This is a wonderful book that straddles a fine line between social commentary and entertainment, and succeeds at both. Dusty is a fourteen-year-old boy who lives in Colorado Springs with his younger brother and sister and essentially acts as their parent and caregiver. Why? Because Dusty’s parents are perfectly drawn examples of people who should never have had children in the first place and once they did, they made the youngsters’ lives miserable. It’s not because they’re evil people. On some level, Dusty’s mom does love her kids, but she’s too self-absorbed to commit to them on a daily basis, so she just disappears for days or weeks to party and do drugs. Dusty’s father is the same, though he makes no pretense of even wanting to live at home. So Dusty struggles to hold his family together, and has been doing as good a job as possible on and off since he was seven.
Heady stuff? Yes. As a teacher for many years and a volunteer within many venues, I’ve seen this situation first hand and sadly, putting the children into foster care is often worse than what they have at home. But Ms. Parkhurst gets the ball rolling right away with a crisis Dusty can’t control which brings his situation to the attention of authorities.
Unlike most of these situations, an uncle his mother never spoke of is unearthed in Vermont, and he and his wife are happy to take in the children. It’s a plot convenience that the couple can’t have children of their own and just happened to be in the process of completing the lengthy paper trail to adopt, but that’s okay. The story moves faster this way. Dusty has no interest in being uprooted, but his younger siblings can’t wait to have a real home and be taken care of the way they instinctively know children should be cared for. Both Julia and Matt, the younger kids, are well written and never does the author fall into that typical YA trap of having young kids talk and act like adults. Thank you, Ms. Parkhurst!
Likewise, Dusty’s narration is spot on. He sounds and thinks like a fourteen-year-old. I’ve seen some reviewers say his pouting and obfuscation and irrational unwillingness to give his Uncle Jack and Aunt Beth a chance chafed on their nerves. Welcome to the teenaged brain, people. As mature as Dusty may have been on a strictly survival basis in Colorado, his brain and maturity are not that of an adult and he cannot possibly think things through like an adult. Though not intentional, the author has presented a very vivid counter-argument to the idea in America that teens are and do think like adults when they get in trouble and thus should be sent to prison. Dusty is emotional, moody, stubborn, intractable, fears loss of control, fears losing the love of his brother and sister to these interlopers, and most importantly for a teen, he’s angry that no one ever asked him what he wanted. Yup, that’s a teenaged boy!
Will Dusty finally settle into his new life and be happy in Vermont? Will mom show up at the eleventh hour and screw over her kids yet again? These are the questions that propel the story forward. I loved the Zeb Pike analogy as Dusty struggles to make sense of this journey he’s been forced to take, and the ultimate message gleaned from Pike’s inability to scale the peak named for him: even when we’re determined to go in a certain direction, things change in life and sometimes we have to change course, too, and sometimes that new direction is better than the old.
One element that didn’t thrill me was the use of flashbacks at the beginning of each chapter from some incident in the past, an incident showcasing Dusty having to cope with his mother’s selfishness. I’m not a big fan of flashbacks, and I felt I didn’t need them by the halfway mark because I had a crystal clear picture of this woman and the trials and stress she’d put Dusty through. However, I applaud the author for continuing these flashbacks all the way through because, as horrific as these episodes were for Dusty, they reinforced his irrational desire to return to that instability rather than remain with two adults who clearly loved and wanted him and his siblings. The flashbacks clarified that he was a kid who didn’t know what to do anymore and not an adult with all the answers. So in the end, the flashbacks were another way to illustrate the irrationality of a teenager.
There was a very convenient plot development that seemed too simplistic for me, and that was Dusty’s crushing on the first boy he meets at his new high school, and how that all played out eventually. Dusty knows he’s gay, but never had a personal life in Colorado Springs where it could negatively or positively affect him. Emmitt is a good kid, but he is a junior and Dusty is a freshman and at that developmental stage, two years is a huge deal. Freshmen and juniors simply move in different social circles, as a rule, anyway. It didn’t quite work for me the way I think the author intended because it all just seemed a tad unrealistic.
Having said that, all the characters are extremely likable and there are some very emotional scenes that caught me up and got me misty eyed. I also like the way the author has Dusty meet a random character on the plane to Vermont and then pays off that plot strand later on. For me, that’s solid writing. I don’t know if there’s anywhere to go with a sequel by the end of this one, but if the author does decide to revisit these characters, I’ll happily revisit with her. They are real and heartfelt and I highly recommend you read this book and discover them for yourself.