I received this book from a Goodreads giveaway, but that does not change my review or thoughts on the book at all.
I give this book 2.5 ⭐️, I read the entire book, though at times I simply wanted to DNF it. I will be honest, I did not like this book. One thing I don’t like about it, not that it matters much, is the cover. One of my book pet peeves is when authors put a picture of an actual person on the cover. But the cover itself wasn’t what made me not like it.
I understand that the copy I received was an ARC (advanced reader copy) meaning it is not finished. The final version will probably have some more editing, and of course I came across quite a few typos that will be fixed.
One of the reasons I didn’t like it was the writing style. It felt… very childish. It felt like a middle schooler had tried to write an adult regency romance and failed immensely. there were 2 explicit scenes in the book which is why I would say it’s NA, but even those did not excite me. I honestly did not care for them. Nor did I feel any chemistry between Evander and Aphrodite. Their relationship was very bland. The entire story left much to be desired. One of the things the author put into her writing that I did not like at all, were all the “ummmm”’s. It was very annoying, and also did not strike me as something ladies from that era would say that often. As they were very well spoken. And for everyone who is writing reviews and saying, “it was like a Jane Austen novel, it read like a classic.” No, just no. I have read a Jane Austen novel and many other classics, and this did not read like one of those at all. Classics use old English words (this did not), they have a sophisticated air (this did not), and they do not sound like they were written by a middle schooler (This did).
The second reason I didn’t like this book was that I felt like the author had gotten half the ideas for the book from the Bridgerton show/books. I came across many instances in the book where I thought to myself “that reminds me a lot of daphne and Simon.”
For example: Aphrodite does not know the second definition of aroused (she simply thinks it means to wake.” So they have a daphne/Simon moment, where evander sort of explains to her what it means, and how it is possible to “please yourself.”
"You asked me if I was aroused, did you not?" he asked,
head tilted to the side as he looked into my eyes. "Or do you
still think it merely means to arise from slumber?"
"How can I know any other meaning when no one tels
me?" I questioned. "So tell me."
"It is hard to explain. for it is a feeling."
"What is this feeling?"
"Like heat." He stepped closer, "Like fire spreading through-
out your body, desire pulsating upon the skin, and an ache in
the pit of your stomach."
"To what end?"
"The shrubbery." He inhaled and looked as though he
would eat me like a beast, and I felt my breathing become
much slower. "Or if you are skilled enough to release on your
own."
Another example: there is literally someone named edwina lol. Shes only mentioned once, I just thought it was funny. (For everyone who hasn’t watched Bridget ton in season 2 there’s a girl named edwina.)
Another example: in bridgerton Simon and daphne SPOILERS!!!
Get married but then end up fighting and not trusting one another for a time before they resolve the matter. In this book Aphrodite and evander get married and end up fighting over evander not wanting to share his past and current event/issues that are happening in the present with Aphrodite. Before they finally resolve the matter. So while it’s not about the same thing, it felt very similar.
Another example: is that evanders father is a complete piece of shit just like simons father is.
Another example: is that just like daphne and Simon SPOILERS! asked for a special license to get married within a week, Aphrodite and evander also asked for a special license. But unlike Simon/daphne, nothing “untoward” had happened between them, they simply wished to be married as soon as possible.
Another example: near of the end of the book Aphrodite sends out letters and puts in the newspaper, some very touchy and personal stuff about Evanders family, which made me think of lady whistledown.
All of these examples, though they may seem small, made the entire book almost feel like the author was trying to write a Simon/daphne retelling?
Another thing I didn’t like about the book was aphrodites sister, Hathor. Oh. my. word. I have never met a more annoying character! All she did was complain about how Aphrodite always steals the spotlight from her, and how she’ll never find a suitor because they’re all looking at Aphrodite, and blah blah blah etc. it seriously got on my nerves.
All in all I did not enjoy this book, and the only reason I finished it was to be able to write a full review. Nonetheless it was still fun to win a free book… so there’s that. Lol. But I would not recommend this. If you want a regency romance, just buy the bridgerton books.