In this installment of the Private series, Patterson and Sullivan take us back to the head office in L.A. with Jack Morgan as the lead investigator. It is good to see Jack back after several books based in cities around the world in which he played a more peripheral role.
This book features two crimes instead of the usual three, allowing the writers to dive more deeply into the characters, the crimes and the work to solve them.
Late at night, four men sit around a campfire on a deserted beach, drinking, drugging and talking about surfing. Suddenly one of the men stands up and shoots the others, heaping their bodies into the fire and dropping a card by the murder scene with two simple words: No Prisoners. He quickly leaves. Jack Morgan is called to the scene by one of his former clients who has a home overlooking the beach and saw several police with flashlights covering the bodies on the beach. Knowing this was a crime scene abutting his property and fearful he might be implicated in the murder, he did what he thought was best. He called Jack Morgan at Private.
The event is quickly posted on the news and social media and the city is soon in a state of panic.
The execution on the beach was staged by a group of terrorists to get the public’s attention. With that done, they begin enacting a plan to extract millions from the city in return for a promise they will stop killing. If the city does not agree, they promise many people will die. Their long-range plan is to steal millions, enough to live comfortably outside the country for the rest of their lives.
The mayor calls in Private, knowing that unlike the police, Private will not be hampered by rules and regulations restricting their actions. They must act quickly and can’t be bogged down by the normal rules. They must get these terrorists before more people die.
When the terrorists request cash to be delivered at one of the piers on the beach, Jack and his team devise a plan to trap the pickup men and retain the money. The terrorists however, have already predicted there would be trouble and exact their revenge, including a bomb placed at the pier. Rick Del Rio is critically injured in the explosion that follows.
To exact payback for the city not sticking to the plan, the terrorists carry out a shooting spree delivering on their promise to kill if they city failed to pay. As they continue their rampage, one of their most valuable team members is killed and Private has a body to identify, which may provide clues to the identity of the others.
The terrorists are devastated by the death of one of their own, but continue their demands, increasing the amount of money they ask for and the number of people who will be killed if they aren’t met. When the instructions for a payout involves an electronic transfer, Private partners with a number of senior government officials and a team of cutting-edge computer scientists to track the wire transfers so they can retrieve the money once it has been sent. But the terrorists once again predict what the authorities will do and focus in a different direction while their opponents are focused on the transfer.
The second case involves the sudden disappearance of big-time movie stars Jennifer and Thom Harlow and their three children. Dave Sanders, the couple’s high-priced lawyer, hires Jack and Private to find them but they are sworn to secrecy and must keep the entire case under wraps. No one is to know the couple is missing.
Thom and Jennifer Harlow are the most powerful and glamorous couple in Hollywood. They have won Oscars, written best-selling books and have a foundation called Sharing Hands that raises millions of dollars for orphanages in the Third World. For the past nine months the family has been in Vietnam filming Saigon Falls, a story about the last years of the war and one of their biggest productions. The Harlows had returned to America four days ago and were met by their management team, made up of Sanders, Camilla Bronson the couple’s full-time publicist and Terry Graves, the President of Harlow-Quinn Productions. Shortly after they returned to their ranch in Ojai, the couple stopped answering their phones, texts and e-mails. They and their three adopted children, Malia thirteen from Ethiopia, Jin eleven from China and Miguel eight from Honduras, disappeared without leaving a single clue about their whereabouts. The management team does not want the FBI or law enforcement involved until they know what is going on. It might make investors involved in their film nervous and if they could pull out, the entire project could collapse and millions of dollars would be lost.
A break in the case occurs when a blog reports the couple has been seen in Guadalajara, drunk and wandering the streets. Jack sends Justine and Cruz to Mexico but the two run into big trouble and Justine has difficulty recovering from the experience.
The three Harlow children are returned but there is still no sign of Jennifer or Thom and Private is no closer to identifying who took them or why. At the mall where the children were left Jack once again runs into his nosey neighbour, reporter Bobby Newton who breaks the story of the family’s kidnapping and it becomes public.
Meanwhile Cynthia Maines, the Harlow’s personal assistant, has broken from the management team, concerned about the way they are handling the Harlows disappearance. She begins her own investigation and is shocked by what she learns, that the Harlows were not the people she believed them to be.
Jack’s personal life intrudes on his business when his twin brother Tommy and Carmine Noccia appear at his door. Tommy is under investigation for the murder of Clay Harris and intent on implicating Jack. Carmine discovered Jack crossed him by informing the DEA about the stolen truck full of drugs Jack recovered for him, and wants revenge. He partners with Tommy to offer Jack a deal, a trade of sorts, a devastating one that Jack cannot refuse.
This is another easy, fast-paced read. We learn more about the personal lives of Jack and Justine, encouraging us to become more invested in their story. Jack wonders if he will ever get over the woman he still loves but can’t seem to be with, at least on her terms and maybe his too. It’s complicated.
I agree there are several predictable elements in the crimes, especially in the Harlow story, but they do not interfere with the reader's enjoyment. When things finally settle down and the case comes to a close, the Harlow team offer Jack a huge sum of money to keep the entire affair quiet, but Jack refuses. Instead, he crafts a settlement the Harlows have no choice but to accept, knowing the unfavorable publicity that would result if the full story was known would destroy them.
I am pleased to see the writers pick up the ongoing drama from previous books, the difficult relationship between Jack and his brother Tommy and Jack’s connections with the mob. These connections to past events help keep the cases bound to a single ongoing narrative, making this collection of books a true series.
This installment of the series with two cases focusing on themes of justice and revenge, is a good addition to the series and easily readable in one concentrated sitting.