, poor grammar, jumbled sentences, and what appears to be absolutely no proof reading. It became impossible to read. I could even make it to the end of the book. Once it became a chore to read it was no longer enjoyable
February 15, 2014
Great Book
Hard to read at times but good insight into this that horrible world. So sad this happens right around us.
Hard to read at times but good insight into this that horrible world. So sad this happens right around us.
February 13, 2015
This book was very predictable and was peppered with mistakes and spelling errors . Didn't really enjoy it
March 30, 2016
Did anyone think to check for errors??
February 15, 2020
Poor
Loads of spelling mistakes and dialogue pretty poor. Too fast an ending, disappointing read, not worth the money, really cheap book
Loads of spelling mistakes and dialogue pretty poor. Too fast an ending, disappointing read, not worth the money, really cheap book
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