"Cain's Blood" is a fascinating first novel about genetic manipulation by an intriguing new author, Geoffrey Girard. In the current literary environment of "copy cat" novels, Girard manages to do something truly remarkable by creating an entirely innovative and remarkably creative twist on the old "Boys From Brazil" plot line.
I read this book as a possible nominee for the Bram Stoker awards in the "First Novel" category. Oddly, some of the same elements that make Girard's book highly recommendable as his freshman effort also work strongly against it in terms of reviewing it. The ideas contained in this novel show evident enthusiasm and they fly fast and furiously from the pages. There's a roller coaster effect to reading it; the thing drives you forward and you want very much to know what happens next. This is exactly the kind of first novel that stirs the blood of the reader and makes him or her start searching Amazon in the hope that the author's second book will be out soon.
Just so that I am unequivocally clear: "Cain's Blood" is certainly well worth reading and I expect some amazing things to come from the keyboard of this novice author in the future. There are, however, many glaring flaws in this book that detract from it substantially and that a more experienced novelist might have avoided.
Like most first timers, Girard often gets bogged down in the jargon, whether it be in his use of military terminology or by providing background on genetic science. I found myself skipping over a page or so at a time, simply because, within the first sentence or two, I was bored or alienated by the techno-babble. It's rough to blame the author for this and for some of the other similar lapses in craft as, by rights, an experienced editor should have caught it. Unfortunately, the ultimate responsibility needs to rest with the author himself.
In addition, Girard tries to do far too much with his characters and he simply lacks the skill. There are dozens of them and, with the possible exception of the two leads, they're interchangeable. It is inconceivable, for example, that there is no real character distinction between a teenaged version of the infamous cannibal, Albert Fish, and a teenaged Ted Bundy. Yet, Girard's characters seem all scissored from the same blank sheet of white construction paper--and that's a damned shame. He assigns them surface "traits" without developing any depth and often, as in the case of a young John Wayne Gacy walking around in a clown suit, the result is mildly clever but ultimately ridiculous and unbelievable.
In the end, we never know enough about any of these characters beneath the surface, not even the young "hero" Jeffrey Dahmer clone, to care very much about them. And insofar as the evil scientists and military folk are concerned, they are as indistinguishable from each other as are the individual personalities that comprise the nebulous pack of post-pubescent serial killers.
The ideas of the book, and the innovative plot, are it's most effective elements. But while the plot's uniqueness manages to sustain a certain excitement throughout, the novel never really rises to the level of being thrilling -- and by all rights it should be. The comparison has been made between Girard and Crichton, and it's certainly a valid one. But the success of Crichton's novels was always in the story of the PEOPLE who found themselves caught up beyond their volition in those marvelously Frankenstein-ian scientific plots; it was never about Science Gone Bad in a vacuum.
The above being said, I think there is a helluva lot of potential in Geoffrey Girard and it is perhaps unfair of me to expect him to have the seasoning of more experienced authors. But, again, the concepts this guy has chosen to work with, and the high level of creativity in the story he has chosen to tell, sort of demand an equally adept hand at the craft of authorship, which is lacking.
In short, Geoffrey Girard is one of the most promising new novelists I've read in a long time. Even though he came up a trifle short the first time around, he's certainly well worth reading. There's a ton of potential here and I heartily recommend keeping an eye out to see what Girard has to offer us in the future.