I'm going to use this as an overall review of the entire 4-parter that this story entails. For context:
Parts 1&2 - 5 stars
Parts 3&4 - 3 stars (even though I wanted to give it 2 stars.
This is becausePale Fallen Angel REALLY needs to be viewed as a whole, cause if I were to take Parts 3 & 4 just by themselves, I'd just tell you it's garbage and call it a day.
The first half of Pale Fallen Angel, quite frankly, is probably my absolute favourite VHD story thus far.....so good in fact I've read it technically 3 times and never got bored once. And I get so enthralled whenever there's even the slightest mention of "The Sacred Ancestor" or D's backstory, and in Part 2 there's A LOT that happens.
To it's (albeit very limited overall) credit, Parts 3&4 present even more on an astonishingly deep level into The Sacred Ancestor that I just never ever thought would be a proper thing that happened in this series so early on (when there's 30 books, I expect drips and drabs but here we got a feast).
Parts 1&2 totally understood the job description. A great cast of characters diverse enough and complicated enough that they end up complimenting each other really well. A fantastic rouges gallery of enemies that stretches the entire journey, an additional wild card foe that dramatically effects the group, amazing Frontier locations and probably the most amount of dialogue D's ever spoken across all the previous books combined. Truly great twists and turns, INCREDIBLE development of the unofficial overarching mystery behind VHD and a truly "Felloweship of the Ring moving into The Two Towers" style ending.
I couldn't wait to jump straight into the second half.
But to say it shat the bed royally, would be putting it lightly. Whereas Parts 1&2 had a clear focus and vision and felt so well thought out, Parts 3&4 are a complete mess from start to finish. Where it does find some purchase is in characters like Fisher Lagoon and the genuinely shocking revelations behind the history of Byron, his father, his mother and The Sacred Ancestor. All that stuff ROCKED so hard with the latter having my jaw on the floor it's that shocking at times, like holy shit the Nobility are WILD.
But the antagonists are just so undercooked and weird in a, "are we sure these people are REALLY a threat" sort of way, to characters left right and centre just appearing out of nowhere with other characters literally appearing out of nowhere (and then dying a handful of pages later, wahoo!), storylines basically being abandoned or resolved off screen(?), bizarre, even by this series standards, descriptions and exposition about absolutely every single thing and every single person and every single thing that they do to an absolutely nauseating degree, to revelations and new characters and new secret developments popping up out of absolutely nowhere AND being resolved as close as FIVE PAGES FROM THE END, like, come on Mr Kikuchi, what are we doing here man? Like the levels of total utter nonsense this story becomes in the last 100 pages is abysmal.
Seriously, from page to page, we go from interdimensional beings to child rituals to paradise realms to scientific experiments to doppelgangers to Shakespearean mcguffins to body morphing to weird power scaling that ultimately leads to nothing because aforementioned doppelgangers had just been introduced in the middle of that so the JUST HAPPENED power combinations just got ignored to portals to disembodied voices to cured vampirism to not cured vampirism to you just bit her to kill me to THE END.
Like, WHAT IS GOING ON THERE.
It got so muddled and bloated and hard to follow i couldn't get my head around what was going on from paragraph to paragraph nevermind page to page with elements being introduced, described, given flashbacks, more development and then an ending in a single page multiple times in a row with brand new things being added everytime that haven't been around for the past 500 pages, it was just a pain to get through.
Having said that, because of how strong the first half of the story is and how okay enough the 3rd part is, you can get through the 4th part with some relative determination because you should already by invested by then to see it through.
I will genuinely re-read Parts 1&2 over and over again gladly, but will never ever touch Parts 3&4 again.
It's a 2 star book that gets 3 stars cause it's so fucking hilarious to me that of all the things, the genuine horrible things, that The Sacred Ancestor has done to humans, Nobles, the world, and D, that Fisher Lagoon of all people was the one guy he was like, "ayo, this guy a'ight, me and him tight af boi" and literally nobodies allowed to touch him cause he's Draculas homie. Love it.