‘Man hands on misery to man,
It deepens as a coastal shelf’,
wrote Philip Larkin, and this long short story of Gary Sargent’s illustrates that. It’s also a story about pain, fear and hate that breed malice, a malice that can be passed from one generation to another after death in malevolent, patiently pitiless hauntings.
The tale opens in an Oxford college. Wine is being taken after dinner, and two prospective Junior Fellows are discussing ghosts. The narrator, Jack Garrod, is one of them and he is egging on his competitor, Jardine, to express his disparagingly sceptical views about the existence of ghosts knowing full well that such views are likely to bait the elderly, cancer-ridden Senior Fellow, Noble. Noble’s most recent, and his final book is titled ‘The Ghost at the Feast’, and has been badly received. Jardine’s outspoken views clearly turn the older fellows, Noble’s friends, against him, and Garrod’s Machiavellian behaviour, born, one may posit, of the malice of competition, in due course earns him the Junior Fellowship. It also earns him Jardine’s resentment and, in turn, his own malice – but not before Noble has, in death, wrought his own ghostly, malicious revenge.
Noble, it turns out, has for years also been haunted by a vengeful spirit. He remarks to Jardine and Garrod at the end of the gathering in which Garrod has trapped Jardine into voicing outspoken and ill-judged opinions that prove to be Jardine’s academic suicide, that ghosts are real enough and should be heeded:
‘Cancer is biochemical, they tell me, but for me it is also spiritual, a final physical manifestation eating me alive. And yes, she was like some dark winter thing from a folk tale, but that should concern rather than comfort you, Jardine, because it suggests that each of us might receive the ghost that we deserve.’
And this is an idea Sargent explores in the rest of his narrative.
The story is either a homage to M.R. James or intended at least to adopt a similar slow-paced erudite style (the narrator is, like James, an academic), in which simple sentences are developed by subordination to generate a sense of suspense. It’s a suspense that from time to time suggests the narrator can’t bring himself to speak the unspeakable, the dreadful, the fearful truth he’s wracked by, as if he doesn’t want to utter it at all, and is putting off doing so. The trouble for me was that it’s overused and loses its effect, and is combined with words and phrases that are repeated in a way that reminded me of Lovecraft and his eldritch miasmas etc. Nevertheless, some of the set pieces are well realised and there were at least a couple of moments when the frisson one hopes for with a ghost story worked well for me.
A further difficulty I encountered lay in the ending: it is one of those that suggests the preceding 1st person narrative could not possibly have been written down, and it also involves an unexpected sub-plot which did not strike me as aligning itself with how Jardine was for the most part presented. In fact, Sargent might have done better to have used a 3rd person narrative: I think the objectivity might have served the story more effectively.
However, if Garrod, as narrator, is following Larkin’s advice:
‘Get out as early as you can
And don’t have any kids yourself’,
then with any luck he will not be passing on the malice of misery to anyone else. Perhaps this is what Sargent was after?