A good try - but needed some tweaks
The story line was a good one, that wasn't my problem with this book. I would have enjoyed this read so much more if it weren't for the poor editing and proof reading.
I, unfortunately, get unceremoniously tossed out of enjoying a good plot line when I encounter gaping grammatical errors and/or continuity errors. Especially if you assign an accent to a character and are inconsistent with the accent, in this case substituting an 'er' with an 'ah' at the end of a word, ie: lobstAH instead of lobstER. In this case it was a Massachusetts accent, which is unfortunate because my husband was born on Cape Cod.
For me, it's like being engrossed in a good story only to have your reading interrupted over and over by (_____) fill in the blank with whatever is annoying or aggravating for you. These tiny bumps in the road are jarring and pop you right out of the story.
I enjoyed the premise and the character development in this book, other than what I mentioned above. The book was a fast read that I could have finished quickly without the constant hiccups. Too bad.