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The Subsequent Proposal: A Tale of Pride, Prejudice & Persuasion
A number of broken-hearted characters from Jane Austen’s best novels are thrown together by the vagaries of fate, and all manner of unwise decisions are taken at this vulnerable time. But then their past creeps up upon them – and what is there to do but face it, and hope that their convoluted paths will finally lead them to their proper place?
“Elizabeth… Elizabeth… Elizabeth…” he murmured against her lips, her skin, her hair, and then her lips again. “I cannot forsake you! I cannot! I cannot lose you! I cannot bear to think of a life without you – ‘tis not worth living, ‘tis but a slow death! I cannot lose you! I beg you, do not send me away again! I love you! Elizabeth, I love you!”
Friends, rivals, foes, wrong choices and a duel – Fitzwilliam Darcy’s life is never dull! ‘The Subsequent Proposal’ – a story that is primarily about him – follows Mr. Darcy in his struggles to decipher the troubling enigma of Elizabeth Bennet’s feelings – and to correct the worst misjudgement of his life…
“Elizabeth… Elizabeth… Elizabeth…” he murmured against her lips, her skin, her hair, and then her lips again. “I cannot forsake you! I cannot! I cannot lose you! I cannot bear to think of a life without you – ‘tis not worth living, ‘tis but a slow death! I cannot lose you! I beg you, do not send me away again! I love you! Elizabeth, I love you!”
Friends, rivals, foes, wrong choices and a duel – Fitzwilliam Darcy’s life is never dull! ‘The Subsequent Proposal’ – a story that is primarily about him – follows Mr. Darcy in his struggles to decipher the troubling enigma of Elizabeth Bennet’s feelings – and to correct the worst misjudgement of his life…
194 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 13, 2013
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Joana Starnes
21 books248 followersJoana Starnes lives in the south of England with her family. She swapped several hats over the years – physician, lecturer, clinical data analyst – but feels most comfortable in a bonnet. She has been living in Georgian England for decades in her imagination, and plans to continue in that vein till she lays hands on a time machine. She loves to look for glimpses of Pemberley and Jane Austen’s world, and to write about Regency England and Mr Darcy falling in love with Elizabeth Bennet over and over and over again.
She is the author of ten Austen-inspired novels and a contributor to the Quill Ink Anthologies. Joana’s novels are all available on Amazon in Kindle Unlimited and in paperback, and some have also been released in Audible.
You can connect with Joana on: Goodreads ; Facebook ; Twitter ; Instagram ; Website and at Austen Variations or visit Joana’s Facebook page All Roads Lead to Pemberley for places and details that have inspired her novels.
She is the author of ten Austen-inspired novels and a contributor to the Quill Ink Anthologies. Joana’s novels are all available on Amazon in Kindle Unlimited and in paperback, and some have also been released in Audible.
You can connect with Joana on: Goodreads ; Facebook ; Twitter ; Instagram ; Website and at Austen Variations or visit Joana’s Facebook page All Roads Lead to Pemberley for places and details that have inspired her novels.
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February 21, 2014
I’ve read lots of Pride and Prejudice variations, but none which crossed over with another Austen book as much as this one. What if, after the disastrous Hunsford proposal, Mr Darcy went off heartbroken, in the belief that Elizabeth Bennet would never reconsider her feelings towards him? What if he felt he could never love another, but had found a friend in a lady who soothed his feelings and proved herself a genuine good friend to Georgiana? A friend who is unappreciated by her own family? Darcy needs to marry at some point, and meeting and getting to know Miss Anne Elliot (from Persuasion) provides some balm to his wounds. He is persuaded by Colonel Fitzwilliam to think of matrimony and the story begins with Darcy actually proposing marriage to Anne (Nooooooo!).
Darcy is honest with her that he loves another, and Anne hints at her own disappointment in love. I felt quite sorry for Anne at this point, but let’s be honest, a loveless but respectful marriage with a good man would be better than having to live with HER relatives. Sir Walter insists on a long engagement that will not be announced for some time, to give Miss Elizabeth Elliot chance to make a match rather than see the indignity of having two younger sisters marry before her (although there is no delay mentioned in Persuasion Captain Wentworth is less of a catch financially than Darcy, so I felt this was plausible). After sealing their tepid deal, Anne goes to stay with Lady Russell, and Darcy back to town. Here he meets with Bingley who tells him that both of the elder Miss Bennets have been to Pemberley while travelling with the Gardiners, in the company of one of Mrs Gardiner’s school friends, Mrs Croft, her husband and her brother, Captain Wentworth, who seems disposed to court one of the Misses Bennet. Darcy feels that his interference in Bingley’s affairs may have cost his friend his happiness so he sets off to Hertfordshire to give him what assistance he can, meaning that he crosses the path of Elizabeth Bennet once more, and starts to hope that her feelings towards him may have changed, even though it’s too late...
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The story is told in the third person, but we are privy to Darcy’s thoughts and passionate feelings, which makes his decisions easier to understand. The early parts of it where Darcy is dealing with his misery were almost painful to read, but were really compelling. Once Darcy has hopes that Elizabeth has changed her mind towards him he is almost as miserable, because he’s not in a position to propose. He is also very jealous of Captain Wentworth, who makes no secret of his plans to propose to Elizabeth, and the two men have a mutual distrust and dislike which was almost comedic, there are many looks of loathing directed at each other!
Poor Anne is almost completely forgotten by Darcy as he interacts with the bewitching Miss Bennet and gets caught up in events relating to the Bennet family. I felt even more sorry for Anne at this point, but knowing that she is supposed to end up married to Captain Wentworth, the man she loves really helped me forgive Darcy’s behaviour in overlooking his responsibilities somewhat.
“His first, his only thought had been of her. Her happiness, her comfort. Not Georgiana’s, and certainly not Anne’s.”
Although there are the characters from two Austen books here it’s very much a Pride and Prejudice variation. We see very little of Anne, and other characters from Persuasion such as Sir Walter are only in the story briefly. Characters from Pride and Prejudice such as Jane and Mr Bingley play a larger part in the story, and I felt that they were really captured well. I particularly liked the affectionate way the embarrassing and voluble Mrs Bennet was portrayed:
“Mrs Bennet had taken up her post at one of the tall windows that overlooked the garden – and if the curtains did not twitch, it was only due to her mastery of the art.”
I felt this story had everything; there was emotion, there was passion, there was a lot of humour and a big tangle to unravel to ensure that both of our couples got a happy ending. I read it in one sitting and I thoroughly enjoyed it. This was the first book I read this year and what a way to begin! I’d recommend this book without hesitation, I really did love it.
*I received a copy of this book in return for my honest review, courtesy of Leatherbound Reviews*
Darcy is honest with her that he loves another, and Anne hints at her own disappointment in love. I felt quite sorry for Anne at this point, but let’s be honest, a loveless but respectful marriage with a good man would be better than having to live with HER relatives. Sir Walter insists on a long engagement that will not be announced for some time, to give Miss Elizabeth Elliot chance to make a match rather than see the indignity of having two younger sisters marry before her (although there is no delay mentioned in Persuasion Captain Wentworth is less of a catch financially than Darcy, so I felt this was plausible). After sealing their tepid deal, Anne goes to stay with Lady Russell, and Darcy back to town. Here he meets with Bingley who tells him that both of the elder Miss Bennets have been to Pemberley while travelling with the Gardiners, in the company of one of Mrs Gardiner’s school friends, Mrs Croft, her husband and her brother, Captain Wentworth, who seems disposed to court one of the Misses Bennet. Darcy feels that his interference in Bingley’s affairs may have cost his friend his happiness so he sets off to Hertfordshire to give him what assistance he can, meaning that he crosses the path of Elizabeth Bennet once more, and starts to hope that her feelings towards him may have changed, even though it’s too late...
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The story is told in the third person, but we are privy to Darcy’s thoughts and passionate feelings, which makes his decisions easier to understand. The early parts of it where Darcy is dealing with his misery were almost painful to read, but were really compelling. Once Darcy has hopes that Elizabeth has changed her mind towards him he is almost as miserable, because he’s not in a position to propose. He is also very jealous of Captain Wentworth, who makes no secret of his plans to propose to Elizabeth, and the two men have a mutual distrust and dislike which was almost comedic, there are many looks of loathing directed at each other!
Poor Anne is almost completely forgotten by Darcy as he interacts with the bewitching Miss Bennet and gets caught up in events relating to the Bennet family. I felt even more sorry for Anne at this point, but knowing that she is supposed to end up married to Captain Wentworth, the man she loves really helped me forgive Darcy’s behaviour in overlooking his responsibilities somewhat.
“His first, his only thought had been of her. Her happiness, her comfort. Not Georgiana’s, and certainly not Anne’s.”
Although there are the characters from two Austen books here it’s very much a Pride and Prejudice variation. We see very little of Anne, and other characters from Persuasion such as Sir Walter are only in the story briefly. Characters from Pride and Prejudice such as Jane and Mr Bingley play a larger part in the story, and I felt that they were really captured well. I particularly liked the affectionate way the embarrassing and voluble Mrs Bennet was portrayed:
“Mrs Bennet had taken up her post at one of the tall windows that overlooked the garden – and if the curtains did not twitch, it was only due to her mastery of the art.”
I felt this story had everything; there was emotion, there was passion, there was a lot of humour and a big tangle to unravel to ensure that both of our couples got a happy ending. I read it in one sitting and I thoroughly enjoyed it. This was the first book I read this year and what a way to begin! I’d recommend this book without hesitation, I really did love it.
*I received a copy of this book in return for my honest review, courtesy of Leatherbound Reviews*
December 21, 2013
What if after several months of living in anguish and despair over Elizabeth Bennet's rejection, Darcy encountered a gentle and compassionate person named Anne Elliot?
What if Anne, with her kind and encouraging nature, brought about a significant improvement in Georgiana's shyness and confidence, while at the same time soothed Darcy's broken heart with her easy-going friendship?
What if Darcy decided the best course of action for him and Georgiana, at this point in time, was for him to offer marriage to...Anne Elliot!
In this incredibly inventive and daring novel, author Joana Starnes explores the possibility of the characters from Pride and Prejudice crossing paths with characters from Persuasion. Taking place three months after Darcy's disastrous proposal in Hunsford, Darcy, instead of reuniting with the Bingley family at Pemeberley, travels to Somersetshire in the company of his relations from Matlock. And accompanying Elizabeth and the Gardiners on their northern tour is Mrs. Gardiner's former school companion, Mrs. Croft (as well as her husband and charming younger brother – a naval captain!)
I found the combination of these two beloved Jane Austen couples to be extremely successful and conceivable! Darcy and Anne Elliot do have a lot in common with each other, they are “kindred spirits,” and perhaps make more sense – on paper – than do Darcy and Elizabeth (*gasp* Yes, I said it.) And with their outgoing personalities and charming conversation perhaps Elizabeth with Captain Wentworth do seem like they would make a compatible pair (c'mon, you have to admit they do!) But alas, do not be alarmed, dear readers! Joana Starnes throws a wrench into these not-so-happily-ever-afters by bringing a betrothed Darcy back to Netherfield. What will he do when he encounters the charming and attentive Captain Wentworth...
I must devote this next paragraph of my review to express the love I have for Joana Starnes's Darcy! In a style similar Abigail Reynolds and Lory Lilian, Ms. Starnes portrays a very emotionally intense and impassioned Darcy. *sigh* I love seeing Darcy rendered as a romantic - so desperately in love with Elizabeth that there is no hope of cessation. This story is told from his perspective so readers are privy to all the painful anguish and repressed longing he feels. And if you are a sympathetic reader, like me, you will experience all poor Darcy's heartache and torment right with him!
Besides a well-crafted variation and an incredibly romantic Darcy, other parts of this story I enjoyed were the altercation with Wickham, the combative conversations between Darcy and Wentworth, Mr. Bingley clumsily trying to play matchmaker, and Colonel Fitzwilliam's hard heart-to-heart with Darcy.
Oh! and I mustn't forget Caroline Bingley and Lady Russell, who were always trying to thwart Darcy's plans at every turn! So much going on, felt a little like a Shakespearen comedy! Perhaps the only thing missing was seeing a little bit of the story from Captain Wentworth's point-of-view, but that might have been a bit challenging to integrate.
Achingly romantic and exquisitely expressive – The Subsequent Proposal is a beautifully blended story with our favorite, albeit mismatched, couples. I absolutely adored it and I'm so elated to learn that Joana Starnes is currently working on another variation that combines Pride and Prejudice with Sense and Sensibility! Woot Woot!
Austenesque Reviews
What if Anne, with her kind and encouraging nature, brought about a significant improvement in Georgiana's shyness and confidence, while at the same time soothed Darcy's broken heart with her easy-going friendship?
What if Darcy decided the best course of action for him and Georgiana, at this point in time, was for him to offer marriage to...Anne Elliot!
In this incredibly inventive and daring novel, author Joana Starnes explores the possibility of the characters from Pride and Prejudice crossing paths with characters from Persuasion. Taking place three months after Darcy's disastrous proposal in Hunsford, Darcy, instead of reuniting with the Bingley family at Pemeberley, travels to Somersetshire in the company of his relations from Matlock. And accompanying Elizabeth and the Gardiners on their northern tour is Mrs. Gardiner's former school companion, Mrs. Croft (as well as her husband and charming younger brother – a naval captain!)
I found the combination of these two beloved Jane Austen couples to be extremely successful and conceivable! Darcy and Anne Elliot do have a lot in common with each other, they are “kindred spirits,” and perhaps make more sense – on paper – than do Darcy and Elizabeth (*gasp* Yes, I said it.) And with their outgoing personalities and charming conversation perhaps Elizabeth with Captain Wentworth do seem like they would make a compatible pair (c'mon, you have to admit they do!) But alas, do not be alarmed, dear readers! Joana Starnes throws a wrench into these not-so-happily-ever-afters by bringing a betrothed Darcy back to Netherfield. What will he do when he encounters the charming and attentive Captain Wentworth...
I must devote this next paragraph of my review to express the love I have for Joana Starnes's Darcy! In a style similar Abigail Reynolds and Lory Lilian, Ms. Starnes portrays a very emotionally intense and impassioned Darcy. *sigh* I love seeing Darcy rendered as a romantic - so desperately in love with Elizabeth that there is no hope of cessation. This story is told from his perspective so readers are privy to all the painful anguish and repressed longing he feels. And if you are a sympathetic reader, like me, you will experience all poor Darcy's heartache and torment right with him!
Besides a well-crafted variation and an incredibly romantic Darcy, other parts of this story I enjoyed were the altercation with Wickham, the combative conversations between Darcy and Wentworth, Mr. Bingley clumsily trying to play matchmaker, and Colonel Fitzwilliam's hard heart-to-heart with Darcy.
Oh! and I mustn't forget Caroline Bingley and Lady Russell, who were always trying to thwart Darcy's plans at every turn! So much going on, felt a little like a Shakespearen comedy! Perhaps the only thing missing was seeing a little bit of the story from Captain Wentworth's point-of-view, but that might have been a bit challenging to integrate.
Achingly romantic and exquisitely expressive – The Subsequent Proposal is a beautifully blended story with our favorite, albeit mismatched, couples. I absolutely adored it and I'm so elated to learn that Joana Starnes is currently working on another variation that combines Pride and Prejudice with Sense and Sensibility! Woot Woot!
Austenesque Reviews
December 22, 2018
12/22/18: I finished reading/listening to this book on Audible today and enjoyed it just as much the time around as I did before.
In reading all the other reviews and/or the sample, one gets the gist of this story. *Spoiler* What seems to have been neglected in mentioning significant parts of the story is that Sir Walter Eliot becomes a savior for these four characters, Darcy, Anne Eliot, Capt. Wentworth and Elizabeth, in that when Darcy goes to ask for permission to marry Anne (even though she is of age), Sir Walter Eliot can only think of how this will look to the "ton" to have his second youngest daughter married before his beloved Elizabeth. So he argues that Darcy and Anne should have a year's long secret engagement to allow Elizabeth (and how Darcy hates that she has Lizzy's name) time to attract a suitor while in Bath (to which they only recently moved). Darcy bargains for 6 months. Thus the engagement is not to be announced and only known to Lady Russell, Georgiana, and Col. Fitzwilliam. SO THIS ALLOWS TIME for many misunderstandings and lots of additional angst. (Especially, during a walk when Elizabeth B. trips into Darcy's arms and they almost kiss...Why didn't he kiss me? She ponders - I saw in his eyes he wanted to...not knowing he is engaged makes her feel even more rejected.) This time lapse allows our HEA ending without a scandal of a broken engagement as it is not official YET.
I love how this author gives us so much of Darcy's POV: his arguments with himself, his thoughts upon the smallest glimpse of Elizabeth being like water in the desert, his realization of and pondering about how quiet she is in his presence, his assessment of the Eliots and their personalities, his desire to finally give all to the only woman who can be his other half. Joana Starnes does a magnificent job with showing us Darcy as our true romantic hero. Are there any men in real life who go through this struggle...and who can finally come to the realization of their mistakes and work so hard to solve them in a fashion taking into consideration the consequences for all? Lastly, deciding it is how they want to live their life and not as society or family wants them to live their life that matters.
I read this book in one day and highly recommend it.
In reading all the other reviews and/or the sample, one gets the gist of this story. *Spoiler* What seems to have been neglected in mentioning significant parts of the story is that Sir Walter Eliot becomes a savior for these four characters, Darcy, Anne Eliot, Capt. Wentworth and Elizabeth, in that when Darcy goes to ask for permission to marry Anne (even though she is of age), Sir Walter Eliot can only think of how this will look to the "ton" to have his second youngest daughter married before his beloved Elizabeth. So he argues that Darcy and Anne should have a year's long secret engagement to allow Elizabeth (and how Darcy hates that she has Lizzy's name) time to attract a suitor while in Bath (to which they only recently moved). Darcy bargains for 6 months. Thus the engagement is not to be announced and only known to Lady Russell, Georgiana, and Col. Fitzwilliam. SO THIS ALLOWS TIME for many misunderstandings and lots of additional angst. (Especially, during a walk when Elizabeth B. trips into Darcy's arms and they almost kiss...Why didn't he kiss me? She ponders - I saw in his eyes he wanted to...not knowing he is engaged makes her feel even more rejected.) This time lapse allows our HEA ending without a scandal of a broken engagement as it is not official YET.
I love how this author gives us so much of Darcy's POV: his arguments with himself, his thoughts upon the smallest glimpse of Elizabeth being like water in the desert, his realization of and pondering about how quiet she is in his presence, his assessment of the Eliots and their personalities, his desire to finally give all to the only woman who can be his other half. Joana Starnes does a magnificent job with showing us Darcy as our true romantic hero. Are there any men in real life who go through this struggle...and who can finally come to the realization of their mistakes and work so hard to solve them in a fashion taking into consideration the consequences for all? Lastly, deciding it is how they want to live their life and not as society or family wants them to live their life that matters.
I read this book in one day and highly recommend it.
March 11, 2018
Exquisite curiosity enveloped me when I saw this was a blend of Jane Austen's novels, Pride & Prejudice and Persuasion. The author's writing has drawn me in with previous books for her wonderful tone of romance, gentility, and dash of humor for the situations in which she places her characters.
The Subsequent Proposal assumes the reader has a grasp of the events of both novels from which this variation blend is founded. It picks up after Darcy's fateful proposal at Hunsford and near the beginning of the events at the beginning of Persuasion when the Elliots must leave Kellynch.
My curiosity for how the blend would work and whether I would be distracted or appreciate what came was assuaged quickly. The author cleverly did her homework and struck an interesting balance that actually had me doing what Colonel Fitzwilliam did later in the book, analyzing which pairing truly did make more sense on paper. I could see with little need to stretch my imagination just how these two stories could converge like this. And, I could really see that of all rivals for Darcy, Anne Elliot was a worthy one as Miss Bingley could never be. Anne has birth, character, intelligence and proper feeling on her side. Just as Wentworth was a brilliant rival for Elizabeth's affections as he matched her in birth status, liveliness, and strong opinion. They are a real danger because everyone was more suitable all around if the vagaries of love isn't the only factor.
I enjoyed the shocking variation element of this story that Darcy and Anne are engaged and Captain Wentworth returns to from sea duty to be enchanted by Elizabeth Bennet. I felt the author did justice to the rendering of all the main players including secondary characters like Bingley, Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Miss Bingley, and Lady Russell along with her own original creations in Fitzwilliam's parents. The story is mostly set in the P&P world, but scenes with Sir Walter and Elizabeth Elliot and Lady Russell, the Crofts and the off scene roll Kellynch Hall plays were perfect blending choices. Those looking for lots of Persuasion in this one must be content with a lesser role.
Most of the book, which is perhaps more long novella-length so reads rather quickly, Darcy is the narrator. The reader enjoys his thoughts, inner turmoil, and his activities. This is indeed Darcy's story most of all. It is first his decision to move on from Elizabeth that brings Anne into the picture and then his decision to change and become a man worthy of Elizabeth that alters his path yet again when he sets Bingley right about Jane Bennet and goes into action when Wickham attempts some villainy.
Oh yes, there is some exquisite angst as Darcy is confounded by his choices and his feelings. I thought it was great having Colonel Fitzwilliam play the role of Job's comforter and Bingley that of matchmaker while Darcy wonders how he can ever set things straight so all involved are happy.
So, this is a gently-paced, rather low drama piece (considering) that was heartwarming and engaging giving a reader the best of two worlds when there is Darcy's pride effaced and Wentworth's swoonworthy words for Anne to enjoy. This one is for the Austen fan, particularly one who is curious about how a crossover of stories would play out.
The Subsequent Proposal assumes the reader has a grasp of the events of both novels from which this variation blend is founded. It picks up after Darcy's fateful proposal at Hunsford and near the beginning of the events at the beginning of Persuasion when the Elliots must leave Kellynch.
My curiosity for how the blend would work and whether I would be distracted or appreciate what came was assuaged quickly. The author cleverly did her homework and struck an interesting balance that actually had me doing what Colonel Fitzwilliam did later in the book, analyzing which pairing truly did make more sense on paper. I could see with little need to stretch my imagination just how these two stories could converge like this. And, I could really see that of all rivals for Darcy, Anne Elliot was a worthy one as Miss Bingley could never be. Anne has birth, character, intelligence and proper feeling on her side. Just as Wentworth was a brilliant rival for Elizabeth's affections as he matched her in birth status, liveliness, and strong opinion. They are a real danger because everyone was more suitable all around if the vagaries of love isn't the only factor.
I enjoyed the shocking variation element of this story that Darcy and Anne are engaged and Captain Wentworth returns to from sea duty to be enchanted by Elizabeth Bennet. I felt the author did justice to the rendering of all the main players including secondary characters like Bingley, Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Miss Bingley, and Lady Russell along with her own original creations in Fitzwilliam's parents. The story is mostly set in the P&P world, but scenes with Sir Walter and Elizabeth Elliot and Lady Russell, the Crofts and the off scene roll Kellynch Hall plays were perfect blending choices. Those looking for lots of Persuasion in this one must be content with a lesser role.
Most of the book, which is perhaps more long novella-length so reads rather quickly, Darcy is the narrator. The reader enjoys his thoughts, inner turmoil, and his activities. This is indeed Darcy's story most of all. It is first his decision to move on from Elizabeth that brings Anne into the picture and then his decision to change and become a man worthy of Elizabeth that alters his path yet again when he sets Bingley right about Jane Bennet and goes into action when Wickham attempts some villainy.
Oh yes, there is some exquisite angst as Darcy is confounded by his choices and his feelings. I thought it was great having Colonel Fitzwilliam play the role of Job's comforter and Bingley that of matchmaker while Darcy wonders how he can ever set things straight so all involved are happy.
So, this is a gently-paced, rather low drama piece (considering) that was heartwarming and engaging giving a reader the best of two worlds when there is Darcy's pride effaced and Wentworth's swoonworthy words for Anne to enjoy. This one is for the Austen fan, particularly one who is curious about how a crossover of stories would play out.
January 11, 2017
Subsequent proposal… what again? 4.5 stars
Joana Starnes had me in the prologue. I thought I knew where she was going and I tripped and fell all over myself and in the wrong direction. Brilliant…I did not see her misdirection and I completely and utterly overlooked the clues. I couldn’t help but laugh out loud when I realized what she had done.
This was a clever way to guide our dear couple on a roller-coaster ride of emotions, feelings of regret, guilt and despair. Lord, I thought we’d never get to the HEA and it didn’t look like it was going to happen. What would I do? Could I go on? However, my angst was unfounded as Joana didn’t let me down and brought situations back on track and put things right.
I was fraught with despair as ODC’s attentions were directed in another direction and I was concerned with how we would get the misunderstandings corrected. Joana was so creative in her mix up of characters. I can’t even discuss it without giving away the reveal. It was so creative and I love it.
There are some awesome reviews out there...so I will let them have it. I enjoyed this read and hope you do too.
Joana Starnes had me in the prologue. I thought I knew where she was going and I tripped and fell all over myself and in the wrong direction. Brilliant…I did not see her misdirection and I completely and utterly overlooked the clues. I couldn’t help but laugh out loud when I realized what she had done.
This was a clever way to guide our dear couple on a roller-coaster ride of emotions, feelings of regret, guilt and despair. Lord, I thought we’d never get to the HEA and it didn’t look like it was going to happen. What would I do? Could I go on? However, my angst was unfounded as Joana didn’t let me down and brought situations back on track and put things right.
I was fraught with despair as ODC’s attentions were directed in another direction and I was concerned with how we would get the misunderstandings corrected. Joana was so creative in her mix up of characters. I can’t even discuss it without giving away the reveal. It was so creative and I love it.
There are some awesome reviews out there...so I will let them have it. I enjoyed this read and hope you do too.
July 13, 2016
I have reread Pride & Prejudice too many times to count; I've read Persuasion about 3 times. Happily, the third time was within the past month so the timing was perfect when I stumbled across this book. All of the characters are very true to Jane Austen's originals, and the concept is just brilliant.
Persuasion's Anne Elliot becomes engaged to Darcy a few months after Elizabeth has jilted him. Their agreement to marry is based on the discovery that they're both nursing broken hearts and, since they'll never have their hearts' desire and they're compatible, they might as well face the future together. The book is told from Darcy's point of view, and the reader might guess the eventual conclusion (though Darcy can't) once he becomes aware that a certain Captain Wentworth is now courting Elizabeth.
Even with foreknowledge of how things will likely end, the journey to get there is a fascinating and unpredictable mixture of both books. Poor Darcy's angst and internal monologue as he watches the other couple together is comical but still gut-wrenching. He and Wentworth argue heatedly over who's going to deal with Wickham, who comes close to getting the upper hand over them both.
Considering how suave and smooth many P&P fan fiction books make Darcy, I loved that THIS Darcy gets tongue-tied and has trouble expressing himself. He's refreshingly human and flawed but trying his best to do what's right for Elizabeth, Georgiana, Anne and himself.
Some readers might feel that Elizabeth doesn't appear often enough, but she is constantly present in Darcy's thoughts, and the scenes in which she appears are poignant and filled with emotion - mostly Darcy's, because his own yearning is palpable but, aside from watching her eyes and hearing her words, he doesn't have a clue as to what she's thinking.
Along with having a great concept, Ms. Starnes has the writing chops to deliver very Regency-esque prose, and she builds up the dramatic tension to a very satisfying climax and conclusion. I'd give this more than 5 stars if I could. What a joy to read such excellent fan fiction!
Persuasion's Anne Elliot becomes engaged to Darcy a few months after Elizabeth has jilted him. Their agreement to marry is based on the discovery that they're both nursing broken hearts and, since they'll never have their hearts' desire and they're compatible, they might as well face the future together. The book is told from Darcy's point of view, and the reader might guess the eventual conclusion (though Darcy can't) once he becomes aware that a certain Captain Wentworth is now courting Elizabeth.
Even with foreknowledge of how things will likely end, the journey to get there is a fascinating and unpredictable mixture of both books. Poor Darcy's angst and internal monologue as he watches the other couple together is comical but still gut-wrenching. He and Wentworth argue heatedly over who's going to deal with Wickham, who comes close to getting the upper hand over them both.
Considering how suave and smooth many P&P fan fiction books make Darcy, I loved that THIS Darcy gets tongue-tied and has trouble expressing himself. He's refreshingly human and flawed but trying his best to do what's right for Elizabeth, Georgiana, Anne and himself.
Some readers might feel that Elizabeth doesn't appear often enough, but she is constantly present in Darcy's thoughts, and the scenes in which she appears are poignant and filled with emotion - mostly Darcy's, because his own yearning is palpable but, aside from watching her eyes and hearing her words, he doesn't have a clue as to what she's thinking.
Along with having a great concept, Ms. Starnes has the writing chops to deliver very Regency-esque prose, and she builds up the dramatic tension to a very satisfying climax and conclusion. I'd give this more than 5 stars if I could. What a joy to read such excellent fan fiction!
June 15, 2016
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When I first read the plot of this book I could not believe how perfect it was! All I could think was how I never thought about it myself considering it has the characters from my 2 favourite Jane Austen books: Pride & Prejudice and Persuasion. Getting them together the way Joana Starnes did makes perfect sense! The idea could not be better!
After Elizabeth’s refusal in Hunsford, Darcy meets Miss Anne Elliot and believes she would be the perfect wife for a marriage based on contentment. She is amiable, kind, intelligent and her family is perfect for Darcy’s family standards. On the other hand, Captain Wentworth meets Elizabeth Bennet and also believes she could be a perfect wife if he can not have Anne’s love. At a certain point in the book the four of them meet and they are forced to face their true feelings. Even though Anne appears to be (in the eyes of society) perfect for Darcy, she is obviously not his perfect match. She is not his other half, and the same applies for Captain Wentworth and Lizzy.
The book is extremely well written, and it’s truly passionate, with deep feelings and no excessive dramas or incredibly bad villains. It’s a believable story, perfectly situated in the era. There is no lack of propriety, and that does not prevent us from reading a truly romantic story. We read the book from Darcy’s perspective and for me, one of the best things about the book is that Darcy is not seen as the only one at fault. The author really understands and develops both characters just like Jane Austen created them and not as a version of Darcy and Lizzy as many authors do.
Unlike many books, Darcy is not seen as someone full of faults who changes completely just to please Elizabeth. In this book Elizabeth understands she was also prejudiced and realizes that even though Darcy was not at his best while proposing to her, he had his reasons to do it as he did. She understand his background and how that influenced his behaviour. I do not believe I have ever read a book more true to the real Darcy and Elizabeth as The Subsequent Proposal.
I really enjoyed reading this book and did so in one day. I was only sad that the book was so short. I believe the author could have developed the story a little bit more. The idea was really good and deserved more scenes, more dialogue, and maybe even more Wentworth and Anne, but I do recommend it!
When I first read the plot of this book I could not believe how perfect it was! All I could think was how I never thought about it myself considering it has the characters from my 2 favourite Jane Austen books: Pride & Prejudice and Persuasion. Getting them together the way Joana Starnes did makes perfect sense! The idea could not be better!
After Elizabeth’s refusal in Hunsford, Darcy meets Miss Anne Elliot and believes she would be the perfect wife for a marriage based on contentment. She is amiable, kind, intelligent and her family is perfect for Darcy’s family standards. On the other hand, Captain Wentworth meets Elizabeth Bennet and also believes she could be a perfect wife if he can not have Anne’s love. At a certain point in the book the four of them meet and they are forced to face their true feelings. Even though Anne appears to be (in the eyes of society) perfect for Darcy, she is obviously not his perfect match. She is not his other half, and the same applies for Captain Wentworth and Lizzy.
The book is extremely well written, and it’s truly passionate, with deep feelings and no excessive dramas or incredibly bad villains. It’s a believable story, perfectly situated in the era. There is no lack of propriety, and that does not prevent us from reading a truly romantic story. We read the book from Darcy’s perspective and for me, one of the best things about the book is that Darcy is not seen as the only one at fault. The author really understands and develops both characters just like Jane Austen created them and not as a version of Darcy and Lizzy as many authors do.
Unlike many books, Darcy is not seen as someone full of faults who changes completely just to please Elizabeth. In this book Elizabeth understands she was also prejudiced and realizes that even though Darcy was not at his best while proposing to her, he had his reasons to do it as he did. She understand his background and how that influenced his behaviour. I do not believe I have ever read a book more true to the real Darcy and Elizabeth as The Subsequent Proposal.
I really enjoyed reading this book and did so in one day. I was only sad that the book was so short. I believe the author could have developed the story a little bit more. The idea was really good and deserved more scenes, more dialogue, and maybe even more Wentworth and Anne, but I do recommend it!
January 22, 2018
this book is 5 years old and has been on my wish list probably almost since its publication which probably had me imbue it with all sorts of imaginary awesomeness that it didn't deliver.
"It's better to burn out than it is to rust" Neil Young Into the Black
This is P&P Post the DP@H from Darcy's perspective and here is a massive Trigger Warning - it you cannot cotton to the idea that Darcy gets engaged to anyone except Lizzy this is not a book for you.
The twist in this tale is that Darcy becomes engaged to Anne Elliot, they both admit that they will never marry their true loves and decide they will go along to get along and fulfill their expected roles in society. However Anne's father demands they keep their engagement secret for 6 months so he can marry off her older sister. [Deep thought: Wouldn't it be easier to marry off this 'spinster' sister if it was known her connections included the Darcys? I'd think so]
During this time Dary learns that Lizzy and the Gardiners visited Pemberley, of course he wasn't there he was off gallivanting around with the Elliots. And Lizzy was accompanied by none other than Capt. Fredrick Wentworth. And Darcy loses his mind. And that is my problem with this book. I just don't like these obsessive, depressive, mopey, dopey Darcys. He is essentially wearing his heart on his sleeve and we all know that isn't Darcy. And eventually he learns that Miss Bennet might not be indifferent to him but there are a mountain of problems that need to be resolved including but not limited to Miss Lydia's plan to elope with Wickham and finding a way to end his secret engagement.
Of course the amazing coincidence that Captain Wentworth is the man who is Miss Anne Elliot's long lost love is just so damn convenient; I mean we the reader know from literally the beginning of the book how this is going to turn out.
I also wonder how Lizzy seeing Pemberley without Darcy and the absence of Darcy's evidenced change can fall in love with him. Maybe I am just extra grumpy
"It's better to burn out than it is to rust" Neil Young Into the Black
This is P&P Post the DP@H from Darcy's perspective and here is a massive Trigger Warning - it you cannot cotton to the idea that Darcy gets engaged to anyone except Lizzy this is not a book for you.
The twist in this tale is that Darcy becomes engaged to Anne Elliot, they both admit that they will never marry their true loves and decide they will go along to get along and fulfill their expected roles in society. However Anne's father demands they keep their engagement secret for 6 months so he can marry off her older sister. [Deep thought: Wouldn't it be easier to marry off this 'spinster' sister if it was known her connections included the Darcys? I'd think so]
During this time Dary learns that Lizzy and the Gardiners visited Pemberley, of course he wasn't there he was off gallivanting around with the Elliots. And Lizzy was accompanied by none other than Capt. Fredrick Wentworth. And Darcy loses his mind. And that is my problem with this book. I just don't like these obsessive, depressive, mopey, dopey Darcys. He is essentially wearing his heart on his sleeve and we all know that isn't Darcy. And eventually he learns that Miss Bennet might not be indifferent to him but there are a mountain of problems that need to be resolved including but not limited to Miss Lydia's plan to elope with Wickham and finding a way to end his secret engagement.
Of course the amazing coincidence that Captain Wentworth is the man who is Miss Anne Elliot's long lost love is just so damn convenient; I mean we the reader know from literally the beginning of the book how this is going to turn out.
I also wonder how Lizzy seeing Pemberley without Darcy and the absence of Darcy's evidenced change can fall in love with him. Maybe I am just extra grumpy
December 31, 2020
Read for the first time on June 2016, re-read on January 2017.
“Mind-blowing” is the word that I used after just reading the prologue of The Subsequent Proposal by Joana Starnes.
Where Pride and Prejudice meets Persuasion and where all my favourite characters of Jane Austen live together or fight together.
It is so difficult to review this book because I do not want to do any spoilers. I will do my best. However, I am starting with the first shock for me: Mr. Darcy after believing that Elizabeth is lost for him, he proposes to Anne Elliot!! They talk and they know that their hearts belong to someone else but they are also practical. Darcy wants to take Anne from her horrible relatives and Anne can give Darcy the heir that he needs for Pemberley.
If you have read Persuasion, you will know that Anne’s father, Sir Walter Elliot is a vane and selfish man who only cares about his appearance and also about titles and wealth. I simply do not like him but Joana Starnes has showed me the only time that I cannot resent him for something done against Anne in favour of his elder sister: he imposes a six month period before announcing the engagement in order to give Elizabeth Elliot time to find a husband. Although Darcy does not agree with him, he cannot do otherwise.
Darcy is content with the arrangement and he decides that it is time to write Charles Bingley about his involvement on separating him from Jane Bennet and how she may love him in return.
Some weeks past and Bingley appears at his town house, he has just read the letter and asks him to accompany him to Netherfield. Eventually Darcy accepts and takes Georgiana with them.
The word awkward is an understatement to describe the first meeting of Darcy with Elizabeth but at the same time they way Joana writes Darcy’s feeling is adorable. However, Elizabeth is not herself, Georgiana describes her as “shy” (can you believe it?).
Every contact that Elizabeth and Darcy have is very “romantic” from the desperate point of view of Darcy who loves Elizabeth beyond boundaries but at the same time he is an honourable man who is engaged to another.
In case you have forgotten, characters from Persuasion are included and who else if not Captain Frederick Wentworth is here and he is very interested in Elizabeth Bennet!! Yes, as you read it, “what is going on here?”. (Read it and enjoy!)
To make things more complicated, the annoying Mr. Wickham has to be the baddie, again. Lydia, again, is the black sheep of the family and she needs protection. She is not going to be left alone as Mr. Darcy starts his journey to save her and another gentleman as well, Captain Wentworth. I will just mention that there is a duel with guns and it does not end very well :S The danger is great and people get hurt in duels.
Onegin_by_Repin
Remember one thing while reading the duel: there are no rules in hate and rancour. Wickham is not a gentleman even if he wants to believe he is.
I am not going to tell you anything else about the story, only remember that in this story we still have around Lady Russell, Mrs. Bennet, Bingley and Colonel Fitzwilliam among others.
“Mind-blowing” is the word that I used after just reading the prologue of The Subsequent Proposal by Joana Starnes.
Where Pride and Prejudice meets Persuasion and where all my favourite characters of Jane Austen live together or fight together.
It is so difficult to review this book because I do not want to do any spoilers. I will do my best. However, I am starting with the first shock for me: Mr. Darcy after believing that Elizabeth is lost for him, he proposes to Anne Elliot!! They talk and they know that their hearts belong to someone else but they are also practical. Darcy wants to take Anne from her horrible relatives and Anne can give Darcy the heir that he needs for Pemberley.
If you have read Persuasion, you will know that Anne’s father, Sir Walter Elliot is a vane and selfish man who only cares about his appearance and also about titles and wealth. I simply do not like him but Joana Starnes has showed me the only time that I cannot resent him for something done against Anne in favour of his elder sister: he imposes a six month period before announcing the engagement in order to give Elizabeth Elliot time to find a husband. Although Darcy does not agree with him, he cannot do otherwise.
Darcy is content with the arrangement and he decides that it is time to write Charles Bingley about his involvement on separating him from Jane Bennet and how she may love him in return.
Some weeks past and Bingley appears at his town house, he has just read the letter and asks him to accompany him to Netherfield. Eventually Darcy accepts and takes Georgiana with them.
The word awkward is an understatement to describe the first meeting of Darcy with Elizabeth but at the same time they way Joana writes Darcy’s feeling is adorable. However, Elizabeth is not herself, Georgiana describes her as “shy” (can you believe it?).
Every contact that Elizabeth and Darcy have is very “romantic” from the desperate point of view of Darcy who loves Elizabeth beyond boundaries but at the same time he is an honourable man who is engaged to another.
In case you have forgotten, characters from Persuasion are included and who else if not Captain Frederick Wentworth is here and he is very interested in Elizabeth Bennet!! Yes, as you read it, “what is going on here?”. (Read it and enjoy!)
To make things more complicated, the annoying Mr. Wickham has to be the baddie, again. Lydia, again, is the black sheep of the family and she needs protection. She is not going to be left alone as Mr. Darcy starts his journey to save her and another gentleman as well, Captain Wentworth. I will just mention that there is a duel with guns and it does not end very well :S The danger is great and people get hurt in duels.
Onegin_by_Repin
Remember one thing while reading the duel: there are no rules in hate and rancour. Wickham is not a gentleman even if he wants to believe he is.
I am not going to tell you anything else about the story, only remember that in this story we still have around Lady Russell, Mrs. Bennet, Bingley and Colonel Fitzwilliam among others.
March 9, 2018
This story starts with Mr. Darcy proposing to Anne Elliott! The angst starts from almost the first sentence! Both agree to a marriage of convenience as neither believe they can marry the one they truly love. Mr Darcy makes his assumption as he does not meet with Elizabeth again following his proposal at Huntsford.
I really enjoyed so many aspects of this book but found myself frustrated that Darcy proposes to Anne without any effort to talk to Elizabeth after giving her his letter. He is sad and lonely, acting for duty and he pines. It's all very sad. Then I experienced a real conflict like I've never experienced before.... I thought Anne would actually be a good match for him. I really liked her!
I loved Darcy's interaction with Captain Wentworth, they squabble like children!
I think this is a 4.5 for me.... not my favourite book by this author, although to be honest, I'm not really sure why as I did enjoy it and liked all the characters and the lovely humour. The interaction with Darcy and Elizabeth was generally very serious and Mr Darcy was responsible for his own misery so I had less patience with him!
I really enjoyed so many aspects of this book but found myself frustrated that Darcy proposes to Anne without any effort to talk to Elizabeth after giving her his letter. He is sad and lonely, acting for duty and he pines. It's all very sad. Then I experienced a real conflict like I've never experienced before.... I thought Anne would actually be a good match for him. I really liked her!
I loved Darcy's interaction with Captain Wentworth, they squabble like children!
I think this is a 4.5 for me.... not my favourite book by this author, although to be honest, I'm not really sure why as I did enjoy it and liked all the characters and the lovely humour. The interaction with Darcy and Elizabeth was generally very serious and Mr Darcy was responsible for his own misery so I had less patience with him!
January 22, 2018
I loved this crossover between my two favorite Jane Austen novels. The idea of Darcy and Ann Elliott getting engaged was brilliant. Both Sir Walter and Miss Elliott were captured perfectly, so true to their original characters. It had a lot of angst and some humor as well, but luckily there was a HEA for both couples.
It is a Joana Starnes' story, so there had to be a lot of Darcy's soul searching, she always does it so beautifully. I enjoyed rivalry between Darcy and Captain Wentworth, and their working together against Wickham. Wicked Wicky got his just deserts, and it's always a pleasure.
Highly recommended.
It is a Joana Starnes' story, so there had to be a lot of Darcy's soul searching, she always does it so beautifully. I enjoyed rivalry between Darcy and Captain Wentworth, and their working together against Wickham. Wicked Wicky got his just deserts, and it's always a pleasure.
Highly recommended.
July 8, 2023
4.5 stars! This story was sweet, but it was pure torture (can Darcy get out of the mess he made?). Why does Darcy always have to muck up his chances, but it was so delicious. I highly recommend this for those that love angst and always some romance. Darcy's dedication to Elizabeth is all-consuming but I think his actions make sense in this context.
Very well done. Also highly enjoyable on Audible. Stevie Zimmerman did an excellent job as always! Very enjoyable listen.
Very well done. Also highly enjoyable on Audible. Stevie Zimmerman did an excellent job as always! Very enjoyable listen.
February 4, 2024
An Interesting Mix
A well-written story weaving an interesting mix of Austen novels, Pride and Prejudice, and Persuasion. Very nicely done. Highly recommend.
November 3, 2021 - Audiobook
Excellent presentation by Stevie Zimmerman. I just love her!
February 3, 2024 - Audiobook re-listen
A well-written story weaving an interesting mix of Austen novels, Pride and Prejudice, and Persuasion. Very nicely done. Highly recommend.
November 3, 2021 - Audiobook
Excellent presentation by Stevie Zimmerman. I just love her!
February 3, 2024 - Audiobook re-listen
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November 3, 2017Check out my review on Diary of an Eccentric
December 18, 2019
Easy to recommend anything by Joana Starnes. Read on of her books, read them all. This is one I reread at least once a year.
August 3, 2020
Just another review praising all that is this book
I have nothing new to add to the reviews that precede my new review. No new insights. No new bit of humor. I can say something about my experience.
I loved this wonderful book from the prologue to the very last paragraph in the epilogue. I only wish that I could watch it on Masterpiece Theater on PBS as a multi episode miniseries. I love this book.
I have nothing new to add to the reviews that precede my new review. No new insights. No new bit of humor. I can say something about my experience.
I loved this wonderful book from the prologue to the very last paragraph in the epilogue. I only wish that I could watch it on Masterpiece Theater on PBS as a multi episode miniseries. I love this book.
September 25, 2018
Oh Joana Starnes likes to twist one’s gut into an anxiety filled thing! This was an enjoyable story, more from Darcy’s perspective than Elizabeth ‘s. The blending of Persuasion characters into P&P was unique and fun. A great book!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 30, 2014
I was very much looking forward to reading this story as the idea of combing the characters from Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion intrigued me. And to have Mr. Darcy and Captain Wentworth in one book... well I’m not complaining!
I was not disappointed. I enjoyed this story very much. I really enjoyed seeing the characters from Pride and Prejudice and from Persuasion interacting with each, and I think it worked very well. The idea of Darcy and Anne as a couple, although strange to the imagination (Darcy is meant for Elizabeth and Anne for Wentworth or course!), actually felt like quite a reasonable match. I could understand how each might be happy to settle for the other; both are nursing a broken heart and think that the ones they love are forever beyond their reach, and so settling for a marriage of companionship with at least mutual respect is perhaps a wise and sensible decision given the circumstances. (But it is strange, I warn you, to see Darcy with Anne and then Wentworth courting Elizabeth!)
This story is told completely (well, pretty much) from Darcy’s point of view. I really enjoyed this and I feel it added to the story in that it made his journey through the novel and its subsequent happy ending so much more pleasing for me as the reader, as we have experienced all his anguish and pain which he has had from the beginning with him, and we have been following Darcy’s emotional journey very closely, knowing all his inner thoughts and feelings.
I felt very sorry for Darcy at many times through this book. The author portrays his inner struggles and his torment very vividly and powerfully and you can’t help but pity him! You really see in this variation just how badly Darcy is affected by losing Elizabeth - it really shows how strong an attachment and love he felt for her! (Well, we already knew he was very affected by her refusal, but seeing his inner thoughts explained in such a way as in this book just really reinforces it!)
This story is certainly a sad and agonizing one for Darcy, and so also for the reader at times, but do not fret as there is also plenty of humour. For me, the most humorous aspect was seeing Darcy and Wentworth fighting over Elizabeth! I suppose really it should not amuse me as much as it did, as Wentworth being able to court Elizabeth right in front of Darcy when Darcy is no longer able to himself, should be a very sad prospect! But the rivalry between the two is rather funny; watching them each trying to comfort her or scowling at each other when Elizabeth isn’t looking! They are clearly fighting over the right to her attention – it is rather funny when they end up in a duel together, Darcy being Wentworth’s second, when it is clear that Wentworth would quite like to challenge Darcy himself!
As well as the anguish and the humour, this story also has its share of romance (while staying completely clean)! There are many stolen looks and tender moments between Darcy and Elizabeth as it becomes clear that feelings between the two are perhaps starting to become mutual! There are many very sweet scenes (especially towards the end!) that will please any romantic, like me.
As well as the main characters, the secondary characters are well developed and play some interesting roles in the story. One of my favourites was Colonel Fitzwilliam. I do so love his character in the original and so I always like to see more of him. In this variation, his interactions with Darcy show a real caring side to his nature as he is trying to help Darcy through his struggles. He is also very useful, let’s just say, in a few situations throughout the story!
We also see more of Bingley in this variation, and to begin with a very, understandably, upset Bingley. His interactions with Darcy through the story put a very interesting light onto their friendship and I like to see how it survives the ordeal surrounding Darcy’s interference with Bingley and Jane.
Of course Lady Russell comes into the story and causes trouble just as she does in Persuasion, but I enjoyed seeing her interacting with Darcy. Miss Bingley comes along as well and remains blind to Darcy’s complete disinterest in her (will she ever learn?)! And we also have some adventure and danger thrown into the mix, thanks to good old Mr. Wickham – nothing new there then.
The language and style of this authors writing is brilliant. She captures the characters very well and it flows very smoothly as you read, and it feels very much in the style of Jane Austen. I was very captivated and drawn in by her writing.
There is a very sweet epilogue to this tale which is not set too far into the future (which I like) and there are some very interesting surprises in this epilogue, as well as a very happy ending.
Overall I really enjoyed this story. It has a good balance of pain and sorrow, but also plenty of romance and some humour! I loved going along the journey through Darcy’s eyes and it was very clever how the author intertwined the characters from Persuasion and I loved the whole idea of the switching of partners from two of Jane Austen’s wonderful novels.
I was not disappointed. I enjoyed this story very much. I really enjoyed seeing the characters from Pride and Prejudice and from Persuasion interacting with each, and I think it worked very well. The idea of Darcy and Anne as a couple, although strange to the imagination (Darcy is meant for Elizabeth and Anne for Wentworth or course!), actually felt like quite a reasonable match. I could understand how each might be happy to settle for the other; both are nursing a broken heart and think that the ones they love are forever beyond their reach, and so settling for a marriage of companionship with at least mutual respect is perhaps a wise and sensible decision given the circumstances. (But it is strange, I warn you, to see Darcy with Anne and then Wentworth courting Elizabeth!)
This story is told completely (well, pretty much) from Darcy’s point of view. I really enjoyed this and I feel it added to the story in that it made his journey through the novel and its subsequent happy ending so much more pleasing for me as the reader, as we have experienced all his anguish and pain which he has had from the beginning with him, and we have been following Darcy’s emotional journey very closely, knowing all his inner thoughts and feelings.
I felt very sorry for Darcy at many times through this book. The author portrays his inner struggles and his torment very vividly and powerfully and you can’t help but pity him! You really see in this variation just how badly Darcy is affected by losing Elizabeth - it really shows how strong an attachment and love he felt for her! (Well, we already knew he was very affected by her refusal, but seeing his inner thoughts explained in such a way as in this book just really reinforces it!)
This story is certainly a sad and agonizing one for Darcy, and so also for the reader at times, but do not fret as there is also plenty of humour. For me, the most humorous aspect was seeing Darcy and Wentworth fighting over Elizabeth! I suppose really it should not amuse me as much as it did, as Wentworth being able to court Elizabeth right in front of Darcy when Darcy is no longer able to himself, should be a very sad prospect! But the rivalry between the two is rather funny; watching them each trying to comfort her or scowling at each other when Elizabeth isn’t looking! They are clearly fighting over the right to her attention – it is rather funny when they end up in a duel together, Darcy being Wentworth’s second, when it is clear that Wentworth would quite like to challenge Darcy himself!
As well as the anguish and the humour, this story also has its share of romance (while staying completely clean)! There are many stolen looks and tender moments between Darcy and Elizabeth as it becomes clear that feelings between the two are perhaps starting to become mutual! There are many very sweet scenes (especially towards the end!) that will please any romantic, like me.
As well as the main characters, the secondary characters are well developed and play some interesting roles in the story. One of my favourites was Colonel Fitzwilliam. I do so love his character in the original and so I always like to see more of him. In this variation, his interactions with Darcy show a real caring side to his nature as he is trying to help Darcy through his struggles. He is also very useful, let’s just say, in a few situations throughout the story!
We also see more of Bingley in this variation, and to begin with a very, understandably, upset Bingley. His interactions with Darcy through the story put a very interesting light onto their friendship and I like to see how it survives the ordeal surrounding Darcy’s interference with Bingley and Jane.
Of course Lady Russell comes into the story and causes trouble just as she does in Persuasion, but I enjoyed seeing her interacting with Darcy. Miss Bingley comes along as well and remains blind to Darcy’s complete disinterest in her (will she ever learn?)! And we also have some adventure and danger thrown into the mix, thanks to good old Mr. Wickham – nothing new there then.
The language and style of this authors writing is brilliant. She captures the characters very well and it flows very smoothly as you read, and it feels very much in the style of Jane Austen. I was very captivated and drawn in by her writing.
There is a very sweet epilogue to this tale which is not set too far into the future (which I like) and there are some very interesting surprises in this epilogue, as well as a very happy ending.
Overall I really enjoyed this story. It has a good balance of pain and sorrow, but also plenty of romance and some humour! I loved going along the journey through Darcy’s eyes and it was very clever how the author intertwined the characters from Persuasion and I loved the whole idea of the switching of partners from two of Jane Austen’s wonderful novels.
August 24, 2014
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Deliciosa mezcla de personajes de Orgullo y Prejuicio y Persuasión. Con seguimiento de las líneas del original, algunos cambios en los hechos y cruces muy acertados en muchos otros.
Los caracteres de los personajes son muy fieles al original, pero con ese estilo propio que le ha sabido impregnar Joana Starnes. Ha ido hacia un camino romántico con grandes dosis de chispa y humor. Fue exquisito ver a Darcy y el capitán Wentworth en una lucha primero por Elizabeth y luego por Anne; a una Georgiana encantada por una más que por la otra, como futura cuñada; a una Lady Rusell muy en su papel de casamentera entrometida guiada por sus propios criterios de felicidad para su ahijada; y así muchos matices exquisitos que hay en esta adaptación.
Es una historia bien contada, divertida, picante, romántica con alta dosis de intriga, malos entendidos, pero también dotados con diálogos ingeniosos; muy significantes los análisis de los hechos de cómo iban surgiendo. Si queréis ver diálogos sensatos en las conversaciones de Darcy y Anne Elliot, aquí lo encontraréis.
Ha sido una muy buena mezcla de personajes, aunque algunos se sacrificaron porque desaparecieron de esta adaptación, en contrapartida aparecieron otros creados por la autora, pero sin ahondar mucho en ellos. Aún asi fue delirante y cautivador. Sobre todo ver a dos personajes, hombres creados por Jane Austen como rivales, amigos, enemigos y en malas decisiones.
Aunque puede ser frustrante por un momento, la situación de imaginar los pensamientos y sentimientos de los otros personajes, que no sea Fitzwilliam Darcy, ya que la historia es contada desde su punto de vista; también te hace querer más de ella y dar rienda suelta a tu imaginación.
La autora ha sabido mezclar estas dos novelas de Jane Austen, manteniendo las ideas generales de las mismas y respetando el carácter de sus personajes principales, con su aporte personal: impregnar del romanticismo de Persuasión a Orgullo y Prejuicio.
November 27, 2013
What would happen if.... After Darcy’s proposal to Elizabeth in Hunsford, Darcy meets Anne Elliot and proposes to her! (Instant angst! - for me anyway) Anne brings comfort to Darcy in her gentle ways, and she is good for Georgiana, helping to coaxed her out of her shell. Anne has suffered her own broken heart, and Darcy figures since he can’t have Elizabeth he can bring some comfort to Anne’s life. Together they decide a quiet life together would be beneficial to both of them.
There are plenty of anxious moments in this story when Darcy is thrown into Elizabeth’s company again. Soon he discovers her feelings have changed toward him, but as he is engaged to Anne he cannot pursue her now! He is quite tormented about it, but he is a man of honor.
I thought it was fun having Anne Elliot and Captain Wentworth in this story! I especially liked Captain Wentworth! Darcy is not happy with Wentworth being around, not when the Captain appears to be courting Elizabeth! But they set aside those differences when Wickham and Lydia elope, and work together to go after Wickham. (I really enjoyed that!!)
My one complaint is that I would have like to see more interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth. I missed the bantering that Darcy and Elizabeth are known for. Elizabeth was always so subdued when they were together. So much so, Georgiana thought Elizabeth was shy.
All-in-all I really enjoyed The Subsequent Proposal! And no worries, Darcy and Elizabeth do have their happily ever after! I would recommend this to any Jane Austen retelling fan!
Disclaimer: I was given a paperback copy of the book for my honest review.
There are plenty of anxious moments in this story when Darcy is thrown into Elizabeth’s company again. Soon he discovers her feelings have changed toward him, but as he is engaged to Anne he cannot pursue her now! He is quite tormented about it, but he is a man of honor.
I thought it was fun having Anne Elliot and Captain Wentworth in this story! I especially liked Captain Wentworth! Darcy is not happy with Wentworth being around, not when the Captain appears to be courting Elizabeth! But they set aside those differences when Wickham and Lydia elope, and work together to go after Wickham. (I really enjoyed that!!)
My one complaint is that I would have like to see more interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth. I missed the bantering that Darcy and Elizabeth are known for. Elizabeth was always so subdued when they were together. So much so, Georgiana thought Elizabeth was shy.
All-in-all I really enjoyed The Subsequent Proposal! And no worries, Darcy and Elizabeth do have their happily ever after! I would recommend this to any Jane Austen retelling fan!
Disclaimer: I was given a paperback copy of the book for my honest review.
October 21, 2018
Definitely one of my favorite JAFF (Jane Austen Fan Fiction) reads. This very clever rewrite of both Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion has Mr. Darcy meet Ann Elliot shortly after being severely refused by Elizabeth Bennet. Ann has, of course, been persuaded to turn down Captain Wentworth's proposal years before. When Mr. Darcy realizes what a great friend Ann can be to Georgiana, and that the two of them are both suffering broken hearts, he suggests a marriage of friendship and companionship. Thus, Darcy and Ann become engaged.
In the meantime, Elizabeth meets Captain Wentworth, and he begins pursuing her, knowing he cannot have the love of his life, Ann. Elizabeth knows she will never love another after losing Mr. Darcy, so appears to be very receptive to the Captain.
In a sense this becomes a little bit of a drawing room farce, as the four major players collide, and each appears to be thwarted in their attempts to find true love. Amidst this craziness, Darcy appears to be the most frustrated as he finds his efforts more and more ineffective.
I found this to be such a clever combining of the two stories, and it was quite amusing. I even believe some Austen purists could find this tale amusing.
In the meantime, Elizabeth meets Captain Wentworth, and he begins pursuing her, knowing he cannot have the love of his life, Ann. Elizabeth knows she will never love another after losing Mr. Darcy, so appears to be very receptive to the Captain.
In a sense this becomes a little bit of a drawing room farce, as the four major players collide, and each appears to be thwarted in their attempts to find true love. Amidst this craziness, Darcy appears to be the most frustrated as he finds his efforts more and more ineffective.
I found this to be such a clever combining of the two stories, and it was quite amusing. I even believe some Austen purists could find this tale amusing.
December 31, 2014
Bravo! Very clever and unique. Loved how seamlessly she wove Pride & Prejudice and Persuasion together. I would like to read the same story again but told from Captain Wentworth's perspective.
Book opening - "There is a rose that grows in a secluded garden, beginning life as a small, ungainly yellow rosebud, tentatively tinged with hints of orange. Yet, as it blooms, the tones of jealousy slowly lose ground before the vibrant red of love everlasting as it spreads into the petals, until they open fully into a gloriously perfect fire-rose. By happy coincidence, this is precisely what this story is about!"
Book opening - "There is a rose that grows in a secluded garden, beginning life as a small, ungainly yellow rosebud, tentatively tinged with hints of orange. Yet, as it blooms, the tones of jealousy slowly lose ground before the vibrant red of love everlasting as it spreads into the petals, until they open fully into a gloriously perfect fire-rose. By happy coincidence, this is precisely what this story is about!"
November 5, 2015
and The Subsequent Proposal
The beginning of this story had me in a turmoil of thoughts. Reading joyfully through the chapter sort of enjoying the discussion between Anne Elliot and at the beginning an unknown male, about lost it when she finally agrees to marry him and speaks his name. I just about stopped reading, but continued hoping that the author had an escape clause written for these two forlorn people. Neither could offer their love and heart which belonged to two other lost lovers. Joana did a fine job writing our lovers into the right marriage for love, not convenience.
The beginning of this story had me in a turmoil of thoughts. Reading joyfully through the chapter sort of enjoying the discussion between Anne Elliot and at the beginning an unknown male, about lost it when she finally agrees to marry him and speaks his name. I just about stopped reading, but continued hoping that the author had an escape clause written for these two forlorn people. Neither could offer their love and heart which belonged to two other lost lovers. Joana did a fine job writing our lovers into the right marriage for love, not convenience.
April 8, 2020
4.5 stars. Another great one by Joana Starnes! I really enjoyed seeing things from Darcy's POV. He really got himself in a pickle in this one. This story illustrates how the lack of open communication which was customary in those days really makes a difficult situation so much worse. Of course, as readers, we knew somehow things would untangle and work themselves out, it was fun to see how it all came to pass and without the characters veering far from the normal strictures of the society they lived. Love the mash up of Persuasion and Pride and Prejudice. The only thing better than a book with Darcy as our heroine is having Darcy and Captain Wentworth together!
September 7, 2023
Shakespeareanesque
Shakespearenesque Pride and Prejudice variation. Suitors swapping. It was quite delightful. I really enjoyed it. I enjoyed it so much that I had read it again when the Audible version was released.
I hope more titles by this author are released soon on Audible.
Shakespearenesque Pride and Prejudice variation. Suitors swapping. It was quite delightful. I really enjoyed it. I enjoyed it so much that I had read it again when the Audible version was released.
I hope more titles by this author are released soon on Audible.
September 23, 2019
A good story with angst and many, many details, refreshingly told from Darcy’s perspective.
Don’t worry, pearl-clutchers, you won’t lose your virtue reading this one - but you may need to fan yourself as you read.
Don’t worry, pearl-clutchers, you won’t lose your virtue reading this one - but you may need to fan yourself as you read.
September 15, 2015
What shall we do when Elizabeth is paired with the good Captain Wentworth as Darcy finds companionship in Anne Elliot? I'm excessively diverted!
September 5, 2021
I found myself enjoying this even more the second read time around.
October 30, 2019
There are so many things that I liked about this story. The author's use of words reel me in every time. Her style is so immersive and rich and just draws you in. The narrative is from the point of view of the hero rather than the heroine. It begins after Elizabeth's refusal of Darcy, where he finds another lost soul in a similar situation who is recovering from a lost love. If they can't be with the one they love, then why not be satisfied with the one you are with. That is an excellent plan unless you realize that you could be with the one that you love - if only. The story follows Darcy's internal and external struggle to be with Elizabeth while technically he is already engaged. The story does work out to everyone's satisfaction with lots of glowing, happy faces.
All that being said, I struggled at times with Darcy's internal struggle as there was a lot of it!
All that being said, I struggled at times with Darcy's internal struggle as there was a lot of it!
June 11, 2019
This was quite the intriguing and original Austen variation in which Mr. Darcy is engaged to Anne Elliot while Elizabeth Bennet is being pursued by Captain Wentworth. The two men obviously do not mesh well, given that each one is committed (or soon will be) to the other's true love.
The most satisfying part of this novel happens fairly early on when news of Lydia's planned "elopement" (in letter form to Kitty) with Wickham is revealed, and both Mr. Darcy and Captain Wentworth travel separately to Brighton where they catch Wickham the night before they leave. Wentworth, for Elizabeth's honor (which Darcy can't claim as he is engaged to Anne), challenges Wickham to a duel, and the events that occur there are both very surprising and quite satisfying!!
The untangling of these "romances" so that each couple is set correctly again is both intriguing and quite compelling. It's a novel full of angst, mostly written from Darcy's POV, but of course, we end up with the usual HEA common to Austen variations and continuations. Very well-written and quite believable.
The most satisfying part of this novel happens fairly early on when news of Lydia's planned "elopement" (in letter form to Kitty) with Wickham is revealed, and both Mr. Darcy and Captain Wentworth travel separately to Brighton where they catch Wickham the night before they leave. Wentworth, for Elizabeth's honor (which Darcy can't claim as he is engaged to Anne), challenges Wickham to a duel, and the events that occur there are both very surprising and quite satisfying!!
The untangling of these "romances" so that each couple is set correctly again is both intriguing and quite compelling. It's a novel full of angst, mostly written from Darcy's POV, but of course, we end up with the usual HEA common to Austen variations and continuations. Very well-written and quite believable.
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