I wish I could have given this book 2.5 stars, but since I can't, I rounded down. If I'd felt strongly enough about it, I would have rated it three stars. As it is, I may rethink my rating and bump it up, who knows?
If one can get through the first seventy pages of this book, the rest of it isn't too bad. The writing style at the beginning of the book was odd, I couldn't get into it. The second half of the book was much stronger and much more cohesively written. It did seem as though the author tried to cram too much into the story; perhaps she had a page limit? I don't know, but plotlines got a little jumbled up because of this. The relationships among the captain and the ladies, the families of the ladies, the love between the Captain and Isabelle, it was all a bit of a mishmash.
At the beginning of the novel the reader is lead to believe that Isabelle is going to be more than a slave to Hezekiah Carter, a mistress perhaps? But once the reader is actually introduced to Hezekiah, we learn that he is a deeply faithful, albeit harsh and alienating towards Josiah, man who has remained faithful to his wife for thirty-some years.
Isabelle and Emilie's father is introduced at the beginning of the book, but then his character kind of falls by the wayside, as does the character of Mama Dell. The exit of Mama Dell was handled a bit unsatisfactorily. What did she have to do with the raising of Isabelle? What was Isabelle's childhood actually like? Those are questions that are alluded to now and then, but never really addressed.
The character of Josiah was also a bit strange at the beginning of the novel. He is completely barbarous to the ladies before and after they board the ship and acts insanely by tossing Isabelle's trunk and belongings around, but he's not really an antagonist, so what's with the crazy act?
And what of the random side story involving Viola and Andre? What a bizarre subplot. He follows the ship and then is killed? The point of that was? I understand that he was brutal to Viola, but I felt that that situation wasn't written with enough depth to be satisfactory. I actually felt that way about a good deal of the book. I enjoyed it, but I wished that there was more to it. If Y'Barbo had just spent a little more time on the backstories of the characters, written with a little more depth and really pulled the stories together more fluidly, this book would have been stupendous.