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Doubt Not, Cousin: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
Fitzwilliam Darcy. Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam.
Two cousins, closer than brothers.
One finds love despite his inner demons; the other resists love because of them. Elizabeth Bennet. Kitty Bennet.
Two sisters, strengthened by adversity.
One willingly yields to love; the other pridefully misinterprets it. An epic saga steeped in intrigue and gift-wrapped in romance, Doubt Not, Cousin chronicles the trials and tribulations of three extraordinary families during England’s Regency era. … But who is the girl with the violet eyes? **This book contains some violence and a self-harm, none of which involves much-loved characters.**
Two cousins, closer than brothers.
One finds love despite his inner demons; the other resists love because of them. Elizabeth Bennet. Kitty Bennet.
Two sisters, strengthened by adversity.
One willingly yields to love; the other pridefully misinterprets it. An epic saga steeped in intrigue and gift-wrapped in romance, Doubt Not, Cousin chronicles the trials and tribulations of three extraordinary families during England’s Regency era. … But who is the girl with the violet eyes? **This book contains some violence and a self-harm, none of which involves much-loved characters.**
452 pages, Paperback
Published July 11, 2023
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About the author
Barry S. Richman
4 books43 followersBarry S. Richman is a military veteran whose work explores character, restraint, and moral consequence within the Regency world of Jane Austen. His lifelong engagement with Pride and Prejudice began unexpectedly in 2003, while recuperating at home after a routine medical procedure. What began as a single rereading soon became a sustained immersion; he has yet to put Austen’s world down.
Over the next two decades, Richman read thousands of Pride and Prejudice variations, developing a deep familiarity with the canon and its many interpretive traditions. His wife—whom he fondly calls his own “Jane Bennet”—watched him finish novels at a remarkable pace and eventually suggested that he write one himself. For years, he dismissed the idea, citing time, work, and responsibility. Circumstances, however, had other plans.
During the upheaval of the COVID pandemic, Richman and his wife made a decisive change in direction, restructuring their lives and long-term plans. The period proved formative, sharpening his focus on endurance, adaptation, and the quiet consequences of disruption—concerns that would come to shape his work.
Writing became both discipline and refuge. Richman began asking the questions that had long preoccupied him as a reader: What if the canon bent differently? What happens before the moment Austen shows us? What is owed, and what is endured, in silence?
From those questions emerged a sustained engagement with Austen’s world, approached not as pastiche but as serious historical and moral inquiry. Richman’s work focuses on what precedes the familiar moments of the canon, and on the private reckonings that shape character long before they are seen.
Barry S. Richman divides his time between his beloved abla’s home in Florida and his retirement home in southwestern Turkey, with his wife of more than thirty years. Together, they continue to build a life shaped by curiosity, movement, and the enduring power of Austen’s world.
Over the next two decades, Richman read thousands of Pride and Prejudice variations, developing a deep familiarity with the canon and its many interpretive traditions. His wife—whom he fondly calls his own “Jane Bennet”—watched him finish novels at a remarkable pace and eventually suggested that he write one himself. For years, he dismissed the idea, citing time, work, and responsibility. Circumstances, however, had other plans.
During the upheaval of the COVID pandemic, Richman and his wife made a decisive change in direction, restructuring their lives and long-term plans. The period proved formative, sharpening his focus on endurance, adaptation, and the quiet consequences of disruption—concerns that would come to shape his work.
Writing became both discipline and refuge. Richman began asking the questions that had long preoccupied him as a reader: What if the canon bent differently? What happens before the moment Austen shows us? What is owed, and what is endured, in silence?
From those questions emerged a sustained engagement with Austen’s world, approached not as pastiche but as serious historical and moral inquiry. Richman’s work focuses on what precedes the familiar moments of the canon, and on the private reckonings that shape character long before they are seen.
Barry S. Richman divides his time between his beloved abla’s home in Florida and his retirement home in southwestern Turkey, with his wife of more than thirty years. Together, they continue to build a life shaped by curiosity, movement, and the enduring power of Austen’s world.
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July 13, 2023
“If you doubt you can accomplish something, then you can’t accomplish it. You have to have confidence in your ability, and then be tough enough to follow through.” –Rosalynn Carter
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: M: Mature and not to be ignored. Violence, torture, murder [high body count], military actions, and strategic planning. This is not a fluffy sweet romance. It is a hard and gritty story that you cannot walk away from.
>>Angst Level: medium-to-high at times, tempered with humor and tenderness behind a steel fist to the gut.
>>Source: I received a Promotional Copy from the publisher and volunteered to leave a review offering my thoughts and opinions. ICNPID [I could not put it down… 5+Stars]
>>Trope: [1] AU: Alternate Universe where things are very different. [2] A reduced list of canon characters and surprisingly, I did not miss them.
“Dubium sapientiae initium. (Doubt is the origin of wisdom.)” –Rene Descartes, Meditations on First Philosophy
I only wanted to peek at the prologue. I meant to glance and see how the story started. It was not my intent to start reading this right away. I mean, how gripping could this be? Seriously? It was written by a man, no offense intended. How different could his perspective be? Oh, My-Gosh! His story gripped me by the throat and did not let go until the very end. This was not fluff and stuff. The evil machinations were horrid, vile, and shocking to say the least. I was horrified by the actions of the villains.
Talk about an alternate universe. This was not anything like canon and yet, it was more. The Bennet family was different but not in a bad way. There were secrets, secrets within secrets, and more secrets to be discovered that would shock and horrify. It took me a while to get accustomed to the writing style but it soon became interesting to follow the massive planning of this story. Cover Art: The picture choice for the Colonel was spot on. If he looks scary… it’s because he was. I would not want to be on his bad side. Nope, nada, no way. One does not walk away from an encounter with our dear Colonel.
I don’t know how to review this and do it justice. I have to say, if you are brave enough, read it. It was brilliant in so many ways. It was shocking to the senses and it will make you think. Whew! I highly recommend this story.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: M: Mature and not to be ignored. Violence, torture, murder [high body count], military actions, and strategic planning. This is not a fluffy sweet romance. It is a hard and gritty story that you cannot walk away from.
>>Angst Level: medium-to-high at times, tempered with humor and tenderness behind a steel fist to the gut.
>>Source: I received a Promotional Copy from the publisher and volunteered to leave a review offering my thoughts and opinions. ICNPID [I could not put it down… 5+Stars]
>>Trope: [1] AU: Alternate Universe where things are very different. [2] A reduced list of canon characters and surprisingly, I did not miss them.
“Dubium sapientiae initium. (Doubt is the origin of wisdom.)” –Rene Descartes, Meditations on First Philosophy
I only wanted to peek at the prologue. I meant to glance and see how the story started. It was not my intent to start reading this right away. I mean, how gripping could this be? Seriously? It was written by a man, no offense intended. How different could his perspective be? Oh, My-Gosh! His story gripped me by the throat and did not let go until the very end. This was not fluff and stuff. The evil machinations were horrid, vile, and shocking to say the least. I was horrified by the actions of the villains.
Talk about an alternate universe. This was not anything like canon and yet, it was more. The Bennet family was different but not in a bad way. There were secrets, secrets within secrets, and more secrets to be discovered that would shock and horrify. It took me a while to get accustomed to the writing style but it soon became interesting to follow the massive planning of this story. Cover Art: The picture choice for the Colonel was spot on. If he looks scary… it’s because he was. I would not want to be on his bad side. Nope, nada, no way. One does not walk away from an encounter with our dear Colonel.
I don’t know how to review this and do it justice. I have to say, if you are brave enough, read it. It was brilliant in so many ways. It was shocking to the senses and it will make you think. Whew! I highly recommend this story.
July 10, 2023
The opening sets the stage of nefarious plans built on greed and despicable characters. Violent scenes are not detailed, more just alluded to.
Richard Fitzwilliam seems to be the main push of the story, but it gets filled out later by canon P&P characters and plenty of new ones. Think of Richard of canon, with easy going manners, affable, etc. Now think the exact opposite! (Like Jack Reacher on steroids)
When Darcy and Richard end up spending time together at Pemberley it is a major fork in the road for these two blood-cousins. A relationship forged because of and in spite of their individual idiosyncrasies. 'Doubt not' becomes their battle cry, their prayer and reaffirmation of their place in the world they exist in.
The author creates an AU built up by alternate backstories and they have an impact on how the story plays out. Every family is affected.
This is a dark story, with hope and HEA by the end.
The writing is very intricate. At times the author hides so much in -hinted at- type language, the reader is compelled to keep reading, the only way to get answers is to reach the end. It is very compelling.
Again, some answers are only hinted at and never explicitly answered. This is definitely a show not tell story.
The subject matter makes it heavy going and I am not sure I would reread it, but I can most assuredly recommend this book.
It is a refreshing take on Jaff with its very strongly male driven aspect, POV, and drive.
4.5*
Richard Fitzwilliam seems to be the main push of the story, but it gets filled out later by canon P&P characters and plenty of new ones. Think of Richard of canon, with easy going manners, affable, etc. Now think the exact opposite! (Like Jack Reacher on steroids)
When Darcy and Richard end up spending time together at Pemberley it is a major fork in the road for these two blood-cousins. A relationship forged because of and in spite of their individual idiosyncrasies. 'Doubt not' becomes their battle cry, their prayer and reaffirmation of their place in the world they exist in.
The author creates an AU built up by alternate backstories and they have an impact on how the story plays out. Every family is affected.
This is a dark story, with hope and HEA by the end.
The writing is very intricate. At times the author hides so much in -hinted at- type language, the reader is compelled to keep reading, the only way to get answers is to reach the end. It is very compelling.
Again, some answers are only hinted at and never explicitly answered. This is definitely a show not tell story.
The subject matter makes it heavy going and I am not sure I would reread it, but I can most assuredly recommend this book.
It is a refreshing take on Jaff with its very strongly male driven aspect, POV, and drive.
4.5*
October 7, 2024
Mystery, Suspense, Angst, Violence*
Right from the beginning, Barry Richman’s debut novel captured my senses and held me in its grip, leaving me breathless with anticipation. In this alternate universe, Pride and Prejudice variation, the renowned characters of Thomas Bennet, the (fan-fictional) Lord Henry Fitzwilliam Earl of Matlock, Reginald Hurst, and cousins Richard Fitzwilliam and Fitzwilliam Darcy take centre stage. Supported by a cast of well-crafted characters, both from canon and non-canon sources, and including a host of dedicated servants, this intricately plotted book offers a captivating blend of mystery, suspense, angst and, at times, shocking brutality and torture.
As evidenced by the cover and title, the book eventually focuses on the two cousins and their unbreakable bond formed from childhood, but first there is a generous helping of their families’ pre-birth history. The book opens with a captivating prologue and opening chapters that brilliantly lay the foundation for a suspenseful and engrossing plot, culminating with ‘Captain’ Thomas Bennet saving the life of a young girl with violet eyes who plays a key role throughout the novel, even though she only appears on page a few times. This act will unknowingly connect him to a family, and other meaningful characters, whose influence and presence will shape significant events in his own life and that of his future family.
A tragedy shakes the future Bennet family, leaving behind only three daughters. This heartbreaking turn of events prompts the almost estranged Bennet couple to reassess their marriage and transform it into a model relationship characterized by respect, esteem, and love. United in their grief, they assume the responsibility of raising their remaining beautiful daughters, fostering an environment of guidance, support, and strength.
One of the standout characters, Richard Fitzwilliam, is born with a genetic disorder that will profoundly impact not only his life but also the lives of many others. I was completely engaged in his childhood as he adapted to and dealt with his unique disorder and the relationships he formed with those who were engaged to aid in his education and well-being. He will eventually become a decorated hero from the Peninsular Campaign. Revered as a leader and strategist, he possesses an additional facet—an avenger's spirit. Unafraid to mete out his own form of justice, Fitzwilliam’s actions often involve brutality, seeking retribution for his wronged family members.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has never healed from the death of his parents, especially his mother. This reveals him as the reticent man we know from Austen’s original novel and thousands of variations. However, in this portrayal, Darcy’s sorrow at his losses moved me even more deeply. The author skillfully interweaves poignant moments and memories from his life, eliciting my tears and empathy as a reader. I found myself crying alongside him as he exposed his inner demons, aided by a non-canon woman who was a close friend to his mother.
Kitty Bennet survived the illness that plagued Meryton when she was a girl, but it left her with a disability. Assisted by her two remaining older sisters, and a determination to live a positive life, her parents take steps to educate her and provide the tools she requires to succeed, giving her the strength to endure and ultimately find happiness.
Another standout character is Reginald Hurst. His character is truly transformed from the portrayal to which JAFF readers are more accustomed. Louisa’s personality is also quite different, as there is no Caroline to influence matters. While he does take an interest in Jane, Charles Bingley only plays a minor role by bringing many characters together by leasing Netherfield.
I felt that this was predominantly a male-centered storyline, however, Mr. Richman doesn’t exclude the female characters. The depth of emotion displayed by all these intelligent and brave men and women, as well as their interactions, adds an extra layer to the narrative that tugs at the reader’s heartstrings. Interestingly enough, all of my personal tear-inducing moments were provided by Darcy.
The writing is excellent, providing the reader with a perfect mix of narrative and meaningful dialogue. For readers who enjoy the romance of Pride and Prejudice, he ensured the multiple love stories were covered—with heartfelt sincerity and not excessively overdone. Beloved characters are portrayed as strong and responsible, while the antagonistic figures are clearly depicted as villainous, creating a stark contrast between good and evil.
This book is a must-read for JAFF readers seeking a captivating journey through an alternate reality. Despite the violence, I’ll be reading this book multiple times, I am sure. It’s just that good. Hoping there will be one, I look forward to the audiobook. Well done, Mr. Richman! A brilliant debut, and I definitely look forward to future releases.
I received a promotional copy of this book from the publisher with no promise of a review, but I am happy to give my honest one for this outstanding book. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
*Trigger warnings:
- mature, but non-sexual content;
- violence, at times extreme with brutal violence including torture;
- suicide, with some description.
January 30-31, 2024 - Audiobook
Excellent narration and performance by Samuel James, a new-to-me narrator. He brought everything he needed to bring to this emotionally-charged story. I would certainly like to see him do more JAFF. He’d likely be an auto buy for me.
March 7, 2024 - Audiobook 2nd listen. This is definitely going to be a book I come back to time and time again. The story and narration are outstanding.
October 5-6, 2024 - Audiobook 3rd listen.
Right from the beginning, Barry Richman’s debut novel captured my senses and held me in its grip, leaving me breathless with anticipation. In this alternate universe, Pride and Prejudice variation, the renowned characters of Thomas Bennet, the (fan-fictional) Lord Henry Fitzwilliam Earl of Matlock, Reginald Hurst, and cousins Richard Fitzwilliam and Fitzwilliam Darcy take centre stage. Supported by a cast of well-crafted characters, both from canon and non-canon sources, and including a host of dedicated servants, this intricately plotted book offers a captivating blend of mystery, suspense, angst and, at times, shocking brutality and torture.
As evidenced by the cover and title, the book eventually focuses on the two cousins and their unbreakable bond formed from childhood, but first there is a generous helping of their families’ pre-birth history. The book opens with a captivating prologue and opening chapters that brilliantly lay the foundation for a suspenseful and engrossing plot, culminating with ‘Captain’ Thomas Bennet saving the life of a young girl with violet eyes who plays a key role throughout the novel, even though she only appears on page a few times. This act will unknowingly connect him to a family, and other meaningful characters, whose influence and presence will shape significant events in his own life and that of his future family.
A tragedy shakes the future Bennet family, leaving behind only three daughters. This heartbreaking turn of events prompts the almost estranged Bennet couple to reassess their marriage and transform it into a model relationship characterized by respect, esteem, and love. United in their grief, they assume the responsibility of raising their remaining beautiful daughters, fostering an environment of guidance, support, and strength.
One of the standout characters, Richard Fitzwilliam, is born with a genetic disorder that will profoundly impact not only his life but also the lives of many others. I was completely engaged in his childhood as he adapted to and dealt with his unique disorder and the relationships he formed with those who were engaged to aid in his education and well-being. He will eventually become a decorated hero from the Peninsular Campaign. Revered as a leader and strategist, he possesses an additional facet—an avenger's spirit. Unafraid to mete out his own form of justice, Fitzwilliam’s actions often involve brutality, seeking retribution for his wronged family members.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has never healed from the death of his parents, especially his mother. This reveals him as the reticent man we know from Austen’s original novel and thousands of variations. However, in this portrayal, Darcy’s sorrow at his losses moved me even more deeply. The author skillfully interweaves poignant moments and memories from his life, eliciting my tears and empathy as a reader. I found myself crying alongside him as he exposed his inner demons, aided by a non-canon woman who was a close friend to his mother.
Kitty Bennet survived the illness that plagued Meryton when she was a girl, but it left her with a disability. Assisted by her two remaining older sisters, and a determination to live a positive life, her parents take steps to educate her and provide the tools she requires to succeed, giving her the strength to endure and ultimately find happiness.
Another standout character is Reginald Hurst. His character is truly transformed from the portrayal to which JAFF readers are more accustomed. Louisa’s personality is also quite different, as there is no Caroline to influence matters. While he does take an interest in Jane, Charles Bingley only plays a minor role by bringing many characters together by leasing Netherfield.
I felt that this was predominantly a male-centered storyline, however, Mr. Richman doesn’t exclude the female characters. The depth of emotion displayed by all these intelligent and brave men and women, as well as their interactions, adds an extra layer to the narrative that tugs at the reader’s heartstrings. Interestingly enough, all of my personal tear-inducing moments were provided by Darcy.
The writing is excellent, providing the reader with a perfect mix of narrative and meaningful dialogue. For readers who enjoy the romance of Pride and Prejudice, he ensured the multiple love stories were covered—with heartfelt sincerity and not excessively overdone. Beloved characters are portrayed as strong and responsible, while the antagonistic figures are clearly depicted as villainous, creating a stark contrast between good and evil.
This book is a must-read for JAFF readers seeking a captivating journey through an alternate reality. Despite the violence, I’ll be reading this book multiple times, I am sure. It’s just that good. Hoping there will be one, I look forward to the audiobook. Well done, Mr. Richman! A brilliant debut, and I definitely look forward to future releases.
I received a promotional copy of this book from the publisher with no promise of a review, but I am happy to give my honest one for this outstanding book. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
*Trigger warnings:
- mature, but non-sexual content;
- violence, at times extreme with brutal violence including torture;
- suicide, with some description.
January 30-31, 2024 - Audiobook
Excellent narration and performance by Samuel James, a new-to-me narrator. He brought everything he needed to bring to this emotionally-charged story. I would certainly like to see him do more JAFF. He’d likely be an auto buy for me.
March 7, 2024 - Audiobook 2nd listen. This is definitely going to be a book I come back to time and time again. The story and narration are outstanding.
October 5-6, 2024 - Audiobook 3rd listen.
July 14, 2023
Unputdownable!
This epic mystery kept me captivated from start to finish, and I loved the distinctly masculine and unrepentant, gritty voice of this new author. It was beautifully written and a deliciously emotional ride.
Doubt Not, Cousin has complex plot that kept me guessing to the end, introducing well developed new characters, and deepening our understanding of the originals with the colonel and Mr Darcy at the centre of attention.
I loved this rendition of the colonel, his love story and the relationship between the cousins. He was like an entire military regiment in one man, yet I absolutely adored him. How could I not with his heartbreaking back story...
Kitty was another character who was allowed to shine in this book. The Bennets suffered but emerged through their tragedy with strength.
Yet several of the secondary characters are prominent, for good or bad. Hurst impressed while Lewis the Bourgh was a piece of something... I do enjoy a few characters to loathe and this book delivered on that account. I shall not elaborate because I don't want to spoil your read.
Added to my favourite list and my reread pile. I heartily recommend this book!
PS: Loved the cover. The image of the cousins are spot on.
This epic mystery kept me captivated from start to finish, and I loved the distinctly masculine and unrepentant, gritty voice of this new author. It was beautifully written and a deliciously emotional ride.
Doubt Not, Cousin has complex plot that kept me guessing to the end, introducing well developed new characters, and deepening our understanding of the originals with the colonel and Mr Darcy at the centre of attention.
I loved this rendition of the colonel, his love story and the relationship between the cousins. He was like an entire military regiment in one man, yet I absolutely adored him. How could I not with his heartbreaking back story...
Kitty was another character who was allowed to shine in this book. The Bennets suffered but emerged through their tragedy with strength.
Yet several of the secondary characters are prominent, for good or bad. Hurst impressed while Lewis the Bourgh was a piece of something... I do enjoy a few characters to loathe and this book delivered on that account. I shall not elaborate because I don't want to spoil your read.
Added to my favourite list and my reread pile. I heartily recommend this book!
PS: Loved the cover. The image of the cousins are spot on.
July 18, 2023
The story description is brief compared to several very long and detailed reviews.
This is a story for which I wanted a list of characters with details about who they were, how they might be related (through blood or position in society), etc. With this long story I struggled at times to remember all that and did not take the time to go back in the story to search that information out.
As one review mentioned Darcy's and Elizabeth's relationship does not come into play until about half way through the story. And I don't have to say that Darcy's relationship with his cousin, Richard, played a role throughout the story.
We do read much about Darcy and his love for his mother and even how her ghost seems to appear in several scenes. The Bennets have a different story here. Influenza takes the lives of two of the daughters and leaves one with a disability. I have to say that I enjoyed the latter one's story and also how the author researched that disability and gave us some of its history. I enjoyed also that this usually minor sister has her own romance and how that connection was so immediate...one of the enjoyable threads.
There is a mystery throughout the story and every once in a while we read how various suspects are eliminated. Wickham plays a major role but not that of canon, at all.
Bennet is a Captain in the secret service, whose role begins in this story long before he has a family. Reginald Hurst also plays a major role. He and Louisa are not married as the book begins.
There is an epilogue. I really feel that I need to go back and reread the story. Perhaps a better outline in the story description would have allowed me to know what I was looking to happen.
As others have warned there are scenes which might put some off...not of the sexual variety. The latter was only hinted at in various places.
This is a story for which I wanted a list of characters with details about who they were, how they might be related (through blood or position in society), etc. With this long story I struggled at times to remember all that and did not take the time to go back in the story to search that information out.
As one review mentioned Darcy's and Elizabeth's relationship does not come into play until about half way through the story. And I don't have to say that Darcy's relationship with his cousin, Richard, played a role throughout the story.
We do read much about Darcy and his love for his mother and even how her ghost seems to appear in several scenes. The Bennets have a different story here. Influenza takes the lives of two of the daughters and leaves one with a disability. I have to say that I enjoyed the latter one's story and also how the author researched that disability and gave us some of its history. I enjoyed also that this usually minor sister has her own romance and how that connection was so immediate...one of the enjoyable threads.
There is a mystery throughout the story and every once in a while we read how various suspects are eliminated. Wickham plays a major role but not that of canon, at all.
Bennet is a Captain in the secret service, whose role begins in this story long before he has a family. Reginald Hurst also plays a major role. He and Louisa are not married as the book begins.
There is an epilogue. I really feel that I need to go back and reread the story. Perhaps a better outline in the story description would have allowed me to know what I was looking to happen.
As others have warned there are scenes which might put some off...not of the sexual variety. The latter was only hinted at in various places.
July 13, 2023
Play by the rules but be ferocious. ~ Phil Knight
The prologue depicts a gambling hell where two men have lost badly. They must pay the house but how? Then, one man has an idea.
A duel follows — but was it just a simple duel? Could murder have been planned?
Quote from the book: One line jumped out and explained the past several minutes.
… should the baron fail, you will prevail. Lambert must die…
He stuffed the missive into his boot top and moved to the baron’s carcass. He searched that corpse and found a blood-covered letter in the peer’s inner pocket.
A child with violet eyes is targeted. Someone must hide her.
To be a warrior is to learn to be genuine every moment of your life. ~ Chogyam Trungpa
Time passes. The Fitzwilliams have twin sons. The second son is unusual from the beginning of his life. Eventually, his parents find a doctor and a teacher and his life progresses.
The Darcys have a son who will form an indestructible bond with the second twin. “Non est dubium, Cousin.” Doubt Not, Cousin becomes their axiom, shatter-proof, unyielding, everlasting.
The Bennet family also forms. Five daughters are born before tragedy strikes. Adversity of this type often will drive a couple apart and destroy all family ties. Fortunately, that is not the case with the Bennets. The ties become stronger; the family is united.
And, of course, in the fullness of time, these families meet, not knowing they are already bound together in the mystery that began in that gambling hell.
My style was impetuous, my defenses were impregnable, and I was ferocious. ~ Mike Tyson
I confess. I reached a point in the story where Richard Fitzwilliam was twelve years old, and the scene was so brutal that I very nearly gave this book a DNF (did not finish). However, I was engrossed in the plot and I moved bravely forward. Be warned: this book is not for the squeamish.
The mystery survives the entire book. The reader knows the girl with the violet eyes. We know what she calls herself and where she is. She is occasionally recognized but fortunately not by a villain. And by the end, we know the rest of her story.
Be steady and well-ordered in your life so that you can be fierce and original in your work. ~ Gustave Flaubert
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The prologue depicts a gambling hell where two men have lost badly. They must pay the house but how? Then, one man has an idea.
A duel follows — but was it just a simple duel? Could murder have been planned?
Quote from the book: One line jumped out and explained the past several minutes.
… should the baron fail, you will prevail. Lambert must die…
He stuffed the missive into his boot top and moved to the baron’s carcass. He searched that corpse and found a blood-covered letter in the peer’s inner pocket.
A child with violet eyes is targeted. Someone must hide her.
To be a warrior is to learn to be genuine every moment of your life. ~ Chogyam Trungpa
Time passes. The Fitzwilliams have twin sons. The second son is unusual from the beginning of his life. Eventually, his parents find a doctor and a teacher and his life progresses.
The Darcys have a son who will form an indestructible bond with the second twin. “Non est dubium, Cousin.” Doubt Not, Cousin becomes their axiom, shatter-proof, unyielding, everlasting.
The Bennet family also forms. Five daughters are born before tragedy strikes. Adversity of this type often will drive a couple apart and destroy all family ties. Fortunately, that is not the case with the Bennets. The ties become stronger; the family is united.
And, of course, in the fullness of time, these families meet, not knowing they are already bound together in the mystery that began in that gambling hell.
My style was impetuous, my defenses were impregnable, and I was ferocious. ~ Mike Tyson
I confess. I reached a point in the story where Richard Fitzwilliam was twelve years old, and the scene was so brutal that I very nearly gave this book a DNF (did not finish). However, I was engrossed in the plot and I moved bravely forward. Be warned: this book is not for the squeamish.
The mystery survives the entire book. The reader knows the girl with the violet eyes. We know what she calls herself and where she is. She is occasionally recognized but fortunately not by a villain. And by the end, we know the rest of her story.
Be steady and well-ordered in your life so that you can be fierce and original in your work. ~ Gustave Flaubert
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 30, 2023
I enjoyed parts of this book, including Hurst’s outsized role, the sophistication of the Bennets, and Kitty’s freedom of expression. The author also crafted some sublime sentences: “Bingley, awestruck, greeted none, staring at the Bennet harem like an Ottoman eunuch.”
However, as the book progressed, I found myself envying Caroline Bingley, who died in a carriage accident and was spared this overwrought melodrama.
The tale is smothered by its multitude of moving parts. Things I Don’t Know:
1. I can’t keep the family connections straight, especially when a certain eye color is pegged to three different families.
2. I long ago forgot or even cared about the duel that underpins the story—again, because there are too many different parts.
3. Though I loved Hurst, I was nonetheless confused with all the subplots he was in. In addition, in order to be a confederate of a youngish Mr Bennet, Hurst would have to have been at least 40 when he married a presumably young Louisa Bingley. Their courtship included a trip to a weird theatre, although I still don’t understand what made the performance unusual.
4. I don’t understand how Mrs Gardiner not only kept her story from her nieces for well over a decade, but she seemingly never had a frank discussion with her savior in all that time, either. We are told the Gardiners visit every Christmas, so one would assume there was ample opportunity for discussion.
5. Like Mrs Gardiner, Lady Catherine, aside from a horrifying vignette at the beginning, is dropped from the story until the end. Why even bother?
6. Richard is unrecognizable, born with a condition that affects one in every 125 million children. There is no way he would have survived a career in the army. In addition, we don’t get an explanation for his selective mutism, if that is indeed what he has. Most disturbing is his lack of conscience.
7. I don’t know who was squatting in an empty manor or how they related to any other characters. And I don’t care.
Things I Do Know:
1. Elizabeth is an insufferable prodigy: “Later, Miss Elizabeth extemporized on how physics applied to dancing. She simplified Newton’s Third Law to the opposing movements of a quadrille—each dancer’s lesser partner reacting equally and opposingly to their matched lead partner.” She goes on to increase Longbourn’s coffers before becoming her husband’s under steward: “Elizabeth has taken over the ledgers, investment strategies, and tenant management. She completes the work in less time than I ever could, and she has increased our profits to an unforeseen level.”
2. She and Darcy had no chemistry because she was a shrew to him until their engagement.
3. I’ve never read a book with such a fixation on chins:
“Then jabbed his chin toward the footmen….flicking his chin toward the stable door….gesturing toward the main house with his chin….pointed his chin to the left….flicked his chin toward the sitting-room door.”
4. Wut? “Darcy nodded lightly, fighting every impulse to taste the tips of her digits.”
5. Elizabeth couldn’t have played the Midnight Sonata. Though the sonata debuted in 1802, it was not called the Moonlight Sonata for at least 20 years.
6. The constant references to Bible verses and otherwise treacly piety are meaningless because,
Finally, OMG the Violence.
The disclaimer **This book contains some violence and self-harm, none of which involves much-loved characters.** does NOT do justice to the amount of punishment meted out to countless dozens of characters. Richard breaks more bones in this book than a turkey farmer in November, and does it with no remorse or self-reflection that maybe, maybe he went too far. Lady Catherine suffers greatly before she is discarded for most of the book. None of these compares to one of the last scenes in the book. A villain is disposed of, but not before undergoing HOURS of torture THAT SEVERAL MAIN CHARACTERS CALMLY LISTEN TO. Richard III died less painfully than this victim.
However, as the book progressed, I found myself envying Caroline Bingley, who died in a carriage accident and was spared this overwrought melodrama.
The tale is smothered by its multitude of moving parts. Things I Don’t Know:
1. I can’t keep the family connections straight, especially when a certain eye color is pegged to three different families.
2. I long ago forgot or even cared about the duel that underpins the story—again, because there are too many different parts.
3. Though I loved Hurst, I was nonetheless confused with all the subplots he was in. In addition, in order to be a confederate of a youngish Mr Bennet, Hurst would have to have been at least 40 when he married a presumably young Louisa Bingley. Their courtship included a trip to a weird theatre, although I still don’t understand what made the performance unusual.
4. I don’t understand how Mrs Gardiner not only kept her story from her nieces for well over a decade, but she seemingly never had a frank discussion with her savior in all that time, either. We are told the Gardiners visit every Christmas, so one would assume there was ample opportunity for discussion.
5. Like Mrs Gardiner, Lady Catherine, aside from a horrifying vignette at the beginning, is dropped from the story until the end. Why even bother?
6. Richard is unrecognizable, born with a condition that affects one in every 125 million children. There is no way he would have survived a career in the army. In addition, we don’t get an explanation for his selective mutism, if that is indeed what he has. Most disturbing is his lack of conscience.
7. I don’t know who was squatting in an empty manor or how they related to any other characters. And I don’t care.
Things I Do Know:
1. Elizabeth is an insufferable prodigy: “Later, Miss Elizabeth extemporized on how physics applied to dancing. She simplified Newton’s Third Law to the opposing movements of a quadrille—each dancer’s lesser partner reacting equally and opposingly to their matched lead partner.” She goes on to increase Longbourn’s coffers before becoming her husband’s under steward: “Elizabeth has taken over the ledgers, investment strategies, and tenant management. She completes the work in less time than I ever could, and she has increased our profits to an unforeseen level.”
2. She and Darcy had no chemistry because she was a shrew to him until their engagement.
3. I’ve never read a book with such a fixation on chins:
“Then jabbed his chin toward the footmen….flicking his chin toward the stable door….gesturing toward the main house with his chin….pointed his chin to the left….flicked his chin toward the sitting-room door.”
4. Wut? “Darcy nodded lightly, fighting every impulse to taste the tips of her digits.”
5. Elizabeth couldn’t have played the Midnight Sonata. Though the sonata debuted in 1802, it was not called the Moonlight Sonata for at least 20 years.
6. The constant references to Bible verses and otherwise treacly piety are meaningless because,
Finally, OMG the Violence.
The disclaimer **This book contains some violence and self-harm, none of which involves much-loved characters.** does NOT do justice to the amount of punishment meted out to countless dozens of characters. Richard breaks more bones in this book than a turkey farmer in November, and does it with no remorse or self-reflection that maybe, maybe he went too far. Lady Catherine suffers greatly before she is discarded for most of the book. None of these compares to one of the last scenes in the book. A villain is disposed of, but not before undergoing HOURS of torture THAT SEVERAL MAIN CHARACTERS CALMLY LISTEN TO. Richard III died less painfully than this victim.
July 13, 2023
First this is no ordinary Pride and Prejudice variation, this debut novel is also not your typical romance. It is a tale of unfailing loyalty of brotherhood and sisterhood. Pain, loss, love, kindness, protectiveness and revenge, this book has it all. The intrigue and mysteries of the characters are woven together over generations to give you the full reflection of how the deeds of the past can haunt the descendants of the future.
This story follows different characters paths from birth to adulthood and we get to see a prequel of stories that explain why certain key players act the way they do. Throughout the grand tale its the little scenes of love and pain that makes this story so special; Darcy with his mother, two young boys finding support only from each other, Mr Bennet when he meets the new Mrs Gardiner, Kitty and the Colonel’s instant understanding of each other, the growing love and respect between Darcy and Elizabeth. As well as some beautiful and funny scenes between the children and their parents that we rarely get to see in variations. There are some violent scenes in this book but I felt they were only included as was necessary to improve our understanding of the characters. You can be reassured that no main characters are maliciously hurt in this book.
Barry’s sense of humour comes through clearly and lightens the heavy load of some of the story lines. The clever plots and dedication to research shows throughout the story and strengthens the picture as it flows through my mind when reading, like watching a film. This story grabbed hold of my head and my heart and didn’t let go! It stays rent free in my brain now. I won’t ever forget the journey of Colonel Fitzwilliam and Kitty, Darcy and Elizabeth, Mr Hurst and Mr Bennet. It’s an epic tale not to be missed! Also, if you enjoy an epilogue prepare to be blown away by how it all gets pulled together at the end.
I am eagerly awaiting Barry’s next offering in this genre! He will be a new favourite and one click author for me.
This story follows different characters paths from birth to adulthood and we get to see a prequel of stories that explain why certain key players act the way they do. Throughout the grand tale its the little scenes of love and pain that makes this story so special; Darcy with his mother, two young boys finding support only from each other, Mr Bennet when he meets the new Mrs Gardiner, Kitty and the Colonel’s instant understanding of each other, the growing love and respect between Darcy and Elizabeth. As well as some beautiful and funny scenes between the children and their parents that we rarely get to see in variations. There are some violent scenes in this book but I felt they were only included as was necessary to improve our understanding of the characters. You can be reassured that no main characters are maliciously hurt in this book.
Barry’s sense of humour comes through clearly and lightens the heavy load of some of the story lines. The clever plots and dedication to research shows throughout the story and strengthens the picture as it flows through my mind when reading, like watching a film. This story grabbed hold of my head and my heart and didn’t let go! It stays rent free in my brain now. I won’t ever forget the journey of Colonel Fitzwilliam and Kitty, Darcy and Elizabeth, Mr Hurst and Mr Bennet. It’s an epic tale not to be missed! Also, if you enjoy an epilogue prepare to be blown away by how it all gets pulled together at the end.
I am eagerly awaiting Barry’s next offering in this genre! He will be a new favourite and one click author for me.
March 4, 2024
the colonels part is of an avenging force
This may be a regency book but the plot is straight out of a spaghetti western. Many different bad men have entered the current history of the Bennets, the Darcys, the Fitzwilliams and some of their other relations. Imagine Clint Eastwood coming home from the napoleonic wars.
The second son begins to start throwing the trash out and in the end has his own HEA. Last 12 chapters are pretty typical except for the avenging angel bringing justice to the Wild West. Whoops I meant Regency era England.
This may be a regency book but the plot is straight out of a spaghetti western. Many different bad men have entered the current history of the Bennets, the Darcys, the Fitzwilliams and some of their other relations. Imagine Clint Eastwood coming home from the napoleonic wars.
The second son begins to start throwing the trash out and in the end has his own HEA. Last 12 chapters are pretty typical except for the avenging angel bringing justice to the Wild West. Whoops I meant Regency era England.
March 29, 2025
Re-Read: Still 5 Incredible Stars!! One of my favourites!
My Rating: 5 Incredible Stars!
“It is a sad tale. It ends happily, but grief paved the road.” (quote from the book)
This is an epic outside-the-box saga that is poignant, gut-wrenching, deeply moving and evocative. As the book description states, it is about the trials and tribulations of three families. Three families, and the friends and connections they make, as their lives unfold over the years. And who is the violet-eyed child and what is her connection to each of them? We, the reader, know, but their journey is long as they work to put the pieces of the puzzle together and find the villain(s) who have wreaked such havoc in their lives. There is no way I can succinctly explain this journey. It is to be experienced. Everyone will have different reactions. Read Marie’s excellent review for it captures the essence of the story very well.
‘Debts, deception and death.”
First and foremost, I was captivated by this saga. The unique and well-developed and well edited story line was fascinating on so many levels. I took my time and savoured every chapter…some more than others. It stayed with me through each day as I pondered what would come next. My emotions were so engaged and at times the writing of certain scenes brought tears to my eyes. I felt the pain and happiness of our beloved characters. I wasn’t ready for this book to end.
“He is Raguel, the angel of justice.” (quote from the book)
There was so much that I loved about this saga. It starts earlier than canon and provided a deeper dive into the Matlock family, including the Darcys, and their connections. There are unique genetic health issues that sculpt the characters of the Matlock heir and Richard, the spare. I was at times horrified and amazed watching them grow up. Richard is fierce and ferocious and metes out justice to those who have wronged his family. Fitzwilliam Darcy has his own personal demons to deal with after losing his mother at a young age. His father’s death is the nail in his own coffin in shaping the taciturn man we know from canon. His bond with his cousin, Richard, is powerful and unique.
“Jane was Kitty’s refuge…with Lizzy near, she felt protected.”
Thomas Bennet, before getting married, is given more depth and when he does eventually marry, the Bennet family is struck by tragedy…tragedy that makes them stronger, closer, and more loving. I loved each of them dearly. Kitty most of all, for she has a disability she must learn to live with. Jane and Elizabeth are her pillars of strength. I found this led to her being much more compassionate and understanding. Elizabeth has her own pride and prejudices to overcome before she can truly see what is right in front of her. Even Jane has been somewhat altered and doesn’t just settle for the norm. She has a powerful ally that wants her to succeed.
“Like his father, Reggie was intelligent and passionate about his future…”
Another intriguing change to canon is Reginald Hurst. He is developed brilliantly into a character many come to highly rely on and respect. Louisa Bingley is given more than her bracelets to entertain her. She is the perfect partner for Hurst. I could see a series of mysteries that the two of them solve in service to the Crown…hint…hint.
I also loved the original characters created that rounded out this novel so well. They added further dimension to the story.
So is there anything that I didn’t like? Not really. I had one quibble right at the beginning and found it popped out at me again later, ’seventeen’. I also wondered what happened with Lady Catherine. Nothing is ever mentioned at the end. Yes, there is violence and evil lurking within these pages but there is violence and evil lurking outside these pages too.
So ‘Doubt Not’, Reader, I highly recommend this unique and all-encompassing variation that is the debut novel of Mr. Richman. Bravo, Sir! I eagerly look forward to your next book!
I also wish to give credit to Janet Taylor for the amazing book jacket! Wonderful depictions of Darcy and the Colonel! I bought the paperback.
July 21, 2023
Beyond Wonderful!
5 easy stars for a book that was far too compelling to set down for any reason. Pathos without angst. Generations of families, and the loving acceptance of the differently abled. Believe me this story is fantastic in every way.
5 easy stars for a book that was far too compelling to set down for any reason. Pathos without angst. Generations of families, and the loving acceptance of the differently abled. Believe me this story is fantastic in every way.
July 14, 2023
Dark and compelling
Darker than the usual more light hearted Austenesque variations is this gripping tale of two young men and their journey through life. Very different from canon but I thoroughly enjoyed these versions of our friends and their adventures. I hope he continues to write new tales as I am intrigued to see what premises he comes up with next.
Darker than the usual more light hearted Austenesque variations is this gripping tale of two young men and their journey through life. Very different from canon but I thoroughly enjoyed these versions of our friends and their adventures. I hope he continues to write new tales as I am intrigued to see what premises he comes up with next.
October 22, 2023
An evil insidious plot sets in motion a chain of events to a tale that turns Jane Austen’s light comedy of manners into a deep, rich, and riveting family saga full of intrigue, action and romance. Debut author, Barry Richman’s Doubt Not, Cousin started out as an intriguing curiosity and turned into my desperate need to see how the story unfolded to the very end.
Doubt Not, Cousin is set in the Pride & Prejudice world. However, it takes the reader on an epic journey that begins a few decades before Austen’s tale with the generation before- a young Mr. Bennet, a young and alive George and Lady Anne Darcy, young Fitzwilliams, young Lady Catherine, and a shocking opener that promises the rest of the tale will vary from the very beginning so that what unfolded was an entirely new tale with familiar locations and names, the occasional twist on events or dialogue from the original P&P.
And. I. Didn’t. Mind. At. All.
My interest and emotions were grabbed from the start. This is a large cast with a many-threaded plot that screamed family saga rather than simple historical romance. I adore slow-build sagas that I can sense the tie-in off all the threads leading to a- or a few- momentous climax. And, most importantly, I enjoyed all the storylines and didn’t mind when it would shift to pick up the plot with another scene and perspective. I will admit that there are times when the plot might feel ponderous and slow going particularly during the introductory matters, but it was worth patiently waiting for it to get its feet under it and start moving out. The suspense woven throughout is cleverly done. The reader is aware of the plotter in the background, but is left figuratively biting nails to see if the good guys will figure it out in time.
While Darcy and Lizzy have starring roles, they share the lead with several others who have their own grand stories. I was delighted by each and every cast member from the original character Lady Thea, to the clever and capable Hursts and elder Bennets to the real star of the piece, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam who gets his own satisfying romance. Kudos to Mr. Richman for making a few characters diverse and different-abled.
So, if my gushing didn’t make matters clear, I loved Doubt Not, Cousin and happily recommend it to any and all whether familiar with Austen’s P&P or not who enjoy anything from historical sagas to sweet, but daring historical romances.
I rec’d an eARC from Meryton Press to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at Books of My Heart on Sept 4th
Doubt Not, Cousin is set in the Pride & Prejudice world. However, it takes the reader on an epic journey that begins a few decades before Austen’s tale with the generation before- a young Mr. Bennet, a young and alive George and Lady Anne Darcy, young Fitzwilliams, young Lady Catherine, and a shocking opener that promises the rest of the tale will vary from the very beginning so that what unfolded was an entirely new tale with familiar locations and names, the occasional twist on events or dialogue from the original P&P.
And. I. Didn’t. Mind. At. All.
My interest and emotions were grabbed from the start. This is a large cast with a many-threaded plot that screamed family saga rather than simple historical romance. I adore slow-build sagas that I can sense the tie-in off all the threads leading to a- or a few- momentous climax. And, most importantly, I enjoyed all the storylines and didn’t mind when it would shift to pick up the plot with another scene and perspective. I will admit that there are times when the plot might feel ponderous and slow going particularly during the introductory matters, but it was worth patiently waiting for it to get its feet under it and start moving out. The suspense woven throughout is cleverly done. The reader is aware of the plotter in the background, but is left figuratively biting nails to see if the good guys will figure it out in time.
While Darcy and Lizzy have starring roles, they share the lead with several others who have their own grand stories. I was delighted by each and every cast member from the original character Lady Thea, to the clever and capable Hursts and elder Bennets to the real star of the piece, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam who gets his own satisfying romance. Kudos to Mr. Richman for making a few characters diverse and different-abled.
So, if my gushing didn’t make matters clear, I loved Doubt Not, Cousin and happily recommend it to any and all whether familiar with Austen’s P&P or not who enjoy anything from historical sagas to sweet, but daring historical romances.
I rec’d an eARC from Meryton Press to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at Books of My Heart on Sept 4th
July 30, 2023
Unbelievably Great
Wow! Definitely buying and reading many times. What a fabulous plot! Twists, turns, character development.... Can't say enough about this wonderful story!!! Bravo!! Please write more!!!
Wow! Definitely buying and reading many times. What a fabulous plot! Twists, turns, character development.... Can't say enough about this wonderful story!!! Bravo!! Please write more!!!
August 15, 2023
Wow!
I have read many p&p stories and this is right up there with the best of them. I will be watching for the encore with great anticipation
I have read many p&p stories and this is right up there with the best of them. I will be watching for the encore with great anticipation
August 21, 2023
The very best
This is, bar none, the very best Pride and Prejudice variation that I have ever read, and I too have, like, Mr Richman, hundreds if not thousands. I highly recommend it.
While I loved that my least-liked characters from the original are not featured or barely mentioned, my very favourite thing is that the author crested his readers as having a modicum of intelligence. Thank
you, Mr Richman. Instead like many P&P authors who adhere to Aristotle's advice to tell them tell them tell them what you told them, he scatters seeds and hints and allusions that grow into a beautiful journey. Well done.
This is, bar none, the very best Pride and Prejudice variation that I have ever read, and I too have, like, Mr Richman, hundreds if not thousands. I highly recommend it.
While I loved that my least-liked characters from the original are not featured or barely mentioned, my very favourite thing is that the author crested his readers as having a modicum of intelligence. Thank
you, Mr Richman. Instead like many P&P authors who adhere to Aristotle's advice to tell them tell them tell them what you told them, he scatters seeds and hints and allusions that grow into a beautiful journey. Well done.
August 2, 2023
A Most Excellent Read!
Thank you Mr. Richman for producing such a fine P&P variation. I enjoyed the puzzle pieces of the many characters back stories and how their spirals entangle. Being a Team Richard supporter, I greatly appreciate how you wove his story and created a complex hero. I, also enjoyed Hurst as the complex character instead of the couch potato role stock character. Louisa is allowed to shine and be a smart woman. I would like to thank you for polishing this diamond by having it edited and proofread. I appreciate that you took the time and effort to give your readers a quality novel. I look forward to further endeavors! Well Done!
Thank you Mr. Richman for producing such a fine P&P variation. I enjoyed the puzzle pieces of the many characters back stories and how their spirals entangle. Being a Team Richard supporter, I greatly appreciate how you wove his story and created a complex hero. I, also enjoyed Hurst as the complex character instead of the couch potato role stock character. Louisa is allowed to shine and be a smart woman. I would like to thank you for polishing this diamond by having it edited and proofread. I appreciate that you took the time and effort to give your readers a quality novel. I look forward to further endeavors! Well Done!
July 14, 2023
The author is a talented writer, but I found the plot of this novel teetered between the extremely ridiculous and the extremely boring. I found the story held little entertainment value and I found myself praying for it to end already- not for me.
July 22, 2023
Great story!
I enjoyed the almost dark variation, the off the path variety style. It was a good story, well worth a second reading, too. What I didn't like, was the way Bingley was used, what happened to him in the end?. I didn't like how the author really didn't explain much about the first born twin and his illness. First he's spoiled, then he's crazy, then he has a bleeding disorder and suicidal. One minute, he's free to roam around and picks a private conference with his brother, next, he's locked up somewhere and harms himself. ???
I enjoyed the almost dark variation, the off the path variety style. It was a good story, well worth a second reading, too. What I didn't like, was the way Bingley was used, what happened to him in the end?. I didn't like how the author really didn't explain much about the first born twin and his illness. First he's spoiled, then he's crazy, then he has a bleeding disorder and suicidal. One minute, he's free to roam around and picks a private conference with his brother, next, he's locked up somewhere and harms himself. ???
July 28, 2023
Fantastic Variation
The author had a unique twist on the canon P&P. At the beginning, I thought I would need a road map to identify all the new and interesting characters, but I quickly sorted everything out. I particularly enjoyed that all the main players were connected by the past and present. Great first time published author, looking forward to many new books from Mr. Richman.
The author had a unique twist on the canon P&P. At the beginning, I thought I would need a road map to identify all the new and interesting characters, but I quickly sorted everything out. I particularly enjoyed that all the main players were connected by the past and present. Great first time published author, looking forward to many new books from Mr. Richman.
July 21, 2023
Decidedly different !
This complex, tough but rewarding read is not for the faint hearted JAFF fan! Offering a different, perhaps masculine perspective on Pride and Prejudice, it brings Colonel Fitzwilliam to the foreground of the story alongside Darcy, Elizabeth, Kitty and a very different Mr and Mrs Bennet. Taking no prisoners, the author demands much of the reader. This one enjoyed it immensely. Well done indeed Mr Richman. Keep writing,
This complex, tough but rewarding read is not for the faint hearted JAFF fan! Offering a different, perhaps masculine perspective on Pride and Prejudice, it brings Colonel Fitzwilliam to the foreground of the story alongside Darcy, Elizabeth, Kitty and a very different Mr and Mrs Bennet. Taking no prisoners, the author demands much of the reader. This one enjoyed it immensely. Well done indeed Mr Richman. Keep writing,
September 18, 2023
Fantastic
"Captain Fitzwilliam" leads this tale. A wonderful variation with new characters and a twist to the regulars. This variation is well written and is a completely different adaptation. No summary nor spoilers here. A great read! Pick thus one up.
"Captain Fitzwilliam" leads this tale. A wonderful variation with new characters and a twist to the regulars. This variation is well written and is a completely different adaptation. No summary nor spoilers here. A great read! Pick thus one up.
January 29, 2025
I am so happy that this writer started writing. I enjoyed this book a lot. It reminded me of Joe Pike novels. My only note for the author would be to develop his characters a bit more. The "good" men were all very similar. The women who were to be "admired" also were all very similar. I wish there was more to distinguish them from each other. The men were all brave and fiercely protective and the women had different accomplishment and behavior traits attributed to them but not in a way that truly made the characters come alive. I mention these things because I feel the author has real talent and could be more than a storyteller. I want him to try to breathe life into these people to make them shine so that the reader can really connect to what he is sharing through them. Love this first book and I hope there is more to follow.
Reread: Still love it. I would love a follow-up story with more intrigue!
Reread: Still love it. I would love a follow-up story with more intrigue!
July 18, 2023
Very different, and quite dark
Well crafted and well written, although the main plot was a wide ranging, long running conspiracy. The heroes were all brilliant, the women were all terribly clever and beautiful, and Col. Fitzwilliam was practically a super hero with a dark side. Not a book I will buy or read again, as I prefer less violent JAFF.
Well crafted and well written, although the main plot was a wide ranging, long running conspiracy. The heroes were all brilliant, the women were all terribly clever and beautiful, and Col. Fitzwilliam was practically a super hero with a dark side. Not a book I will buy or read again, as I prefer less violent JAFF.
September 22, 2023
satisfying JAFF
very satisfying. While the author gave different personalities to some of our cast I looked at it as not different but what they became with a different set of circumstances.
I look forward to more from this author. absolutely
very satisfying. While the author gave different personalities to some of our cast I looked at it as not different but what they became with a different set of circumstances.
I look forward to more from this author. absolutely
September 18, 2023
Most unique, hardest to put down re-telling ever!
I finished this novel in one weekend because I couldn’t stop reading! Such a different kind of story, bravo! The new characters add so much to this incredible web!
I finished this novel in one weekend because I couldn’t stop reading! Such a different kind of story, bravo! The new characters add so much to this incredible web!
July 22, 2023
For me this book did not get going until chapter 10.
But after that it took off.
I liked it despite some cruesome content .
It is certainly not Canon but very engaging and interesting.
Worth your time to read.
But after that it took off.
I liked it despite some cruesome content .
It is certainly not Canon but very engaging and interesting.
Worth your time to read.
September 1, 2023
Fabulous !
Full of intrigue and mystery with lots of action and romance
Full of intrigue and mystery with lots of action and romance
July 18, 2023
Excellent!
This is excellent and well worth the read. Some situations are handled to easily and villains mostly get handled off screen. I would like more references to the title (or more need for it), but overall it is great and the romances in the last third of the book are well done.
This is excellent and well worth the read. Some situations are handled to easily and villains mostly get handled off screen. I would like more references to the title (or more need for it), but overall it is great and the romances in the last third of the book are well done.
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July 24, 2023A wonderful story!
This is fairly long and a detailed story about the Bennet, Fitzwilliam, Darcy, and Cavendish families along with several of their other family members. It begins in the late 1700's when Mr Bennet is a young Captain in the Royal Secret Service, Lady Anne is still alive at Pemberley and Lady Catherine is suffering under her despicable husband who demanded both her and Lady Anne's dowry to marry her. All these families are interconnected and all have trials to survive. The most important is that of the twin sons born to Lord Matlock with birth injuries. Richard is the spare and has no feelings. He can be injured without feeling pain at all which can make him deadly. His older twin was born with hemophilia which isn't discovered until his late teens.
I miss our great evil characters of Caroline Bingley who isn't here at all, and we don't get much of Lady Catherine but when she's around its memorable!
My only problem is Lady Thea who is a Cavendish ( Devonshire) refers to her grandfather as the 4th Duke of Devonshire but its impossible because he lived from 1720-1764 and this is too early for him to be her grandfather. The 5th Duke is more reasonable - 1757-1806 and was married to Lady Georgiana Spencer who was Great Great Great Aunt of Elizabeth II and 4 times great aunt of Lady Diana Spencer who married Charles.
Otherwise its a wonderful story that I enjoyed spending several hours reading.
This is fairly long and a detailed story about the Bennet, Fitzwilliam, Darcy, and Cavendish families along with several of their other family members. It begins in the late 1700's when Mr Bennet is a young Captain in the Royal Secret Service, Lady Anne is still alive at Pemberley and Lady Catherine is suffering under her despicable husband who demanded both her and Lady Anne's dowry to marry her. All these families are interconnected and all have trials to survive. The most important is that of the twin sons born to Lord Matlock with birth injuries. Richard is the spare and has no feelings. He can be injured without feeling pain at all which can make him deadly. His older twin was born with hemophilia which isn't discovered until his late teens.
I miss our great evil characters of Caroline Bingley who isn't here at all, and we don't get much of Lady Catherine but when she's around its memorable!
My only problem is Lady Thea who is a Cavendish ( Devonshire) refers to her grandfather as the 4th Duke of Devonshire but its impossible because he lived from 1720-1764 and this is too early for him to be her grandfather. The 5th Duke is more reasonable - 1757-1806 and was married to Lady Georgiana Spencer who was Great Great Great Aunt of Elizabeth II and 4 times great aunt of Lady Diana Spencer who married Charles.
Otherwise its a wonderful story that I enjoyed spending several hours reading.
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